About the Poem
You will see the spontaneity in The Rainbow and Real Fun. It was written in a cyber chat, when normal conversation would not express the feelings best. The Rainbows and Real Fun was written as two new friends, Cheryl and I, discovered our mutual love for poetry.
The Rainbow And Real Fun |
| by Jisnu Dunlop |
| The weave of romance, friendship and love Always alive, moving with the two Their hopes and sharing The strength and warmth Each can give Each can be free And then the play unfolds When each can Live for the other Nurturing and inspiring Only the problems unforgiven Could end . . . The rainbows and real fun The times outdoor and flush With each other and breezes The light fills both lives A beach is the edge of their one heart The sky the cover of the naked Excitement and delight In giving Giving Giving If it isn't giving It isn't living |
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18 Visitor Comments
missy
this poem really touched me and since i just lost a close internet friend, even tho i never met her in person, her death really hurt and i actually sent your poem to her sign in on her guest list and told them that this poem was not mine but it was still very fitting. thank you for your talent and soft words of love.
marilyn
this a great poem to send to someone who they really care for us a friend.
Claire
As a French person , I can only "feel" English poetry (so different from ours) and I really like the way words do sing very gently in this poem, conveying the feeling of what real friendship is. I'm glad to know that some do feel genuine feelings, even in this crude world of ours.
Heather
I loved it!
prashant kumar
really nice.
cherry
v. e. r. y. touchy & L. O. V. E. L. Y. I LIKE IT THANKS 2 THE POET WISH U 2 WRITE MORE & MORE LOVELY POEMS
Honey
Full of warmth.
ashlee
this poem is very good to read. alot of teengers will love it so much . it is tell good stuff. you did a execlent job of writhing this poem.
OYMO
THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT POEM
MANAN AKRAM
THIS POEM IS TOO MUCH BETTER THEN EVERY POEM ON FRIENDSHIP. I LOVE TIS POEM
amber
i sounds great i think so
KYLIE
Very good. I liked it.
EMan
'If it is'nt giving it isn't living. ' That sure sums it up!
Wanda
the poem is so heart felt. I was really sad tonight and the joy of it made me glad. Thank you. The last stanza is masterful.
Karen
Absolutely touching!
Riz
You expalin - in good way.
Robinson
Lovely poem for lovely friends.
Jonathan
very good
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