This Kiss by Martini

T

this poam is just how i will feel when he gives me his first kiss when we meet for the first time.

wallace

touch me dip

kimberly

this is really good

sarah

I Really Like This Poem. it Reminds Me Of The First time i Kissed My Boyfriend. =]

alyssa

I loved it was so good its somehting i wished for! very good great job!

Jose

Nice poema, Love it.

N

Omg! Dah poem is so0 nice or I loved It !x!

wildhorse

gr8 journey through first kiss keep it up

christina

i loved this poem. it made me go back to my first kiss and the emotions i had at the time.

lee

his poem is very touchy 'it makes my heart smile,i just looooooooooooooove it!

Rilinda

I really loved this poem! I said everything that a girl goes through at that momment. I would vote it #1.

amber

i love this poem so much. it brings back memories of the times ive shared a great kiss. WONDERFUL!

Al

Good use of words, I love you poem. Keep it up

tyrell

this poem is sweet i luv i. whoever u r keep writting!

Michelle

i especially loved this poem. even though my "first kiss" was a bad one, i knew what it was like because i actually had a moment like this with the next boyfriend (/ex-boyfriend) and i kinda know how it feels now to b my boyfriend (right now) cuz that was the situation for him. thanks for helping me understand.

shelby

I think this is a very sweet poem

TADZE ADAMU

No one ever painted the picture of the last kiss I received from her,my ever loving one. sometimes, minds around the globe resonate pls write more for me tadze

syidah

I like it

stephany

i really love this poem i think that this is the real deal! i love u ppl

Maria

I Love this Poem!

elizabeth

i luv this poem. it explians how i feel every time me and my boyfriend kiss.

jordan

this is a good poem cause it happen to me good memorys

Brittney

i really like this poem because it makes me think of the way i was with my boyfriend and when we broke up it made me think of all the good times i had with him

Breanna

I loved your poem! That is the feeling I get every time I kiss my boyfriend of 8 months! It really touched me!

Trina

Your poem is so cute and I felt the same with my boyfriend when he kissed me the first time

Karen

Martini, I absolutely love your poem, it explains exactly how I feel about my lover. Thank you.

Tres

I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM !

josephine

God! so real is the poem. It makes me feel like i could fly go luk 4 him wherever he is and kiss!

karyna

i love this poems so much i can read it over and ower and will always touch me deep in to my heart

Kelsay

It really has touched me beacause i can realate to it very much

MAYRA

Exactly how I felt with my boyfriend, awsome poem, makes me go back to that day. :)Mayra

Candygirl

OMG!i love this poem is so awsome this is how u kiss j/k

demond

i want to give this to my girlfriend

Lou

its just like the real thing in such a moving way

T

the poem was verry nice simple but it captured the true meaning

ana

this poems is really sweet keep it up with the nice poems!

ashley

This peom was how i felt when i first got kissed so from one poet to another wonderful job.

Catherine

i liked this poem very sweet

emma

i want my 1st kiss to b like that

caridad

this poem is really great. this reminds me of me and my bboy friend that he hold me on my waste and kiss me. hope to hear 4rm u soon

judy

i write a lot of poetry as do you, that was great! it wass exactly how i felt when i recieved my first kiss.

Me

Amazing

Kasey

This Kiss, I like this poem,very good. and I hope that you always remember it 4-ever

CASSIE

THIS POEM IS THE BEST ONE I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME. FROM ONE POET TO ANOTHER GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP YOU'LL BE FAMOUS ONE DAY.

jen

this is beautiful i can definantly relate

collen

i really like this poem. who ever wrote it it is so awesome.

Danielle

this is the best poem i've ever read. wow. sounds like me and this one guy love it so s soooooooooooo much keep writing!

amy

Realy gooooooooooooooood (*50 pg. )

Cassie

i really liked ur poem i sooooooooooo can rel8.

annisha

yo this poem was fly. i really liked it it was nice. well my first kiss was totally different. but from a 1 to 10, i give this a ten! as leased your first kiss wasen't messed up!

Tiffany

I think this poem is absolutly incredible. i know what you are feeling girl, I've been there too.

kopji

The poem is quite cool and educative. It has really touched some where in me

Amanda

This poem is just like the way my kisses are with my boyfriend. its so heart touching. i love it!

Jazzimen

this poem is a very good way of you expressing your feelings about love with one other.

deandra

i like dis poem because it touch me i rememder my first kiss with someone and i luv it when me an my boyfriend it was off the chain. like it

Diana

aha Now this is a good poem Good job. who ever did it Its really Relly god.

jessica

perfect poem.

