About the Poem
This piece is just a reminder of peace, quiet, being relaxed. People often read it when they experience a headache, heartache, pain or just wanting a quiet place in mind. Before you read the poem, imagine your self on a beach with a willow of trees of pine, two candles, the wind is blowing slightly and your eyes are closed.
A Quiet Place |
| by Lovely |
| Whispering winds that echo's in my mind Stalking sea breezes Trees, tall trees towering above me Manipulating my soul to be still very still In a Quiet place I light two candles, one at a time Standing between them both hoping to find A quiet place Where I can indulge into complete style shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! A Quiet place, where there is no laughter No pain, no smoke, no hard rain A quiet place, I'll sustain A quiet place, I'll proclaim A quiet place, just for me A quiet place for eternity! |
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2 Visitor Comments
Nature's Poet
This is a wonderful poem. It is well written and uses a broad vocabulary without sending the reader running for the dictionary. Though most of it does not rhymn, it broken up into sections, making this poem easier to read. What does rhymn fits in well with the rest, not seeming out of place, yet standing out to give it a strong finish. It relays the feeling of peace and solitude with a hint of mystery, relaxing the reader. Well done!
Carlos
Love this poem.
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