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About the Poem

I have a long time friend that occasionally brings out the worst in me and yet, she loves me as unfinished and sometimes broken as I am. While I have yet to learn how to comfort myself, somehow she can. And for that I am truly grateful.

Friends

Growing pains
Broken chains
A sad melody

Falling tears
Listening ears
A friend just for me

Reaching out
Sharing doubt
When life gets me down

Hands to clutch
Gentle touch
Can turn me around

Spoken words
Softly heard
Cognitivity

Holding tight
Loving light
Calm serenity
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139 Visitor Comments

Vincent
I Love this poem. As I read it I remembered a lot of things that happened from me, as well as my friends. Please Continue writing Poems to encourage better those friendship had already lost and disappeared.
rebeca
i like the poem nice thinking and friends
Anne
ok. this poem has alot of meaning to it, it means to always love ur friends and to be greatful for them always being there for u! its awesome
Ashley
I love this poem.
Teresa
Simplicity is the first word that comes to mind.
Chelsea
I loved this poem so much! It was a perfect poem to write for my friend. I hope she likes it as much as I did!
louise
i liked this poem because it rihymed and because it realy touched me.
beverley
hi there way do we have but wen we have fun to post e cards. it is soooooooooooooooooooo fun too nice website and work
amanda
i luv this poem it is really cute it can make you cry it was really touchy. but yea i luved it alot. !
Farzaneh
this poem rockys!
Kathie
ALL I GOT TO SAY IS THE IS TIGHT!
Bradley
i think the poem was brilliant. because my cousin and granda has passed away,and they were my friends and it makes me feel v. sad, but either ways it was brilliant ! well done :)
Mary
Very thoughtfull! You are a very special person.
shekemma
it can make a person want 2 cry
Jennifer
GREAT POEM! I LOVED IT!
Brittany
i like this poem its good keep up the good work!
Desarea
This poem was wonderful very good :)
morgan
i thought that this poem was very good. it touched my heart! awesome job.
j
It really made me feel something inside. It was truly fantastic!
sarah
i think this poem is great. you should have more poems about friendship!
aisha
it's a really nice poem it brings tears in my eyes.
ashlyn
this one is soo cute
sherry
i love u
shivani
heyy who eva wrote diz its great . and it nearly made me cry . lol keep it up and i hpe u win xxxx gd luck xx
Surbhi
it touched my heart
Sudipto
i like it. simple & good.
ANNA
this poem is beautiful makes me think alot!1
N
very very nice
Brianna
Thats a really good poem!
Terrilyn
wow this poem really summons all the feeling you could have about your friends all in a short quote like poem. It was very nice and well-stated. GOOD JOB!
Damian
This poem really touched me because it relates to stuff I've been through.
mellissa
You, did a great job! hope you win!
Angela
I love this poem is the best. I wish I have friends to send this too!
yo
I think it was very good and out of 10, (10 being the best)I think your poem was about a 81/2
Lalit
Wow it's realy nice poem. I like it too much
mai
Simple and deep. ^^
M
This poem is ace.
vanessa
i love your poem freinds i makes me sad sometimes because i have alot of friends and they are all nice to me like the poem saids that u love that best freind and wouldn't let her out of ur mind or heart because that means you are a true friend to your friend to all your friend and your will keep them forever and will never forgot aboyt them in your life till you die or well that poem was so insteading and it shows the feelin and how the author feels about the poem
robin
i really like this poem a lot
Amber
This is a very true and sad peom when i was down my best friend for 8 yrs. cheered me up.
katie
i really liked this poem
brittany
it is a good poem
Roselande
i love you you made me cry i love this poem
Ashlee
Interesting
Tiffany
I love the way express your feelings toward your friends!
Jennifer
I really liked this peom it was really good. I wish you only had a few more like this!. GREAT JOB!
Devin
OMG that is one of the best poems i've ever read
angie
this poem i realy like keep the good work
DR
This poem was crazzy good. it inspired me to make a beat for my new rap song comin out. Called Friends wit other friends and JEa. anyway its a really good poem. i enjoyed ur ryhmes and freestylin anyway peace
Tiffany
i like your poem. it was/ is very good.
mikyla
this explains my friendship with a friend i have had all my life. it maid my cry when i heard that because my friend and i have had hard hard times and we have always been with eachother and it reminded me of them speacial and some heart breaking times
Jessica
This poem touched my heart Jessica
Ashley
I think that this poem is very motivational and inspiring. I think this was a wonderful poem. Thank you, Ashley
crystal
hey! loved it,'cause for me it's hard making friends 'cause i'm always movung but i do have a friend that this poem explains all the feeling that we share, so i can really relate to it 'cause that's me, but just loved the poem
Aleesha
I think this was simply beautiful!
Sara
I loved your poem it really touched me. I hope you will win Good Luck!
Rohit
very good job
chelsea
This a great poem. I love it so much. I wish I could send it to all of my friends
Kristina
i love poems cause i feel like i can that me that's writing but really isn't that's why i love them.
smitha
It's grat!. I like it very much.
Tiffany
I like the pome it is very nice
FELICITAS
THIS POEM WAS SO SWEET AND VERY GOOD FOR THE TIME I NEED TO HEAR SOMTHING LIKE THIS.