Tabby

THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM

Alex

I loved this poem. Alot of people find it hard to describe those special kisses but this poem put that feels into words perfectly.

linda

wow thats how i fell about me and my boyfriend when we kiss

Tohoa

This is a great poem! I love it!

monica

GIRL, u know what i'm talkin about, YEAH.

Monica

I love this poem its a great piece of writting its brings out everything that at one point i wanted to say.

jessica

very touching and very good

Moon John

What a great poem, I love this poem so nice expresion, so nice feeling, so nice moments, i can feel this in my life. I think such as this poem is made for me. I love u Martini so love u. How i tell u tht u are so near with me. Best of Luck near future. Now i say you please write agian about darkness. Where burning candle and you and me agian share our grief.

Feather

"A" all da way

Riddhi

Its an absolutely ausumn poem

rachael

THIS POEM THIS KISS IS SO SWEET

jo

Loved it. I have been with my partner for 4 years and we got married just last sunday and i still feel this way when we kiss. I would give it a 10

Jonh

This poem really touched me because I'v had an experience like this and It brough back good memories.

Laurent

sweet. i love the flow!

luanne

very simple and to the point. very real too! Good poem

princess

loved it!

Megan

I loved this peom and if you have many more please email me! This peom touched me and made me remember all the good memeries I had. I love this peom. I'd buy it from you for and gu-trilloin-millon dollors! Love, Megan Dunn

Ken

Touched me

Lupe

I loved it. After 26 years of marriage, I still feel this way when we kiss. he can still make me flush.

shafone

I really love this poem because while i was reading it i felt like it was happening to me. It was magical.

JACKIE

I THINK THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD. HOW OLD R U HAVE YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH SOMEBODY. I THINK THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD SINCERELY, JACKIE REYES

danielle

This is one of the best poems i've ever seen i love it it reminds me of me and my boyfriend :)

cristal

this was so cool i cant belive you thought of it

danielle

This makes me think of my boyfriend and how i miss him and long for another kiss from him

Brittany

Great poer! :) Trust me I KNOW HOW U FEEL There is nothing like sharing a great kiss with someone u love.

zinnat

simply WOW!;-P

venkatachalam

This is a beautiful expression of real, neat beautiful love

angel

GOOD WAY OF THINKING GIRL

sara

hey this poem is so sweet it shows the true first kiss from the one you love . it doesn't matter how much time you spend with him . its just about the true love , the feeling of passion in your soul that comes deep inside of you . your writting so touching that sounds like you really wrote it from your heart

Jana

that is a really cute poem. I love that feeling.

Monica

I LOVED IT SO MUCH!1

Amanda

very sentecinal

whitney

Great!

Inga

it was a nice poem i hope it came from ur heart i loved it

D

It captures the moment and you can imagine and feel the emotions that go along with this moment.

brittni

OMG that is me and my bf i love him so much and when i read that poem it took me back to the first time me and him kissed.

Chelsea

This poem is a very nice i like it cause it remind of the special guy i like.

DARLENE

I think it was sweet.

jure'

yes i felt love. show by a kiss. im a poetic youngwoman too. and its because of my boyfriend.

Amber

I really like this poem because it shows how I felt when I got a kiss from my boy. I love this poem it's really good and it's really cute. Good Job to the writer!

somikazi

the poem is wonderfull and what i love about is that it so simple and it means a lot i really enjoyed it

kat

this poem really touched me coz it feel like the gurl was really telling us in detail about her getting ready for a kiss and really just appreciating it!

sue

well this is an amzing poem. it touch my lonely soul KEEP WRITING MORE SO I COULD READ!

Juliona

It was an awesome poem, keep it listed. it touched me

oscar

i really liked this poem. i think you have excellent talent for writing and it made me remember my first kiss that seemed to last for eternity

Amanda

That was cute I loved it I feelt the same way when my man kissed me for the first time it was like magic and I will never forget it.

Santosh

This is awesome, really wonderful and an xact feeling of the first kiss of the adored beloved. hats off.

Pio

Really it's very nice. It brings the actual feeling of my first kiss when I read every time.

heather

This kiss poem is sweet

Angel

WOW! That's exactly how I feel.

giggles

I liked this poem cuz it really touched me!

shelly

i liked this poem i think it was very sweet and a good way of expressing a kis!

Zach

I Love dis poem cos it reminds me of kissing

martin

I think this poem is good as it reminds me of a real kiss like the one i had last night

Kayla

I love it

veronica

Its so sweeeeeeeeet.

Altrina

i really like this peom because it really touch me and i congraduate you.

