About the Poem
There are special people that we meet in life who seem to make life's journey a little easier. Those people are like a candle that shows the obstacles in your way so that Life is easier to deal with.
Lighting Your Way |
| by justageorgiaguy |
| If I was one thing, I'd be a candle Lighting the way so you can handle Your life easier without woes Not having to fight with your foes. I'd help keep you from stumbling over Things blocking your path to an open door. If I light your path, life is easier, Even strong winds, my light will not deter. No matter what, I'm here for you To cheer you up when you are blue. Do not fret when times get tough, If things look down or kind of rough. Just remember, I'm always here, In your heart, close and near. I will help you out in every way, Happiness and love in your heart will stay. Don't blow me out, that's one request Unless it's me you do detest. I do not try to hurt anyone That isn't good or any fun. But one day you may leave me behind You may no longer need my light to shine. If that day comes, go on your way And I will hope to see you again one day. If one day, I don't appear, Do not worry, do not fear I may be gone, but in your heart The light I gave you did not depart. It will be there forever and a day To always bring happiness and light your way. Farewell for now, I'm needed elsewhere If your path grows dark, in your heart, I'm there. So I'm really not gone, just not seen, I would not leave, I'm not that mean. Only one simple request that I must say, Please, never forget those who lit your way. |
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240 Visitor Comments
kyra
I love this poem. I had always valued friendship,and this poem is about the only one that touched my heart
Mezida
This is a beautifully written work about growing apart. At this moment in my life I feel alone and friendless Despite what my friends tell me I know that the day we walk past eachother like strangers is near. This poem made me realise it's not so bad at all.
emerson
i like this poem because i can relate it to my real scenario in my own life now.
maly
this poem really touching ^^ I read it over and over again and everytime the feeling are the same ^^ thx for helping me speak out the words in my heart for me =)
Siuli
It's a beautiful poem that touched me a lot. My eleven year old daughter got second prize in school by reciting this poem. Many of her teachers appreciated the poem.
Shawna
I have a seventeen year old son living with his grandparents. I miss him dearly everyday and wish he would choose to come home. I feel I've lost my best friend and don't know how to go on. Every day is a new day of disapointment I try to keep my head high and move on through my daily activities but fear my child,son,friend will never return I am sending him your poem in a hope to let him know I love him and let him know i'll always be here and its will never be to late
heather
i think that poem is very nice.
Kay
It's beautifully written from the heart and it is a wonderful poem 'it's got alot of meaning behind it,the poem touch my heart. My Name is Kay.
james carlos
a very nice poem.
marquita
I would like to say thank u 4 those woundful words. I just lost my friend n i would like 2 say thanks n keep those woundful words go.
Shelby
I loved this poem it brought tears to my eyes when i read it.
lory
well. i donno how to tell u but i loved it sooo much!hope one day i'll become a poet like you!
louise
wow i have 2 say goodbye to some one close to me because he is leave school=[! & i have to say this sounds like what i would do! thank you this is really going to help me say goodbye in a less painfull way=]
joanne
if we were all to light the way in friendship to just one other person there would be pease at last in our world----thankyou for your beautiful words
Karen
that was great i see your friends mean to you what mine mean to me
carolina
i think this poem is beautiful
Roselaure
awwwww. This poem is realy touching. Especially the last two lines. I cannot think of any words to describe this wonderful poem! Keep on doing what you do! THANK YOU SOOOOO VERY MUCH.
Jenny
I really like this peom b/c I feel like a person in my life has been that light in my life. He was a person who is still close to my heart. He is like a brother to me. Even though we haven't been able to talk for about 2 months. Thank you for the inspiration. Keep writing!. *Jenny*
Tina
this is the sweetest poem, I have ever read. Thanks
kimberly
This poem was very touching an a wonderful one thank you so verry much.
tracy
I just loved this poem! Tracy
Kerryn
WOW! this poem is great! It is so touching and inspiring! Whoever you are who wrote this poem, you are going to go far in life!
Hooper
I thought this poem was really cool. I really liked it, so much, I did, it was so awesome!
Mandy
Omg. that poem was so good. and i think it speaks the truth about most friends in general. keep up the good work. i look forward to reading some more of your poems.
lucy
what a beautifull way to express your friendship. what a true friend you must be.
Jean
It was absolutely beautiful. Very well done.
