Could You Be The One For Me? by LoveBug

Annlizmarie

This poem is great. It reminds me of my father, its kind of hard to talk about him but he was never there for me but he calls and says "I love You" and then he stops calling and it hurts me. So when I had my first boyfriend I thought he was going to hurt me so I tried to hurt him first before he hurt me and that when I known that he wasn't trying to hurt me but love meand slowly me heart opened and everything. So when I read this poem it hit me, in a good way.

Socorro

Your poem is just wonderful. I identified with it so much. The feeling that is put into it was great. The hardest thing is giving someone another chance. Your poem explains that.

DAISY

Wow! It's incredible, I cant beleive that the author of this poem expressed my feelings and emotions as if they were reading my mind. This poem was really beautiful written.

Oluwole

My heart was so familiar with this kind of poem as it remind of my former girl friend. It really touch ones souls and very simple to understand. simple diction. Thanks.

Hopey

This poem was hot and you had to really go through somethng like this to understand it. . Its DEEP

alexis

i love this poem cause ive had my heart broken so many times before and is inspiring to me.

AMELIA

THIS WAS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM IT GOT TO ME CAUSE I KNOW HW IT IS TO HAVE A BROKEN HEART AND NO TRUST

Andrea

I thought this was a very uplifting poem. It touched my heart as I am feeling the exact same ways and because of the same reasons. Thank you for the encouragement :)

Shae

i love this poem because i could very much relate to it. i was in an abusive relationship back in high shool during freshman-sophmore year and the guy i dated hit me a lot and yelled at me almost everyday. so when i finally got out of it i didn't date for like 2 years i'm 19 now and i have a new man and i couldn't be happier so i really love this poem, one of my favorites.

chainney

I love your poem because I've been hurt many times too,and I'm tired of being broken hearted. I also sent it to my son's dad.

caitlyn

this poem relates to me cause i just got out of a bad relationship we went out for 6 months and he left me cause his friend told him i wanted to do something with him whenever hes the one that grabbed me, and it hurts knwing that he believed him over me but now i have this gut i just met about 2 weeks ago and he told me i was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen and that he would love to treat me good and this poem just reminded me of how he has been trying to keep my ex off my mind. thanks oo much for this poem.

Lisa

wow! this exactly describes my current situation. well written

LOUVAN

THiS iS A B3AUTiFUL PO3M. iT iS WAT i M GOiN THROUGH RiGHT NOW.

gieselle

oh my god i loved this poem it really touched my heart. i was going through the same thing and i could really relate. thanks for writing this poem. keep up the good wprk

lady in the rain

Thanks a lot for this lovely poem . i really loved it. expressions and the the kind words were so close to the heart.

Kelsey

i love this poem because it is so true! Treaz broke my heart and Deondre helped me get through it. Thank you Deondre, I will always love you for that! :)

melissa

i think this poem is verry beautyfull. and full of feelings. i can totally relate to it

Jahquisha'

i can really relate to this poem just a few months ago i was asking myself the same question.

drea

great

CINDY

AMAZING,SO TRUE AND HONEST IF YOU HAD A BROKEN HEART. THANK YOU

yani

this poem speaks to me.

LATESHA

I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE THIS POEM IS EXACTLY THE WAY I FEEL CUZ IV BEEN HURT TO MANY TIMES BEFORE . AND I THIS POEM IS JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO GET THROUGH THE DAY. AND LET THIS GREAT GUY INTO MY LIFE ,CUZ HE TOLD ME AND HE HAS SHOWED ME HOW MUCH HE LOVES ME NOW I CAN LET HIM IN MY LIFE .

asheley

I really like this peom because it really reminds me of my life situations in sooo. many ways!

cassie

hey. i can relate to this poem. on a scale of one to ten. i give you a 9. 99999999999! LOL.

Brianne

I love this poem! It is truly how I feel! I have to give it 5 stars. it's soo true! Two thumbs up!

LaDonna

This poem touched my heart very, very closely. see I have been talking to this guy on the internet for about 3 months now and he is the sweetest person. I am married and he knows. I have talked to him about my problems with my husband and he listens. He is so kind and caring and considerate. He cares about my feelings. And this poem has made me stop and think is he the one for me?? If so how Will I know?? Someone please help me. Thanx for this poem.

Melinda

I love this poem so much, it touched me deeply

DALE

BEAUTIFUL POEM. THEY SAY WHEN YOU HEAR A SONG THAT TOUCHES YOU ,ITS BECAUSE THE PERSON WHO WROTE IT HAS FELT WHAT YOU HAVE FELT. WELL THIS POEM HAS TREAD WHERE I ONCE WALKED. GOD HAS NOW GIVEN ME A GREAT MARRIAGE AND A WONDERFUL NEW LIFE. THANK YOU

Jessica

i found this poem at the perfect time. my last b/f cheated on me and now i have found a man who makes me feel like i'v never felt or thought i could feel after last summer. i wanted to tell my current boyfriend how i felt and that yes there is a scare left from the past but that with his help, he can make it go away. so i sent him this poem and he loved it. i wish i could say that i wrote it but that would simply not do. so thank you for writing this poem. it means a lot to me and now to my boyfriend. because i didnt have the right words. but i found them through you. thank you

Nina Nazliana

this poem touched me as it reminded me about love. In which love is not an easy game but a painful game. I myself can relate into tiz poem. How i really love and devoted to someone, but i was taken granted for. And wen sumone else enters ma life, i just don't trust da guy anymore. It's life maybe??

Mary

I'd love to vote for this poem becoz it's beautiful,it has touched my heart becoz I think he/she's talking about me.

britt

i loved this poem

tracy

this poems say it all wen you have a broken heart and find someone new

makhena

this ppoem relates to me so much beacause i like this boy named Zachary and i'm not sure if he could be the one

Kathleen

I really like this poem bec its how I feel aswell

baby

wow!i loved the poem. because it just wat i feel right now abt my boyfriend

tiarra

I love this poel since the first time I saw it which was a while ago. It relates to me in which a way you couldn't even imagine. I have this poem on my myspace and my other pages to show people the way I feel. I just want to say thanks a lot for this poem because if I didn't have something that related to me in such a wayi probably would have been lost

Anna

I also can relate to this peom i was in a relationship for 2 years ive been single for about 4 months now and have a guy in my life that wants to bee with me but scared because i dont wanna get hurt again. but this poem is awesome.

Nikki

I voted for this poem because of the poet's ability to touch upon a real-life situation so accurately in a poem. This poem expresses exactly how I feel at this very moment in a way I could have never put together. Wonderful job Lovebug! And many thanks.

Kat

I loved this, so sweet and simple, straight to the point. It just flows along!

Swarna

Best poem I have ever read. Its so true and touching.

Donna

this poem says everything about me and all the heartbreak that i have been through. i have read many poems, but none have touched me in the way that this one had. i never thought that any words could ever be written to explain my torn, broken heart. this poem has brought tears, for it is so close to the real me.

Stephanie

I read this poem and omg, it's Wonderful! I had to send it to my friend to let them see how good it was. You are Awesome! Thank You, Stephanie

shanae

I love this poem i also can relate to this.

crystal

i luv this poem. this poems is my favorite luv poem ever! it reminds me of kenny! i luv u kenny

mommy

yo dis poem tell alot wat im gon throught right now dis dum boi he broke my heart and my first love came back to me and pick it up for me just keep writying those poems you are doin a really goooooood job.

ijeoma

i love this poem. it has touch a place in my heart,where i though no one will never touch. the words are gentle and soft that it made me cry,it also remind me of my past. but it also told me that i can love again. thank ijeoma

Candygirl

Tollay love this tollay of wat i feel

Keilee

OMG this poem is ahhhh-mazing. I wish I were a poet, well I do some mysef but this is kewl

natasha

this poem i love it is like you read my mind and my feelings i love this poem and it explains exactly how i feel butno one understands that but i guess your poem does

sara

i think everyone goes through a heart break before they find the right person so this poem could pretty much express what anyone has and does feel. i love it.

Dionna

I really do like this peom cause it is exactly how i feel right now at this time and it is very real and i know alot of people can relate to this

Mandy

omg. i absolutly loved it. it was one of the best poems ive ever read.

bea

i liked this poem alot it reminds me of the past and the present but hopefully not the future :)

patsy

this poem touched me because this is what is happening to me right now!

gemma

this poem brought a tear to my eye! its somthing that i can relate to, brilliant!

jessica

this poem is G-R-E-A-T!