Marlene

I really liked this poem cuz i can really relate to stuff like this your an inspiration!

carime

this poem touched me alot allthough it never happend to me. this is my story i liked this guy he was nice he was cute i guess you can say he was the perfect one he would walk me to 3rd per. untill that one day he told me he was moving he wasnt my boyfriend he was just a friend but till today i cant stop thinking about him.

maribel

this poem is the best poem I read it brings out imotions on alot of people

Andrei

Great one. :

Jamila

I love this poem, it is the prefect scenarion of that special moment in every girls life.

Love

YOUR AWESOME! THIS POEM WAS AWESOME MAJOR TO THE FOURTH POWER. KEEP DOIN WHAT YOU'RE DOIN.

MELANIE

THIS POEMS WAS NICE AND SWEET I LOVED IT CAUSE I READ IT CLEARLY BECAUSE IT WAS EASY TO READ NICE POEM.

camille

you'll gonna love it. keep it up. mwwaahh.

shannondawn

you did a great job. i felt as if that was me

fatima

So romantic,full of sensation.

marissa

i love this poem

amanda

it was very sweet

dustie

i thoudht that this poem was very good. i feel that way alot. i love this one guy and i didn't know how to tell him and it's been 6 years since we have been togather and i still haven't told him just how i feel and this poem says everything i let him read it and he started crying and it was very sweet. thank you. you are a very wonderful writer.

Shevonne

THAT POEM WAS GUD

lauren

this is a very moveing poem xxx

janayah

the poem was so sweet i really enjoyed every word that was in the poem. im really not a poem girl but this one was amazing ,so to end this ,it was GREAT!

kianna

i have felt like this before

Nikki

this is a very sweet poem it reminds me of my boyfriend adam

MARTIKA

IT REMIND ME OF MY FIRST KISS THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM

Cynthia

i really like this poem alot because i been thruu that, and i know how it feels to be in that situation so. that's why i m gonna vote and rate it good :)

brell

good poem

amanda

ive felt that feelin b4 n i related to this poem it was perfect on describin exactly how i felt

shbrea

this is a poem that i can think about when i'am sad

mary

this poem is exactly what it feels like to kiss somebody that has your heart in the palm of their hand. the way it feels to kiss that one person that can make all your problems go away. the person you LOVE!

cilla

this poem was really sweet. i liked it alot, The words were really nice to read and i enjoyed reading this piece

Judith

I LOVE IT,IN SIMPLE WORDS--TERRIFIC,AWESOME. WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT REMAINDED ME OF MY SWEET PIE. ANYWAYS KEEP WRITTING.

brenda

wow, i have never read such a great poem. i wished i could write beautiful stuff like that. it was great.

Kayla

this poem reminds me of my first kiss. keep up the good work. !

melissa

I LIKED THIS BECAUSE ITS SEEMS SO TRUE AND IT MAY HAPPEN TO ONE OF US THAT READ IT WELL IT WAS A REALY NICE POEM AND I REALLY LIKED IT WELL IT WAS NICE WRITING DONT HAVE MUCH TIME SO SEE U LATER

Jacky

Oh my god, when i read this poem i just fell in deep love with it, makes me feel like someone has actually found me feelings toward the gut i love with my entire life THANX 4 THAT*

tegan

love it love it good job just absoulutly love it

traci

i think that this poem is one of the best that i have ever read in my life as 14 years old on a scale of 1-10 1 being the worst and 10 being the best i would give it a 8. Traci

Natalie

OMG I LOVE THIS. this is just how i feel somtimes. lol GREAT JOB!

tiffany

it was good i lyke it vry much

Adrian

That was a beautiful poem.

Elleza

I really really love this poem. It touches me deeply inside. Very nice poem. I love it.

Ally

i really loved this poem. it really sumed up my feelings after my first kiss with my boyfriend. BEAUTIFUL!

Marsatie

I like this poem because its ture when you kiss your boyfriend it makes you feel happy and it feels good with the time rushing by and his hands or you waste. This poem is very true.

tina

im only 14 and i love this poem so much. it expresess ho you feel abou your first kiss, and what was running through your mind. you have inspired me to want to read and write poems now. thank you so much. even though this poem was meant for everyonee, it was a great poem for me. so thankyou!

Lacey

This is an amazing poem and truly the truth about a person's first kiss

Tara

I loved this poem because it sounds like mine and my boyfriends first kiss!

juan

i liked yur poem alot nice job

Chanel

I love that poem very sweet

janet

this poem is really good ! :)

kayla

this poem makes me feel like i'm with the one i like and it feels like a dream cause the one i like ingores me and don't know either.

