About the Poem
About how a person feels like nothing is right in her life and how she thinks she has something wrong with her.
Something Must Be
|Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.
Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.
Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.
Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.
Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.
Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
"Let this pain end,"
is all my heart will shout.
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302 Visitor Comments
this poem really touched me, i really needed to read this. thanks
hi this is how i feel to n trust me its not nice i no that but things will get wores be4 they get better but they will get better!
This is the way I fell right now
That Poem was so touching. i loved it it reminds me of my mother when she was under depression=(
I voted for this poem because it explains my feelings and thoughts almost perfectly!
I just read this poem and realized that someone out there actually feels like i do at this moment. kind of sheds some light on this dark word im forced to live in. Thank you for sharing. please write more.
I love this poem its really good you have a talent , and you should never think your poems are not good , cuz your a truly great poet. ---Carolina
i luv dis poem it really relates
I know the feeling i think this is a great poem it really expresses what alot of us feel. -another depressed chic
i can't stop thinking about this poem. i am very depressed and see a counselor, i showed my counselor this poem and it help me to show her what exactly I'm feeling! thank you so much, you truly helped me, maybe even saved my life.
i really loved this poem. this poem had reminded me of myself and even made me cry.
i loved dis poem. because at one time in my life dat was me
i like the poem. very much. i will use for my english2A presentation . thanks to your poem. very nice
i thought i was the only how feld this pain guess i was wrong this is a great poem
The reason why i voted for this poem is becuase, my dad once walked away frommy family and i felt exactly like how this poem describes itself. I felt that something must have been wrong with me for not feeling the same way the other kids felt in school. Thats why i voted foe tis poem.
I think this is an awesome poem and awesome site, I love it!
I really like this poem, it touched me because its something i feel was something i was goin threw at one time. The author of this poem ur a great poet!
This Poem is very, Very great. Because I feel like I could relate! I give it a 20 out of 20
this poem is the reason i visit this site once a year. i'ts realy moving visiting this poem since 2001 AdFundum
This poem really touched me. I think that all people feel this way at times. and that time for some people may be a little bit longer than others. I know I feel this way a lot of the time, but try and pretend to hide it in front of the people who really matter to me, because I don't want to see them hurt!
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I just love this poem. It completely describes me.
A refreshing and apt interpretation of a feeling greatly acknowledged to be a taboo subject in today's society. Credit to the author I duly bid.
that poem was really good it makes people think threres something else but death
i no how u feel thank u for wrighting this poem it feels good noing that im not alone as i thought! great poem keep it up!
I love this poem because this is how i feel all time. it's like you were in my head.
it was sooooooooooooooo super!
THIS POEM REALLY SAYS IT ALL. IT IS ALMOST LIKE IT IS ABOUT ME. I FEEL LIKE SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH ME AND NOBODY CARES.
this poem is really moving. sometimes i feel like this myself. i think you should be really proud of your poem, i write poems myself. everyone seems to love my poems but they don't see the deeper meanings to them. the only way i express how i feel is when i'm writing. i really like your poem, i find it inspiring and you seem like a nice person that might have been treated the wrong way, i can relate. hope you carry on writing such moving poems. anonimous reader x x
I luv this poem i have read and wrote many of them and i got a lot of ideas from this one. I really like it. I started writeing after i became really depressde and weather she is or not a lot of people really do feel that way.
i loved it
NOT LIKE ANY OTHER COMMENT i think u shud focus on how many peeps have taken the time to read your poem, to olove it, and then to comment on it. Doesn't that make you feel special, like you are amzing, that you have accomplished something? i noe i wud love to b able to rite the way you do but undfortunately i'm not good at anything but yer just think about ho many peeps youo've touched and saved from dying?? you are an angel. stay happy, for your family, friends, ME, people love you ad peopele need you
that was awesome. one of the best poems ive ever read. relates to me alot.
i am truley touched by this poem, that is XACTLY how i felt when i was deressed, i know, its hard right now, i barely made it through. but life will get better, and by the way, when your depressed, you cant help but cry! its alright. i cried ALL the time, at school at home, in bed. but im better now and i'll pray for u!
I can relate. This past week i have tried to kill myself because i lost my best friend.