JESS

this poem has touched me so deeply i cant explain. i feel as though i wrote it myself its so true to my life. you are such a gifted writer. its amazing that there is someone out there that is going through the same as i am

monica

When i read this poem, it almost made me cry. It is SO beautiful. That is So sweet.

Cassie

i love the poem its really good

Donnie

i love dat poem

angie

This is awesome, I feel ya, in the same position.

brittany

this poem rocksssss

arlene

i like the poem very much

jadine

i love da poem cause i like this boy and am about to send it to him

gerald

This is a great poem. It has such passion in tit as if the writter wrote it after encountering a new love. ?

rosario

I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SOO NICWE AND SOOO TRUE ITS HAPPENDED TO SO MANY PEOPLE AND THATS WHY I THINK PEOPLE LIKE IT SOO MUCH ITS EVEN HAPPENDED TO ME AND IM STILL WONDERIN IF THIS HE WILL KEEP WAT HE ONCED SAID

Brittany

I loved it!

Liz

It touched me. and it's something i can relate.

Maty

This was such a beautiful poem. It touched me so much that it brought tears to my eyes.

maria

that is a veary nice poeam . it brings back oldmemorys.

Diana

truly touching- as so many can understand.

SOFIA

WOW OMG THIS IS SOO TRUE WELL IM INLOVE WITH SOMEONE AND NOT SURE IF HES THE ONE FOR ME CUZ I LIKED THIS OTHER GUY TOO WELL I REALLY NEED ANSWERS BUT I GUESS I COULD FIND IT OUT LOVE IS VERY HARD AND OME I LOVE YOUR POEM ;]

carley

this is a great poem it remands me of my bf

Katia

This poem is absolutely heart touching. What this woman must have gone through. I feel for her because this poem expresses all of her true emotions . keep on going bbe you cn be loved x

Lemon

An excellent poem. very realistic and touching! Cheers!

Jasmine

that was so good that touched mt heart i swear that was a very googd poem lovebug

faith

it describes what i feel totally and completely. i'ts awesome.

victoria

This poem is awesome. It really touches me in the heart. Great Job.

brianna

omg i absolutly love this poem great job . !

audi

salam. i'm a poet at heart. a hopeless romantic. your poem has touched me in a hundred different ways.

Tasha

I really like this poem it was really nice and it touch my heart and i just gave it to my boyfriend who like it and ask me if i was the one because he is the one for me and I said yeah.

vanica

i could trully relate to this poeem, i felt like i wrote it myself.

Brandy

Your poem touched my heart as if it were my words, it brought tears to my eyes and hope to my heart that one day I will meet someone to mend my broken heart

gelli

its a touching poem.

Julia

This poem was great it was everything I wanted just written by the author

pamela

i loved your poem it reminded it of what i wennt threw

BabyDee

I totally understand where you feelings came from for this poem, I went throught the same thing. Great Job

emily

i totally relate to this this is exactly wats happening to me right now i loved the poem

Once

This poem touched me and explained that feelings I haven't been able to explain in the past 2 years. Now I think my heart can handle one more love, I just want to be hurt again.

sendy

wow. this poem was awsome. i love it. it relates to me and my life. it was great. and its so true. good job. i like it alo! : )

Marcela

i like it alot because i could relate it to me because i dedicated this poem to my boyfriend cause i was still in love with my ex. From Marcela

michelle

i really like this poem. And the reason why is cuz its happaning to my best friend right noww

Treena

Very beautiful and intriguing poem!

Lauren

This poem is so beautiful and it just makes it so clear how hard it is to heal from a broken heart and be able to love nother, especially when that other person deserves every bit of your love.

Michelle

Nice poem i really liked it. its sorta how i feel i cant get over my lost love but yet i want to move on and let someone else love me but he'll always be there in my mind things he done how he done it. it will always be there.

Flame

I feel the same way. This poem explains so many of my feelings toward this girl I just got with. Before her I was very hurt overa major fight I got into and I wasnt really looking for a girl, but this poem shows me that I also have to keep my heart open and the right person will come. Whatever you do, never stop writing.

JAZMIN

this is soooo cute. this reminds me of my ex with the broken heart and my new boyf. i love who ever made this

arti

its very touching

jody

this poem was realy touching. it reminds me of what i use to ask myself. you the person who wrote this keepon writting your doing great! take care and dont let astupid boy ruin every thing for you keep your head up!

Tonnisha

Lovebug, I really can connect with your feeling through your poetry. You expressed how much love hurts and how hard it is to love again. I really like this poem and will look foward to reading more:)

Meron

i love it very much

shardae

i thought this poem was very good

Glyn

A great poem, mirrors a happening in my life, very touching

laura

this poem was touching and seems very personal to the author it touched me deeply from past experiences

Beaonca

It's great

Shay

I really like this poem i've recently found someone who is helping me out i lov this poem.

Dana

This poem is deep. Its simply stated and gets right to the point. It is awesome and spoke things I have only felt like saying to my new man.

somer

perfect! i have been searching 4 an hour and your poem is exactly what im looking for

Beaonca

Well I loved this poem Because not only have I been in this same situation i'm still dealing with it and now i feel he's not the one for me i'm going to move on and find the one for me i think this the best poem i done heard and no disrespect to any other poet writter but this was the best of all to me key word to me keep up the good work and continue to write like that

john

I love the poem because it has happed to me befor and i have not come out of it. so I know how you feel.

Shauntell

This poem really hit home when I read it. I recently wrote one simiilar to it. I really enjoyed it.

Namhla

I love your poem so much

Gian

NICE POEM I WISH I HAD FOUND HIM BUT HAVEN'T SO YUP.

Baby

Ur poem was very moving it really got to me. I know where u r comming from. i've been there, it's nice to know someone else is out there putting there feelings into poems. thank-u. keep up the great work.

KARINA

THAT WAS AMAZING IT BRUNG A TEAR TO MY EYE THANK YOU I NEEDED THAT

gilbert

it really touch my heart and soul. it ia so awsome to everybody that finds love and wanted to be loved by someone its so wonderful to fall in love with this love poem

Alisha

This poem is amazing keep up the good work!

janelle

i love it, sounds like someone i know. Shes a beautiful girl and i hope she knows that ill always love her

yvonne

This poems is so kool it reminds me of my true loves and i will find me somedy it's hope

christy

That was great. I Know how you feel trust me. It is the worst feeling ever. but the thing is, I am still trying to get over mine

Jackie

This poem really touched me due to that I went though this. Hopefully, I can me someone that who be the one.

tamara

This hit so close to my heart! Sometimes you think you are the only one feeling this way, and then this poem comes along. thank you!

alexa

i can really relate 2 this poem & itz EXACTLY wat im goin through RIGHT now! :)

Love

HEY LOVEBUG! THIS IS A GREAT POEM! I KNOW HOW IT IS TO BE HURT SO MANY TIMES AND HOPING THE NEXT GUY IS ONE WHO WILL PUT YOU BACK TO PIECES! THE NEXT GUY WILL BE THE ONE WHO REALLY LOVES YOU! GREAT! KEEP ON DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING!

Laura

I love this poem! When I read it, I thought of my new man, and my xhusband who never said, i was beautiful. I cried, words that i always felt and could never say as beautiful as you did.

brittany

this poems was GREAT! It fits me perfact becaues this is how I feel and I really hope he is the one for me and he has open my heart that olny he and him olny can touch he makes me laugh like nobody eles can touch he is my life. and I feel perfact when I am with him and like nothing can bad happen b/c I just have this comfart of feeling that nothing can bad happen. and most all my relatshionship have been rough and hard and heart breaking. and he as show me to love agean. and this poems fits me perfact.

lori

wow! that was off the hook. you have no idea how much this poem hit home. good lookin out

Andrea

Scale from 1 to 10 this poem is a 25. I love this poem. It really set just how I have been feeeling the last couple of months. Thank U. U r a great poet.

yadira

this poem is a beutifull one is real and pure

rae

i really feel the exact same way

stephanie

I loved it! it inspired me.