Grethel

this poem is so nice. i love it!

AMBER

HAPPENS TO ME ALLWAYS

Allie

This poems reminds me on a great kiss I shared with my love. I really think it does send the feeling of teh actual kiss just reading it. it makes it feel like it is happening again.

runaway247

a kiss is almost impossible to put into words, but this poem captured all the wonderful feelings a kiss can give

PAULA

I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MY SWEETBABY TONITE, TO KISS HIS BEAUTIFUL LIPS! I LOVE THIS POEM!THIS IS ONE OF THOSE THINGS THAT MAKE YA! I SURLEY CAN RELATE TO THIS! :) THANKS TO OUR GOD IN HEAVEN THAT WE CAN HAVE THIS GREAT EXPERENCE! LOVE IS THE GREATEST OF ALL THINGS! PAULA

samantha

this is sucjh a deep peom. but i loved it. good job on writting it!

Kat

Love the poem. It makes me think of when I first kissed my boyfriend, a long time ago. Very good poem.

Kiani

THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL. THIS POEM CAN REMIND ANY PERSON OF THEIR FIRST KISS.

ebony

i think this is a honest poem. that's how my first kiss felt like

kelsey

This poem touched me because when i write i can feel it and usually reading others its hard to feel the same that is being shared but, when i read yours it takes me to a place where ive been before familiar. Thanks

Marcia

It's great poem!

Kassie

I Love the poem i could feel the love and the feeling of the girls

Rebecca

That's tha nice poem i ever heard in my life time it is tha sweetest thing

akema

i really love this pome

Alicia

This poem is so sweet n it reminds me of how I feel when I'm with my boyfriend. It also expresses how this girl shows her true feelings for her and how all girls long for that one special kiss that they'll never forget.

kayla

hey omg i love this poem. i guess because it sorta discribes me and my boyfriend! i mean i read it and jus totally thought about me and him the first time he had kissed me!

natasha

this poem is amazing you are a beautiful writer

carmen

I loved your poem :)keep Writting

Lauren

i love this poem, it describes how i felt when i kissed my boyfriend.

emily

this is the best poem i have ever read!

tiara

that is a realy cool love poem

olga

I like this poem cause it really means alot to me cause just yesturday me and my love (mark cruz) kissed and it was such a passionate kiss I will never forget. I love this peom!

Melody

hey you are a great person and your good at it can you please write me one that i oculd ddicate to my boy friend for our 2 month relationship

Marissa

this is a great poem. have you written anymore? if you have i would like to read them.

Jordan

This poem really touched me. The first time i kissed my g/f which was 3 years ago still with her :) Its excellent the author needs to keep writing.

Vallencia

this poem is nice

rebeca

thats just how I felt when I had my first kiss too its awesome

Leah

beautiful

Josphine

I can't tell you how much this poem reminds me of me, the only scary part is i was scared the first time but now i just gets better and better. I love this poem as much as i love my boyfriend. This poem is lovely.

Zamo

this poem was it for me. it raised emotions

Anjum

true sublime feelings

Tuesday

This poem touched me so much when i read it. i really liked the pashion in t and it made me think so much about my boyfriend. Its a really good poem!

Whitney

I really liked the poem and I just wanna encourage you to keep up the good work and you'll go along way in life, because you have an awesome talent.

Amy

I sent this poem to my husband of almost 4 years on an e card. Good Job. Keep up the good work. Don't ever take the gift of words God has given you for granted, use them to glorify Him, his ways, & all of the goodness we can still find in the simple things (a kiss) in this world. From: A greatful reader.

denise

I loved the poem thats exactly how I felt when I had the best kiss from my boyfriend!

Chelsy

I loved your peom! Reminds me of my relationship with my boyfreind.

Barbie

It was sweet and i loved it alot that s how i felt on my first kiss too

shavona

i felt where martini was coming from and once you get that kiss it should feel special just like that.

Star

That is soooooooooo sweet. It makes it sound like it is like floating on a cloud.

Jase

I really did like this. I have been writing poems for a while, and have tried to submit them. But This is better than mine, I give it an 11/10!

erika

Hey, my friends writes real good poems! these poems are really good and i love them keep writing!~ the friendship ones are just like me and vivian I LOVE U !~

heather

this poem touched me in so many ways. this poem is true for a lot of young females. we have all been there.

Geysha

This poem was the sweetest thing once i read this it touched my heart.

Lindsay

This poem was very insperational. I loved it.

