About the Poem
This poem was written just today (4/18/99) for a friend of mine. She and I just are totally not on the same wavelength. I feel she doesn't need me. I used to tell her everything and now we sometimes don't even say hello anymore. I haven't showed her this poem and I don't know if I ever will (it was a way for me to release my feelings). I hope things get back to normal between us, because if I ever do tell her goodbye I will miss her terribly.
Goodbye |
| by Rosebud |
| Well maybe now I should just say goodbye You used to be my friend But I never felt I really was yours So maybe this is the end. I'm different from you, all of you Each other we've never understood I hope that if I do tell you goodbye That it won't be for good. Whenever I'm mad it hurts me so bad And you don't even care I don't know why, I just want to cry And someday I won't be there. The streaks on my arm they've done me no harm They're only made of pen But once they are blood that turns brown like mud They'll be there again and again. If I'm mad at you I'll hurt myself too But that doesn't really matter Although when I hurt I feel like dirt And my spirit's bruised and battered. I do not know why it has to be so I really wish it did not But the way this has been going it is basically shot. You don't need me and we don't need we And that's how I think I know why These words are the ones I have to speak- I love you, but goodbye. |
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395 Visitor Comments
angie
This poem was so sad,but im sure it's true. I'm sure people have done this before.
JESSICA
I THINK ALL PEOMS ALL A VERY NICE THING THEY BRING OUT THE BEST IN PEOPLE THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR PEOMS.
blue butterfly
i like diz poem,bcoz i can relate bout it.
dorothy
that poem was very good it reminds me of my friend who was stabed in the chest for no reason at all.
meya
Good job!you have made a great poem it is so touching just continue to make. and maybe someday you will have a book of it it is an achievement. good luck and by that time i hope a get one of those copies. good day!
olivia
this is really goood :] touched me like i'm drifting from my best friend
Amy
I've been searching for a long time to describe how i feel about my best friend, everything that you wrote, down to the part of hurting yourself when you're mad at them. its exactly what i feel, thank you.
Andrutzy
wow. i feel exactly what you write here and i really feel like someday it will be the end and i feel it will be soon,but i love her doooo muuch and i don't think i can do it
chrissie
thank you for your poem. i didnt know how to express the pain that I was feeling. and you helped me. thanks.
jesus
i really liked it it reminds me if my friend i lost a year ago. she killed herself and when i read this i had her in my mind wishing she was still here
paulina
i love this poem. just like my condition now. i've to say goodbye with my bestest friend :'( gudbye na. love u forever
mercedez
I LOVE THE POEM SO MUCH. I BEEN THROUGH THAT WITH ONE OF MY FRIENDS. IT TOUCHED MY HERAT
Oishee
I loved your poem. I had to say goodbye to one of my friends and your words so much easier. Thanks. ^-^
Sara
I know how true this is. I can relate to this. Thank you and keep on writing.
samantha
it made me cye
Crystal
Well i really liked it beacsue it explains how a person feels in a way that doesnt want to hurt that other friend. Nice job and keep going at it.
will
this poem was really deep and well described and should be given the time to be read
PHUMZA
i think that in so many words a person can tell a tale, your poem has touched me deep in the core. sometimes its hard to express ones feelings and in writing you can never go wrong. it is a heart felt message and i hope you and your friend sort things out in the end, finding true friends is hard these days if someone finds one they must nature it and take care of the friendship. YOUR POEM IS BEAUTIFUL! I WILL PRINT IT AND KEEP IT.
gurlz
i really love this poem bcoz it touched me deeply. just what i want that person to know.
shera
This poem is great! i am in the situation now? At first i thought it was something i was doing wrong, but thank u for letting me know that i am not alone!
pranav
really a great poem. Its possessing the real feelings of a real broken heart.
Jolene
Sad, but very nice. I'm looking for the words for my own situation very similar, and it helps to read your words. Thank you for sharing.
monique
I really like this poem! It remind me of my friend i had to leave .
sabrina
thank u it made me relize somethung me and my friend are goin threw the same thing
NICOLE
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. THATS ALL
Kitty
that last line "i love you, but goodbye" it almost made me cry, i can relate to it so much. i just lost my best friend and that line just means so much right now.
SYLVIA
this is a great poem it actually like telling me what i have done. it realy has touch my heart. great poem!
bnnnnnnnn
it is a really good poem that describes friendship. it is a really good way to say goodbye to yourm friend.
aditya
shows real emotion, the time when ur lefting ur love
nikkie
i really like this poem it was touching because it's how i feel about people and it's really not easy to say goodbye to anyone at anytime!
lizzie
hey there i know exzctly how you feel ive lost a close fren which is my cuz but she seem to be different now. she doesnt speak to me i dont know why but ive learnt my lesson! take my advice let ur mother sister and brother be ur very best frend regards and gudluck!
LaTaura
This poem was really good I am oing through the same situation with my best friend Danielle and this might help me let her off easier
Haiat
I love this poem it is very nice and it really did make me cry because it reminded me about what Im dealing with!
nicole
Thankst, the peom truly touched my heart. It made me ponder long and hard about a pal in my life.
joanne
i love it because thats exatly how i feel between me n my friend.
nytyah
thats a really good poem you have talent
Rey
Thiz is a very nice poem. it makes me cry evertime i read thiz poem cuz i keep thinking of my gf and me. we just end our friendship and before tt, i should say goodbye by sending thiz poem to her.
Daisy
I truly love this poem because it's the only poem not actually relating to what I'm pretty much living and in the process of getting over , but it's actually the only poem that isn't suppose to be the readers fault. Thank you so much for this poem that truly inspires and brings into perspective my exact situation! ToTally AweSomE JoB!
tracy
this is the most touchable poem. it reminds me about my ex bestfriend. . when i was reding this poem my tears are falling. . . haha
jennifer
this poem is very pwerful to me. the thing i went throught with my friends and family and the pain i had when i had to say "GOODBYE"
patricia
this poem meant so much to me because just yesterday, i had to say goodbye to a person i cared about so much. i hate saying goodbye but i do realise that sometimes, you just dont have a choice. rosebud. ur poem was beautiful
Josh
Well. This is the most touching poem I've ever read. I have a friend and I feel this wya for him right now. I was already crying because our friendship ended tonight, and this is just making me cry so much more.
samreen
its fentastic,we cant comment on it. i like the most. its touch my heart. well good hope u right more abput all topic
Luisa
awesome
char
im neva realy on these put this poem realy touched me i feel the same way about somebody i no but she is movin away to aussie i dnt want her to go but theres jack i can do i!
Ashutosh
Hey Rosebud, While reading this poem I felt as though somebody has written my feelings in form of a poem. I felt this is my tale. Its a fantastic poem. Congratulations!
karina
I honestly wish that i couldn't relate to this poem. but it describes my friendship completely. ithink hundreds, at the least, can relate, and so i thank you for writing this poem.
Sandra
Oh My God! This poem hits home so hard. My best friend and I are really having a bad time at mending our friendship and this poem is exactly what I feel. This poem is great. I cried.
marissa
this poem wuz so sad n kool i love it it made me think n made me cry!
Alaina
I think the poem was so nice I almost cryed.
Teresa
wow. I cry when i read your poem. I broke up with my best friend this year. I totally understand your feelings. Giving up a best friend is never easy. Great Poem.
karina
wow. this poem is so inspirational. it really made me think about my best friend right now who is moving away!. who by the way i love soo much!. i love this poem!
Angel
This poem is very interesting, and unique. in a good way. It reflects a different side of friendship that we hear less of. People wish to deny the true meaning of friendship- i guess that is beause we all have out different opinions of what friendship is!