Jodie
This is a very deep and insparational poem. The writer is very gifted and blessed.
cheryl
this poem is beautiful. it doesnt not only make you think of friends who you havelost touch with but also friends you have lost throughout life.
tora
this poem realy touched me and it reminds me of what I went through with my aunt before I lost her as she went to go live with my angels and watch over me. thank you soo much this poem is realy touching. anglmom
brooke_may
very touching easy to find meaning.
venkat
its good
Linda
this poem was truely wonderful I almost got to crying,,, wonderful,touching,, say's a whole lot ,,,keep up the great writing ,,thank-you
Linemonica
Wow! It's so wonderful. I love it! Thank you for letting me read this poem!
cassandra
omg! i loved this poem it brought a tear to my eye .
Santina
this a great poem.
MJ
This poem says just what my son needs to see right now. He's been that candle of a friend who has now gone away to college & unfortunately is now cutting off friends left behind. Very touching. Thanks.
Lilia
It's so touching.
Nadkie Kaziwai
i like da way it runz. kool
jessica
that was a true poem that really touched me i began to cry. but i just want to let u know that this is one of my fav.
misty
[his was one of the best poem so far it is true to me and it touch my heart with love and saddness all at the same time i know how it is to put someone's heart down on paper! =) and be there for someone i care about alot and that mean so much to me] *MAD & CAT* =)
Josh
i love this poem
JAZLEEN
THAT WAS GREAT
Betty
I really loved this poem
lisa
OMG ur poem is soo great that your poem has touched me and has made me cry. ur a great writer and hope ur poem is the best poem! i'm so happy u wrote this poem. i will write this poem to my friend.
naddie
hey! i really like this poem of yours. the words are so meaningful and im when i read it
Kelly
this poem gave me shivers down my spine its awesome! I will never forget it! well done!
TAMI
I LOVE IT
Beth
awesome poem
Jen
You know what friendship is all about and what it means to be a friend. Your poem shows that no matter what happens the lite you give to someone shines on forever in their heart. Thank you
Jessica
i realy liked that poem. i have a friend that is going throught some hard times and i sent her your poem and it really made her day. in a way it kind of defines our friendship that we have. thank you
Lacey
I love this poem. My best friend sent it to me about four years ago. (I still read it from time to time) She passed away at 20, 3 years ago this september. Accidently stumbling across it here really hit home. Thank you for writing this.
shannon
this was an amzing poem whoever you are your blessed with an amazing gift never let it slip away
Mercy
i loved this poem it just touched me it was so. comforting it was just beautiful.
jessica
this is the most beautiful poem ive read. I would never leave a comment 4 a poem but this one really touched me. you have as gift
kira
this is really really great. keep 'em comin. =)
Mark
This poem has a lot of meaning to a friend. This poem really inpired me. Good luck to your poems and may your poems brighten and light your way!
SHELBI
HI WELL I AM GOING TO TELL YOU ABOUT THE WHY I FELL ABOUT THE POEM. WELL I THINK IT IS A GOOD POEM TO GIVE TO SOME ONE YOU LOVE AND FOR THE PERSON WHO DID THEIS POEM PUT A LOT OF FELLING IN IT ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS I LIKE THIS POEM ALOT
Patricia
this poem is very good to send to friend because she is not felling at herself so i hope it cheers her up
neiranz
so sweet.
Nina
So beautifully written and just right to be sent to a distant close friend who is in need of some comfort right now! The poem certainly says all the correct words and thoughts that is in me to express to my friend. Thank you !
jay
This poem is gorgeous. I write poems myself, and I have to say that this is the only poem that I have ever heard or written that truly describes the way that I and many people like me feels after a truly life changing experience. Thank you very much
Tanya
I have to say that this was perfect! My best friend is going thorough a tough time and seems to be shutting me out. I have no idea why. I only want to be her friend and help her! I could not find the words an this poem said it all! Thank you!
nnn
ilove it
deepak
i hav never read such a poem which got address of my soul and brought my tears rolling down the heart.
candace
this is a very nice poem to give 2 ur friend
Kayla
I love this poem it just soooo cool!
nancy
The poem is very nice and encouraging. It has really lit my way. please write more about the same.
Eugene
It is very touching. It makes me think me more about my friends. I like it a lot.
ashley
the poem is very beautyful abd true. it made me think about my friend who helped me when it got dark. for me i say this poem deservers 4 out of 5. well done.
Deana
I LOVED YOUR POEM! IT WAS FANTASTIC! IT REALY TOUCHED ME! THE LAST TWO SENTENCES WAS WHAT REALY MADE ME LOVE THE POEM SOOO MUCH MORE THAN I ALREADY DID! GREAT JOB WRITING THIS POEM!