Jodie

I thought this poem was really sweet and the word tell me how the poet is realting to her life and that special moment she spent one night with that special peson.

Cutie3000

i really liked dis poem. i could really relate to alot of poems on here but thid one was really good it touched my heart

ashleigh

that poem was lovely send more its great i just love it ! mwah

tay

hey i thought this poem was really really good it reminded me of my kiss with my very special someone

Sheldy

You rock gurl

nicole

i really liked this poem it really touched meeh. i know that we can all relate to this one peom!

misty

BEUTIFUL!

JASMINE

OH MY GOSH I THINK THAT THIS POEM IS THE CUTEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ. READING THIS POEM MADE ME GET SO INTO IT. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED PERSON. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST, WRITE THOSE POEMS USING NOT ONLY YOUR MIND, BUT YOUR HEART TO.

Lauren

I really really loved this poem its like the one I wrote but it was called Kssing in the Rain, its one of the best poems Ive ever wrote!*!*!*

manoj

good poum. i like this

shanice

I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH

Kayla

thanz ur poem really touched me it took me back to when i had my first kiss

JanetMarie

I REALLY LOVED YOUR POEM YES IT REALLY GOT TO ME BECAUSE IT TAKES ALOT OF HEART TO SHOW EVERYONE HOW YOU REALLY FEEL

Stacy

it is realy really good it touches me in away i have never felt befor WELLDONE!

lilmickey

it touched my heart better yet my soul and it's the exact way i felt with my boo mike i luv u boo!

Alissa

I love this poem because it reminds me of when my boyfriend and I had our first kiss!

stevey-lynn

i think that was a good way to look back on that kiss and say omg lol

Kerly

it was really sweet and nice poem!

Dacheline

I really liked that poem. It reminded me of the first time me and my boyfriend kissed. It really touched my heart.

Bland

This is a very nice poem. The author is definately a passionate person. She should keep doing what she does.

Doreen

I read your poem and I found it very emotional. franckly it really touched my heart as I went through it.

sylvester

tha of all poems i've ever come across.

Emily

this was a very touching poem

Mikkyla

I like this poem because i can relate to it and it makes me feel as if i'm in the author's position.

Julia

Dear Martini, thia Peom was so touching. You have a great writing style. I am going to share this peom with my friends. I feel that way when ever i am given a kiss. Nice work. Keep writing Marie

tim

That was an awesome and it touched me. It gets a nine from me. Thanks for writting it!

Leah

Great Poem. This poem touched me because it reminded of me and my 1st kiss with the person I am in love with. Even being together with someone for three years (as I am) I still get those moments.

Angela

I really enjoyed this poem. It reminds me a lot of my first kiss with my boyfriend. I still feel that way when he kisses me. I just want to up and fly away!

agnes

i like it

VICTOR

it touched me deeply in my heart. i never been hit with the kind of words i just read. beautiful!

devvon

this is the best kiss poem 2 me it makes me remember my 1st kiss.

lORI

THIS IS A VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM EVERYONE SHOULD EXPERIENCE THE FEELING IN THIS POEM

Misty

i thought that it was an excellently written poem.

Tabby

this poem was probably one of the best poems. it means a lot for me because it reminded me of the relationship that i want to have with a guy kenji. i love your work!

Shameka

This poem is very nice I do poems my self

Stephanie

IT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM TO ME.

lover gurl

hey i really like this poem because that is the way i feel too when i have kiss my ex boyfriend for 10 months

sara

this really touched me i really thank u for putting it on here

Mandy

This poem was awesome. I'm more into depressing, suicide poems but this is one poem that i really liked.

MARY

YOU DONE A GOOD JOB

Ruby

I FEEL THIS POEM SHOUILD BE AT THE TOP OF THE LIST BECAUSE IT RELATES TO THIS SITUATION I AM HAVING WITH THIS GUY. IT DESCRIBING WHEN ME AND THIS GUY FIRST MET INSTEAD OF THE DOORWAY IT WAS IN THE HALLWAY.

Doggy

nice poem. love it so much keep writn! ur great!

alma

this poem was good it made me think keep it up

Vicky

I relly like your poem.

Tynisa

i really like your poem

Andrea

wow. i love it so much it was way beautiful and i just want to say the way you dicribed it was so eligant and perfect thats how i fell about the love of my life keep up the good work

lavina

this poems is so touching!

Shirley

I really enjoyed this poem and it truly touched my heart.

Sonia

I really loved your poem it made me think about the first time i kissed my boyfriend its like a fairy tale that came to life

Amanda

this poem touched me alot. it reminds me of my 1st kiss with the boy im in love with. thanks kyle for that special moment u gave me.