Tatiana

I LOVED YO POEM

Vanessa

The poem realy touched me! I can relate to it.

dallana

this poem touched me a lot because it's telling my story "I LOVE IT"

tyse

this poem reminds me of me

Stephanie

wow what a meaningful poem i love it. its seems like its me and my man but not exactly. well i love it. keep up the good work lovebug.

taratina

this poem is the best . i really think that a lot of people will enjoy this poem.

Derrrick

I really like your poem it was nice

Jessi

I really liked this poem alot. It it's like exatlly what I would want to say if I wrote a poem.

Tracey

Excellent Poem! My boyfriend fits this perfect. Thankyou

sharica

I love the peoms it was very nice i like the way you express your feelings at the last part of the peoms i hope you win and have a nice day.

TiTa

Two thumbs up for you. i'm so touching and i never read the most awsome poetry like you've made. Keep up the good work

L'ia

I loved it, its the cutest poem. I write songs and it inspired me

kayla

this was a great poem it fits me very well and what i am going through right now.

Dori

those were verytoching words LoveBug. Did you really go through something like that?. if you did im happy i havent. well over all that was really good!

jessica

i really like this poem. it pertains to me in a way

MARY

IT'S A GREAT POEM!1

ashley

This poem totally hit home with me. Im in a new relationship and am trying to open up to someone new after a long and meaningful relationship with someone I loved and thought I would be with forever broke my heart and still lingers. This definitely opens my eyes to the fact that another can have the same effect on my heart if given the chance.

melissa

I loved it this is how Im feeling about someone right now thank u 4 puting it into words for me

amber

this poem really touched meh. it makes meh think about how much i miss mai one and only. it really is good.

virginia

THAT WAS A GREAT POEM BUT SAD NOW YOU KNOW ABOUT LOVE.

Tonya

I really liked this poem i thought it was really sweet and it makes alot of sence it kinda relates to me a little bit. Nice Work I give you a 10 Tonya

melissa

this is one awesome poem! it ryhmes, has great meaning to it and has a pleasant ending! XD nice work

angel

This poem reminds me of what i've been dealing with the past couple of months. I feel this poem could be a GOOD test for a lot of Guys being involved with women in new relationships. HMMM. COULD YOU BE THE ONE FOR ME

Reyna

This is a very nice poem! This is for everyone that has had their heart broken and wonders if they will ever find love again.

Amber

this poem is the way many people feel and you put it in a way that is perfect. your beautiful and keep on writing.

latarria

That was a touching poem. I know where you are coming from,basicly I can relate. It touched me while reding it.

sarah

i really liked this poem because it describes what i am going through. thank you for speaking what others say but never wright.

Katie

I love the poem that you wrote it is wonderful. tHANK YOU LOTS

baby

This poem really touched my heart. I had tears after reading this. I've given this poem to my new luv. And his answer was yes I will be the one. And he held me like he didn't want to let go. Thank you so much for sharing this poem I will treasure it always.

melody

awesome poem

Jasmine

That poem was very touching.

kanika

its so cool good romantic loving and caring

alysia

i really like this poem because i also have been in the same situation

Adam

it was just wonderfull

Josh

TOTALLY AWESOME--by the way, i hope he was the one for you!

Josh

something about this poem just reached out and grabbed me. From that point on i knew i would never forget it, though i only read it once.

Mz.

i lIke ThIS pOEm bEcausE it just Feels like this poetous hit the hammer right on the nail of the same sit-ce-a-tion( lol situation) that i was going through. your poem is really good

aarifah

i fell in love with this poem the moment i read it. it is a poem with special significance to me, and i think it serves as a lesson in the reality of life, and more so, the reality of LOVE!

Ben

what a wonderful Poem. it makes me melt reading it because I have the same feeling now.

Lissette

This poem was very inspiring. I just started a new relationship and I'm so scared of getting hurt again. It's starting to be a problem because of my negitve thoughts!

April

this poem is beautiful, i am happy for you that you have found someone, good luck, your poem is touching and gives me hope, being as i just lost a love also, but not yet found another.

shanof

wow n wow. amazing . its beautifull and wonderfull,,, i am also a heartbroken guy . so i love reading poems like these. but this was a new ride through. i am also waiting for someone to fill the pieces of my broken heart,, any way who ever had written this,she is great, hope u succeed all the difficult roads u went through and going through. may only happiness come into ur life. and wish ur tears fade only for happiness and joy. wherever u are and whoever u r i wont forget u take care. one&only speedy

Minilda

Wow. wonderful poem. I can really relate, i felt like i was the author of this poem. anyway more power to you and keep up making poems that can touch the lives of many people.

Julia

i just sent ur poem to my b/f my ex boyfriend broke my heart and the boy i am with now helped me forget about my ex i love the person i am with now and i know i found the wright person thank u for wrighting this poem i like it alot and i am sure my b/f will like it too

Vanessa

I had found it hard to put into words exactly what I had been feeling until I read your poem.

vesper

i rily love nd i enjoy reading this poems. i hope i can make my own coz i rily enjoy reading poems

TiA

OMG uR pOeM iZ aWsUm AzZ,I LuV iT!It rEaLi ReMiNdS mE oF mE rYt NoW cOz i JuSt BrOkE uP wIf Da OnE i LuV n I cAnT sTaNd BeInG aPaRt FrOm HiM bUt I dUnT fInK aNy OtHa GuY cAn TaKe HiS pLaCe Or MaKe Me FoRgEt HoW hEaRt bRoKeN i Am!

Ricardo

I loved, beatiful poem. I felt your emotion in your writing.

Jessica

I believe poetry holds deeper meaning then words, it might not be true, but it might not be a lie. It happened to someone somwhere, and you can put the feelings they felt on paper, and make others see just what position they are in. How they ache yet are vulnerable at the same time, this poem is beautiful and touches upon each thing those with hearts broken from this reason fell,

Kristina

Great. Touching captures the true feeliing.

Amanda

OMG! This poem sayes everything that happened to me and i am still with the one who wanted to mend my heart after 5 months it feels like eternity. You did a great job on this poem. Dont stop writing.

feyde

hey wuz up gurl me non much well anywayz i love ur poem keep writting and someday u'll be a pro writter ur a great writer peace out

zeinab

hi my name is zeinab I love your poem alot and you know something that people gets heart broken alot and it is hard to forget that person it is not easy. zeinab

Demz

this poem is grate i love it and i've sent it to my boyfriend as i have had many broken hearts in the past and i dont want it to happen again so grate job writing this poem x. x. x. x. x. x. x

Khryz

its dashingly touching. i can relate to every word of it. thanks

erika

this poem touch me because i have been threw something bad. but now i found someone that i think can help me love again.

jessica

This is a very good poem. I love the way you express yourself, and this poem intensifies your feelings.

lisa

i think this pome is really good it sounds like it came from th heart

Pat

Was this written for me? Having gone through a really bad time in my last relationship, I've just met someone who I think could be the one.

BELEN

i realy liked it my ex just got 9 yrs. and i feel everything in this poem, i'm afraid to open again after 2 hurt relationships i'm scard to do it agian but know i can keep this poem in the back of my mind for next person that comes along

babygirl

Wow is the first thing I thought when I read ur poem. I'm going thru the same thing at this moment. Its hard and scarey. Great job and I mean GREAT JOB!

daisy

ohh, i love tat poem it so reminds me of my ex breakin my heart and nonw were beack he really changed after 3 months

Courtney

This poem makes me feel the same way I feel about my new boyfriend. He says he loves me but I heard it so much that I don't know what's real and not. I love him so much but can he be the same as the rest of them or is he really my true love?

nikki

when you read this poem you can connect with the person eho wrote it expecissaly if you had to endure the same thing

julianne

this is a great [poem and i loved it because i can relate to it

elena

This poem is so-------o sweet and it reminds me of my life.

Peaches & Cream

I am going through a divorce and this poem fits my life to the T and you have a wonderful talent I am now seeing a man and that is what he is having to do piece me back together again. I love this poem. #1 Job

Leah

the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. It made me tear up a little.

jade

i really relate to this poem very nice :)

Christina

I think a lot if not everyone has felt like this beore and this poem really words what one feels when meeting someone else after a heartbreak. I like it

Jessica

That was an awesome pome! I have felt that way so many times before and that pome just tuched my heart and chilled me to my bones. It made me realize that I am not alone in this love battle that there are others out there just like me. Jessica

NANCY

BOMB

Denecia

I love it

Amal

i loved your poem so nice,it almost made me cry,Because i remember the same thing happened to me

shelly

WOW!

jeanette

i love this poem because i just got out od a serious relationship and he broke my heart and i like this boy i liked him sience th 5th grade and now that were in high school i finaly told him and he said he liked me and now we are going out so i think this poem was great.