Qiara
this poem touched me cause the friends that i once had we don't talk anymore and t just had to let them go
Othello
exellent
Jacqueline
I had a friend once too. but she's no longer a friend to me. we just drifted further and further away from each other. we used to tell each other secrets and roar with laughter at each other's jokes. but now we dun even say "hi" to one another these days. it makes me think if we were ever friends before. i just wanna say your poem touched ma a lot. it was a great poem. after reading it, i guess now its my turn to say goodbye.
christina
This poem is great and it really touched me
Colin
Wow, ty so much, i feel the same way, and didnt know how to put it in words. Ive been ina friendship, with someone but it hasnt been going good, rough times. but anyways ty so much i appreciate u writing this. 10/10 +5
Desiree
I really love this poem. To me there is a lot of power in it . It's one of the best I read so far this year .
Michelle
This poem basically identified what my friendship is going through with my best friends. My two friends were the best, I loved them with all my heart. Now they have rejected me, and I feel like this poem completely described my feelings. so I thank you Rosebud.
Dave
The poem's great, but the thing that struck me most is that we had that in common cause i was in the same situation. =)
Sarah
Your poem touched me. deeply. I have-well, had-a friend and our friendship crumbled under similar circumstances. I still don't understand why. it's an ugly situtation. She no longer speaks to me. and it hurts so bad because she meant the world to me. I just don't know what I did wrong. something so horrible that she averts her eyes to avoid making contact with mine. and seems to do everything in her power to make my life unbearable. All of this, and still-the only thing I feel is sadness. confusion. Not anger. Well, there are those moments of frustration, but always beneath is just that question: why? and the wish that maybe. just maybe. someday she'll forgive me-for whatever it is I've done to wrong her. Though, I know this is an empty wish. I always know. This is my story, and after reading yours, I felt compelled to tell you that I suffer with you. you're not alone. and in the end, we will be stronger women and men for it. So thank you. Sarah
jazmin
i like this poem alot it reminds me of what happened to me.
AngelDriver11
I love this poem! Its like it knew exactly what I've wanted to say!
dorothy
this poem is great. is always hard to said goodbye to someone especially someone u hold dear. but one my great fren leave me coz of some misunderstood. he is not there now and all i can do is to give him this poem as both of us like poems too. i hope he understand me.
Hilary
I really love this poem. I have been friends with someone for 9 years, and she just met new friends and has changed to someone i know her not to be. You have basically put into words what i feel, anf now i know there is someone else out there dealing with the same thing. Thank you, and I hope you make more poems becase you are really talented!
sweet
my heart touched by this poem. and i sent it to my dear friend, because i know that i have to let him go. i hope my friend could understand this poem.
mark michael
it is very inspiring, emotional, and it touches my heart
RAYZA
I think this poem was hot becuase I had a friend and it was just like this poem. I really like your poem.
Joanna
Is a really good poem!
kristi
That was exelent i loved it.
heather
I love your poem it really touched me. Me and my friend have been fighting for a long time and i don't think it's going to get any better but I don't want to let go. I know I should but I don't want to let go so because of my stubborness I go through all this pain. We hardly ever talk anymore. If me and my other friend are walking in the hallway she just looks at me and says hi to my other friend and keeps walking. I don't want to say goodbye it's like i'm giving up then.
felicia
the reason why im voting for this poem is because i have a friend that just left and i didnt get to say bye and this poem really explaines my friend and i
Heaven
I love this poem because it touches me because I feel the same way about a best friend that I had to say Goodbye to.
Ayn
u have represented my sitution & me in words . it allways happends to . i lost my freinds & loveone . just cuz i dont know how to keep them in heart .
Siyon
Excellent Stuff
kerri
my friends have all ditched me because they think that i have been causing trouble between them all and it wasnt me that said anything but it has been made to sound like i am the one who is doing the wrong this has made me feel so down and i have had to spend all of my lessons today alone in a different classroom away from them otherwise their hatred will get worse for me. this poem has helped me to realise that if they were my real friends they would have realised that it wasnt me that caused all of this trouble and that they should have beleived me when i said it wasnt me. thankyou.
tash
this poem is xctli how i feel, me and all my mates have gone thru such hard times and im gratfuel for the ones that are here for me now, i jst wish the ppl i thought were my real mates were 2. people take friendship like its nothing but u dnt realise what uve gt till its gone. I think friendship is such a precious thing in life and it should never be taken for granted. I dedicate this really to my friend flo who i know will always be here for me love you so much.
Samantha
WOW! this is really good. really think you show show it to your friend. This poem makes we want to cry. On a scale 1-10 I give you a 30. Awesome job
Jamie
I guess why this poem touched my heart was because I had a friendship where I didn't know what was going on. And it was time to say goodbye, but I couldn't, and so now all I do Is write poetry about her, longing for our friendship again. So just to say, I understand what you meant.
Allie
I give you a 10 i loved it!
Ally
Great i can realate exactly 10
scotty
this poem really hit me i have the samething i felt like cring i had to say goobye to one of my best best friends and it didnt mean anything to her so keep wrtting
Niketta
This really touched me because I went through everything the poem said. It made me cry! I give it a standing ovation!
shannon
very real. it really grabbed my attention mainly because i have been in that situation. i have gone through alot in life and sometimes the scratches on my wrist is the on purpose but not anymore. Keep writing. u have talent!
Vanessa
The only thing I could say about this poem is WOW! It really touches you AND IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I EVER READ
Happy
it was very touching, and it reminds me of a friend who made me feel like this once.
jasmin
your poem is great. i like it. i remember what i felt when my bestfriend and i got angry with each other. when you hurt her,its just like your hurting your own self
Marissa
I like your poem. This poem reminds me of me and my friend. When we met it was cool and we were close friends and now its different. We are graduating in five months and going our sperate ways and this poem really touched me and it made me think back on everything in her and i's friendship. I think you are a good poet. I write poems also but it never hurts to try to win contest. Good luck with your poetry and keep it up. marissa
winter
i like this poem becues it reminds me of good friend i had u did a vary goodjob i love it
heather
i love this poem. im going through the same thimg with my best friend now. we told each ohter everythimg. now shes mad at me and wont talk 2 me or tell anyone else why shes mad at me. unfortunately i actually have cut. whatever you do don`t do it EVER it`s a dumb thing to do . i realize that now.
Danielle
I LOVED IT IT EVEN MADE ME CRY
molly
i loved this poeam i recently broke up with my best freind and i read this and it toched me my eyes are even feelig up with tears you have my vote
samantha
Hey there bab i just wanna tek a few moments to say i write poetry but all da time ive been alivce ive never heard a poem like tht i told it to mi friend she creid an kissed me an now we are goin on like 2 best freinds shud so fanks for sharin bab an id deffo giv ya a 10 luv ya mwah xx
Brandi
i loved this poem for a lot of reasons. probably because i feel the same way about a guy friend of mine. i see him all the time but sometimes we don't even say hi. im scared our friendship is falling apart and i dont know what to do about it. this poem really inspired me and thank you so much.
Valeria
hey Rosebud. I loved your poem! this poem kinda explains what happened to me. your poem is very powerful and I loved it! keep up the good work!:0)
Alexandra
I loved it, its something i think everyone can relate too. Great Job!
em
hi to the author. ir is very nice i like it. that's all.
Han
U know, this is the greatest and most touching poem ever. even though i dont no u or anything, but i think that who ever is your friend must be really proud. ^_^
vieve
excellent , just the words i was searching for due to ending a 5yr online friendship!