Holly
This Poem made me think of how close my friend and i are, this was a beautiful poem. I loved it.
jackie
i like this poem, it reminds me how good it feels 2 have a friend that loves you
zonbie
weeellllll it is a very cool poem i like a lot and alll the poems on this site are really kool and thx for sharing all these koll words with us
Kevin
AMAZING! this touched me in so many ways. I am graduating college and this is so fitting for so many different reasons. Thank you! This is an amzing poem!
Adrianna
omg this made me cry
Hoda
I lvoe this poem! very beautiful!
misty
it reminds me of me and my friends. :-)
stephen
Two or three years ago I was about to lose the company of a very old and dear friend. She was at that time going to emigrate to Australia. It was a time of great sadness for us,we were like brother and sister. I came upon this poem at that time and 'God' it hit all the right buttons! It said all,that I (in my clumsiness) could not say. I Emailed the author and asked his permision (which he graciously granted)to send it to her,she replied saying that it was exactly as she felt too. We are still in touch on a regular basis with it seems no loss of contact. With thanks to this wonderful work. Still FANTASTIC every time I read it.
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AWESOME!
Gnat
I LOVE THIS POEM! Great rhyming. Nice altogether presentation. I enjoyed reading it!
Bonnie
This poem was hot. It almost made me cry. It made my day. It also helped me to think about college and my future.
kristen
this poem is probably one of the most touching poems i have ever read. very well written. i love it
Felicia
wow that poem is just wut i was looking for, for mah friend. every single word and sentence was great. good job. i write poems mahself. but this one was good. keep up the good work.
Jennifer
Very well rounded and great! Two Thumbs Up! Really Great Job Though!
shennna
i like diz poem its hella cool n i like it alot
Chai
I liked this poem. It is pretty well written. It means alot!
Monique
This is one of the best poems i've ever read. Tells about the path a friend can guide another friend
mike
i love this poem just heled me express wat i feel to muh best friend .
amanda
this poem mean a lot to me
Shelly
This poem helped my express my feelings perfectly toward a friend I am having a disagreement with. Thanks!
Carol
I really needed a poem like this , it said everything I wanted to say to my friend . I really enjoy reading it , I read it over and over again . Thank you for that nice written poem . Carol
SARAH
IT REMIDED ME OF A REALY CLOSE FRIEND WHO MOOVED AWAY
ThuE
This poem is so sweet.
marvene
THIS POEM IS AMAZING, THE WORDS ARE ALL THE RIGHT ONES I WAS LOOKING FOR, TO SEND TO A SPECIAL FRIEND THAT I HAVENT KNOWN LONG. ITS HARD TO EXPRESS YOUR SELF TO SOMEONE,WITHOUT FEELING LIKE A BUG. YOU HAVE DONE A OUTSTANDING JOB.
kellyjaz
beautiful just plain beautiful
VICTORIA
I LOVE IT, I ALSO CAN RELATE PEOPLE SEEM TO REMEMBER YOU WHEN IT FITS THEM, OTHER THEN THAT THEY DON'T KNOW YOU. I KEEP TELLING THEM I'M GOING TO BE RICH, BUT THEY DON'T BELIEVE. WHEN THE MONEY START ROLLING INI'M GOING TO BE LIKE YOU REMEMBER WHEN? IT'S ALL GOOD AND LIFE GOES ON. WOULD LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU.
nadine
i really enjoyed reading this particular poem as i thought it wasn't overly dramatic and romanticised it stayed focussed and reliable. i liked the conception of spirituality, candles are a very sensuous and meditative tool of spirituality and i felt quite uplifted when reading. Maybe, maybe not, that this is what the author had intended, either way a very enjoyable, strong structured no-nonsense poem with life.
Karen
This poem hits the heart! I have a friend that I wasn't sure quite what to say. And you put into the perfect words. Beautiful!
Elyse
This poem really touched me and opened up a few doors. I would like to hear more of "justageorgiaguy"s work.
Emma
This is one of the best poems I have ever read. I'm sending it to my son, that is many miles away from me and he needs a little encouragement at this time. I LOVED IT. Thank You!
chaz
thank you! this poem is lovely, it reminds me of my friendship with my bestfriend, roz, she gided me throgh some hard times a few years ago, without her i would not be here today. thank you for letting others enjoy your gift!