Javed

I really liked this poem being touched to my thoughts and i will keep in my memory and to send it to my girlfriend.

Ana

GREAT POEM

samantha

This poem really describes when u 1st kiss sum1 !

liz

omg! that is the most romantic thing i have ever heard! i love it! keep on writing girl!

christina

i love this poem reminds me of my bf justin. now im just scared to lose him

jamie

This is a really good poem

Theresa

Hey! I love this poem so much. It reminds me of me and my b/f! Great Job

minerva

i liked this poem alot because it describes how i feel when im with my boy

HSantenay

Your Poem was fantastic, I can actually relate to what you siad.

miranda

i liked this poem so much i think she could get a lot of money for that poem.

Misty

This poem reminded me a lot about my first boyfriend. I remember feeling like I could fly and I still do when he kisses me. We've known each other for 13 years and we are best friends to this day. I know that he is my soul mate and we will always have each other.

Sarah

I really liked this poem because it is like me and my boyfriend.

Jenn

This Is a great Poem! I love it!

Ashley

I can totaly relate to this poem, I'm glad someone wrote about it.

Sherece

This poem reminds me when I first kissed a boy. He was a rally good friend, and my crush. He liked me too, a lot. He told me and 2 days after that we kissed.

TERRY

i love this poem, as it reminds me how i felt the first time i kissed my girlfriend and how i feel every time we kiss.

Latoya

I think this is very vey good. Keep on writting plams like that. You make the reader feels like she is there and the poem is really good.

Hopie

I can really relate to this poem. I think it was great.

susan

I Really Liked your poem.

wilna

this poem describes my first kiss perfectly. I thought i was in heaven

pooh

dat was a goooooood poem

Heather

Your poem was awesome! It really got to me.

Brittany

This reims me of me and my boyfriend when he kiss me there is nothing tha could ever hurt me

lindsay

i thought the poem was a good one. it takes you into there shoes and makes you feel what they are feeling.

brya

This poem reminds me of everytime i kiss my boyfriend. Because i do feel like i want to fly and spend the rest of my life with him.

michelle

it was a good poem i like it it was cool

tabby

this poem tells i felt when i kiss my boyfriend

heather

this is the best poem EVA! it describes exactly wot heppened wiv me a week ago. I had been lookin at sum1 4 ages n i knew he liked me. I was stood in a doorway n he came up 2 me placed his hands aroung my waist n kissed me! It was the best kiss eva n it was definitely worth the wait. I will neva 4get it! Thmx 4 such a gr8 poem! xXx

charmaine

i think it was a really sweet poem and i think thats just how a perfect kiss should be.

torres

this poem is so sweet and i bet that alot of people like it.

Melanie

Hey martini that was a good poem/ It made me feel good even my boyfriend who is right next to me said that it was good. Keep up the good work girl

twila

I really like this poem. I write poems myself. this reminds me of a kiss I once had

amanda

This actually happened to me and it reminds me of it so much. I am still in love with the guy i kissed in the hall. That was forever ago too. I love your poem

brandi

this poems is how i feel when me and my boyfriend kiss!

Amber

hey i loved it! my b/f and i have been going out for 3 months and we have never kissed or said i love you which is fine with me for i think it is very important to build the relastion ship on trust and other things but not how some one kisses but anyways i hope i will feel like that when we finale kiss! thanks

kate

i like the poem. so romantic

Marisol

I really liked this poem it really has meaning & i really felt like that once

Jacquelyn

this poem was awesome!its so true because once you find the right guy and have that passionate kiss you'll never forget it. It's happened to me.

Danish

THAT POEM IS SIMPLY AMAZING!. simply put.

Ashley

I realy loved your pome i think it is realy good

Tabbethie

I really liked your poem it was really sweet. Writing this poem would be a great way to remember the kiss that you and your boyfriend had shared. You need to keep writing poems because you are very good at writing poems.

amanda

i think this is a good poem its sweet

Amber

Martini, This poem was quite good. You described the kiss so well, and as in depth as you could. Great job! For a moment there I could swear I could see it happening in my mind. . . Keep up the good writing!

miracle

You caught the real picture of the feelings we have about a kiss. The poem was all the way every word true. It was a very good poem, keep it up.

erica

i love how it makes u feel what the writer was feeling at the time

Tina

Ive felt this way many times before. It relates to me so well, I like the way you put your past experiences into this poem.

Kari

I love this poem. I feel the exactly way when I'm with my closest guy friend. Thank you for sharing it with me. It touched me deeply. Good luck with other poems.

sandra

I really liked this poem because that's what it really feels like.

billy

I might be a boy but thanks for the poem it was like a tip of what i should do.