Truly I appreciate what you can put into words what I feel like in my heart, thank you.
i feel this way everyday
I have to say this is by far most the most sensible one of them all!
this poem speaks alot about what im going through. as a 41 year old mother of 3 i try to fight these feeling off but the more time that goes by the harder it seems to get. the writer of this poem did a wonderful job of knowing what people go through in a depression. nobody knows what we go through unless they been through it. they think things can always get better. this poem really hit the spot and i think the person who wrote it should keep writing.
this poem is amazing. being in a depression myself it was like the poem was talking about me.
10 very gud
i think this is a great peom 4 people to read cuz it tells a lot about how people feel so ill give it a 9 out of 10
u have NO idea how much this touched me. it seems like its readin out my life. im goin thru some REALLLLY hard times right now. jss as everyone of u are. PLZ keep writing more poems. if this poem touched me. then ur others will. KEEP WRITIN! luv ya Autumn Lee
hey dude that was really touching and well something must be wrong with me and everyone els in this mest up world
This poem touched me so deeply as I am going thru a dark time in my life - my husband and I are divorcing and it is killing me - all I want to do is sleep and never wake up. This poem will be something I print off and carry with me at all times and if lucky enough take to heaven as well.
this is an amazing poem and iv flt this way be 4
i cried when i read this poem, because it felt like you were inside me, writing my feelings and thoughts down. i really did.
I absolutley LOVE this poem! NO one really ever understands me! I'm constantly sad or depressed! I feel like i dont wanna be here and have to suffer anymore!but i also don't wanna go to hell! i'm really confused!
I thought I only felt this way. I guess Im not alone great poem.
I like this poem because they relate to the poems i write
Hey I really enjoyed this poem it is really touching to the soul and really clears the mind letting people know there are others out there who feel the same way much love
Wow, you are amazing. This poem is beautiful. This probably annoys you, people saying this, but I know this feeling. I know what you are expressing and I really praise you for being able to paint such vivid feelings and pictures with words.
OMG, I love this Poem. I give this a 10 out of 10.
Hey, This poem is sreat write more!
I liked dis poem. whomever wrote dis should continue to write. PERFECT
wow tht was amazing . im going through a time in my life where tht is just how i feel and i havent yet read a poem tht potrays my feelings so well
That poem just blew my mind. It just made me feel like I was the one going threw this pain with all of the details. It just came alive right in front of my eyes.
oh my goodness, this is one of the best poems i have ever read, im in tears right now
if some of u knew how true this poem is. iy=ts like u went in my head and put everything on paper
wow. I wish you the best. Time heals all or at least so I've heard.
i think that was an ace poem i could read it over and over again !
i really liked this poem it cut to the core.
nice poem everyone feels that way some times
I relate to this poem so much. it just feels like all of my feeling were put into words
This mad so many memories come back to me!
I loved it. It was wonderful. I could really feel the peots emotion
I loved it. I kinda wrote something like that. i also feel that way alot. wrte more! lara
I REallY REALLY loved this poem i felt as if u wrote it just for me. I often find myself wondering if it's really worth me being here. I'am always crying myself to sleep. Over things that have happened years ago and holding on to love lost years ago.
this poem really touched me i can really relate i use to want to commit suicide all the time i still do but i know people are here for me that love me keep writting wonderful poems just like this one thanx!
i know how you feel, but its okay, because even though u think not, im goin through the same thing every day, i know its hard to stand, and to survive, but babe youl see, it'l brighten up. trust me. grate poem. i really felt it. its okay dont cry, and dont feel the need to die.
Veary well writen out, I feel like that a lot of the time now. Could not put it down as well as you though.
This poem got to me becuase I have been on the point of of trying suicide and it made me wait at least today from trying it, maybe tomorrow will be better.
wow this is really good better then most the poems on here
when i read this poem i thought of me cos that is exactly how i feel i am glad that some one can write a poem and have someone else feel it i really liked it
you can never know when will you commit what you have said and done! Damn! awesome poem.
i really like this poem. It really describes how I've felt inside. Its nice to know that true feelings can be put in good poetry.
ey dat was a good poem it makes ppl think . keep up da good work
WooooooW ! it's fantastic, It made me cry!
dude your pome rock i can so relate sometimes i fill like dieing. you are great good to no im not alone
hey,awsome poem i kow everyone says this bur your poem is totally me, i just started writing poems and im getting pretty good,i quess, well just wanted to say great poem
I could really relate to this poem. It is how I feel all the time.
this is how i feel everyday
Wow. I feel like the poet took the words right out of my mouth. That is exactly how I feel right now.