Marilyn
I loved your poem and hope you continue writing. You express what I will tell my best friend.
michelle
this is a very pretty poem i love it
sarah
i think poem is very very good. its very expressive and you can tell you are a very good person and caring friend! keep up the good poems. thanks sarah
kate
One of the most beautiful and touching poems ever written. im going to read this at my year 12 graduation! thanks!
leslie
it was a great poem. its true that real friends are there when times get rough. thats what everyone should have in there life.
Amelia
This is a heartfelt poem with wonderful description of friendship. It is simply marvelous.
Gregory
Very good poetry, good symbolism. I like your style. I am younger and this poem touched me. Keep up the good work.
letty
well i honestly enjoyed this poem not many poets can be so honest on what they truly feel
Erika
I just wanted to say that I loved your poem. It touched my heart in many ways. I am going through the same thing with a friend. I'm going to e-mail this to her. Keep up the good work. One.
keith
wow, the poem was very awesome. this will be my favorite poem. read this one friends and you'll see.
Bland
i have a friend this exact way. You have a talent writing poetry is something that you should pursue. love the peom
Heather
This poem literally gave me goosebumps. Well written, touching, and something I felt able to relate to.
jamie
very touching, beautiful, and straight from the heart.
Sarai
Dang man as soon as i read this poem it really touched me man i have gone through this a whole bunch of times and you do feel like a candle waiting to light someones way. Thank you for writin this poem! PEACE OUT DAWGS!
ANGELA
This is a very beautiful poem and it say more than it is written. Thank you
CATHERINE
SUCH A MOVING POEM, I LOVE IT.
Chris
That poem is so lovely, it says everything. Thank you for letting all read it and enjoy it. You are so talented and that i am sure you know.
Laurie
great poem. And theysay guys cant write
Karen
I enjoyed this poem because I think it is so true to life, and it is also true that we are all capable of being someone's light as well as needing a light.
peggy
it is so true
SUE
Your words mean so much to a lot of people. I have Lupus, and we send these poem's to each member we know. Thank You
Zack
great poem! luv it
renalyn
I lyk d poem. its unselfish. ya! its really great!
Dana
This is an awesome poem my friends loved it too! I LIKE IT!
Stephanie
your poem was great!I loved the way it ended using the title to end it was a great idea!great job!And to anyone who is looking for a poem about friendship this is a great choice!
sister
very well done great job
imran
i love this poem very much i think it is very good and i give 100% vote for this poem bcs first time my girl friend send to me and i enjoy it too much i like it too much thank thare a lot of thing for say for this poem but i did not have a time so i say which i can not say so at last i like too much this poem thanks
eel
beutiful, just beutiful.
Chantal
I believe this poems tells you never to forget those who helped to make a diffirence or who helped you to get where you were. It is a real meaningful,good, and helpful poem to keep in your mind through life.
Randy
I am about to graduate college and this poem really sums up how I feel about my friends who have lit the path of my life up.
Kaitlin
this is one of my favorite poems now! it is touching in so many ways. it also makes my think of my nephew may he reat in peace. i lost him almost 3 years ago and that poems makes me think that he is my light and if it is ever dark he is there for me. i was only 11 when i lost him and it helps me to think he is me light and angel that watches and guards me.
Cat
It was very easy to understand I loved it! Well done
Jamie
I loved it.
monica
i like your poem and i think it is very touching. it reminds me of a person who has been my light and you just made me realize that he is still there no matter what happens. and i thank you for that. that friend who has lit my way also a poetry writer and i really like to read poetry, i also sometimes write a little poetry. good luck in the future with your poetry
Stepahnie
That poem realyy touched me!It mad me cry, i'm dedicating it to one of my close friends who has recently been diagnosed with lukemia. Thanks
shenique
I think that poem was beautiful that is what i wanted to tell my bestfriend but i didn't know how into now thank u so much for writing a poem like that i really loved it.
cathie
Nice poem. It touched my heart.
Aoife
That poem was absoulty SAVAGE!
tina
its so cute and have so much meanings tat put me in tears. well, id like to give this to all of mah frends who i really love. plz dun blow me out. whenever death cums to me. then tats the day tat ill leave.
Melissa
Great poem. Like the words the poet used.
kimberlee
it was perfect to send to a friend of mine and she loved it too really fantastic!**
julie
I really loved this poem because it shows the better half of people . It also amazes me because the poem is so looong!and keeps the same meaning write to the end . 5/5 it is the best poem ive ever read!
Lily
this is such a good poem! it almost made me cry.