Ale
O. M. G. This poem is what I'm going through right now with my ex best friend. Now I feel terrible but she said what she felt right in front of me so it hurt but don't matter no more cause she was really talking about herself!
Shinoj Kumar
Just splendid. I am in the same situation. This poem has made me energitic to move forward to say my love to my friend. Thanks indeed for such a provokating poem. Thanks a lot.
Taylor
Hola, Sometimes friends are in a different places and are doing different things. Just because things are different between you both, It doesn't mean the friendship has ended. You just need to respect the other person space. A good friend will always come back to the friendship, if she feels she is welcomed and still loved It's no reflection on you as a person. I am sure you would want a friend who gave u the freedom to grow and experience new things. I enjoyed your poem. writting is the best way to express the voice of your heart. I encourage you to continue. I wish you continued success. T
gail
this poems inspires me because i lost my one and only best friend and that talks about what happened and what kind od eamontions were going threw our minds at the time maby you should read some of mine
cat
wow this poem really touched me, i started to cry, i love when poems are written from the heart!
shelly
its so sad and cute
Tiffany
This poem really has touched me and I wrote it down and told all my 'Friends' about it and they looked like they were about to cry. The next day I moved and didn't say a word, but i had someone that checked on them and she told me that they had changed. I still haven't spoke to them. I don't want to, I wanted to teach them there lesson. I guess I did. -Tiffany
Susanne
OMG. i really appreciated ur poem. its exactly the same im going through and what i went through last year and the year before. One thing i want to say;be forgiving and maybe ur special friend will appreciate u at last. I know how hard it is, but try. GREAT POEM. I LOVE IT. MY HEART BLEEDS WHEN I READ IT
shOrtey
this pOeM is reaLLy gOOd. i Need iT to describe my feeLiNgs to sOmeoNe. iT really heLps aLot. greaT maN! i Love this poeM so much.
diera
well, i just have to say thank you. you've really opened up my eyes.
hadeel
i don`t know ,it just touch something in my heart
ciara
very gud
JoJo
I really like your poem it helps me make sense of something thats going on right now with a friend of mine who i'm also related to! I give you a 10+!
Dawn
I know how people feel about this cause i went through the same thing befor i can back up here to live when i was in colorado and thought that it would not change. but it did so here i am just like that poem i read
nane
hey thx for that poem. it s just what i made through with a friend right now. im different now than she is,because she started doing weird things. she changed and i did aswell we driftet apart. sad, so sad. maybe one day there s some hope for our friendship , but not know. we re teenagers. everyone s changing when you re in that age---
Elayne
amazing poem. thats all i can say. its funny cuz it felt like u wrote it based on my feelings cuz thats pretty much how i feel right now :( well great poetry i luved it, write sum more :) take care
JASMIN
IM SOME WHAT IN THE SAME SITUATION AND I MISS MY FRIEND JESSICA IS HER NAME WE WERE ALIKE SOMEWHAY THINGS JUST HAPPEND AND OUR FRIEND SHIP WAS LOST I KEPT TRYING BECAUSE I HAVE NO SISTER OR GIRL CUZINS THEREFORE I VALUE MY FRIENDSHIP AND I JUST WANT US TO GO BAK TO US BUT ITS LIKE SHE DOESNT CARE ANYMORE I JUST MISS HER BUT YOUR POEM IS GOOD AND I WISH YOU AND YOUR FRIEND THE BEST.
joie
this poem was one of the best poems ever. it reminded me of me so much it hurt! you are a very wonderful writer!
kavita
a masterpiece. it stays long in your heart hours after you read it
deanne
hey my name is deanne and i loved this poem dearly cause when me and my friends fight this is how i feel but we do come friends with each outher write now and who ever wrote this and its true good luck and good bye
jannet
Tis a great poem. It really touched me. It happened to recently and it was painful. hope ul get to reconcile with her.
jamie
wow this is a great poem and i have a freind who i feel i need to say goodbye to that i love and i never had the words but they were just with held in this poem now i know what to say, thnx.
Angel
this poems how i use to be. i write on my self sometimes just cause me and my friend are not talking. but we are still friends but this peom is how i feel and be wanting to tell her sometimes. `
Amanda
I think the poem was wonderful, I really could connect to it with someone I knew.
Mark
This poem open my eye to my situation. she ended a 7 month of loving relationship and said no regrets. now she wants to continue as friends. I always thought what is said and what is perceived is the same. the poem taught me that love is in my heart and i can only wish her heart is the same feeling for me. shown by act not by words. I am sending here a copy of this poem. Thank You again
Amisha
Feelings have been expressed very well. It has clearly brought out the hurt at the loss of a friend. If you are still feling that way, I hope you will come to terms with this friend one day. But keep up the good writing.
melissa
those are all the words i could never find to say, and all the feelings that she never knew i had.
Lyndsey
That Poem was so amazing, i can totally relate to everything it was saying. You really have amazing writing talent keep up the great work!
jessica ann
Its touching and very depressing. But very good indeed!
bunny
i cried reading this, human emotion actually put into words. thank you
carah
yah i like this poem because it describe one of my so called friend ships and that person is leaving
Ariana
this poems is great! iknow what you are going through i dont know if u still are but that was my exact storie i once had a best friend i though i shared every thing with vut i came to find oiut that it was nothing like that. i said good bye its been 9 months we see each other and its like we never knew each other till this day it still hurts be and ive been wanting that friend ship back but i know that can't happen. i feel with a big hole in my heart and she don't feel nothing and i beet that she dont even care. you'r poem helps me out when i feel that i cant take it no more. thank you P. S i hope youre friend ship did not end up like mine.
Adrianna
I loved this poem it makes me cry because it is just so sad and reminds me of the feeling I had every time I moved away from my friends. Thanx.
jam
what a great poem! it really touched my heart. i also lost my bestfriend. and i feel terribly sad because up to now,i don't know what to do and what to say to her. but i'm still hoping that our friendship will be ok as if nothing really happens. i can absolutely feel the intense feeling of the writer. Good job!
misty
i love it i feel the same way
Jessica
I really loved this poem. It just inspired me. I think I will think of this poem when I'm sad.
keshia
this was a very awesome poem. i have a friend name brooke. we used to be best friends but now our friendship, is basically shot. i loved the poem.
Laura
This poem is So sad a sweet I love your poem ill print it out and send to a friend
emily
wow. you legend . when i read this poem i was like . how can someone write such a touching poem. and changed me and i'm sure it will do the same to others. well done . YOU LEGEND.
vl
this poem was very good and it's something i will share
jamie
because it relates to me and other people that are reading this too
lailing
this poem TOTALLY ROCKED! it really made me think how i would feel if i was the character. it's really sad. i really should cherish my friends now. great job! (:
Estella
This poem is so true, i just wish that the friends that do the hurting without taking any notice of their actions, could read this poem! maybe then they would understand and stop it before it gets too late. Estelle
violeta
wow! that's all i got to say I was hurt and cunfuse didnt know how to let go of that person that was hurting me so much but with this poem it say's it all just at the end in got mix up but just perfect keep it up loveing ur work hone!
skyler
i think this poem reaches to everyone who has/had a good friend and had to say bye. it was a wonderful poem.
Ashlee
I really liked this poem and it touched me because it applies to me and I've had to say goodbye to so many friends because of ym moving around the world. It brings me down to earth. I love it.
