About the Poem
This poem, written when I was 13 years old, was for one of best friends - to let him know exactly what he was to me and why I needed him in my life.
What You Are To Me
|by Bernice Ellrick|
|I am a rose, you are my thorns,
clutching to me, protecting me.
I am the sun, you are my rays,
helping me to shine and to be all that I can.
I am a lake, you are my water,
filling me with ideas, dreams, and hopes for the future.
I am a tree, you are my leaves,
sharing who and what I am
and becoming an important part of my life.
I am a heart, you are my beat,
beating rhythmically to my happiness,
my fear, my sadness, my excitement
I am me and you are with me,
to share all that I am,
to share life, love, and happiness.
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50 Visitor Comments
Really a vry vry nice poem! Gr8 job!
A beautiful poem that touched me to the core of my heart
Beautiful poem. just reminds me my chum. Good job Ellrick,keep goin' on.
This is wriiten beautifully! You must be so proud! this poem reminds me of one of my friends!
This is the best poem i have ever read. When i read it a tear almost came to my eye. You are an awsome poet.
This is a great poem.
I was looking for a poem to give to my husband. I, of course, cannot write beautiful poems. Therefore, I had to find one that fit just right. My husband and I are celebrating our 12th year together. I felt this was a great reflection of my thoughts.
This poem is wonderful. Very well thought out. Its powerful. Its brilliant. I love it! It is my favorite poem. 10/10! 100%
I loved it; my wife just sent it to me after a big fight.
i lved it@ not only is this a friendship poem, but it can also relate to your family as well. i give it TWO THUMBS UP!
this is so beautiful i love it
hi!your such a great author! and im so empress to your poem!
even words can't describe the beauty & depth of this poem!
I absolutly LOVE this poem! I have been searching for a poem to give to my best friend who is going through a hard time right now all day long! I finnaly found this one and it is truly perfect! You are a wonderfull writer keep up the good work!
Fabulous, fantastic, bravo! You spoke every single word that I was looking for to express how I feel about my best friend. BRAVO!
brilliant! Your so talented
This poem is fantastic! you have a wonderful talent so keep up the great work:)
Beautiful indeed. I can relate to the feelings of the poet
MY friend is leaving and I won't get to see him and I open poem site tos send him some to him. somehow I found your site and I like your poem because I feel exactly same like this poem
AWESOME! Just what I needed today!
It's simple and beautiful. You've got talent.
I love this poem. There are not words to discribe this poem
what a lovely enthralling poem thank you yasmek eh :)
I Love It So very Much It's Really Of The Best Poem I've read In My Life !!
this is a nice poem i like this
It is beautiful...keep up the good work.
i had tears in my eye's when reading it is so beautiful thank you for sharing god be with you, and his hand to guide you to write more you will be in my prayers
i have never read such a poem. even though i live among poets and i myself is one,i would never able to compose or even listen such a sweet poem.
i think its very good poem that everyone should send 2 there friends:)
i liked the way this poet writes! thats all i can say. :O)~
The words just touch your heart
I am glad you wrote this poem, it describes my relationship with my Husband. It the best I have read so far.
this is a great poem.. i realy enjoyed it .. i feel like it was me talking to my best friend
i like this poem
Fantastic poem - really catches the essence of friendship!
That was the most beautiful poem i ever heard
This poem was great! I loved it.It reminds me of why friendship is so special and the bond that keeps two people together
Thanks for your wonderful poem. It's how I feel when I am with my best friend thank you so much!
Such a wonderful way to describe his friendship.
This is a very beautiful poem.. It really describes how a person feels to truly love someone..
well written. Very touching
i rreally like this poem i sent it to one of my friends and it made her cry so thanks for that poem it really helps
so cool i love it
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