About the Poem
This poem is about my dream kiss with the girl of my dreams. And that we would be able to speak with just a look, and with out saying a word. I just hope one day it comes true.
First Kiss |
by Brandon J Rodriguez |
I stair into your beautiful brown eyes, I can feel the blood rushing throughout my body. And as I brush the hair out of your face, I slide my hand down your soft slender cheek, as my skin touches yours, our hearts beat faster. As you run your hands through my hair I lean towards you, I breathe you in. And when our eyes close, our lips meet. Our kiss is soft and wet, smooth and warm, sensuous and passionate. The kiss hits our whole bodies like a tidal wave. We both feel all of our emotion at once, it's a feeling words can't describe. As we pull away, you look into my eyes and I look into yours, we smile realizing that was our first kiss, And it wasn't going to be our last. |
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17 Visitor Comments
faith
this poem really amazed me. it's wonderfuL!
Tiffany
i really like it because a guy wrote it and i never would have guessed that a guy would write about his first kiss.
W
Hey there all, This peom is the bomb! I'm wriing this now cause in about a few mintes I'lll be kissing my girl for the first since we met in a year of being together!
maha
WONDERFUL POEMS LOVELY
keely
I just kissed my boyfriend and was looking 4 a somthing to tell him how i felt about it
lynette
i felt the same way when i kissed my first love but it was more into it
william
this poem was truly beautyful. it captures what the first kissshould feel like perfectly.
Mark
I loved this poem, I am soo lucky to have experienced this first hand. Thank you for writing exactly what I felt.
erica
this is an amazing poem! it's my life totally. well it just hasnt happened yet. but your poem is exactly how i imagine it to be and i cant wait!
Jennifer
Hi. My name is Jennifer and I'm 16 years old. I just wanted to say that I'm truly touched by this poem. It's so beautiful. As I read it, I was thinking, "wow. I'd love for my very first kiss to be just like this. " Yep, it's true. I've never been kissed. Though many guys find me quite "striking". I just haven't found the right one. Well. I have but he hasn't quite found me yet. *tear* Oh well, in time I guess he'll come around. I hope. Any-dang-way, thank you for sharing that beautiful poem with everyone. I was truly touched. Bye! ~Peace out, Jennifer
Brittney
I liked your poem! It made me feel like it was happening to me and my secret crush! Someday maybe I'll get my first kiss.
d
That was one the most feeling poems I ever read. Continue your writings
JOdy
yea i love your poem 4 real cuz its exactly what happend to me its craxy 4 real i love it!
Anne
this isa great poem ,i have just met my love of my life and i want to let him know that this is,how i want my fist kiss to be ! nice and pure that is how a kiss should be !
Garrett
Reminded me of a recent "first Kiss" with a woman I have admired from afar for years
Jeannine
This poem is lovely. It's so pure and innocent. And that is how a first kiss should feel like.
Erica
The poem was nice keep on doing a good job.I voted 4 this poem because it reminds me of my first kiss.It was something I couldn't explain.
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