Brittany (708)

this poem really got to me and you need to keep writing. I felt this way many times before but just remember thatlove comes and goes and your heart breaks but their is always someeone there to replace

syra

this is a fantastic poem and it has touched me beacause i have been in the same position as you and i have felt the same way u did. it has been two years and i have just got into another relationship but the fear of getting hurt still haunts me but i have to realise that not all people are the same and i cannot catorgarize all people in the samw caterogory. keep up the good work, your brilliant. best wishes from syra take care

Jessica

I loved it, great job.

Destini

i love this poem cause it tells how i feel bout what this one guy did to me. now i found someone who cares bout me and he is tryin to help me forget bout that one person who has hurt me. it just descrbes how i feel and what im goin through and how this one guy is helpin get threw everything.

miriam

the peom is really good it relates to many girls and for me it is very true i wish i could write somethnig like that your peom inspired me and let me love again

Lenkiya

I thought this poem was excelleent. it has alot of character and precise wording. Good job writer.

CORINE

This poem relly touched me because that is exactly what i went through with this one guy and now this other guy has teached me to love again. It is really eouching.

TERI

THIS POEM IS GREAT IT COMPLETELY EXPLAINS EXACTLY WHAT I AM GOING THRU

Kaprice

This poem inspires me. I personaly love this poem because my boyfriend sent it to me and told me he thought of me when he read it. Now everytime i read this poem I will think of him. That is a beautiful poem Buglove.

Nicola

This poem means so much to me, and it really does touch my heart making me remember the one guy who i loved so much, and he broke my heart! I am now going out with another guy who i love very much, and i pray (like in the poem) he is the true one for me, because i don't want to lose this happiness i now have. Thank you to the person who wrote this, helping me see that i can truly love and be loved yet again!

Lindsay

I really liked this poem! IT'S THE TRUTH!

marisa

i think every one in there life has walked down that path of loves sorrow. but, as for me i found a new love hoping to never walk down that path again great job!

Jennifer

i loved this poem, it spoke to me, i'm just learning to love again too. thank you!

Hurt and Forgotten

This poem told my story of my ex of 10 months. I was afraid to open up to anyone new. I lost another guy because of me closing up my heart and not wanting to open again. Now I'm hopin that this next Special Someone I can open up to and trust that if they hurt me that they will treat me better and love me as much as they can. I felt like my story was coming out through your words.

ashleigh

it was lovely it reminded how someone broke my hart everyday and he hert my hart everyday anyway it was a butifull poem and i hope it goes well with you and your bofriend best wishes ahleigh xxxx

marisol

it is very good and i wrote it down on a piece of paper and gave it to my love

Amy

this poem really helped me explain alot of things i couldn't put into words myself.

clarissa

you've got talent, my friend! i wish I were half a good a writer as you. you truly capture the emotion that you intended and not many poets do that! fine work!

carla

i was really touched because i am this person in your poem and i did meet someone else and it was exactly how i felt.

Mohammed

i thought your poem was real great

Sean

Well written poem, organised, and full of emotion. Definitely deserves a vote.

Cali

I really liked this poem. It describes exactly what I am going through right now. It really touched me. Excellent poem!

tamara

this poem was awsome and helps me realize what i am goig through in mroe word s than i could it hit home!keep up the great work!

Minie

wow!amazing. this poem really describes what i feel right now. i was just about to open my heart w/ someone but still afraid to be brokenhearted again. more power and hope you could do more poems that would touch peoples heart like me.

Fairy

this poem touched me because it what happened to me

jessica

I am in the middle of seperating with my husband. this poem hit me hard as i think i have found my soulmate. he has scars also and we both relate so well to it. these words were so perfectly put together to make a perfect poem of picking up the pieces. job well done!

charlene

nice poem can relant to it thxs for it

Heidi

Wow. This poem has to be true for so very many people. I know for me at this very time in life, It is. applause to the author

Crystal

This poem reminds me of me. I am very touched by this poem and i am very amazed at the quality of this poem. Thankyou for sharing your talent with the world^_^

Alissa

I love this poem its very passionate and true!

vickie

Very real. honest. We have all suffered a broken heart and must brace ourselves for new love. This poem captures what we all feel, but hardly ever say.

Hubert

I am going trough a similar phase,and this poeme sure me that I am not alone, other suffer the same way. it did make me cry.

Lyndsie

i liked this poem b/c it relates to me and what happened with me. I dated this guy named wayne for a year and 5 months. I went to the beach during the summer and came back and my boyfriend was in jail! He has been in there for 5 months so i finally called it off with him b/c i was tired of waiting on him. Then one of my friends hooked me up with this guy named cory that she knows. I really like him a lot and he treats me better than wayne ever did. Cory takes me out every weekend and wayne never did that. Its not the fact that he takes me out, it's just that he is really sweet and i trust him more than i ever did wayne. Me and cory have only been dating for a month and i trust him more! it's weird! But i liked this poem b/c it relates to what i have been through.

Amy

I liked this poem cause it fits me well.

shaune

I loved this poem because it is so real! It really makes you feel the pain.

Deja

This is a very very good poem. Today I was thinking the same thing. There is a new person that has came in my life after 8 months of a breakup- Even though there has been few in between, but I feel this is the one for me. And I want to commend the author of this poem. The poem get 5 stars with me.

Brandi

The poem really touched my heart, because those are the words that I couldn't find after I was involved in a horrible relationship. Thank you for speaking for me.

jennifer

this poem has touched me alot i just lost a guy i liked alot and he played me so now another has come in and wants to feel my heart and i hope that he doesnt break it either. !

Kathy

That was amazing! i went out with this guy for five years and he was a controling butt. i couldn't smile and I had to hold my head down in the halls, I couldn't even talk to my best friends. Well after five years I broke up with him and for a while it was hard to get over it I had to get my friends back and in the process I met a very sweet guy named Tony. We are going out now and the last few lines of this poem said exactly waht I need to say to him. A person can only take so many heart aches. Thank you!

jessica

THIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART WHEN I STARTED WITH MY HUSBAND I HAD JUST BROKEN UP UP WITH WHAT I THOUGHT WAS THE MAN OF MY LIFE BUT I GAVE DANNY A CHANCE AND I FELL IN REAL AND DEEP LOVE SOMETHING I NEVER THOUGHT WOULD HAPPEND AFTER A ROUGH BRAKE UP WITH SOMEONE WHO I THOUGHT I LOVEDA DN TREATED ME LIKE SHIT I LOVED THE POEM AND KEEP ON WITH THE GRAET JOB I WILL KEEP COMING FOR MORE

Tiffany

Lovebug: This was a very good poem. It really touched based with me. I just left my fiance of 2 years. and i am pregnant and of course he is his. But anyways i moved away from him back down by my parents and i met this guy and he is just the sweetest guy. And he is excited about my baby. Dawson. i just think it is awesome how fate and God works. I am going to show him this poem you wrote. thank-you so much for taking the words right out of my mouth. God bless you sweetie!

Rachel

I love the poem you wrote it reminds me of me and my boyfriend.

Isabel

I realy like the Poem. I think that it's perfect for someone who has had a broken heart and doesn't think that it will be whole again. I really love this poem and i'm sure that other people will too.

Christina

This poems has helped me through break up with my longterm relationship. Thank you, I write poetry too.

Cristen

This poem was written with alot of heart and emotions and i have to tell you you are a very talented writer and i appreciate you sharing with me. x cristen x

viva

this was such a awsome poem. it trully comes from the heart

Holly

I loved it

Amber

I like the honesty, in your words they are what many feel out here in this sad, and crazy world so many tend to not hear the truth inside, all it takes is eyes, that seek. Honesty in someone so special there seek inside one's heart. Thank You, for sharing your beauty and heartaches so true and kind. My vote for this is very beautiful emotions put into honesty and truth very rare ~smiles .