Brittany

I enjoyed this poem every much. It reminds me of a kiss that I got from my 1st love. It was a magically moment, and I loved every bit of it!

Sarah

That was a wonderful poem. you have TALENT!

Gabe

grrreat poem! when i read this poem i had to ball up my feet like fists, because that knocked my socks off.

Jenia

I really did like this poem, and it describes how a kiss is, when you are with that special person. or a person that you like. KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!

tanka

i really loved it! I have never been kissed so at least i know what im going to be looking forward 2!

bre

hey i think your poem is so true b/c like the last past friday i was at school me and boyfriend we have been together now for 3 months we never once kissed which it was okay with me then this one day he tills me to meet him in the hall way at 1:00 so i did he pulled me over by the water fountian and kissed me i was so happy it wasn't nothing in this world made me or happier than that! and your poem just makes me fill even happy knowing the same happened to some one else!

4Real

That poem waz too much,way to go!

shell

This is an absolutley wonderful poem. I can really realte to it! It perfectly describes the feeling I get after a passioante kiss! Thanks

W

Awsome poem, makes you remember that speical someone. Tahnk you!

HELEN

Brilliant poem captured the true feelings lingering in her heart at that moment in time very well done I will remember that poem forever exception work

LULU

-Girl- That was a tight poem. thats amost the same thing that happen to me.

angel

i like this poem it's real. and it is so true. everyone at least tries to see love one way but not all. i love my x with all my heart and he loves me with all his.

amber

I know that feeling when you want that kiss to last forever when all that is there is you and him. Good poem!

Jamie

I liked this pom alot after reading this i stoped to think could there really be a thing called love?

Chris

i loved this poem it rings so to true to the way that i feel

Alan

This poem made my heart fell like it was 10 times bigger than it was. The feeling the author had sounds like a wonderful experience.

Nikki

that was a very nice poem i really liked it!

carri

oh how i remember the first kiss. so sweet and wonderful. your poems explains it very well. keep up the good work !

kelly

I love this poem! It expresses something in you that you want to let out, you chose a wonderful way to tell about that amazing,im sure, kiss!

jessy

that poem was so sweet it reminds me of me and my boyfriend when we kiss it gives me a great sensation to know that others know how i feel

Gina

my Favorite!

Angel

This is a very sweet poem

jessie

that poem was so nice i luved it so much. you have the talent to write more i would luv to here more from were ever that come from :)

Shentieghn

Great poem.And you had made everyone remember their 1st kiss.

nikki

i thought this poem was great. it was just right for me and my boyfriend.

kBxxx

darn good

Jinet

This poem was poppin you should make more like this. The stuff that was there were true is like it came from my thoughtS!

Armandee

I think is childishly cute. It reminds me of the beautiful feeling that lingers in our being even after the days have past. Time seems to stay still for an eternity in our minds.

april

this is a really great poem. my boyfriend and i have been together for almost 3 years and one night i read this poem to him and he thought it was so sweet. not even three hours later, we got engaged. so thank you soooo much for your inspuration.

Joanna

I love your poem It really reminds me of my first I love writing poems and one day I want to write one as sweet as yours

Lauren

This Poem is wonderful, it reminds me when I met the love of my life,(who is still my boyfrined for almost 2 years now)

Tonya

Omg! this was the sweetest thing i have ever read in like forever! your words are exactly how it is. the whole world disappears and you get all sweaty and after, you feel like you can fly. this is so true. i love your poem

ashley

hey that was a really nice poem. I never really thought about all the good kisses i have had and the way i felt after.

Nirali

I really felt one with this poem because I know exactly how it feels after a very special kiss and how it feels during the moments leading up to the kiss. I had the same feelings when my boyfriend and I kissed in the movies 2 days after we got together. Thanks for the poem.

dustin

that was a great poem! you are very good!

Amy

I love this poem it is so beautiful. The funny thing is it's the same way I kissed my boyfriend the first time, he's my frst love. Thank you for writing this poem. It's one of the best I've ever read.

jeneen

Greattttttt Poem It says what I feel in my heart. I would like to copy it and give it to my husband.

Felicia

it was a great poem.

Cynthia

this is a great poem! it reminds me of my first..and i hope you do great in your other poems!

