About the Poem
This poem is about finding the right and wrong girls. The first rose represents the girl that you want but you know isn't good for you and just use and abuse. The second rose is the girl that can be so rare but is so perfect.
So Much More Than A Rose |
| by Roche |
| I walked through the field laced with silver and gold. I then spot a rose burning and bold. It was a dangerous red a fiery hue. But I was drawn by the heat no better I knew. I reached for the stem green, consistent with thorns I pulled it from the dirt a new pain was born. Vain, self- righteous thorns punctured my hand. On the apathetic rose dark, angry blood ran. Weary of agony and forlorn with turmoil. I dropped the callous ideal on blood dampened soil. I walk on pondering life's seductive misery. I roam on when I spot pure genuine beauty. A radiant red rose luminate mongst a sea of weeds. More than I hoped for but maybe what I need. I gently plucked it from the ground. It made beautiful music without emitting a sound. I held the long, vibrant stem assimilated with me. Incomparable I grip it passionately. To take my rose would be nothing short of iniquity. It would cause grief and eclipse all that I see. As long as this theomorphic gift is where I roam. I'll be content in a utopia of my own. |
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9 Visitor Comments
NAVIN
that poem is very deep . it leaves you with alot
lexie
that poem really touched my heart im only 15 but i kno esactly what it stood for it was GREAT
shadowchick213
I love it. this poem speaks volumes of how poetry can be related to everyone so keep up da good work!*~_~*
Aria
I loved your poem! I look forward to reading more of your work. The symbolisym was beautifull. It added meaning to the word UTOPIA.
Wolfheroine
The poem is really good. It just goes to show that life is always full of choices and sometimes these choices could either hurt us or make us happy.
Madison
Amazing, life is just like this
Michelle
I felt that this poem was true and beautiful. Keep up the good work. Keep writing great poetry.
kimberly
i loved this poem it was so good
Julia
this was very god and made me think of relationsships and the loss of inocennce....
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