About the Poem

Some people just can't get enough, what else can I say.

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by Michael Anderson

I see myself holding you close to me,
Squeezing your body tight.
But for all I see as I daydream-
I know I'll get tenfold tonight.

Running my palms across your breast,
As you tremble and bite your lip.
Feeling your hands upon my chest,
The softness of each fingertip.

Tasting your neck so sweet, so soft,
And slowly lowering my kiss.
Over pert nipples, across your navel,
And finally into pure bliss.

Looking upon your face from below-
As you tilt back your head.
Feeling your fountains begin to flow-
As you ease back on the bed.

Your "innocent little devil" look-
Crying insatiably with the sensation.
Lip to lip lapping up every drip-
From the well of your creation.

The way you pull me up by the hair-
To the heat of your mouth, on fire.
No other thoughts, no other cares,
Just the quenching of mad desire.

Riding the tide of passion,
Pushing my love into you.
On the waves of your emotion-
In slow motion, so sweet and true.

Pulse pounding in resounding rapture,
Taken to the hilt, then just past.
Rhythm growing, faces glowing,
The climax coming fast.

That heated, illicit look-
Of ecstasy across your eyes.
The culmination nearing-
Within your undulating thighs.
Echoing throughout the heavens-
On overindulgent cries.

The sultry look upon your face-
In reaching that gyrating gush.
The way you bite my fingers-
When I try to make you hush.

Your arching back, your fingernails,
Your perfume mixed with sweat.
The way you keep rubbing against me-
With your insides already so wet.

The way when I'm beat dead and ready-
To fall face first to the floor,
You put your sweet lips to my ear-
And whisper, "I want more! "

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344 Visitor Comments

Lucia

Wow . Intense. Very powerful. keep up the good work

alicia

this is one of the best i have ever read it screamed passion i loved it!

carrie

Hmmmmm. It made me want more ;)

Paula

Very seductive, sexual. I wish I had a man that thought of our encounters that way.

Kat

Oooh, la, la!

treasa

I Love it, everything I needed to say and more.

Valerie

I nevery herd a man speak of a women like this before. Excellent job dude.

Tumelo

Very arousing and it really moved me out of my place to my lady in bed,i have read it over and over and i cant get enough, yes as i read it i felt the touch of my lady the scent of hers in my bedding.

maxien

fantastic, i had to show my friends this poem. absolute genius. certainly raunchy, gotta say it put jackie collins to shame. well done

joon

WOW

Ashley

This poem was amazing! Your words put me in your poem. It was very very VERY sexy. Good job.

Valerie

This poem is very erotic and yet very sweet at the same time, it reminds me of how my husband and I are when we are together. We have been together for 7 years and I still love him more than anything!

Deborah

WOW!

MAYRA

This poem is WOW! I can tell what he was thinking, and he's right, SOME people, like me, can't get enough, but when it's with the one you really love. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this peom, and I think it's soooooooo EROTIC. I think this poem catches sight of peoples eye, because jsut saying, I want more, reminds us of the INNER beast

Kym

SEXY! Michael are you married? Just kidding. It was really HOT.

heather

WOW! Never knew just words could have that kind of effect. Amazing job

ch3ls3y

first of all that poem was great. it had me leaning at the edge of my s3at to read what else was gonna happen. michael u real talneted cause as i read every word i cold picture it comming true. no bull that peom is th best!11

Mary

Awesome Poem. Says how my boyfriend feels but cannot put into words.

ada

spectacular give me more of you poems great way to spent my friday evening

tracy

wow!I felt that

Sarah

Dude, this peom is awsome. It reminds me of alot of things. My point is. it's awsome!

JoJo

I just wanted to say that this poem is one of my favorites, and one of the best I have ever read, filled with such passion and love. You're an inspiration to me and hope that you never stop writting!

Jessie

this peom relates to me and is a good one

hamsterrose

I think that this is one of the best poems ive ever read. major props to Micheal Anderson

Mayra

this poem was off the hook good job

Kelsie

Thsis was a great poem! Keep it up!

Sonya

This my friend was delicious and my husband is going to love reading it tonight! You have a way with words!