Jennifer
that last part of your poem made my stomache drop a hundered feet. i wrote a song about candels once and i wish i could use some of your poem for it! i wish i could write somthing like that last part f your poem the last 2 lines. i thought that was the best part!
JOSEPH
VERY well said! I read friendship poems for hours,looking for just the right one. This is the only one I saved. THANK YOU for putting many peoples feelings into verse.
Kourtney
This is by far the most beautiful and meaningful friendship poem I have ever read. Please continue to write. You have a wonderful gift.
Vickie
I love this poem, its just touch my feeling and very heartwarming. who ever write this , you got a warm hugs from me.
Kim
This poem is beautiful and it has just the right meaning for a few of my friends.
kel
this is one of the best poems i ever read. so inspiring.
Adriana
This is a really nice poem it really touched me and anyone would be happy to get it. The rhynms are great
Jam
hey! nice, very very nice poem. with a blake potential! or might be the next shakespeare!
Tracey
What an absolutely beautiful poem, it made me cry!
ahmed
thanks for the wonderful words. it touched my heart deeply.
stephen
Just the most feeling poem about parting friends that I have ever read. Superb!
Candra
this is a perfect poem for so many friendships, you did a awsome job
Jessica
This poem is one of the best ones that I have ever read before. It brought tears to my eyes, and I felt as if this poem desribed exactly what I have felt lately. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more.
simran
EXECLLANT. VERY NICE. IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES.
Tammy
I love this poem. I plan to give this to a friend of mine that just lost her job. she thinks that the word is closing in on her. i want her to know that i can be a light for her! thank you for writing great stuff
damascus
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! CONGRATULATIONS!
clove28
this poem was great just the thing to let someone special know that i really care keep u the good work
tatiana
ohhh i will give that poem a twenty not a ten that is so beautiful i love it . umm its something that i would tell my mom BEAUTIFUL
kevette
that was beatiful very heart warming
bobby
I LIKED YOU POME
Cynthia
This poem has a small place in my haert because it fills as thu you know what makes you and you're freinds small and be happy to be together. You know that friendship is important and that is important to me in life too.
Natasha
This poem is really great.
Johnny
this poem is very touching and moving its one of the best that I've read in a long time
Yvonne
I really admire you for writing that poem. The whole time I read it I felt a beat. It brought tears to my eyes. I hope to read something of yours again soon.
aisha
that poem really moved me thank you
Nicole
I LOVED IT!
Paul
Great Work
Sebastian
i love this poem
Deseree
this is a wonderful poem. i love it. its one of my favs now. ty for writeing it.
Jessica
boi, this poem is so touching i hope you continue writting poems becuz you really are good at this so keep it up! you really made me cry in this poem it's relly good.
Mary
I lvoe this poem! it truly made me cry! great job!
Rachael
Excellent. Very clear and consice, but with much emotion. It had me crying as I thought about my best friend.
Becky
Great poem! Neat way of looking at what friendship is all about.
Luis
God, bless you and your talent. Once I read the poem tears came down my eyes cause in that moment all I wanted to do it was, thank my mother for the things and the sacrifices that the made for making who I am. Hi to everyone from Puerto Rico.
Angie
Absolutely beautiful. VERY VERY touching. It made me cry!
adelh
It's very nice
biggy
nice one . really touched my heart. it happens to everyone. i'm not lost any more
Joey
This is a great poem. It brought tears to my eyes when I read it! Keep up the great poems!
robbi
I thought that this poem was nice. I had tears in my eyes before i could finesh reading it.
Tiana
Absolutely beautiful! Thank you.
ROB
I JUST LOVE THIS POEM, IT HAS CHANGED MY ENTIRELY
Gail
BRILLIANT
Hanna
You really do have a gift for writing poems. This one was beautiful. Keep it up!
KT
That was a great poem! It really touched me. Thank you!
Kim
I love this poem. It is so awesome. It reminds me of one of my guy friends who means a lot to me.
mandy
I love this poem . it touched my heart , thank you for kind works
Hanna
I am moved. That is very awsome. Thank you for shining a little light on me.
Chris
WOW, that poem was so awesome and a little sad. I KnOw that one day ur gonna be a really good poet. KEEP WRIGHTING
haily
this was such a good poem i can't even describe how well I can relate to this. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece! *big H*
Chris
Beautiful! Maybe this will help to mend a lost friendship.