sarah
i never thought of friendship like this but it has changed my views towards friends thanks
ratrut
heyy ! i love ur poems! mmm and i don't have nbow a best friend
Rachel
that is the best poem ever!
saru
hey!the poem is awesome!
sandie
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. IT WAS VERY NICE
yvette
this is a good poem
brandy
i love this poem it is good and it remines me of me and my best friend
chelsey
this is a verygood poem for teenage friends thanks for this poems being writting
ELENA SOFIA
this a poem is very beautiful, i liked.
meg
happens to be an short but amazing poem . it is great!
ashley
this is a really good and touching poem really
siti
this poem is a very sentimental for friendship and it is really touches my heart,i think this poem is mean for best friends
Patmae
your good. keep up the good work.
nat
it was really touching and i nearly cried. my friend sam thought it was very calming because when i read it 2 her she calmed down cause she was having a spas attack.
Rachael
so short but it really gets the point across. I loved it. keep writing poems just like these.
Mary
It is a very good poem.
kat
i luv da poem i recon it was great , keep up the good effort :)
DuanShae'
this poem is really touching and is meant to be for a really good person.
Andrea
this one was way good thank you hand keep up the good work.
Nicole
I loved the poem
jaya
this poem is really great, one of the best eva!
baby
it was fantasticly wonderful keep up the good work. never let someone tell you that you have no gift in poetry,because you do have a gift what most people dont have. !
Sabrina
I loved this poem it reminded me of my best friend of so far 13 years. I loved it keep writing them. Thank You
dana
this poem completly touched my heart. it reminds me of all of my other friends at my old school in munford. it is soooo passionate
priyanthi
Heart felt thought about a loving friend.
Casey
This poem is great because it short and sweet!
Joshua
I totaly love this poem
Sheronica
Great poem
Amanda
I really liked this poem. It really reminded me of my friends from where i used to live. They are all still my friends, but they are there for me more than ever.
kim
it was excellent!
jade&leah
wow thats cool
melissa
i love thaat peom a lot my friend too.
Ronni
I like this poem actually. its pretty good.
jaya
very unqiue poem
some
hey good poem bye
natasha
i like it
Maria
I just wanted to say that I thought the poem was very nice!
Angie
I think this poem is so wondeful, it is really simple, yet very effective. I love it!
Dawn
It was cute, and simple. It showned described everything about friendship in a just a page.
Jose
I really like your poem is verry nice.
Amy
your poem really toched my heart ive never heard a poem as good as your congratulations
lindsey
it was a really cute poem, i liked it.
C.J.
good
Robert
It was nice it some what dells with me.
David
Very good.
Dave
Very good, says it all without complexity.
Trustine
The Sound Really Good
lindsey
this peom was way cute!
becky
A very right and awesome poem.
marie
I really enjoyed this poem. HM3 are u a writer? if u aren't you should be
KYNA
This is a pretty good poem. You did a great job makeing this poem.
Aimee
I am in love with this poem. It is one that I would love to send to a friend, but just can't yet.
Aimee
This is amazing. I am in awe beacause it is what I feel too.
Rub
Wow it is really a very nice poem.
Monic
I can truly relate to this poem. I have a best friend who comforts me through my ups and downs. Who cries with me, holds me and comforts me when I can't take the anxiety and stress of what life brings me. Then she carefully brings me back to reality so that I can plant my feet on the ground. I am always looking for ways to tell her how much I appreciate her love and friendship so I sent her this poem. Thank you
Tami
I loved this poem!
tawni
I like your poem. Is so neat.
Nicho
i really like this poem. it is like me and my best friend.
Hanna
Wow! I thought that was great! You are such a great poet! I almost cried!
Diana
This was the perfect poem for my best friend & I because we have been through a lot of stuff in the 4 years. This is the perfect poem for really good friends.
JASHANK
i loved this poem more than myself
nesha
I understand.
lily
wow that moved me man!
Nisha
Its a great poem. Very touching and amazing;keep up the good work.
Paige
Loved thee poem!
METTA
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING AND SHARING SOME OF MY POETRY ON THIS WEBSITE. THIS POEM IS DA BOMB AND I MUST GIVE HM3 HIS OR HER PROPS ON THIS POEM BECAUSE I GOT SO CAUGHT UP IN IT THAT I READ IT ABOUT 3 OR 4 TIMES JUST TO MAKE SURE THAT IT WAS ALL THAT I THOUGHT IT TO BE AND IT IS.
Janhavi
This is a very sweet poem and I feel very nice to send it to a friend.
nimeka
i just love u'r sweet and short poem.It's very nice to send to a friend.i hope u will write more poems like this one
secret
I REALLY ENJOYED IT SHORT AND WITH ALOT OF MEANING.
kiddo
even though i'm not very emotional all these poems make me wanna cry sumtimes
Tina
I Like this poem because this decides my great friend he is such a sweet guy.
Kandi
I just want to say that being simple is better especially for airheads like me. So, keep on writing. You're an excellent writer!
debbie
i really love this poem it sould really be #1.
Meg
I enjoyed the cadence the brevity of an all encompassing message
Norma
I think this poems should win becaues it is so sweet to send a friend.... bye norma
Gerri
i love this poem will ypou please send it to me thanks for your time. Yours truly gerri jane
serendipity
Simplicity is always best.

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