Ashley
This poem relates to my friendship also. My friend decided a guy was more important that me so we just fell apart and it didn't matter how hard i tried she didn't seem to care.
alexis
its great the authur has a very good talent in makeing poems
courtney
this poem is very sad and who ever rote it should try there g\hardest to be frinds with that person again cuz it seems like you want to.
monique
i think that was a great poem
Emma - jane
i loved the poem, reminding me of me and my best friend, we were so close but now after going our seperate ways to uni, we have grown apart and i didnt want to but felt it best to say goodbye, and i miss her terribly, but i will always have others
Jessica
This is a beautiful poem it touched my heart especially because I just lost a cousin and it hurts but this poem felt so heart warming.
ashley
I think this poem is really touching no i know this poem is touching it's like all the words i wanted to say you said i felt the exact way your poem really touched me it was so beautiful thank you for posting it.
melissa
so sad. cutting isnt cool. sry if you have a problem you need to get help
jeeva
Quite true isnt it . just for a moment i thought it was written for me . Its funny but its good to know that i am not the only one (Hmm the human attitude). Anyway its a strange feeling you love and hate someone at the same time .
Cierra
I loved the poem. It touched my heart deeply because that poem reminded me of me and my so called best friend and how close we use to be! Great Job!
mai
i love your poems. you poem goes exactly how me and one of my friend are going through now. cause right now me and my friend are sort of fighting. so yea. i dont know what to do. well bye. mai lee
Yuheng
this is a marvelous poems. i am too goin tru something like this . u haf expressed wat i really feel .
katie
this helped me with my friend and i i learned something and now i kno that i made the right desion
Charissa
This is such a great poem! It really defines how someone can feel when they love someone so much, but they just have to let them go. This poem really touched me. I have had a few friends like that. Rock On! ~Charissa~
Ashley
Ilove the poem. You know I had a friend who I considered to me like sister and she died in a car wreck. If she was alive now High School would be such a breeze!Keep up the work. By the way her mane was Julie.
Amanda
The poem Expresses exactly how i feel. it relly put my emotions into words. Thanx
chloe
an honest account of how we all feel about someone at some point in our lives. really touched me as it is exactly how i feel at the moment about someone very special whom i have to seperate myself from.
Megan
When i read this poem i thought that it was just another poem, but after i read it i felt like i wanted to cry! To me this poem is so intense, and i means a lot to me. Its not just another poem, its real life. !
adrienne
this is the first poem that has ever made sence to me in my live. i dont know how u do it but these poems are one of the ost beuatiful poems i have read. great, i meen excelent job!
Lynda
A Beautiful poem - it touched me right to the spot - it's exactly the feelings I am going through right now - I couldn't have explained it better - It touched my heart - congatulations!
John
hi i m really touched by it and i wish ti say that this poem will be summited to my form teacher for i m doing a poem review and i saw this poem . i m really touched by this poem thank you
Erin
Wow, I absoulutely loved your poem. It touched me so much. I lost my best friend of 10 years just a couple of months ago. Not lost as in dieing but in the sense that she's not there/talking to me anymore. We've been friends since first grade and I just don't get it. Anyways, I really felt I could relate. I cried the first time a read it, and even harder the second. Just wanted to tell you your a great writer. Hope you keep on doing it
joanne
i loved this poem so much. it has so much meaning and it relates to so many people i know it related to me. GOOD JOB
Jaleesa
your poem was really good. i loved it. its a true feeling on how friends are here and then there gone.
T
I hav to say that I really liked that poem it touched my heart reading it. Thank You
Chassidy
This poem really touched me because i am goping through this kind of situation.
Alefiyah
This poem is too good. It riminds me of my Friend
Erica
Now i have to get a tissue. i loved your poem. it really explains my friendship. i just dont think its right! i tried to make her happy with the friendship we had, but it went to no use. i give you a 10
shannon
this poem made me think so much. i know how you feel probably sometimes, because one of my very good friends, well she kind of is doing that. because just leaving you there, it's sad.
abby
I was really touched by this poem because its just what I am going through now, I have lost a really good mate but now she dont care about me and doesnt even say hi anymore. I use to be great friends with her and it was good whist it lasted, Thanks it was great to read!
horseluv
This poem really touched me. The first time I read it, I got tears in my eyes. I lost a really close friends recently. This truly helped me see that I'm not the only one with a friendship in serious danger of being rejected.
amy
this poem is just what i needed to read today. megs been acting really wierd and every thing you said made sense in a way that nothing else has done for a long time. so thankyou so very much.
h
I am a young teenager who just lost probably one of the most imporant friends in my life. This truly was inspiring. I'm voting for this poem on her birthday. I've sent her several poems on this site, in a birthday email, to show her how much she meant to me. But I can't send this poem, because although I've said it already, my heart can't say goodbye.
Taryn
This poem is so great- I had just gotten in a fight with three of my supposed "friends" and I dont need them and we dont need we. It came to me in the Nic of time! I think that this is one of my new favorite poems, Great job Rosebud, I will be sure to try to read more of your work!
Tiffany
Goodbye was a relly good poem l ove it and it touch me because i resently had to say goodbye to one one the people i thought was my friend. i really think this is a good peom. Love tiff xx
Nicole
I liked this poem because it really tells what alot of people go through. Like right now I know some people who have to go through what this poem talks about and I like that. Also I think its really well done and I love this poem.
shauna
this poem realy touched me because i ahve a friend who makes me feel exacly like this and it does hurt really bad
maddie
hey. this peice is such a powerful copilation of words and emotions that i felt what you were saying. thanks
Sohel
I really liked this poem and I look forword to see more of these one up in the net1! It's a very great poem
Amy
WOW Your poem is totally amazing and I could relate to every single thing you wrote! It really touched me! Your an amazing writer. I hope that everything is getting better for because I knwo with me right now my friends are jsut not what I thought they would be. hope to read more of your poems!
Ezza
I'd like to say that your poem has touched me and i am going through something similar with my friend, who now i never speak to. The poem was beautifully wriiten.
Jessica
I love this poem! It kinda relates to what im going through right now. See. My best friend Kathy. it's like she don't feel the same way as I feel. I mean Im pretty sure that if I was hurt that she would be there for me, but she never tells me and im always telling her "Kathy if you need anything or if you get hurt, I will always be there for you!" and she always tells me alright but it just seems as if she don't care and when she's around one of our friends Ashley. Well we get in fights alot but she's still my friend. it's like Kathy don't even wanna be around me! Well. I can really relate to this poem because have the time I want to say goodbye! Well keep up the awesome work!
katie
I loved you'r peom it was so awesome. It has inspired me to write poems too.
shauna
this poem really touched me and it reminds me of one of my friends who I had to say goodbye to.
Thitiya
I LIKE THIS POEM!
Britnie
Your poem really touched me. I love your creative words you use! im doing a poem write in our 4th grade class and my teacher would love that POEM!
Kate
OMG this poem is very good and i give the author all my suport. she/he is very talented and i hope them good luck to put that talent to good use. I write poems and i was told that im talented but now that ive read this poem i think of myself as not talented at all. from 1 - 10 i give it a full 10.
Whitney
this poem is very true for alot of people with friendly problems, im in the middle of a problem they dont care about my problems only theirs, but anyways i love this poem, very true
easther
ur poem is so touch. im in the same situation wit this poem. i have to ay good bye to one of my best friend. anywhere thanks to ur poem
Leilani
Absoulty love it, it's perfect!
Courtney
Excellent poem
Cecilia
This poem is so touching. I can feel your pain. this is the nicest one i've ever read. thanks alot
nazia
awesome, just how i feel for a friend who stabbed me in the back. gr8 poetess.
Shelby
I jsut loved this poem. It made me think of my friend Chelsea and how i want to be her friend but i dont think she wants me to be hers. She stole the boy that i really liked and i am so unhappy. Its been a couple days sence it happened and i havent acted the same. I don't know what to do. :(( ! thanks for letting me read this poem.
shelly
this poem u wrote made me cry,bc it remindes me of a friend i used 2 have. we used 2 talk all the time but know we never talk or say hello. but i LOVE YOUR poem. keep up the good job.