Melanie
WOW!THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC AND MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE POEM!THIS POEM IS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND WRITES WHAT NORMALLY HAPPENS IN A FRIENDSHIP. THESE ARE THE WORDS I AM LOOKING FOR. THANKS,AND DON'T STOP WRITING THESE WONDERFUL POEMS.
nette
i think your poem was very nice. I write poetry myself and I just wantedto say that Ienjoyed it vey much keep up the good work.
steph
i just want to say thankyou for such lovely words. they express so much that i need to say to that special person who i don't have as close to me as i would like!
gracianna
WOW. This is my absolute favorite poem on this whole site. WOW.
Lindsey
thank you justageorgiaguy. this poem means so much to me. it is my favorite poem on the world. thank you for this perfect poem. please, never stop writing. it is your gift, and WOW! it is a great one. thank you.
Melissa
i thought this poem was awesome you have a talent so keep on making poetry
sean
very nice poem its butifull
AHS
WHEN I READ THIS POEM .MADE ME SMELL THE SCENT FROM A ROSE IS WHAT YOU HAVE DONE WITH WORDS HERE THE TRUE ESSENCE HAS IMMERGED TRULY INSPIRING ,AND ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC
Arati
The poem is very beautiful and writes what happens normally in friendship. Keep writing like this . It is a pleasure to read
Jasmine
That poem was awesome! This is my first year at college and it was very hard for me to leave my best friend and your poem was so perfect for the way I'm feeling.
cops
COOOOL! i like it! :)
Maz
Beautiful, these are the words I am looking for. Thanks.
Lauren
i love this poem i shared it with my bro hes moving soon and were really close and we were eachothers candle and im not ready for him to leave and your poem expressed exactly how we feel about eachother thanx for writing it
nina
dam i like thiz poem a lot..it givez me chillz cuz it so nice
pril
WONDERFUL,TOUCHY,POEM!
Kacie
Your poem is sweet! I'm impressed. ...wise and very thoughtful.
dvishappy
Nice!
karla
idont know what to say! its brilliant brings so many feelings to the reader, and also brought tears its fantastic work, id like to read more, thankyou.
Gin
I am using this as a goodbye poem for my sorority meeting tonight. Its our last one, and this one fits perfectly for those of us, like me, who are leaving them behind. Thanks so much for gracing me and others with your talent :o)
marlies
This poem is really really touching! It is one of the best poems I've ever read. Woooow!
Lesley
really touched me said all I wanted to say
Chanda
I just recently lost my aunt, who was also one of my best friends. Reading your poem brought good memories to my heart, and tears to my eyes! Thank You!
LiquidNet
It's a very beautiful poem. No words or comments. Just read it.
Rahul
perfect one for letting the friendship not fade away with time..amazingly Great..touched my heart.
Ida
this is very good, I loved it! You have true deep feelings and should go far in your poetry writings. this comes from the heart.
victor
WAY COOL
Sheila
This is a wonderful poem. It goes straight to the heart. justagorgiaguy you have a gift. Use it to the fullest. Again your poems was perfect.
Jenna
That was a great poem. And it is so true. I love how you kept the metaphor through out the whole poem. That kept it interesting
Erin
These is a wonderful poem that really touches you and makes you think of the impact friends really make on our lives. Thank you so much for sharing it w/ all of us.
chirag
simply mindblowing
Joe_B
Thanks, Georgiaguy.. Sent this to a friend who needed it, badly... Joe
jyille
i luv the poem!!!! it really speaks a lot about friendship and parting. i tells all the readers about what "lies beneath" friendship and friends never leave you in the dark.
Larry
nice...
sarah
i love this poem
jack
I liked it the way it describes lifes trouble and other stuff.
karen
I just dont know what to say, the poem is so amzaming, i cant find words to tell you haow i do you feel, but it is the best one I have reed in a very long time, you could not had put it better, keep up this,
Debs
Wow. Amazing. That's just what I'd like to tell my friend, Laura. Thanks for giving me that chance! Wonderful words!
Alicia
The words expressed in this poem really touched me for they were the kind of words I always wanted to say to a friend of mine but couldn't and didn't know how to.
Kapri
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very beautiful. It reminds me of someone. You are very creative and keep on writing beautiful and meaningful poems.
kerrie
this was a great poem..very well written!
Carrie
Very touching poem, beautifully written!
Dee
This is a GREAt poem! It really touched my heart, because that is how I feel about friendship as well. I have lost 1 friendship and it hurt but although it did and WE don't talk anymore I still do think and consider him a friend no matter what! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS POEM
Miy
I thought this was an excellent poem.
kaye
beautiful
Geri
Wonderful poem I really enjoyed reading it.
Jody
it was beautiful
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