About the Poem
Dreaming that the person you long for feels the same way about you.
If Only I Knew |
| by Ally |
| It is you I think of My fingertips touching your lips Moving slowly to your cheeks And lightly over closed eyes A breath sucked in And slowly exhaled Is my touch painful? My fingers keep moving I can feel your breath on my face As you move closer My heart beats faster Faster Anticipation Waiting for your lips to touch mine Waiting I wet my lips I’m waiting Your lips touch mine gently Too gently Hearts beat faster Echoing I lean forward Strong hands on my back Bring me closer Not close enough Mouths open wider Hands move to my neck and up To cup my head Fingers snake through my hair You hold on tighter Your grasp pulls me forward My hair is loose now Twisted through your fingers Thigh touches thigh Your hard chest is strained against me Hands slowly fall away I open my eyes Looking into yours I see myself I hope you’re thinking what I am I wish I knew If only I knew |
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21 Visitor Comments
Jaz
Touching, yet intense. You are truley talented Ally.
Roselaure
This poem is SOOOOOOOO SWEET.
Vianney
OMG. this poem its great. it opened a door of passion, its just wonderful!
dana
omy god that was the sexeys poem ever
Angela
a great poem i like it alot someone in love like me can relate to it
Huda
hi ally all i can say tht YO! u r wonder full excellent u r terrific i also write poems but i relly apriciate tht u have puted alot of feelings in ur words bravo u r best in this.
Dacheline
I was really feeling the words u wrote. I wish I knew what my true love was thinking at times too. But keep up the good work.
Brandi
Ally, I think you should think bigger on your poems because that was excellent. I felt like that at one time; and I wish I could have found the words to express my feelings at that time, or found your poem much sooner than know! Keep writing. your good, and I wish you well.
KAREN
man i feel you, i really would want to know what this person thinks of me, and if he thinks to be with me, he says he does but i really dont know if its true, really good poem you got it.
KRISTINE
All I can say is WOW!
Rebecca
I have to say that you did a wonderful job on this poem. Too many times I have been in a situation that you have described. I think that everyone has had a moment where they wanted to know, but didn't. Thank you for speaking the truth!
Marline
I really liked this poem..We oftne wonder does he or she feel the same. good poem
venus
your poem hit me right in the right spot. I never new how to put such feelings into words till i read your peom it was like reliving the day that changed my life..
Christine
Ally, I read this poem and it sent chills up my spine. Bravo, beautiful words. Thank you.
arlette
i found it rather to the point. last night i wondered the same thing. could he really see through my eyes and see my soul and know what i felt. could he?
tiffany
this poem is great,all i can say is wow..i enjoyed reading it very much.
Samantha
This poem is so powerful. My heart kept beating faster as I read this. This was real powerful stuff you wrote here. You have something very rare that I wish that I could've had in me. You're really good. I loved this poem! Keep up the good work!
Nat
Ally, your poem is fantastic. I relates to my situtaion that i am in right now as though i wrote it myself. Searching through this site it was amazing and a relief to see that others ahve experienced the same as i am going through right now, i shall use it as a form of pickme up. Well done.
deborah
i enjoyed your poem very much!
JESLYN
i think that this a very deep and lovely poem i have dreans like that about a boy i like and have a crush on all the time i wish that would happen to me that is all i have to say and keep writing poems they are beautiful
Steven
I enjoyed that poem very much!
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