Kara
Wow. I love that poem! I know what that feels like. It's not the best feeling in the world!
jessica
wow ur poem is so good! i have been havin trouble expressing felings to a person and that made it so much easier
brandy
i loved it i even brought an old friend to come and read it before we broke our friendship off because he was never there for me
Sondra
I picked out this poem for a friend. she lost a friend to an accident. Good Stuff
Nur
I like this poem so much it touch my heart. When i first read this i recall my best friend,she is the bestest friend i had. But now it all vanish like that. bye!
rosebud
i dont know who she is refering to but i dont know many pplz with my name it is not a very common name but i do like this poem i think the author should continue writting they are food
francesca
it reminded me of my lost friend and also understood how i feel about it!
ainal
it's very touching. and i relly feel what the writer wrote and felt. because it happens to me too
amor
it touches my heart coz i feel the same way too. being taken for granted by my bestfriend.
Mallory
i like this poem because i am getting ready 2 say goodbye 2 my best friend. i touched me so much. it was and is a wonderful poem. mallory
Eman
Wow. Your poem is amazing. While I was reading it, something hit me. I once had a great friend and I thought we were close until I had to move. I guess as soon as time ran out so did he. Keep on writing your poems, it helps you and those who read it. Thanx, peace
Danielle
This poem was really great. It reminded me of my old best friend. She started hanging with the "IN CROWD". And we weren't as good of friends as we were. And her and her new friends started treating me really badly. They still do, and this poem gave me the courage to stand up to them, and tell them off. This poem really inspired me, a whole lot. I hope that Rosebud and her old friend, will be reunited once again in the future. And Rosebud, you are a really good writer, and you should keep up the good work! Maybe your writing will inspire someone else like it did me. Thank you.
Ita
this poem was so touching. i was looking 4 friendship poems and i came across this one. and it realy mad a difrence.
Maggie
o its as if were goin through the same exact life, i love my friend but it hurts all the pain that she coused me. i used 2 cut myself becuz of her, but now i got help
Alex
Your poem was. incredible to say the least. I know how it feels to say goodbye to someone you love and it isn't easy or something you'll ever forget. At least now i know that im not alone in this battle.
Kayla
i love the poems she is really good
NIKITTA
VEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY BEAAAAUTTIFFFFFULLLL!
sara
this poem really touchedme and when i read it i immediatiy called me friend and told them about it and your poem really inspired me i hope to read another of your poems someday
lewisa
this poem its very nice and its true. because my life is the same as the poetry. thats why i like it.
Luis
This has touch me keep it up i will send it to a freind a goodbye freind
Victoria
I enjoyed the poem though it made me cry it reminds me of my situation but it's sorta not like mine cause mine invovles someone ripping me and my friend apart but we just hold on even when it hurts really bad
suzy
I wanted to show my friend how I felt because I felt like she and I were not friends anymore becuase she got a new boyfriend and better friends, and I was looking for a poem that would show her how I felt and when I read this one I thought it was really perfect.
karen
I love this poem. I feel like it relates to me. How that even though you make someone mad, you still feel sorry for it. And at the end of a friendship that was all argueing you let the person know you still love them. I guess, I don't really know how to explain why I like it so much, but I do. I'm glad I chose this one to read.
rachel
im going through a fight with one of my friends right now and this poem tells my feeling exactly
Chris
WOW. this the exact way i feel about my old best friend. It felt to me like she didn't care and all she could say was sorry and that was it. Now we don't talk at all anymore but i wish it would go back to normal! i love the poem!
melissa
This poem has really touched me because my best friend is leaving me forever and sometimes I wish god would strike me from this planet forever. I feel as if she does not need me anymore. Thank you for all you poems!
sandi
i just lost my best friend she doesn't need me anymore because she found happiness. i feel your pain
alex
Oh gosh i know exactly how that feels. i was hurt so bad when my best friend and my boy friend went off behind my back and did that to me. i hurt really bad, i was really dissappointed in her. from him it didnt really surprise me, but she hit my spot and that hurts. yea, u touched me.
Alex
I really do feel your pain. My best friend and my long time boyfriend were together behind my back, and when i found out about it they both denied it to me. I still love both of them. From him, it didnt really surprise me all that much, guys can be harsh. But form her. I dont even know what to think anymore.
Black
it's nice
Zalekha
I like this poem very much as it is very much to the point and sometimes all you just need is words like this to touch peoples' minds and pull their heart strings.
crying tears
that is one of the most powerful poems i have read in a long time. great job!
Amanda
i'm not sure if your saying u cut yourself, but everytime i think of my once best friend i cry and feel pain inside and sometimes outside. I wish i could tell her i love her, but we're both changing. ur poem was great and im sorry about your friend
veronica
Well i love your poems it touched my heart. Thank you
TIA
i just lost my best friend. i feel terribly sad i loved her liker a sister but all i got from her is trechery, disloyalty,betrayal. your poem made me think of her may be u and me have passed through the same conditions of life . u know i will never i think show this poem to her but by this poem she will always be remembered by me. thanks
Ronnie
Excelent poem. Exactly the words i wanted to say to a friend but didn't know how. You gave me the answer. Show her the poem. Thanks!
Jessica
I had a hard time expressing what I felt about someone and your poem put them right in my mouth.
alexander
I think this poem was very wonderful. I think Rosebud's friend should start to act like a true friend because if you ever do make a friend you should know they mean a lot to you. And if you ever feel like just dropping them you should see how much pain you could cause. I hope that eventually Rosebud and her friend can manage to become the friends that they were in the past. Overall I would give this poem a 10 out of 10 for the best poem I have ever read in my whole entire life! I hope to see more poems by Rosebud and hope she feels better and gets her friend back!
Gisele
This poem is exactly how I feel about my best friend and how she treats me. I love it so much. This is the second time I've read this poem and it gets better and more meaningful everytime I read it. I know I need to say this to me best friend but it's hard but maybe this poem will help me get the courage to do what I really need to do.
chelsey
i BSOLUTELY LOVED THE POEM ITS ABOUT TO MAKE ME CRY! IM MOVING TO KENTUCKY AND I WONT BE WITH MY FRIENDS ANYMORE AND TWO OF THEM REAL E DONT CARE AND THE OTHER IS KINDA DITCHING ME NOW. SO THIS POEM REAL E HIT ME HARD BUT I LOVED SO GOOD JOB
Miriam
This is a good and touching poem!
natalie
i love the poem and it tells exactly how i feel. i am going through the same thing with my gut friend. as hard as it seems for me to let go i know it is something that needs to be done. this poems is GREAT
emily
thats the best poem that ive read rosebud is just some writer that is awsome i love her poems they are terrific and ive read all kinds from her.
Liz
i liked this poem. its happened to me before. i have these two friends that i considered to be my best friends but 1 would always treat me like dirt at times and thte other one only talked to me if i talked to her first and she moved at a dif. part of the city and found new friends n doesnt bother to call me, talk to me or email me.
Lisa
thankyou for this poem. I have always had a problem with finding friends in my middle school and i really thought this girl would be by my side all the way to college. But now that ive headed up to high school, all she can do is betray me and everything she told me she would never do. this poem helped me a lot because now i realize, a lot of people really do like me for me. Thankyou this poem is a 10
snow
I totally know what you mean. my best friend and i are like that.
garima
this was a totally gr8 poem. i relate to it very well. only yesterday my very very gud freind said gud bye to r relationship. it is very difficult for me to forget all we did 2gether. n all that we shared. gr8 poem rosebud
Hilda
WOW dat poem was soo nice it really got to me cuz im having problems wit my best-friend. i knw its really hard to sey goodbye to sum1 who u really luved like a sister n told everything to n once. but neways luved ur poem GOOD JOB!
