About the Poem

Finding ourselves sometimes struggling with life's little struggles, we need to learn over and over how to get past them. And eventually, we do.

Dancing In Dreams

by BSC

In dreams I am dancing with the Lord,
It's a slow and glorious waltz -
I'm waking as the devil cuts in,
His two-step praising my faults.

A twist of uncontrolled movement,
And I begin to doubt my own feet -
Until I call for the Lord to come,
And bring back the dance so sweet.

I get lost in the soft, soothing melody,
As we glide to the dear angel's song,
That's when He shows His love for me,
And proves the devil so wrong.

Heaven's canopy is our ballroom,
Twinkling stars - our only light,
Doves and angels surrounding us,
As I fall gently to sleep for the night.

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18 Visitor Comments

Caroline

Wondeful imagery. This poem describes life perfectly.

Rebecca

loved it

luz

It is truthful and insightful, full of grace and beauty.

BROTHER JOHN

THANKS BSC. THIS IS AN UNIQUE WAUY TO PUT OUR STRUGGLES IN POETIC FORM. TOO, OFTEN, THO, SOME RATHER DANCE WITH THE DEVIL. THANKS FOR THIS NOVEL IDEA.

Courtney

This poem really took my heart, I hope you continue writting. on a scale of 1-10; I give you a 9! I write poetry also and this poem is beyond great.

Very well written. I like the way you described your walk with Jesus as a dance.

Suzy

Wow! i like it. Hold on your dream with a vision of dancing to the Lord. Am so blessed. Hold on!

Brenda

Great poem! I like the first line, it's so true. Satan often cuts in and reminds us of our fears, doubts, worries and sins that can all be wiped out with the blood of the lamb! You poem truly encouraged me!

merryn

i have just been baptised and im consious that the devil may attack me without me knowing this helps me remeber that God is always there and will never stop being there.

Emily

This poem really touched me! It was an awesome insight. i am speechless! It is totally amazing!

alicia

Great poem! Very encouraging and touching, it helped me understand alot of what i am going through! Keep up God's gift!

bri

This poem is very Awesome! I know from past experiences, that it is hard to deal with such a powerful thing as the devel

Kacee

We certainly do have to keep on our toes and three steps ahead of the devil. great poem. keep dancing

Nina

What a reading feast, the words dance though your mind visualizing the dance. A great poem.

Anna

I loved this poem, I love to dance, like Ballroom dancing so this poem is just like my dreams! Keep up the fantastic work!

Suzi

This was an absolutely beautiful poem, it makes you rejoice in your own salvation! Wonderful job!

mystic_mallory

This is absolutely beautiful.

DONNA

I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM

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