Jennifer

i loved your poem its really touching

Flo

This poem touches every dark corner in my heart! Awesome!

Ana

This poem is the best its got to be my favorite poem out of all the poems i've read. Every poem i read that i like, i print them out and tape the on my wall. And i am happy to say that this one is the one that is going on to my door. This will be the only poem on my door in all capital letter's. Great Poem! :)

Bridget

I cried when i read this, i had a really bad relationship, one filled with put downs and hateful words. I have finally met the man of my dreams that was willing to hold me while i cried, because i was scared to let another in and try to love again. We have been together now for two years and he still holds me close, he showed me what love is, and how to love. To him i owe my unbroken heart. I love you Joe.

Tyler

I love this poem!

Olivia

I LOVED this poem. I could relate 2 it so well. I 2 had sumone i loved but fate took him away, but im glad it did cuz now i c he waz nothin but a liar who played wit my heart. But now i found a guy who i love so very much and he is helping mend my broken heart. i absoultly love this poem. keep up the good work

solomay

This poem was really good and it explains a lot about how I feel as of right now. It's so wonderful knowing that someone like you can express how you feel by writing and to know that I"M not alone. I REALLY LOVE this poem. keep writing.

Sharayah

This is one of the best poems I have ever read.

MARY

I COULD RELATE TO THIS POEM AND I LIKED IT ALOT

rita

When i read this poem. it was like it was written for me. The man that broke my heart is still bothering me. But the man that is putting back the piece is getting the key to unlock my heart. Thanks for written this.

Jasmine

Good poem!

Marlene

Dam lovebug you mus of really gotten hurt befor. But your not alone and that is why this poem really got to me.

merissa

gurl yo poem wuz so krunk i like it ,it realy touches my heart keep doin wut u dion n keep yo head up

Kasey

I loved this poem because my husband broke my heart and i'm seeing someone else now and i feel like he could be the one to make me love again like i thought that i never could.

Tacy

This is a very touching poem and I i know what it feels like to have a broke heart. And nore then anything do i wish that, that someone will come and mend me heart and let me forget the one who heart me.

Ameera

Your poem touch my heart, that is what im feeling now, coz my heart was broke once, im so scread love again, thanks a lot, God bless you!

BRITT

It is like talking about me.

andrea

this one is a really beautiful poem. I too was hurt in love befr and now i too have found a person who truly love me. So when i read this poem it truly touched me. I have emailed it to my boyfriend as i really enjoyed readng it.

Ivy

this is a very good poem

alexis

i just really enjoyed the poem because it is something that just happend to me my ex broke my heart but now i have another boyfriend and i just want him to know it is going to be hard for me to get over my ex cause he was special to me but with his help i know i can get through it because he is a really good guy my new boyfriend and i know he will understand and he won't hurt me like my ex did i can just relate to this person i really enjoyed the poem a lot thanks bye bye.

Becca

This poem was excellent. My ex - boyfriend dumped me by text after three years and although I still love him with all my heart I know it would never be the same. The closing stanza was especially beautiful. You have a talent - keep on using it!

Tiffany

I think this poem is a great way to express yourself to a loved one. LoveBug I got two words for you GREAT JOB!

Sherry

You hit the nail on the head with this one for me. Very well written and ty, I will be keeping this poem in with all the ohters that touch me.

Chris

AWESOME

Chanthou

Your love poem really touch my heart and every time I read one peom it kinda make me think back in the old days but time just passes by and old day just pass. Im trying to forget all about what ever happen in the pass and try to move on in my life. -Shorty-

Cherise

I have not yet found someone to heal my haert but this gave me hope. Thanks!

LaToya

I felt that your poem was very straight foward and truthful. It kinda reminds me how to deal with my new love

Shay

This poem is just great. I loved it because it felt like you were saying exactly what i feel.

Keon

IN THIS POEM THAT I READ REALLY TOCHED ME IN THE IN SIDE I THINK YOU NEED A 10

Jim

yes i think dat is like so true peoples do need to find out if there is someone out there for them. I think that was koo and stuffs like dat i liked it soo much

Danyetta

I LOVED YOUR POEM. i feel that same exact way about this boy and i want him to be able to mend my heart but i don't think if he's ready. keep up the good work look for my poetry soon

Shanika

this poem honestl made me cry b-cuz i'm going through the same exact situation right now with my ex of two months & the new person i'm scared to let in my life cuz i don't want to be hurt again. thank you very much for this poem i really enjoyed & apppreciated it you are a good love poem writter keep up the good work and you will get YOUR respect i promise you that!

Becky

Wow! This is the perfect poem for me! I just got out of a relationship that I was in for 2 years and it really broke my heart and now another person has came into my life but I just didnt know if I wanted to give them a chance cause I didnt want to get my heart broke again and I didnt want them to feel like a rebound! Awesome Work! I love it!

Lígia

This poem is pleasant, very sincere, it is practically a I uncover of a heart that suffered bitterness : You know how to write very well, when wants.

dale

im telling ya if that wouldnt win a girls heart i dont know what would,this poem rules, wow this poem works. and the only thing that i can say is, if 2 people are meant to be and if love proves real then theirs nothing that can keep them apart. and this poem takes it right to the heart. nice going.

Cristal

I loved the poem it reminds me of my 1st love and how he broke my heart, but now someone new has come in my life and at 1st i was afraid to open my heart to him but i took the risk and i was not dissapointed

Charlene

great poem! u have the talent that everyone wants. great job!

angelica

Gurl you toattly did extremley excellent with this poem. I was trying to find a poem to give to my boyfriend because he would say that i am too hard i never let him in my heart and that i have read this pioem this is the perfectr poem to give him i've been trying to express my feelinmgs but i would feel like i would get hurt again because trust me i have been through hell and back but this poem expresses everything that i have been wanting to say to him thatnks alot and god bless you you have a great talent and that's in poetry!

mistie-dawn

i love it. i like how each 4lines go in to eachother

Crystal

this is the best poem i have ever read it brings a tear to my eyes every time i read it it describes exactly how i feel thank you for sharing this with all the people in the world that dont how to put our words on paper

Melissa

i loved this poem i am going through the exact same thing right now and your poem has helped me a lot. Thanks!

Karolina

hey i love you pome! dats exactly how i feel about dis one guy at school but idk if he feels the same! see everyone tells me dat he just uses girls 2 get some but i dont think he is! i like hi alot i thinim fallin in love with him! ur pome made me think really hard! thank u soo much! good job u shoul become a pome writer!

Amy

That is sooo good I think it's one of my favorites so far.

Tramaine

I feel in luv with this poem the first time I read it, I could relate to it in every way, and its good to know someone has asked the same questions I once asked myself,but I have found the one for me

Lydia

I really like this poem. It discribes my love life perfectly in every aspect. I feel so connected with the writer. Great job!

Diane

This poem has made me a very happy person I mean I have been in so many relationships and I also have been hurt sooooooooo many times and this poemm here makes me feel muchhhhhhhhh betterrrrrrr. Thanks cont. with the good work

tina

wow. the peom reallie touched me. i went through it once. for the first time in mah life. it reallie hurted me,. but the guy tat im with rite now. jus opened up mah eyes and is doing everything he could jus to fix all those peices together. im so happey to find him and im glad tat i opened up mah heart for him and give him a chance.

Jenn

This is a really good poem. It makes me think of the guy Im with now and how good he really makes me feel. Thank you for making me smile.

Tiffany

THAT POEM IS GREAT. I HAVE HAD MY HEART BROKEN SO BADLY IN THE PAST, ESPECIALLY BY ONE GUY IN PARTICULAR, AND NOW I MET THIS OTHER GUY, AND I THINK I AM FALLING FOR HIM, BUT I AM SCARED. SO THIS POEM TOTALLY EXPLAINS HOW I FEEL. IT WAS SO GREAT THAT I GAVE IT TO HIM,AND TOLD HIM THAT THIS POEM IS EXACTLY WHAT I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO TELL HIM. THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH. IT IS REALLY GREAT.

ana

THIS WAS A NICE POEM OUT OF ALL THE ONES I'VE READ I CAN RELATE TO YOURS MORE I KNOW THAT FEELING!

