About the Poem

This poem was written when I was not feeling my best. I have always longed for a person to say these things to me and mean them. I am a terribly romantic person, and have often fantasized about people saying and doing things that I long to have done.

It may seem strange, but when one wants something so much it becomes an obsession almost. I am surrounded by loved ones and friends, yet often times I feel alone, so this poem is mostly saying what I long to hear.

I Could

by Kaunie Hagensen

I could write you a letter,
But what would it say?
Could it make things better?
Would it make everything okay?

I could write you a song,
Full of love hope and grace.
Would you tell me what went wrong?
Could you say it to my face?

I could make a telephone call,
And listen as you cried
But I would not let you fall,
And if you did, we'd both know I tried.

I could make the world go away
But would that be what you like?
You would miss the golden sunrays
You would miss the moonlight.

I could stop all this pain
Bring it all to an end
The tears would fall like rain
On the shoulder of a dear friend.

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74 Visitor Comments

marquesha

this poem is very touching

elvina

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Ashley

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bianca

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maricar

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Zaarah

Its SUPERB. only these are the words i need to show my love to my friend.

tanya

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Cindy

I sometimes fine it hard to tell my bestfriend what she means to me, thank you for your poems. They tell my friend what I couldn't say in my own words.

jade

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nesha

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Cindy

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rasha

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Rosie

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heidi

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NaNa

This is one of my favorit poems now. Even though I'm 12 it was so butifull. I loved it alot. I wish I wrote poems that good. Maybe some day I will be abl to write poems that good. Thank You, NaNa G.

ling2!

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Steffanie

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lynn

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Mary Jane

WOW. VERY DEEP. ABSOLUTELY AWESOME AND VERY MOVING. I WAS VERY TOUCHED BY THIS POEM BECAUSE I COULD TELL IT CAME FROM THE HEART. THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS YOU!

ASHLEY

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Mharestel

Wow! ! ! This poem is really great. It touches my heart, and made me remember my dear friend whos very far away from me.

zoe

this poem was very good i like it, it reminds me of me and my other friend! lol and now i relize how stuipd i was, 2 let our friendship go like that, so thank you for making that poem!

holly

this poem reminded me of the friendship I tried to save in soo many ways and still sometimes stumble to save it for awhile more. dont give up just stay strong

Brooke

this poem is awesome. it is what i feel so many days, i just have never written it down.

AsHtYn

this is a really great poem

Faith

WHAT A GREAT POEM!

Amanda

I really enjoyed this pome

lezlie

i think it was a really good poem. and it made a lot of sence between me and my friend.

Kaitlin

i would have to say if it was a vote of 10 being the best and 1 the worst i would surly give this poem a 9. i thought it was a very touching poem that did decribe some to most of all my friendships that i have. i just also want to say that it is a great poem that gave me hope knowing that im not the only one that fells the way the author does in this poem.

kari

that is a great poem I loved it. It is so true for some of my friends and me. I relate to this poem a lot. GREAT JOB!

zack

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jishu

it's wonderful. i could see the reflection of my mind in this poem.

Brenda

I COULD REALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM BECAUSE I ALWAYS FANTASIZE PEOPLE TELLING ME THIS UNTIL ONE DAY MY FRIEND GAVE ME THIS POEM.

natty

it is a very nice poem.

Prin

The poem was simple and it really shows what i feel for my bestfriens sharon.

Hiya

This poem really touched me. You're an awesome poet.

jenn

i love ur poem its so kool and sweet. the best i read so far lol. WONDERFULL POEM GOOD THINKING

Jacqu

I remember feeling this way once. But I found my best friend about four years ago,He was in my heart the whole time,Jesus is His name & He promises to never leave me.

baby

i loved it it was beautiful it reminds me of my best friend joanne

leoni

It makes me cry. Thanks to give other side.

Jay

I loved your poem. I am doing a report and I have to find poems and then decate them to someone and I am using this poem as my first page. Your are a great poet

krisy

This describes just the way I feel at times!I think that I've finally found someone who understands how you can feel lonely even when surrounded by friends and love ones.

mandy

I like the poem I though it was very toughing it reminded of me and a friend its really great

joan

i loved it, i almost cryed but my bro. was in the next room so, u know what i mean. Anyways i justed wanted to say thank you for sharing your lovely poem with the world and to keep on writing because who know how far you will go.

Laura

I thought this was a great poem, It was exactly what I wanted to say to a close friend but didn't know the words or where to begin. Thank you!

Ginni

I thought it was very good. I got a friend that I thought about when I started reading the poem! Great Poem!

mastiffowner

This poem reminded me of my best friend who changed over the summer and started hanging with a different crowd.When we came back to school she never spoke to me again.I love your poem.

heather

this was really good. it took the words outta my mouth :)

Pat

I truly love this poem. The word love could only describe this poem

Pat

This was so real and true. I loved it so much. Excellent poetry

shari

that poem I could. I reallly liked it. to me, it talks about what we all go through in our lives and that wealways want or need someone there near you. I use to fantisizee myself, and sometimes I still do. I even had an obssession over things, but if it weren't for a friend, I knew a long time ago, I would still bee llike that today. I enjoy poetry and I love to write as well.

nicholas

IT WAS A EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD POEM I HAVE IN HIGH REGUARD

Tamiko

This poem said exactly what I wanted to say to someone special.Every word that was written I felt,and I know how she felt because I feel the same way sometimes.

Mandy

I thought this poem was really beautiful so i voted for this poem beacause it reminded me of me and my friend Nikki.

FoxyLady

Yer poem is very touching. I know how u feel..been there done that so many times. We take friends for granted but when we lose one, we r so lost. Life don't seem fair sometimes. But we learn n keep on living, sad but true!!

Axel

Simply beautifull.

ghunoo

I guess everybody feels like that, waiting for someone who understands them completely. One feels alone in the crowd.

Jenny

I love this poem so much...the person that wrote this is obviously very talented.

Pamela

I loved this poem I am a poet finder and you where great!

MOSES

I REALLY LOVE IT

Margaret

I HAVE LOST A GOOD FRIEND AWHILE AGO BECAUSE OF WHAT SOME SAID, I SAID. WE STARTED TO BE FRIENDS AGAIN, BUT I KNEW WE WOULD NEVER BE AS CLOSE WE WERE,THEN SOMETHING HAPPEN TO RIP US APART FOR THE I LAST TIME. IT HAS BEEN TWO YEAR AND I HAVE ONLY SEEN HER ONCE RECENTLY AND WE DIDN'T SPEAK. I WANTED TO BUT DIDN'T HAVE THE NERVE TOO. INCASE SHE DIDN'T WANT TO BE FRIEND ANY MORE. THANKS FOR LISTENING,I HAVE HAD A ANOTHER GOOD CRY

Arthur

The poem was wonderfull, and said just what I felt, i would like to see more of this persons poems

Jenny

On a scall from one to ten it was a 100,000,000,000

Tammy

I really enjoyed the poem. It makes you stop and think about the things in life that really matter to you.

amanda

Very GOOD!

Eva

Good, real good

Tammy

I could, is a lovely poem. It makes one wish to have this friend for their own.

angie

this poem was ver nice!

Shina

that was such a great poem and a hart tuching pome

Hulda

A very beautiful poem. Something that makes me want to keep it to my heart.

EMILY1353

I LOVED THAT POEM IT SPEAKS VERY CLEAR OF ALL THINGS IN MY RELATIONSHIP. THANK YOU SO MUCH

Ann

It's a very nice poem Hope to see yours next time.

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