This is great. When I read the first paragraph I cried because it bought back memories when I was a Child.
I loved this poem! On a scale of 1-10 I give it a 10! It describes exactly how I feel everyday 24/7 because of suffering from depression! Good work!
beautifully written, great work
i havnt stoped crying since i read this poem, u have tuched me deeply and i thank u for waking me up from my awfull nightmare, thank you
hey i loved your poem im srry life is so hard it touched me you are a good poet
i've been there . it sucks now, but it'll get better
this poem is every thing im feelin and everthing iv been throw nice to no im not alone
love ur poem. u truly got talent. keep it up. luv it nd would like to read more of it. it was awesome.
if u are feeling this way. know that there are other ways out and that there is nothing wrong with u u are loved by many im sure so hang in there
this poem really touch me
this poem is a wonderful thing to read this is how i feel inside with the hiddin pain and hurt with the heartacke attatched
i really like this poem i can relate totally to this i was in that situation i just wanted it to end i hope you can get through this tough time.
wat i have to say about this poem is hat alot of teenagers can relate to this poem o the strugles we go through day by day because by the time u wake up intill u go to sleep even in ur dreams somtimes u cant b happy and u can be asken for help screaming at the top of ur lungs and no one can hear u so we only got ourself to count on
This was a great poem, which expressed many strong feelings of emotion. I think your a great writer. I encourage you to live your life to the fullest.
It's exactley how you feel It hurts just to read it
The poem is awesome and amazingly accurate of how I feel. But you put it into poetry so much better than I have been able to. It's great.
I'm like feeling the same way right now. And i've wrote a poem just like this. I didn't think that anyone else thought the same way as me. People say my life is pain. And they think i'm wierd cuz i wear black all the tme and stuff. Anyways i really liked this poem.
This is so sad, it made me cry. Also this is how i feel at times.
I've felt like this. I still feel like this so like this poem.
hey i really liked this poem because it really reminded me of how my life is and how i lay in bed at night just thinking about how my whole life feels like there is something wrong. it really made me think. Thanx!
This poem is my life in words! After my break up with Liam(boyfriend) all i feel is anger towards everything and i think there is sumthing wrong!
WHAT A PERFECT POEM,,,IT GAVE ME THE CHILLS,,,,,THANK YOU FOR YOUR TALENT! TAMI
this is an awsome poem really what i think
this poem really touched me . it's really good :)
this is just. beautiful. it really feels that way. it feels good to know that someone could also feel what i feel
I loved this poem! This is EXACTALLY how i feel. Many people think i'm dramatic when i act like this and act like i'm faking it. This is SO how i feel!
I really like your poem so much. i have depression im 21 yrs old and has had depression since I was 12 yrs old. its embarresing to say this but I have been in and out of psych wards since I was 15 yrs old. Im doing somewhat better. Anyway just to let you know i really loved your poem.
I love this poem. its deffinitly how i feel a lot of my days.
this is a good poem its all me
i really liked this poem becaues i could really realate to what the poet was writing
this poem really made me realize how im feeling. it touched my inside thoughts exactly it was very well written please keep it up
Wow, this poem is wonderful! This poem truly was saying how i felt! I couldnt have said it any diffrent! This poem has touched me in so many diffrent ways! Wow what a excellent job! Who ever has wrote this poem really should try making something out of poetry you are excellent! Im just so amazed! :D I give this 1-10 a 10+
hi u have real talent and it is such a beatuiful poem at the moment iam trying to over-come deppresion and it reminds me of wht i went through and how much i neva want to go back thanx you , you have helped me moe ways thn one keep on writing sweetie and take care :)
Love your poem it's awsome!
I Like this poem alot I feel that noone in this world should ever feel like that.
I like this poem because at times I can really relate to it. Thanks for a great read and knowing there are others who feel the same.
Awesome poem, strangely it relates to me alot. heh. Keep writing cause you have alot of talent.
You are such a powerful writer. you express exactly how feel and now im not so scared anymore because i no there will be other like me. thank-you so much
I think you did a great job with this poem. it tells how i've been feeling lately.