Rosemary
I tink ur poem was really deep, i'm in this situation but i just didn't know how 2 let gu, ur poem insipired me a lot. Thanks:)
Collette
This poem is so good. It made me want to cry. It really hits close to home for me, I moving and my on and off friend doesn't seem to care. It's cool how you wrote this poem that so many other people can relate.
Mary Kay
i really love this poem it sounds like my life with my friends this is really beautiful thanks for putting it on online
Shane
Very good, and touching. Reminds me of the friends I lost when i moved away from my old home.
Codie
this poem is so true when u have a best friend they r going to hurt u one way or another! today me and my best friend is into it! but i hope it gets better! this is a great poems u r doin good!
adam
really good poem. very easy to relate too. excellent.
Brittney
omg i just got i a very large fight with my best friend last night! this poem really got me.
lorna
I think that this is a beautiful poem, and it describes what has happening between me 'n' my "bst" mate at the moment, she does things that hurt me, she seys sorry but does it sgen, i have sed goodbye to her, and she doesnt even care
hamid
ONLY WHO SUFFERED CAN UNDERSTAND THE WORDS. LIKE ME. TRUE WORDS FROM DEEP HEART.
Maria
This Poem is so cool "neta" i've never heard a poem that goes with me and thats is cool as much as this one i rally enjoyed reading this poem.
lisa
SAME THING HERE!
Villere
I love this poem. It relates to a accident that happened to me recently.
Amie
great poem it made me think of my friend who i said goodbye too and i miss him so much.
prince dale
the best poem ive ever read in my whole life coz it perfectly touch my feelings towards the lost friendship i have with my bestfriend.
adrienne
hi, your poem was awesome, i can totally relate to it :)
samantha
well ur poem touched my heart because i had a best frnd since we were 5 den one day in yr 4 she died of lukimiea and evry time i go on the net from now i read your poem and it maked me cry im cryin because i miss my frnd tianna and ur poem was gr8
Anonomys
I loved this poem, it made me cry, i nominate this the best poem I ever heard, thanks for being a poet!
abbby
i think this pome is well written & i think it would be good for friend that r saying that there friend ship is saying goodbye.
Aisyah
I think that this poem is fabulous!
Kelse
The poem is really sad. Defently because this how I feel towards a friend
Qila
it happen the same to me,and only the one who feel it uderstands m feelings so as yours,my friends said, that things like doesn't really matter. And i think thats wrong,isn't it?thanks for the great poem it really help me. i make many poems about friends coz they are the precios things for me.
neri
i really love your poem. this is what i feel at this very moment. i want to say goodbye to my bestfriend whose so insensitive and inconsistent thats hurts me everyday. he always take me for granted
Jessica
this poem is soo sad, i know wat it feels lik, i hav a friend and everytime she hurts me, she apologizes and laughs. and everytime she spoke to me i had the feeling she was lying to me. this poem is great and i luv it
Brookelynn
This poem really hit home for me. I just today said goodbye to my on again/off again best friend of 6 yrs. Everything in the poem was exactly how I felt and it was the hardest thing to say goodbye to her, but it was time cause She really didn't need me and we didn't need we. I really liked the poem.
josie
o my god this poem was the best i have ev@ read it made me cry sooo muh its exactly everything i have bin goin through at this moment of tyme this poem is the best one i have ev@ read.
Holly
I am in a similar situation too and sometimes I don't know what to feel; mad or sad. We were best friends for 6 whole years. We even made it into the same junior college but it was then that we drifted; she pursued the Sciences while I, the Arts.
Fena
hey. great poem. i can totally relate. i've lost my best friend of 4 years. so i know what you're going through. hope you're doing alright now.
Lisa
I really loved your poem I took it to the heart i know how hard it is to say goodbye to a best friend. It only been a few months since me and my friend just called it quits, i still think about my friend every day and want to know how she is. But i made a mistake and i wish i could take it back so me and her can be friends again she was like a sister to me. all i can say now is that i miss her and i hope she has a good life ahead of her.
ev
I THINK THE POEM WAS ABSALUTLY BEUTIFULL I THINK YOU SHOLD BE A POEM WRITER
Lindsay
This is a great poem, it is exactly how I feel with a friend of mine right now. I'm losing her to her boyfriend.
kvg
Hey Rosebud, ur poem,. everything u said is exactly what i felt w/my ex-best guy friend. I realized i had to say "goodbye". Girl, u spoke my heart out.
kylie
i absolutely loved that poem i cried my eyes out when i read it,it reminds me so much of me and my friend and really made me think. thanx
Liz
Your poem brought me to tears because I could relate to it all too well. It's beautiful and it was just what I needed from the looks of the other comments it was what alot of people needed, thank you!
Yesie
Wow. Its so beautiful. I was havin one of my best friend, I know her since we were middle school students. we were fussing that much. I tried to get forget abt our arguing. But now, too late that I had to tellin her but we lost our best friend. No more to have best friend. So, I told her, fine no problems then Good. Bye. she is gone. never see her, never talk to her again. Bec I just spoke it like that one of.
heather
i really loved this poem. me and my ex best are kinda going through the same exact thing.
Steve
OMG THIS POEM IS SO PERFECT FOR MY LIFE RIGHT NOW
jhon
this poem is kool
Sarah
I understand what u mean. i know that it really is hard to say goodbye and i hope u and ur friend made up. i totally understand what it feels like b/c when me and my best friend started drifting apart i know just what u mean, but we are now good friends again and i hope that u and ur friend are too! ((great poem))
Unknown
This poem is very touching. very and I recited it in my English Literature lesson; with feelings of course! I love it and I know it's very hard to say goodbye to a friend who you always used to be by your side and now the friendship is gone. :'( so sad. There was once when me and my best friend wanted to end our 7/8 years of friendship. we find it hard to let go. I just love this poem it makes me wanna cry. thank you Rosebud for the wonderful poem u just composed.
abigail
your poem was extremly amazing when i read it i wondered how did he/she put this lovely poem i encourage you to go on thanks
Alana
I love your poem. i so feel everything that you said in the poem. it made me cry while i was in the middle of reading because that is almost exactly how i feel. and i think that u should give it to her
Muhammad
I feel what you feel. My friend did the same with your friend did to you. Hope God forgive them.
MISSY
me and my BEST friend are fighting. but thats what we do all the time. i really want to be her friend but i think this is for the best. your poem took my words right out of my mouth. i love it. keep up the great work. your are a very talented poet. dont let anyone tell you different
Lil Chicka
Wow,that was awesome. I can relate very much to that poem. but my friend chose her boyfriend over me. that kills me but hey i cant change it. I will always be here for her and she knows it. All these poems told a story about their life. I respect that from them! Thank You!
emily
this poem is great. i know how u feel. i lost my best friend not to long ago. We seem so defferent. Your poem really hit home.
Tony
I loved this poem! I know what it feels like to say good-bye to someone that is your dearest friend and you love more than just a freind. I will keep that poem in mind for things that will come in the future. This poem made my feeling, my heart, and my soul swell up together and twirl. This porm was great!
Ale
nice poem its definently one of my favorites
jennifer
i l;oved ur poem. it is so good. i am gointhrought the same thing right now with my best friend. i dont know what to do. i love my best friend alot but we have growin so apart. i dont know if i should say good-bye or stay by her side. ur poem has showin me to stay by her side thanks. it has been the best poem ever.