Sandra

This poem was off the chain. I will giving this poem to someone very special to me. Keep it up lovebug

Ruby

This is the best poem ever. I am still trying to get over a 5 year relationship; that ended about 2 years ago. A friend of mine has come back into my life after 10 years and he says that he will heal my broken heart and my soul. I know that he has always been in love with me, but up untill this poem I never thought much about it. Thanks si much!

dona

i like the poem, it suits my emotions. i want this to be the one because it is great!

margaret

very good

Jessica

I really liked this peom it was sweet.

Danni

i love your poem its great, its just the way i feel right now my last love hurt me real bad and now ive met this real great guy i hope he the one to mend my heart but im scared to love him incase i get hurt again but i guess u have got to take chances. i really love your poem the way u expreesed ur feelings. i hope u got wat u wanted

jessica

i loed it i thought it was so sweet!

ANTOINTTE

THIS IS VERY PRETTY I LOVE IT I AM 17 AND A POET MYSELF I HOPE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS SOME DAY!

rebecca

i really liked your poem and found it to be quite something! i think you are really talented and the words sound as if they are coming from ur heart!

Me

Keep up the good work! Very unique and awesome work!

Fred

Sweet Poem, very nicely written!

LeeAnn

Excellent JOB!

Leanna

Wonderful!

Nina

I just cried when I read this. It happens to be the most beautiful poem I've come across yet. And reflects exactly what I am going through right now. Very Nice. Excellent job!

brooke

I liked it alot. There was a lot of what people go through. I a specialy liked the end.

sarah

I loved the poem it remineded me of my ex but the one i love currently!it was great

Allie

It was really good. I liked it and was feeling where you were coming from.

Sabre

wonderful it made me think of all the stuff that has happend in my life i loved it keep up the good work is all i have to say congrats on ur hard work

Sugar

This was an excellent poem. I related to it in every aspect.

maree

THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL! I JUST WANTED TO SAY YOU ARE VERY TALENTED AND I LOVE THIS POEM. I WILL BE SURE TO SEND THIS TO MY BOYFRIEND

kelly

Oh my god this remindes me of myself sooo much!This is a really great poe for people that have had to deal with a boyfriend to let them really know there not alone. I had to deal with someone that was so not worth it and he broke my heart and i had no idea what to do i started to wright it made me feel better to get it out. Then i met some body that was worth my time and he understod, gavie me time but was there and was tellin me i was worth it so everyone deserves someone that is good to them. ! Amen

Rachel

It seems to me that your poem has taken my feelings right from me. It is the best poem I have read in here so far.

Patricia

Having been in a similar situation, I can understand what you are going through. Great poem, straight to the heart of it all.

vivian

wow. thats a really good poem. i feel you. thats a really great poem. i knoe exactly how you feel. and i think ur really talented

Kristy

ur poem was fantastic it touched me like no other poem ever has i've cried reading a poem but u made me sobb like a baby i went thru a past relationship just like that thank you i'm not alone

Joeanna

i really like that poem i could say that, that poem is similor to what i've gone throw. very nice

Jenny

I sent this poem to my special internet friend, it tells him the thoughts I couldn't put into words myself, he has been really touched by it and helped him understand my feelings.

carrie

this poem is really good. i think that is a good poem for many young teens who's been heartbroken.

Denise

I like the poem because it has a rhyming scene and it captures the feeling of being scared and doubtful to fall in love again.

Suzie

All I have to say, is that, when I read this poem, I cried so much, because it reminds me about how a guy hurt me so much, and a new guy came into my life, and i fell in love with him. Thank you so much for writting this poem! :)

Erin

Girl, this poem is really good. I know exactly how you feel. I had a man break my heart into millions of pieces, and I really feel your pain. The man who came into my life after this happened is phenomenal. He is an angel sent from heaven, and he has mended my broken heart. It takes time, but in the end it is worth it. I now know that love is possible, it may take time, but it is possible.

pings1love

i love this poem! it reminds me of when i first met my hubby. i had just gotten out of a 4-yr relationship when we met, and even after all that i went thru wit my ex, he wanted to stay and love me!

vanessa

This one poem makes me think about me and my boyfriend. I have had many guys hurt me in the past as well. But now I have this guy who always makes me feel as if I am the perfect girl. Which makes me think is he the one for me?

Chelsei

I love the poems. I felt the same way one time and then i found someone i wanted to be with and his name is Bobby and we are still together 6 years after, and i hope we stay together.

ileana

this poem is really nice. i can relate to it, it makes me go back to my memories.

Judy

that's a very sweet poem. it reminds me of my old boyfriend.

Jessica

I really enjoyed your poem. It touched me so much. I also went through that at one point. I fell in love with someone and he broke my heart. I thought I would never find someone else. I was wrong. I did find someone else but after a month he also broke my heart. I try to stay strong and keep my heart open.

Jennifer

This poem reminds me of my lost love, and its hard falling in love a 2nd time. I always judge my new love, b-4 he gets a chance to show me what he's really like. This poem really inspired me.

Cynthia

I think that you should be a true heart righter in poems because this poem came from the heart.

adelina

i am a great lover of poetry and this one i both loved and related to the first time i read it i cried.

Tabbethie

Your poem was sweet it made me want to cry. I think everyone has got their heart broken once or twice but you should never give up and you didn't, that shows how strong you are.

Tony

I Love this poem. It tells the story of the woman I'm seeing and all my Love for here. I'm Italian, so romance is in my blood.

Rebecca

I really enjoyed this poem. It has spoken to me like no other because I too have had plenty of broken hearts. It gives me the strength to know that all people aren't the same and you can find real love again after a broken heart.

amanda

I loved it!

matt

lovebug you're pom toched me so deply, i ca'nt belive you felt the same thig as me. i love my boyfrenid so much and i cryd wen i red you're pome

Sade

This poem said it all. I could relate with every expressionn, the pain and the willingless to want to try and love again. But it also expressed the fear and uncertainty one has when embarkig on a new relationship after coming out of a bitter one. I absolutely love it

Ethel

I really don't know were to start with this pome because it was so touching to me, because i know some people going through this rigth now and me for one thing. i loved it and to the wirter of this poem keep up the good work.

Jenny

This hits it right on. I am going through this very thing now in my life and the man I am involved with has also been hurt very badly, so we are having to clean up each others lives that others had broken

Cameo

This poem was great. It really made me think about things.

Green

This poem is absoutely beautiful. I have been in a similiar situation myself, it ha truy touched my heart, and I hop to read more of your poetry. Keepit up. You have a wonderful talent.

curci

This poem is so unbelievably true. I loved this poem. It sounds as if we ot our hearts broken by the same person. Its amazing how you can feel the exact way I do and put it into words. Theres admiration there. Keep up the excellent work.

Michelle

This poem is very true to life. it is worded so nicely and has a stong to thr point ending!

Vanes

all i can say is when i read this poem i cried like a baby. it realy touched me.

Juani

this one i really like becuase it beutifull and touching in many different ways.

Tasha

This conveyed exactly what I felt about someone. I was in floods of tears by the end. Thank you.

DIANA

i really feel youre poem it is talking about my life :(

kim

this is a very pretty poem

atia

a tremendous effort i must say wat difficult thin n how well said i can very well relate to it coz once u lov som one truely its very tough to break away frm the clutches of tha past experiance .

A

I never heard more sweet than this poem:)

jill

beautiful poem

georg

ive cry when i first reade it and i cry steel every time i reade it im from Greece and poetry is in our blod, and we can feel the words or poem in our soul there is no words to discripe this poem is just the BEST and i dont think that everyone ho foll in love never feld that feeling of a broken hard good job

nat

This is an exceptionally great poem. I feel that this poem describes how I feel at this exact moment. Good job writing it.

Chels

I loved this poem! I recently had my heart broken by a guy that I thought I loved. This poem has inspired me to believe that there are good,caring guys out there.

Cheri

This is a great poem u are very talented may god bless u and your thoughts.

ninia

This poem really touched me, it was perfect! Keep up the good work

MEL

i LOV THIS IT HAPPEN TO OFTEN AND IS SO VERY TRUE

Dawn

I could not have said it better! These are exactly the words that I was looking for to describe how I feel to my new "friend"! This poem is awesome!

Gabrielle

Lovebug this is a very nice poem, and I understand because I've been hurt before, and now I'm in the position of trying to talk to someone else. This is a great poem and I think you should have it published.