This is such a great poem and i know what you are going throw i going throw it to. You do have good talent. This poem is sooo true.
this is a great poem. its great because it relates to me in a weird manner. Only i understand what i mean and only me.
That was very nice. no one understands how life is to be felt. keep up the nice work.
i like it because its real touching and its true in so many ways.
i give this a 10! This touched me to the point that i got tears in my eyes. i have all this stress boiled up in me and when it decides to come out it just does, in the form of anger. It was nice to know that someone else feels this also.
wow. i could relate too this poem soo well it was scary. i was completley speechless. this is definatly one of the best peoms i have ever, ever read. awesome job
I really liked this poem I have had alot of friends who could relate to this poem, and it kind of brought me to an understanding of how they feel sometimes. It was great and I hope you write more on this subject.
i allways feel the same i understand what your going through i feel like that every day but what i tell my self when i want to let go is there is all ways a better brighter day comeing around the conner please member that
That's exactly how it feels.
I like your peom it's good you keep the theme constent not like alot of other young writes who haven't yet learned to controll their writting or their emotions , I like the way you let the reader know just exactly how you feel I would love to hear more of your peoms
WOW! That is honestly one of the best poems I have ever read. I love it so much it says everything I have been trying to say for so long. It's EXACTLY how I feel. Thanks for writing this poem, keep writing! -Morgan
Going through depression and numerous suicide attempts, I really connected with the author on this one. Goes to show, that we are not alone in dealing with this illness of depression.
i read ur poem along with many others and i was also touched. i went through a period of emotional pain and suffering and thought that nothing good could and would ever come out of something like this. until a person who i've known since 4th grade helped me through it. he was my angel until we broke up. and at that time was when i went back into a deep depression. i truly believe that depression is a disease that eats from the inside outward. and if one doesnt get rid of it completely then it will continue to eat u. i still suffer from depression n no its not something to be proud of, its something that needs attention.
this poem ment somthin to me it really spoke to me. i just got out of the hospital for bein suicidle temtations and homisidle threts. i cut really bad. this poem i could really connect to
I Like this poem because it's a true thing that goes on in life of the teens.
very good. exactly how i feel.
I love this poem. It explains just how I've been feeling lately. It seems strange how complete strangers can put on paper just how someone else is feeling. I wish my friends would read this poem, then maybe they would understand what I'm feeling.
Hi, This is one of the best poemas I have ever read. I truly like it. well done! - Denise
OMG! that poem was soooo good!1 i loved it! you should write some more, cuz i would enjoy reading some more from you! love faryn
i under stand what u mean . and i really liked ur poem alot . Its grEAT
I love your poem it's really descriptive and I can relate. I hope things will be better for you. goddbye and be safe.
This poem touched my heart because I am dealing with a loved one who I know feels the way this poem states and I have also felt this way. I am trying so hard to understand what he is going through and although I have been that depressed and suicidal I can't understand because he won't let me. Well anyway I loved the poem.
I truly agree with the message of this poem. it is truly the truth.
I have felt the same way numerous times then i found God and i knew that he made me the way i was and that there was nothing wrong with me and i prayed and gave taht thought to him and it was gone! Just give everything to him and it will always leave!
ur poem is amazing and so real. it makes me want to cry, that poem decribes my life. i feel like that now, i felt like that yesterday and ive felt like that for as long as i can remember. thank you so much for putting that poem on the net, its sad but beautiful!
this was an excellent poem and i can relate to everyword because im going through the beginning of depression and it has almost killed me. you have a way with words and all i can say is hold on in there if ive held on you can to. best of luck
i think this poem is amazing and exacly how i feel. i dont think there has to be a major reason for depresson.
hey me and my friend liked ur poem and i feel what ur going through and we were wondering if we could use this as a song for our band i couldnt have writen these words down better myself
your poem really got to me. i know what your going through. i know what its like to want to die, to give up. iv hung in there and i hope everyone else can too. your an amazing writer, keep writing!
I like your poem alot because i can relate to it i feel like that alot and i never understand it
I really liked this poem because of what it's saying and just to let the author now "your not the only one who feels like that"
i loved your poem!it explains alot about how i feel.
I truly love this poem it really reminds me of my self when i first read it I was like wow. and to the author of this poem good job and keep on writing.