Jen
I almost started crying as I read this. It really made me think about the friends I've had in the past, and how I was so afraid to say goodbye. Rosebud, you're a special person, and it's hard to lose friends, but at the end of the dark tunnel, there's always a beam of light that never burns out. God bless you.
shikha
this was a very touching poem. this really means something to me
Deana
I absolutely love your poem. I have been fighting with my best friend of two years because she acts like she doesn't care about me anymore and this poem just really touched me I was in tears. I love it
KiKi
Wow. the poem really spoke to me, my best friends have totally dissed me. it made me relize that i don't need to take it any more. i'm going to give them this poem and turn to my TRUE friends for support. thank you rosebud.
joey
This poem really describe my feelings. When I read it, i broke down into tears. I really just can't forget the friendship i shared with my friend.
bec
this was a really good poem it reminds me of the friendship i had but was lost cause we were two different people now i need her she is not there and i realy wish we could be friend again.
Jasmine
i really loved this poem it reminded me of a friend i once had but now is gone
kelli
This is a really good poem. I've been down this road b4 and its not very fun! I've lost a friend of 4yrs. She just started to hang with the wrong crowd. And I was just turnin myself around tryin to get back on the right track, now she's where I was at! So life goes on I guess.
Christa
I just wanted to let you know what i loved your poem. The whole time i knew just how u felt, because i feel the same way about one of my old best friends. You did a wonderful job on your poem, thank you so much for sharing that poem with everyone
Nikki
That Poem Was Great I Loved It That Sounds Like Me Losing My Real Good Friend. I Hope You Write More Beautiful Poetry and Publish It To.
Tesha
This poem is so true. I can relate to this poem so much. It was hard for me to say goodbye also .
sweet
aww, this poem is so sweet. Saying good bye is hard, i kno. its really a good poem and its based on reality and many ppl can relate to it.
Azk
I can really relate to this poem of yours. oh my god, it's exactly what I'm going through. I have a friend who I've known since kindergarten till now (9th Grade) but I can tell we're distancing each day and it hurts because I still care but I know that she doesn't. I feel so used. Your poem is great work, I may be a mere 14 year old but when I see a great poem. it's a great poem!
Robyn
I had went through the same thing. My best friend of 8 years betrayed me. And your poem is what I had to do- say "Good-bye". I completley relate to what you are going through.
inez
that poem made me cry because it reminded me of me and my old best/f we did eveything together well that was da bom poem props and am gone
Gaby
This one was really good. It struck something inside me. Reminded me of my old best friend.
Ali
Oh my god, thats like telling my life story in poetry, thanks so much it was a wonderful poem, i went thro that 2 with a very good friend of mine, its like she didnt even notice me sometimes. thanks again
Josie
this poem is so beautiful. it is so real and i feel your pain, everyone does.
Hal
This poem really explains how my bestfriend feels about one of our other close friends! She hasn't really been there but still she feels like she's one of her bestfriends! My friends r the most important thing to me! I just hope u all realize how great your friends r b/c one day. u may not have them anymore!
Keri
i really like this poem and i hate all my friends i wish i could just disapper. !
Si
Oh my gosh!This is such a beautiful poem! I am going through something similar at the moment and this poem has touched me deeply.
Glad
That was the perfect poem for me to read right now, I mean, who I considered a best friend is treating my like crap, and has replaced me with another friend, so I promised myself next year, I'd say GOODBYE to her!
Jenni
I really love this poem. It really shows how i feel about my "ex friend" and how i should act. I think this person is a really good poem writer and really knows what they're doing.
Kisha
I thought that this poem was very true. I am going through the same thing with my used-to-be-best friend , but the only difference is that I dont know whether to say good bye and just give up or not. I guess I should because it seems like she already has. Thanx
bianc
i really liked your poem. saying goodbye to a friend is really hard to do, and the reason i know why its hard to say goodbye is becuase i had to say goodbye to a friend of mine.
Jayne
The poem can truly relate to what's happening to me now. Keep up your good work!
Fiona
this poem was really sad and I know what it is like because i am fostered don't know my sisters and brothers that well and my parents don't care about me I have been living in a foster home since I was 18 months old and I made one true friend and she was like a sister but now i am slowly losing her and it hurts to know i thought she really cared and would be there forever but she won't be maybe she's meant to be only with someone else not me
bec
i love this because it relates to me and my best friend who i have kown for 4 years now and this in particular it feels like she doesnt care bout me anymore like shes saying we are in highschool and i dont have to be your friend anymore, i can do what ever i want yet i no something about her which her mum should no but once again i havent said anything because i dont want to risk loosing her!
kaite
sounds exactly like what my old best friend FOREVER did to me. he wont even talk to me nemore and i miss him soo much. he meant the world to me and now i cant even say hello or gaze into his beautiful eyes. wonderful job. keep up the fanatastic work.
Gabby
OMG I LOVE UR PEOM U HAVE NO IDEA! IT REMINDS ME OFF MY EX B/F AND HOW I HAD TO LEAVE HIM, I JUST LOVE UR POEM! IT MADE ME CRY.
Alish
I have to say i really really love your poem! I wanted to find something to send to my ex-best friend, she turned on me, i'm 13 yrs. old and she threw all of our friendship down the drain. I cried for the last 5 days over, thanx for the great poem :)
lucy
I luv this poem with all of my heart! I cry with pain as I read it.
Sarah
this poem really got to me. its really revelant to a certain group of people. very heartfelt
katie
I can understand why u feel so hurt
Erika
Great poem. I've thought of saying goodbye to a friend before, 'cause she doesn't seem to need me. nor really want me. sometimes I just feel like I'm only there when no one else is. otherwise she doesn't notice. I'm planning to give her this poem. I just don't know when I'll get the nerve to.
yanny
i like this poem very much. =) it has deep meanings in it. and the situation being describe here suits my situation when i was about to say gd bye to my bf. i was left with no choice but just to let him go=(. by the way. well done rosebud!
ashley
i can relate almost exactly to what thats like i think i'm going to give this to my "friend"
diana
i loved that poem it was really GOODi loved it it made me think of my boyfrind rather than a friend
Jess
wow. intence. sometimes i feel that way too. that poem was amazing and i think it made an impact on each of my friendships.
Leeza
I loved this poem. it totally relates to me. my friends dont care about me. and if i ever said goodbye i dont think they will care that i would be leaving them. i feel like i cry everynight and they just bring more pain and dont help me. this poem totally relates. GREAT POEM
emma
i really love your poems. it touch my heart, 'cause now, i have to fill my strength to try to say goodbye to my friend. it is so hard but i know that i have to say goodbye!
Rana
I like the poem very much. BUT I can't stand being away from my best friend. I like this poem because it keeps love with far. I mean the author still loves the friend and also still away.
Prerna
Whatever is written in this poem will make your freind cry so i would rather advice you as a freind to show he/her this poem to make he/her realise howmuch you care for he/her
Cassi
I can so relate to this. You did an amazing job.
Ray
Its a really smart and lovely poem. I just don't how u got it together. And how u got your brain to tick like that and think of those lovely words.
Jedd
I simply adored the poem. It's so real!
Andie
I just love it! Keep up!
Jenn
yeah i love this poem. i was looking for somthing like it. and i got exactly what i was lookin for. so thanks for writing it.
rosy
oh oh oh oh my it just came right from the heart (tear) (tear) how wonderfull rosebud really wonderfull
Sherri
I really liked your poem. It seem interliy true and it shows how i am feeling now, because i have recently lost a good friend
Heather
wow.. i love this poem. its really relates to what i am going through at this time of my life. It has great description and easy to understand since im not good will complicated things.. lol. n-e ways great job! keep writing!
