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This is my first poem. A new e- mail pal I now have inspired it. I was way down in the dumps and she came into my life for a few days. Everything was pure intuitive magic. The few times we had together were very precious to me. I will never forget the moments of deep feeling. After her visit my luck did change and things started going in a positive way. She was my Angel for a short time!

My Angel

There was a short time in my life
When my problems were more than my ex-wife
When all of a sudden this angel popped in
It was love at first site you could tell by my grin

Her hair was as golden as the brightest summer sun
For a while there, I was actually having fun
Her eyes were as blue as the purest blue ocean
And comfortable I was even without any motion

My Angel, I wanted to keep her

When we were together I had no more pain
Her beauty was breathtaking please let me explain
With her in my arms I melted like ice
She was gorgeous and smart and incredibly nice

Well now that you know the way that I felt
Let me tell you about the hand I was dealt
She came with her friend who was not even dating
And then she flew home to her boyfriend who was waiting

My Angel, I wanted to keep her
Oh Well!
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21 Visitor Comments

mario
its nice, i can relate. uhm, thanks for reminding of someone from the past.
Samantha
that was funny and also sweet.
David
You very good at writing poem. Keep it up.
Maggie
Lovely!. sweet,romantic,and actually. even funny in some parts.
LaRae
I liked how you described "your Angel" upon your first meeting,it reminded me of seeing my boyfriend walk through the door, (before we were dating), on our first meeting. I really do love him, and it HAS worked out for us:)
DANIKKA
THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM AND IT INSPIRED ME TO REALIZE THAT SOMEIMES YOU HAVE TO LET GO. THANK YOU.
Olivia
Boardman, this poem has touched me, it's interesting how life. love can deal you those cards. I'm sorry, but, it seems, she ,however was just an infigment of an angel.
Nicole
This poem made me cry, and that doesn't happen just everyday. You have inspired me to continue my love of the written word, so good luck to you!
Jessica
Gosh Im truly speechless. this poem has touched me like no other. It was so real and so true on how life really can be, I couldnt help but cry. Boardman, what a wonderful job and Thank You for sharing!
KATE
I loved this poem.
daniel
well i think this poem is really good i foret it was wrong what she did but u will find another angle all the best with your poems
jen
so great! i just wish some of the lines will happen to me. (ie me in his arms) it keeps me dreaming. oh well (sighs)
Candy
this poem was so beautiful. Just keep your angel in your dreams and heart.
sam
been there done that
foreheadplay
almost exactly what happened to me too....except there was no ex-wife... oh well!
Donna
I LOVED this!
Marcel
Just so true, in a lot of aspect and writen in such a way's that it kind a toke me by surprise. Have just love it! Keep it up, you will be one of a kind.
Dawn-Marie
Was it just a game she was playing? t makes you wish that sometimes youcould make somebody love you.
david
a very neat poem, i wish i could have more from the author! Thanks
jaqi
so sad so beautiful all wrapped in one.
VIANEY
THIS POEM IS JUST SO GREAT

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