Donna

i definitely love this poem, it say's all i feel. i just have been heart-broken by this guy that i truly cared for and now this guy comes along and seems so perfect and i hope he can reconstruct all my wounds. i will give him a try and see if he is the one.

Jared

This is one of the best poems i hve read you know exactly what your saying and how your saying it what makes it better its not a fairy tale poem its real like this could really happen

mandy

this poem totally expresses how my life and past relationships have been and what I told my girl-friend

Abby

I really can relate to this poem. It is kinda funny, the kid that broke my heart before is the one mending it back together. I love this poem, it is awsome.

Jess

I think this poem is GREAT! It really touches the heart and soul! You done a great job!

Erica

i cried so hard when i frist read this poem. it was so true to my life and i am so glad i have found that right person that was willing to pick up the peices of my broken heart and i thank god every day for that

Sara

This poem really moved me. I can see where the poet is coming from. I feel the exact way about someone else!

Mari

its a really good poem. theres a lot of people going through what this poem is saying.

lilly

i think that this poem is sweet and i like the use of words. its really good!

Angie

I love this poem. It's very good. I can relate to the situation. Keep up the good work.

Jenni

I love this poem because a man did break my heart and after 2 years I did not think I could ever love again but I found a wonderful man

mindy

BEAUTIFULLY PUT. THE REAL TRUTH OF A BROKEN HEART. EXPRESSES THE PAIN BUT YET THE LOVE THAT STILL REMAINS, ONLY IF THE RIGHT PERSON IS WILLING TO MEND THE PAIN.

Jeanette

Wow, I loved that poem! You put a lot of feeling into it I could tell. I wish I could right like that. THAT WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ! I reminds me of someone I know who went through the same experience.

Chey

I loved your poem. I give it 5 stars and 2 thumbs up. Great Job

Cathy

It's a beautiful poem. The best I have ever read. Keep it up!

Anthony

"May you get-not what you deserve-but your heart's desire" (Mercedes Lackey, By The Sword) Pain is best shared. even if it is only friends. May all of us who have or had a broken heart, may we all find that one person willing to pick up the pieces, and help put us back together

ilona

I think it's beautiful

Crys

What a great poem, this has touched my heart and expressed exactly how I feel

john

its good you can let your feelings out in a poem

Valerie

i love this poem it is so moving, and it touch me deeply.

Jennifer

this poems really good. it's really keeping it real. keep up the good work.

nitin

an amzing n awesome poem..which makes u speak on ur behalf.ur true feelings which u rnot somtimes to express

Jerome

This poem struck a chord in my heart. have been dating for a while now since I broke up and finding it so difficult to find the One. I keep wondering at each date whether they could be . the One. and I am still searching . sigh

Linda

I just wanna tell you how much i love this poem. Your poem totally descibes my past and the feelings i have for my boyfriend. This is an amazing poem

LIZZIE

WOW! THIS POEM IS JUST LIKE ME! XI LOVE IT ! I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM!

arelyn

this poem is superb! i luv it!

Johnny

If I wasn´t a male I would have been crying. My heart has been broken too, but I haven´t found my true love to mend my heart together.

Renee

This poem touched me deeply! I can really relate to this right now. Well, I have been relating to it for the last year and a half. I have been going through rough times and I am trying to love someone new, and give him my all, but it's hard because my heart was torn and shattered.

mallorie

that was very beautiful and i loved it. it was great and i really enjoyed it!

Shereisa

This was a lovely poem and many people could relate to this poem

LeeAnne

I rate this poem at a 10. I am this situation and it really relates to me. good job! Keep up the good work.

Joanna

I love this poem you are the very best poet ever good luck with your other poems LoveBug

Amanda

This poem touched my heart, I believe every girl goes through atleast one broken heart!

kym

I think this poem is so awesome, I can feel the poets feelings, I feel the same right now about arelationship i want to begin.

laura

ts poem decribes what everyone will feel atleast once n their life..this poem is from the heart and thats what makes a poem great.

Tabby-Kat

This is the best peom! It explains exactally what im going through now!Keep Writting your really good at it!

Samantha

this poem says everything..from what had happened to what is current. thank you

Nunu

I am so touched by your poem.the same thing had happen to me and it took me a while to tell myself that I need to move on..but my heart wasn't feeling what I was trying to say..I am happy that I gotten over him because I wouldn't have found the love of my life now..remember that if it was true love or yours from the begging it will always come back to it's rightful owner..

Amber

your poem was wonderful. I write peoms my self but i havent been able to get into it because i have to get inspired before i write and thats what your peom did for me. It inspired me. Thanks so much and keep up the great work

Jay.K

This is such a beautiful poem it reminds me of my ex who was rude and cruel.

Valerie

I know how you feel. I been through it to.I really like your poem.

SOPHIE

WOW.AMAZING..I WAS VERY HEART BROKEN UNTIL I SAW THIS POEM.NOW I KNOW THAT LOVE CAN HAPPEN TWICE IN OUR LIFE R MAY BE MORE THAN TWICE.WAT A LOVELY POEM.IT'S GOOD 4 HEART BROKEN 2 READ IT AND FEEL BETTER.

Jess

It is hard to find words to express a person's deepest feelings and sadness but you did it wonderfully, i loved the poem!

VERONICA

I LOVED THIS POEM SO MUCH YU KNOW WHEN YOU CAN'T FIND JUST THE RIGHT WORDS TO SAY TO SOMEONE AND YOU WANT THEM TO KNOW HOW TO TELL THEM HOW YOU FEEL WELL THIS POEM SAID IT ALL FOR ME!

Art

this is a beautiful poem it relates to my life so much it hurts thank you so much for sharing it

Dave

What a fantastic, smashing poem. It really buffed my nabs.

megan

I absolutely loved this poem from a scale from 1-10 I would give it a 9

Katie

What more could be said!

Allison

THIS POEM WAS SO EMOTIONAL IT TRULY TOUCHED ME B/C I'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS

Lisa

I Love these words it hits home i think ive meet my true love after many broken hearts

Cynthia

oh! this is such a great poem! i can read this over and over again.it really expresses some of my experiences in life.

Trena

I LOVED your poem. I can defintely relate to it.

Krisline

OMG! This poem is soooooo right for me. Whoever made it is very talented because every word i mean EVERY single word in that poem has either happened or happening to me right now. Thank-you so much!

Amanda

This poem is so great! It honestly gave me chills b/c this is the situation that I am in right now!

Heba

it is authentic

DeeDee

This poem brought tears to my eyes, because this is me and now I am in a new relationship and this is what he has to do"Mend My Broken Heart", and it's not easy.keep up the good work

MT

This poem is so good, it really sums up how i am feeling about my new and past relationship!

jen

This poem expresses exactly how i feel about a wonderful guy who has just come into my life.

Maria

I believe this poem represents atleast one relationship in every young girls life today. Reading wonderful poems, such as this one helps young girls realize that it isn't only them going through this. I think this is great and it should be published. I love it!

Jenny

I love this poem soooo...much

vanessa

I really enjoyed this poem..i was once broken in pieces and torn apart and this poem really spoke about the real life that happens to good people and it is an excellent poem..keep up the good job!

Sam

I liked the poem so much, it touches the heart, and every one can say i am this person that has been hurt.

THEspiritchaser

very strong feelings from a very strong spirit. it is one of the most passionate poems i have read in years. thank you love bug.excellent job!

Mechelle

VERY GOOD

shay

this is a really touching, and so true poem. it shows that people are sometimes afraid to fall in love again, but sometimes you have to leave the past behind and move on. BRAVO!

bj

i loved it. it's exactly how i feel about the guy that i recently met. u did a great job.

Felicia

This is a great poem and it truley fits into the problems i have had and how that people have hurt me and how i have found someone new who i am now trying to let into my heart.

lil

man this poem is so good i mailed it to my b/f ruben to c if he really cares and he responded in a very good way

ceri

This has been the best poem I have read in a very long time.. Continue to write.. you have the gift.. The poem went very deep with in me as I'm sure it has with both sexes.. men aren't excluded from the wrath of pain.. thanks again and keep up the great work..

Alysha

That poem was so beautiful ans its a great way for my boyfriend to understand my feelings. Thanks Lovebug

Ashleigh

I love this Poem I read it to my ex and now we are back together thanks so much

Nicole

I just want to say your peom is great. I read this and had tears in my eyes. It explained my life so much and I have been lucky to find the other guy to put the broken pieces together.