Kelsey
i really liked this poem.. it reminded me about my friend in elementary.. we used to talk everyday.. and we were never in the same class. i never realized how much he ment until he didnt talk to me in 7th grade.. even wen i said hi. his year he says hi though we dont talk.. i miss him
Jessie
THIS POEM WAS VERY TOUCHING. SAYING GOODBYES TO YOUR FRIEND IS A VERY HARD THING TO DO. IT REMINDED ME WHEN I HAD TO SAY GOODBYE TO MY BEST FRIEND BECAUSE SHE NEVER PAID ATTENTION TO WHAT I FELT. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS POEM!
Paul
wow diz poems really relates 2 how i feel! My best frends who i've known to about 4 years juss left me and hung out with ppl who she jus met 4 like 2dais.itz juss herts me.but im juss gonan leeve b4 it herts even more.she'll 4get me and i already have been replaced so itz better to leeve now
christina
wow i can almost totaly relate. see i did no my bff good we were bffs and we were insepreble but now we cant be n e were near each othr occording to her. it hurts so much i used to cut my wristes but i made a vow nevr to hurt myself again if it will get her back. im still working on it and i will not give up i used to give up all the time but now ive changed alot bout myself im a new person hell i even go by a differ name now. n e way this person i am now does not know the meaning of giving up i wil work to get her and my other bff back if i have to do so till the day i die. i love tham both very much and i cry evry night cuz i lost my gardian angels. very great poem i loved it
Stacy
This Poem was one of the best ones that I have read! It was something that was really going on with me and my friend. This was the best!
Jannah
The Poem is great!!!I really love it....
Dea
It's really good poem. I had to lost my friend too. This poem is really touching and so sad... :)
wackywack
i simply love this poem. it perfectly suits one of my friendships now..keep up the good job!
rhiannon
This is a greta poem. It could apply 2 me in many ways. I feel that way about my best friend who lives on the other side of the world. I didn't know how 2 tell her. Thank u for putting my thoughts in2 beautiful words. Someday I hope 2 become a poet like u.
Ché
This poem made me cry, this is exactly how I feel. Me and my best friend had a huge fight and i want things back to normal but she will just neglect me again. i don't trust her anymore and it kills me! thank you, i don't feel like the only one with my problem now
sangini
when i read this poem, i just couldn't help but cry. it touched my heart so deeply, and i think that's the highest complement a poet can recieve. it made me think of one of my very good friends, whom i lost b'coz i never took the time to understand.
katie
oh my gosh! ur poem is so good. it almost make me cry wen i read it. I juss wanna say dat i reali liked it.
Hiten
Thanx for the lovely poem . I thought my girlfriend loved me, only to know that she was playing around with me. With this poem, I was able to speak out what I really felt and say goodbye with out crying or fighting and in a more dignified manner.
Shannon
This poem was very sad, but also very good. It sounds exactly how I feel about my friendship with my best friend. It's like she doesn't need me or anything, and it hurts everyday I see her at school or think about her. Anyway, this was one of the best poems.
Britney
This poem touched my heart because it says EXACTLY what is going on between me and my ex-best friend.
Marggie
wow. I really like this poem. it was like one I just wrote. I just said goodbye to a best friend because different beliefs. ones that he couldnt respect. this poem reallt hit home.
Emily
These poems means a lot to me considering I feel the same way about one of my friends. She hurts me more than she help me.and its time to cut it off!
Erika
This is great poem. I have felt like this. Like she didn't care or need me. Keep on writng.
Anoop
Dear Rosebud, You give the words to my feelings too. I am in love with a girl and finding myself in the same boat in which u sailed.
debs
i can understand ur pain. you are right, and it's confusing, cuz u need them sooo much, but they just don't 'need' u anymore! It hurts. it would take lotsa guts to reveal ur heart like that. Thank you. you have touched my heart.
Gemma
This poem is the greatest. I felt you were writting about my and me ex-bestfriend, that I lost four months ago. Losing her was the worst thing that ever happened to me. Keep writting your poems and I'll keep reading them!
Sophia
I WANTED TO READ SOMETHING THAT WOULD MAKE ME BECOME STRONGER AGAIN AND KNOWING THAT I CANNOT TRUST ANYONE. MY FRIEND WROTE SOMETHING ON A SHEET OF PAPPER AND I FOUND IT KNOW I KNOW THAT I TRULY HAVE NO FRIENDS.
Danielle
This poem is very good because people know all about what she is tring to say!!
Adriane
Beautiful. I just lost a best friend and you put the word right in to my mouth. I'm sorry about your loss and I feel your pain. I'm in the same position and I think the poem is so wonderful. Thank you
Ayoosh
very nice poem. good luck in ur life.i feel ur pain
FliPPy
THE best poem ever!!
michelle
This was a very sweet poem, yet sad, coz i have just had a big argument with who was my best friend, and now we are not even on speaking terms, and it made my cry, coz thats the way we were! it was lovely
Kaycee
This poem is such a great, but sad one! Right now I've been put on the spot! I'm going to hand this poem off to my best friend! I don't think that we were meant to be at this point! Just like it said she doesn't need me, but I sure do need her though! She just doensn't see it the same way! Thanks a lot!
Mai
wow i really feel connected to that poem cuz i have lost a close friend and it seems so hard to say goodbye...
Jessica
i love this poem,it's a kick a** poem
Andrea
I really like thi spoem it really touches and explains itself
Amy
I love this poem and I thought it was good if you are haveing a to break up with your friend.
Jenifer
When I read this poem I really related to it. My friend and I have been friends for almost 4 years and it seems that we have grown apart from each other and that we don't need one another anymore. It is a great poem and it helped me say goodbye to her.
Mike
I liked this poem alot
T.J.
I really enjoyed your poem. I recently lost a good friend over an argument but he has been extremely bullheaded and stubborn about talking it over, even though i have tried.
Abhay
Written straight from the heart. Writer feels that the poignancy of the words are enough , no fancy vocabulary needs to be use.. and I totally agree with her. A very touching poem which one can associate with . A real pleasure to read.
Karrie
I think that this poem is amazing, I even think it might be one of the best ones I ever heard.
Claire
I really liked your poem. I read it because I got into a fight today with my friend, it was sad but I liked it. thanks
Cher
The reason I like this poem so much is because it reminds me of my former bestfriend. It's very true.
whitney&amanda
we love your poem we think your poem sad and very touching
Crystal
i think this poem is really the way i feel right now i have been left out of many things. i find this so true your life rosebud with your friend is exacly like mine. well i just want to say that i thought your poem is one of the good ones. :)
Xrystal
This is the most beautiful poem! I have a friend that this could apply to. Thanks for sharing it.
patthy
I liked very much. It reflects exactly how I feel now. It's good. Unfortunately love always hurts. but never destroys. and the pain last even more.
marquita
THIS POEM IS WELL-WRITTEN AND I THINK ITS EXCELLENT
Karo
wow! I really liked the poem. Maybe it´s because right now i´m passing through a similar situation. and it´s so hard when you realize that you have to say goodbye to your best friend. but maybe it´s the best thing to do
Dwbg
it's really a poem to express my feelings. I have not much friend and nobody cares about me at all. They're just using me for their own benefit. I really felt like crying when i read the poem. Thanks for such a nice poem!
Caitlin
Hey I can so relate to this.It'll take time but things will work out I promise! Even if you guys aren't best friends again, things always can (and eventually will) get better.
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