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This poem was written while my girlfriend was taking a nap.

Watching You

I watched you today,
Lying in bed.
So many thoughts,
Running through my head

You looked so peaceful,
I wanted to touch your face.
You looked so beautiful,
My heart started to race.

You knew I was there,
Standing by your side.
My heart wanted to say something,
My mind wanted to hide.

I know that you knew,
That I was there.
I was watching you,
Lost in a deep stare.

If you would have opened,
Your eyes to my stare.
You would have seen,
How very much I care.
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6 Visitor Comments

chinasa
THIS POEM IS TOTALLY AWESOME MOST OF ALL I LOVED THE LAST STANZA PROBARBLY BECOZ IT EXPRESSED THE WHOLE FEELINGS OF THE WRITER IN EVERY MOMENT YO HEARD
Ivar
Hi, I really liked your Poem, it was really wonderful, great job, it touched deep inside of me,
Caitlin
aww thats so cute :) great poem
Ahmed
hi very good
Heather
i really like the poem it was very good.
ash
I love this poem.

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