I believe quit a few people can relate to this poem. i know i can. but we all get through this stuff.
That was so me I find it impossible to put into words. Please keep it up because I would like to read some more!
Hi i think the poems buetiful. Touched deep ya know, my feelings most the time spot on. Keep writing ya good innit.
That just felt like a big kick in the stomach. I knew that other people felt like me but. You have a great talent. Don't lose it.
i can relate to this poem. i felt like i could visualize it in my head,as if i was there. i kno the feeling. of wanting to give up. and i now what its like to alomst give up. keep writing. it was good~!
this poem left me speachless. i tried killing myself about 5 months ago, i never told my mother this but i talked to the school counselor many times after that. my mom just got the pills away from me and left it as that, so i really thought something was wrong with me. she didnt even tell me father about. im thankful for all of you poems. this one is truly perfect.
i love her writing style and i fell that she put lots off time into writing this poem,and i really respect that.
That was an Awsome Poem. Its queit sad though. Its very heart touching.
This Poem truely came from the heart. A touching poem from which the Author must have felt pain so close to their heart.
I am the same way That is how I feel I want you to know that I loved your poem so very much !
I love your poem. It reminds me of myself :(
This such a beautiful poem. I once tried killing myself but then I about all the things I would be living behind like family and friends who love me.
i really conected with this poem. ive been told smile and the world smiles with you, but a smile is just a front, it never stops the pain inside.
THIS WAS AN AWESOME POEM AND I DONT USUALLY THINK ALOT OF POEMS ARRE GOOD BUT I LOVED THIS ONE! IT TELLS HOW MOST PPL FEEL!
wonderful wonderful poem. i am in this postion right now where i feel like no one is listening to me and the world feels like it is coming to an end. please keep writing you are gret!
wow! i . love it! reading it with a depressed music it's . just amazing. you should try. and . it realy aplies on my life. very, very GOOOD!
I really think that is a good poem. It has alot of meaning to it. It also just makes you think about alot.
I really liked your poem. I wrote a poem like that once. I have always felt like that. Your poem helps me think that there are others who feel like this.
ALL I NEED TO SAY IS THIS POEM IS PERFECT.
I am 15 years old, and I came upon this poem, and OH MY GOD, there are NO words that could describe how much it relates to me, and I know alot of people probably say this, but no joke. I relate in SO many ways. Its amazing. I wish you the best of luck, you and I as well have an amazing talent of poetry.
beautiful poem , it reminds me of how i feel and the questions i always have but never any answers
i fell the same way i think this is the best poem i read so far u are a realy grate righter and just keep up the good work
this is the best poems i ever read and i fell the same way my life is so sad just keep up the good work and maybe u should right a book 1 day i think you right so great
THIS POEM MEANS SO MUCH TO ME BECAUSE IT'S EXACTLY HOW I FEEL. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS .
I love this poem because it is so much like how i feel.
I really enjoyed this poem. Just perfect. Thoughts that come across my mind more than once.
This one was very nice Ive felt this ay neumurous times in my life
This poem is fantastic it really makes you think about what others are feeling.
This was really an awesome poem! You are a great writer! I feel exactly the same way. but I can't get anyone to believe me. they all think I'm just fine. but I'm not. Keep up the good work!
For someone to write something that touched my heart in such an unbelieveable way, it brought a tear to my eye. there are people that understand. thank you xxx
This was an awesome poem! I can relate in every way to how you feel! Your an awesome poet!
this was the most relating poem ive read in some time. things in my life keep falling my dad in prison brothers hitting me no relationship with mom. my attempted suicide and running away my best friend moving me moving. i cant go anywhere. my love my cat leaving me. my boyfriend breaking up with me. it all yep i understand this. this is the best poem. im sure my best friend will say to. i gonna email it to her
i cant believe how much this poem actually relates to my life and how i feel. your very gifted and are in touch with people's feelings and i like that :)
This is a great poem its relates me to me very much. I feel like there is something wrong with me too. Right now i live iwth an abuse father and it makes me feel relieved to now im not the only one who feel like this.
I'd first like to say that you are a really good writer. This poem is the best!
