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About the Poem

This poem is about suffering from loneliness. The mind tends to wander in its own world, where time stops and nothing seems to change.

Mind

Pale eyes, a blank expression,
wander through clouds of indescribable dreams.
Cold mist air, surrounded isolation
flaws my occupied mind
with either hate or death.
Something certain will be for always;
change in time forbids movement.
Fearing you understands myself;
help me open up, just a little more.

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11 Visitor Comments

JENNA
aww. i love this poem so much. it really touched my heart thanks i enjoyed reading it. its one of the best ive read heheh!keep the poems going
sarah
i love this poem. one of my favorite poems i have read!
Liz
I can totally relate to this poem i wud like to write one about my feelings but im rubbish. have you any tips? this poem touched me i feel like this all of the time
sarah
it rocked!
Ez
I relate alot to yur poem and i liked it alot
Ashley
i could relate to this poem really well. i thought it was good. i would like to hear more from you in the future!
shal
Thank you for a beautiful poem,I can understand where you are coming from.
Mimi
I have never felt this way before and know through your poem I can picture it. I'm one of those people who cares but never gets the bad feeling and I have a very good life. I'm sorry 4 who ever feels that way.
Sarah
I really like this poem!
Emily
I know what it is like to live inside of yourself, and you can't escape, beautifully written
Daria
I really like this poem cause that's how I feel most of the time.

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