Lucy

This poem was absolutely awesome i really liked it, altough i have never been kissed. i'm just waiting for the perfect guy to come my way. :)

pooh

i love this pome and i think you have a relly loveing boyfrind if he made you fill like that

Melanie

very pretty poem, keep up on the writing abilities that you have . you can go far with this

Jackie

After i had finished reading this poem, suddenly my boyfriend's face came flooding into my mind with an over-bearing force. This poem describes how i feel everytime that i kiss him. It reminds me of our first official "kiss"!

Mirella

That poem war REALY,REALY good remindes me of my first kiss

lakesia

It was great poem. I could never have guts enough to put my poetry online. I'm too scared someone will take it and put there name to it. Keep up the good work. You have a true gift!

Zela

I have read a lot of poem but this one is so different from the one I read. I like this poem.

shalini

this poem is simply wonderful ! i very much liked it.

Kendal

I LOVE THIS !

Ashok

Hey, that was a good one. I was really touched. It brought my mmories back. Do write more poems like this.

Natasha

This was a breath taking poem, you could almost feel as though you were acting out the lines! Thank you for such poetry

Nica

It was a very CUTE poem/story, and was well put together!

CASSANDRA

THIS POEM IS SO GOOD U HAVE A NICE GIFT. KEEP IT UP

Bill

This is exactly how it feels!

Ashley

I really loved your poem. I want to be a poet and you've just gave me all the hope in the world!

Nane

Hi Martini, I felt wonderful after finding your poem it described exactly what I had in my heart but didn't have the words to say it.Last night I had a wonderful and memorable experience;Guess what? It made me feel alive,gratified,it made me remember.I had to thank this person in some form and express how I felt and what better way could I find to achieve what I wanted it than to send him your poem. Thank you kindly and stay in sync. YOU ARE TRES TALENTED!

sally

thank you for sharing your poem.. my lover just moved away and i was searching for a poem to capture some of the emotions i'm feeling.. you poem describes this morning when we said good-bye.. thank you for reminding me of how sweet it was.

paula

i really loved your pomes

Heather

This poem was really good!

Sherry

I really like that poem

majid

Hi, how are you martini ? I saw your poetry & like it so much. I think you have very romantic life, so me. i was look for some love poetry for my love (I want to display all my love sense againts to her & I think she will know now how much I love her by your poetry.

deborah

That is the best poem i have read on this site it realy moved me it inspired me to get up and go kiss me loving husband

keisha

o this poem is great it reminded me bout my boyfriend & i, we shared a moment in time exactly like that, gurl it was a wonderful wonderful poem, & i loved it

Angel

It reminded me of my first kiss with my boyfriend..

Shannon

This poem rocks the universe!

Peg

I love this poem! I know exactly how it feels! Well done i love it sooooo much!

darkchild673

i think that this poem is really good because i remember when i had my very first kiss when i was in 6th grade and it will be something i will never forget.

Christine

One of the best poems I have ever read! Excellent Job!

Migit

This was such a nice poem. It was very touching as if I was there watching them kiss.

scifer

I really love your poem. You put a lot meaning into your poems.

iferendon

Ugly, highschool poetry.

Lina

I like this poem alot. It is something that everyone can realate to!!

nikki

Very nice. i can relate to this poem. Keep up the good ora. one.

amber

WOW!!! From poet to poet I love that poem. It captures everything just right. Thanks

Susan

How beautiful. I felt like i had just been kissed...that special way. Your words melt...and become feelings.

LISA

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM IT WAS REALLY GOOD I WISH I COULD RIGHT LIK THAT.

Elisa

This really touched me & reminded me of when my fiance and I first met. Thank you for the wonderful poem.

Amanda

Hey, Your poem was great.And it expressed alot of emotions....

Pamela

I was quite moved bye the poem since it brought back a mamory of one man that I so desperaltey wanted to kiss me

Annie

hey this is a good poem good luck with ur others one i hope u would rite more poems bye best of luck

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Sylvia

I really like this poem it was so sweet Iam for real

gloria

i can relate to this poem to my ex boyfriend kiss and i still remember it its like it was yesterday

Mudduck

This poem is fabulous. This is how I feel everytime I leave my boyfriends house.

Raquel

I love it, is just fantastic work

Nicole

I loved it I thought it was cute!

tes

thas a real cute poem. i like it!

jordan

This Poem Is Perfect To E-mail To My Gal, Thanx Martini

Ken

When your trying to think of what to say this poem does it for you.

Kenika

Aww it reminded me of my fisrt kiss. It was a wonderful poem

Martina

this is a lovely poem it reminds me of myself.

alex

This poem is the bomb!! She was really into that kiss. That was probably a damn good kiss.

Shawnna

This poem says it all. I had the same experince and could never find the right words to express how I felt about it, this pooem says it all.

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