This has to be the best sites I have ever been through and read poetry about depression. Just from reading the poetry here it has made me feel a little bit more happy and a bit more sad as well, because all though I have always felt alone in this world and always hoped there were others who felt the way I do, It makes me sad as well because I know how you feel and I would never wish my sadness on anyone.
this poem is really touching i can totally relate to this poem!
WOW. this poem is just how it really feels
I absolutely agree with what this poem is saying. I have felt this way alot of my life, and It's really good to know that you aren't really alone with all these feelings that well up inside you
I really liked your poem it is somewhat of how I'm feeling. It shows that I'm not the only one going through this.
OH MY GOD ! THIS IS MY FAV. POEM DUDE! IT'S GOOD! I LOVE IT 'CAUSE IT RELATES SO MUCH THE WAY I FEEL MOST OF THE TIME! I KNOW IT SUCKS FEEL DEPRESSED ALL THE TIME BUT I SERIOUSLY CAN'T HELP IT 'CAUSE HOW THE POEM SAYS, I ALSO BELIVE THAT SOMETHIN' MUST BE WRONG WITH ME! HEY I ALSO WANNA CONGRATULATE TO THE WRITER, "WELL DONE"! 'CAUSE IT'S A REALLY GOOD POEM KEEP WRITTING YOUR EMOTIONS & EJUST EXPRESS YOUR-SELF!
i can totally relate to this poem with everything it says, its great and whoever the writer is i hope they knew they did a great job writing this because its like people everywhere dont have to feel alone, they can feel like theres somebody out there who UNDERSTANDS how it feels to be depressed
That poem was really good. It's exactly how I feel a lot of times too. It was touching.
lovely poem, you've taken the words right out of my heart
thatz a very very awesome poem. it describes the way i feel. where u feel there is no escape. yet no one knows how you feel.
This poem is SO beautiful! I wish I could write like that. You have talent and should keep on writing!
I have suffered from child abuse and I can really identify with this poem. Very well written
I can totally relate to this poem, I love it, it's so great
I WOULD JUST LIKE TO ADD TO ALL THE COMMENTS. ITS OK TO FEEL SAD OR LONELY AT TIMES. FOR ME THATS WHEN I LOOK TO JESUS FOR COMFORT AND THATS WHAT HE WANTS FOR US TO WANT TO GO TO HIM,FOR HELP. HE IS OUR COMFORT, WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS TRY JESUS. HE IS OUR REFUGE AND STRENGTH.
i dont usually read poems, but today i found this website and read a few. the poem you wrote discribes my life perfectly before i went into rehab. i thought that the only way i would ever be happy was if i died. i felt like no one ever understood me and no one would ever miss me. After a few days in rehab, i realized that there were alot more people that felt the same way i did. i had a realtionship with drugs because they were the only thing in my life that made me feel good. i just want to say thanx for writing a poem like that because depression is alot easier to cope with when you know your not alone, even if you a miserable.
I would just like to say that i know exactly what your going through. I feel this pain nearly every day of my life. I am only 16 years old but its seems that my life was meant to be a mess, to never find happiness
Wow, can I ever relate to this poem. almost like I wrote it.
It is a REALLY good poem. reminds me of my life. good job!
I loved this poem its how i feel ALL the time and i just done know why! i have lots of great friends a great family but yet i hate myself more then anything in the world!
GREAT POEM,I FEEL EXAC TLY THE SAME WAY!
Well hello there. I loved your poem. It was so special and moving. It also sounds like me right now. Thank you so much for writing this. Now I know that other people feel the same way
i honestly think that it was a beautiful, heartfelt poem, i can see that u r a really good writer, i'm not bad myself, and i mainly write to know what i am thinking
It speaks of something too true. It shows without denial.
this poem means a lot to me, cuz i feel like this a lot. its so hard sometimes. i dont think id be able to put into words how i feel and i think you did a great job. thanks!
i reely lyked dis poem. it described how i feel every single day. i think u shud ryte more poetry cause u write so good.
That poem was really good.It made me think of myself in every way.
I know what you feel, it feels like the entire world is against you, and no one cares if you die.