Rosie

excellent!!!

Dawn

Tears were rolling down my cheeks before I finished your poem. It is about true life, and hopefully finding the right person to help you through the pain, and then the pleasure. I know, I have been there.

courtney

this is a truly awesome poem!! it relates to me perfectly..this guy broke my heart by cheating on me soo many times and then another guy came into my life he is being really faithful and every thing..we've been together for about a month..he's17 and i'm 15..he always tells me i'm the one for him

applejacks

i love this poem ! its great!

LIZ

I like this poem because it shows so much feeling and it touched me alot I hope more people vote for this poem .

Carrie

Most precious poem I've ever read

Gigglez

that is a very good poem and that is a good to give to your man

Kristin

This is such a true poem! I luv it sooo much. Unfortuneately, for me, I lost the one I love, and no one will mend my broken heart!

cg

this is a breath taking poem

Lesley

astounding insight

Vanessa

I loved this poem because speaks about something that's so true. Every women knows that.

donna

your poem was pretty cool and it was good

Princess

This poem is so wonderful, I love it!

Crystal

I loved your poem it was one of the best i've ever read

D'J

i feel in love with this poem because i could relate to it more than any others on here. i would like to thank you for posting this wonderful poem so i could enjoy it thank you

Ye

i love this poem, it speaks what's inside me

Cassandra

BRAVO!

Leandra

I love this poem!:) Its the way I feel!

Sammy

all i can say is that is one dang good poem. cause it expresses so many peoples emotions.

Sandra

That was so true and im going though it myself.It made me see my on life.

Shani

THis is so what i was looking for b/c i was hurt about 1 1/2 years ago and now i am head over heels in love and in 12 days we will be together a year and i wanted to say thanks b/c this describes the guy i love so well

Stacy

This has touched my heart in so many ways that only this poem can describe. It brings new meaning to the phrase "Once bitten, Twice shy" I commend your talent, and wish you the best in life!

Samantha

Outstanding poem. Sounds like myself

Fruitloopgirl

omg.was this talking about me and my new boyfriend. im seeing this new guy and im scared to let him in.due to my broken heart but i know inside this guy will not break my heart for he has mend piece by piece with his love.thanks for this poem.u have read my heart…

kathy

it really brought tears to my eyes. it really moved me, because im in a situation like that and those were the perfect words.

Angela

This poem is very cute it fits most girls prefected this poem should be number one!

Diane

That poem was absolutely beautiful. It definately brought a tear to my eye. I feel everything that was said in that. Very nice.

Nicole

This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. It expresses how many people feel about someone special.

Janelle

this is a really good poem

umum

really its wounderfull

Valerie

I love the poem keep it up

karen

I loved it! It's just so close to home. Exactly the way a broken heart feels when they find someone new.

Sondra

I loved the poem. It seemed to fit me.

Melinda

It is such a beautiful poem. I sent this poem to someone I really care about. Now days I find it hard to express myself and this poem was Perfect!!!

SANDRA

another one that speaks of me and my lover, I love these poems, they are great.

sylvana

It was a great poem that you wrote. from a scale of 1 to 10 I give an 11.

Deadra

Ireally like this poem it really reminds me of some of the relation ships that I've been in

Valinda

So beautiful and well spoken

Camilla

This made me about to cry because it meant so much and relates directly to something that happened to me! Keep on writing Love Bug! :)

jason

wonderful

blair

this one is very good and i admire good poems..real good

Kim

I really like this poem because it says everything exactly how I have always wanted to say it. I can totally relate to it. It makes me want to cry Thank you so much-its a wonderful poem!

John

I love it. Though I am a man, its all about me to the woman i've recently met. Save that once again I've been torn apart, I only hope I can find a love that will truly last. I know that Jesus loves me though, through it all. His has and will be the only true love I'll ever know.

Megan

I love this poem. This poem says everything I want to say to the guy I am seeing right now.

Amanda

This poem was so real, it brought tears to my eyes.

sarah

I really can relate to every word said in this poem. It's exactly what I'm going through right now. The author wrote it so well that many of us can relate to this situation.

Mariam

This is a beautiful poem. It is a great representation of what a woman truly feels after such an experience.

SELENA

I LOVE THAT POEM ITS SO PRETTY

Laura

I loved this poem so much. There is a guy that i would love him to help me get over a guy that i liked so much then he just dumped me, so i was very hurt. But the guy i like now doesnt really like me but this poem is my dream. Love bug i love ur poem.

Nikkie

It speaks out my heart...

Nydia

I loved this poem.It speaks of hope to find someone gentle and caring enough to fix something as fragile as a broken heart.It doesnt leave anything out.Sweet poem,sweet words,sweet thoughts,sweet hopes,sweet dreams.Loved it.

jelyn

this a very good poem this happen to me before and im still looking for taht person that will treat me right just like that person

Sean

Excellent girl - the best

Vicki

I love this poem! It reminds me of an experience I had! Keep writing, so I can read them ...okay!

Amada

Great poem!! I can totally relate to it.

Caz

Well, it certainly summed up my life so far...

Kristina

I couldn't help but to love this poem,it truly speaks within the heart,the author,seemed to express,sadness and hapiness throughout the poem.

April

this is a very good poems it describs us all that has been hurt and wants to love again!

Ivana

sweet!.and true

DD

This poem touched my soul I felt every word like it was me who had wrote it. I exhaled after reading it and passed it around to my friends. I too have recently (1 1/2 ago) been hurt and its still so fresh and a play it like a tape over and over again its sad to say but I'm not holding on to that part of it. I learned so much in that destructive relationship that I will never subject myself to anything like that again. So I Thank you LoveBug for the words and inspiration. Keep it coming.

Andrea

words can't explain how good this poem is

Starlite

That was beautiful. Thats exactly what i need to say to someone so i am using your poem

patricia

this really hit home and brought tears to my eyes..it is wonderful..

toni

GREAT POEM!

cindy

This poem is so real I could have written it myself.It was almost like comparing the similarities as if I were to look in the mirror. It is honest and feeling and so beautiful.

Maria

very touching and jus can relate to me!

Mandy

this is a really good poem, it fits me perfectly becuause my last boyfriend hurt me bad and my heart was broken and the guy I am with now has been waiting for me to be ready to try a new relationship.

Angie

I READY THAT POEM AND IT BRINGS BACK SO MUSH THAT MY BOYFRIND AND I DID TOGETHER. THAT POEMS MAKES ME FEEL GOOD AND SAD IN MENY WAYS.

Aminita

THIS POEM IS GREAT, I LOVE IT. GOOD JOB LOVEBUG

Maricela

This poem kind of made me cry. This poem rocks!

Emily

Your poem was awesome. It put exactly what I was feeling into words.It was perfect. I know exactly where you were coming from.

jenn

this poem is awsome. ti says it all!

Jezebel

wow.this really blew me away.very touching and passionate.i can really relate to this. My heart has been countlessly broken apart..this makes me feel a bit better..

Paula

You heard my story? I love this.. thank-you for putting it in words.

Katrina

I liked this poem because it described how I was feeling w/out me having to say a word.

missi

I just wanted to tell the Author, thank you so much for writing this poem. It brings back so many memories of my teenage years. But it's all o.k. now, for the Ugly Duckling does turn into a Beautiful Swan....

kiomara

this is a beutiful phone!

Irene

When I read this poem it brought tears to my eyes. I was in an abusive relationship and swore to myself I would never let me get involved again. A friend of mine and I have recently started dating and this poem describes exactly what he is willing to do. His patience and understanding and willingness to help me forget and mend the broken heart. I just wanted to let you know this poem has touched deeply. I can tell you are talking from experience.

Cassondra

I thought this was a deep poem, its meaning is strong

Kent

I could fill every word. It brought tears to my eyes! I loved it! Thank you.

erica

i love this poem very much . it is one of the best that i have read

CLAUDIA

THIS POEM IS GREAT!!!! IT IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS GUY(MY BEST FRIEND)HE'S BEEN THERE FOR ME THROUGH EVERYTHING AND I'M STARTING TO LIKE HIM ALOT. BUT HE HAS NO IDEA

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