I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM, I HAVE FELT LIKE THIS EVERYDAY OF MY LIFE. I AM A 17 YEAR OLD FEMALE AND FROM WHEN I CAN REMEMBER I HAVE FELT THAT SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH ME. I GET VERY DEPRESSED, I FEEL LIKE A LIFELESS HUMAN BEING, I FEEL LIKE A CHILD LOST,FRIGHTENED AND ALL ALONE. I OFTEN STRUGGLE TO SURVIVE THE DARKNESS OF DEPRESSION THAT I AM IN AT THIS TIME, BUT I AM NOT STRONG ENOUGH. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL POEM WITH THE WORLD, IT AS MADE ME REALISE THAT I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO FEELS LIKE THIS AFTER ALL, WHAT A BRILLIANT POEM
I found this poem deeply touching & moving
I can relate very much to this poem i feel this way all day, everyday.
i never felt so like writing be for. you have a true talent. i want to leave a note that you will reamember, but you will never. this poem realtes to so many out ther that didnt know how to put it in words, but now you have. i thank you for that
This is certainly a great poem, it also tells me how i feel right now. Exactly how i feel, after i lost being myself and talents that i had, also the writing of poetry, i lost my dream.
This is an excellant poem, I knwo exactly how that feels I go through it all the time. Sometimes I feel like I am going crazy because of it and it hurts. It truly makes me feel better though to know that somebody out there can express their thoughts soo deeply and show how I am feeling.
I am a huge writer and fan of poetry and this is one of the greatest heartfelt poems i have read..Maybe because it reminds me of my life..
i could really relate to this poem and i think alot of others could too
that was a nice one it really fits me as a person
This poem really touched me. I felt like I was in it.
this poem really touched me! there has been many times, when i felt like dying! then i read your poem. and i realized that everyone goes thru the same thing at some point in their life! i thank u, 4 that! if i had not have came here, and read your poem, there's no tellin what i would have done! so thank you
I loved it. One of the best that I have read.
i really enjoyed this poem, i write poems as well, and i can surely relate to this poem, i also am a deppression victim. please take care.
this really hit home , i like it when people who write poems in ways that i can only think.
I can truly relate to this poem.. It is truly refreshing to know that I am not alone
This poem really touched me. It lets others know they are not alone in this world. This poems is on time.
It's true that "Something Must Be" wrong with me which I realized very late. I like the way this poem goes..... as I feel the pain inside me. HATS OFF!!! to whoever wrote this poem
yeah that was bad! it was kool
I Can totally relate to this poem. I thought it was Excellent
great great poem. i loved it. it descibes me alot.
I can relate to this poem because I feel exactly the same way now. I also cry all the time and often with no reason at all. I wish this pain would end as you do. Thank you for showing me that I am not alone in this struggle that we call life.
I thought this was one the best poems I've ever read.I can relate to it.
This poem is excellent! It tells exactly how I feel.
Oh my god this poem is amazing i feel as if it was written about me i have been catagorized a deppresent ever since i was 8 years old and now im 13 and i still am deppressed nothing seems right. this poem made me cry it is amazing.
i think this poem is really great and im sure a lot of teenagers can relate to it. Its deep and well written~
I really believe that this poem has expressed all the feelings that I have inside me. It is hard to live everyday with the constant emotions tearing through my head. I am able to relate with this poem completly. I wish life was so much easier.
I could relate to this poem perfectly!thank you!
This is a great poem.. Its really my life.
great poem keep up the excellent writing
really good,goes to the heart of alot of people who are exactly in the same place
I really liked this poem a lot! I could totally relate to every word that was said! It is sad yet good to know that I am not alone!
I lOVE that poem. I printed it up and hung it on my bedroom wall. It is soooo good. It is exactly how I feel.
I can relate to this poem although i am now getting treatment for it i feel i have come a long way, I believe anyone can pull through it, if the really WANT TO!
I love this poem..I have been writing poetry for 5 years and I could never write something as good as this. I feel like I am the one inside the poem like it is me and not u..
This poem was an awsome one
YOU TOOK THE WORDS OUT OF MY OWN HEART !
Relate just isn't the word. This poem sounds like my life.
this is such a great poem, it's like you took what i felt and put into words..something that i've struggle with for so long.it helps so much to know that i'm not alone.
Oblivious, everybody - I know how you feel. I suffered from depression for three years.
This poem is so awsome that it almost made me cry ,it touches so close to home. Oblivious is a great writer and he/she should never let anyone tell them any different. And I would love to see more of they're work it is so neat. thanks, Amber
Wow! If the author of this poem feels this way, I need to talk to him or her personally. My feelings cannot be articulated any better than this. Good Job!!
i know what you feell because im like taht and its very sad seeing everyone locking at you in a diferent way and when we nead help no one there your alway alone. just ang one tahts waht im traing to do.
Exactly how one feels when one is suffering from this debilitating illness.
I really liked your poem and could relate to it too, i've been there my self but recently have gotten better, I am reminded everyday of those horrible memories and pray that they will never return. nice work beth
I can relate to this poem perfectly. I know what your feeling because thats exactly what Im feeling too. I thought you did an excellent job writing it. You should continue to write poety becasue theres a million peole out there who would love to hear it.
THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM ..... BECAUSE IT ABOUT TE FEELINGS EVERYONE IN THE WORLD IS GOING THOUGH ... AND I CAN FEELTHE PAIN AND THE SENSE OF LOSS...
My heart bleeds for you. At the same time, it made me conscious of my own feelings.. thanks, while I weep.
i never knew there were others who felt the way i feel every day,reading this poem inspiersme togive tomorrow a chance.
I really lkied the poem. It lets me know I'm not the only one feeling like that.
Its sad to say-but alot of people feel that way-and i really like this poem cause it really tells how i feel too~
I think your poem is really great knowing on how people really do feel, Im one of them, not most of the time, but some. GOOD LUCK!
I can totally relate to every word that was said in this poem. Everything that was written was real and as scary as it may seem, there are people out there that are going through this.
this is a great ! poem it is straight up real. it's not just some wordz on a paper its da truth.
this poem made me feel very emotional and every word in it is true and told as if it were my life
This poem is so awesome, I'm sorry that you feel this way or felt this way. But hey, everyone goes through a depression every now and then. Keep up the good work, maybe you'll make i9t big someday. Peace and Love!!!
I like this poem because i can really identify myself with it. lately my emotions have me going crazy and this poem is the only poem that can put my emotions into words
i highly enjoyed this poem it explains alot and shows true emotions
This is so good. I have felt every single word on a regular basis. I pray everyday that I can get past these feelings and go on with a normal life. Thank you for this poem that shows that others do feel this also.
This poem is the sadest poem and it made me feel what i feel now depression, and i hope that something is not wrong with me. Thank the Lord that someone feels the same way as me and its not only me.
A poem that filed my heart with thoughts of the 12 months of my life.
I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM BECUZ IT SOUNDS JUST LIKE ME. KEEP UP THE GOOD POEMS
I found that this poem very sad but it did make me feel a little better because Im not the only one!
this poem is great because this is how i get too sometimes but doesn't everyone. this poem really help me your great Oblivious.
I know how this person fells
I TRUELY BELIEVE IN THIS POEM COZ I DO FEEL THIS ALL THE TIME COZ MY LIFE IS JUST UPSIDE DOWN NO ONE TO TALK TO AND HOLDING EVERYTHING IN SIDE ME. AND THIS POEM TELLS ME I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO FEELS THIS WAY. I HOPE THIS POEM WINS
perfect description of how life can be
Excellently written with a powerful message
I thought the poem was really well written. I write a few of my own poems but none have been this good!
i loved your poem i write poems myself but yours just really touched my heart. right now isnt the best time in my life and your poem realtes so much to how im felling.
This poem just is the way i feel.
Only people with depression and really understand this poem. So touching to me this person knows what I am going through, or is it that, I know what this person is going through. Depression so deep and dark. This poem explains it well.
this is a poem i could relate to. sad poems seems to be all i can relate to. it really helped me express and define how i was feeling.
I love things that rhyme, especially when they make sense! This poem was really great. It really got me thinking about how I often feel.
These words I can surely relate to... i've been to the land of darkness a time or two myself.
this is a very good poem. its always good to let your feelings out on paper. i think a lot of teenages will be able to relate their feelings with yours. keep writing!
Ive recently spilt up with the one person in my life who I really could ever love, this peom has made me cry and feel ashamed that I never saw some of the things he was going through. It might be too late to restart our love but thankyou for showing me where I went wrong.
i understand u
I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE THAT MOST OF MY LIFE AND READING THAT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE LIKE THAT. I RECOMMEND THIS POEM TO PEOPLE WHO WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHAT DEPRESSED PEOPLE GO THROUGH.
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