Tarvia

I'm loving this poem. It captured everything about a woman when she's getting everything she wants and more. I love it

maxine

brilliant, just brilliant, have you been published, i hope so. this is fantastic, you get 7 out of 5 from me. im gob smacked, brilliant

sergio

awsome

Monique

That was a good poem to bad some people don't have that much experience and me wishing they did.

Sabrena

Hey, some of us just can't get enough. This is definitely me. I loved it.

Estelle

WOW!

Elmo

DAMN! That gave me chills through my body. I Felt like i was there. Very Sexy!

Danielle

wow. i really liked this one. very good.

leeah

This poem was great. i had to read it twice just to see if what i read was right. i couldnt believe it. WOW!

jaki

a dream come true.

Tamara

I loved that poem. it was banzingin

Ona

Oh, my god that is the one of the most erotic poems I have ever read! You did your thing on this one. This poem inspired me!

Laci

those words reminded me so much of making love with my boyfriend. thank you michael

Dani

This poem was so intense. I relate to it so well. "I want More"

candace

i REALLY LIKE THIS POEM, IT MAKES ME THINK OF HOW TWO PPL MUST BE IN LOVE! aND IT KINDA MAKES ME THINK ABOUT who ever worte this was in love with someone adn that person is every specail!

Brittany

This is such a good poem. I really love i.

TITA

wow you made me want more.

john

this poem has really touched me and inspired me in a way. It is so deep and graphic for the reader. This is a very good poem.

DANIKKA

WOW, THIS POEM IS SEXUALLY STIMULATING AND VIVID. I LOVE THIS AND IT IS PROBABLY THE BEST I HAVE READ IN A WHILE.

Nefertiti

IT MADE ME FEEL AS IF I WAS THERE, & WISH I WAS. I LOVED IT.

Lovely

Oh my gosh you did it big. And I'll be surprised if I don't have scraches on my back. You inspire me. That was very very nice.

Jessica

the poems was really good. it shows how your love comes out to her in sexual activities. but anyway, the poem was off tha chain!

sytuana

THIS IS SOOOOOO. OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS

milly

VERY NICE, VERY NICE! THIS WAS CRAZY "OH MAN" AM STILL TRYING TO CATCH MY BREATH! U GOT MY VOTE

candy

that amazing i truely love this poem

WOW! this poet has a way of drawing you into the poem itself, i felt i was there, what a talent, please keep up the good work. i will certainly be looking out for this poets work in the future

Chelsea

WOW! I got turned on just reading this poem. and it's so true. Women can take it all night long it's unfortunate that men just cant keep up. Keep up the good work, this is a true work of art.

mary

great poem

Dominique

Wow!

Bud

This poem says it all, it takes you to the universe and beyond. No one word can do justice to this work.

Johnetta

i absoultly loved it. you are really good. it made me get THAT sensation. if you know what i mean. ;)

Darla

I read this years ago shared it then. its just so awesome. the best ive ever seen on here. any site. Found that i had the link saved went to ck it out again Enjoyed it just as much :D

Liz

ive read every poem on this site and this is by far the best one keep it up! ( by that i mean the good work)

Liz

DAMN! Keep on truckin' buddy! Best poem EVER!

Kay

That is ansome poem. Keep writting!

jessica

NICE! LOVE IT

trisaca

WOW! This is great! I felt like I was that woman. It made my heart race. I'm going to share this with my man. I want him to feel the way I felt after reading this wonderfull poem.

Diane

This was truly an emotional and inspirational piece. This reads like a personal experience. It's erotic and exotic at the same time. It's sensual and arrousing! Beautiful!

nekka

oh my god that was absolutly great! it had me wanting to continue reading and upset because it ended. fantastic job

stephanie

I thank this poem is really kick A**. I feel you cause when it happens it does happen. Gosh it is a sinsational feeling, i promise its the best and all women love it to their best ability. no doubts. holla,holla

Amanda

Dude, it makes me wanna do the bad thing. lol

Lil Ladie

This is the best one I've read so far.

sally

I found myself reading this poem faster and faster as I craved for more. Phew!

Sharren

I love this poem, Keep up the good work

Becky

This is awesome. made me feel like I was there. AWESOME JOB.

kate

this poem is so sexy.

abbas

Real HOT!

Akina

Man! That poem was tight! You got skills baby!

Akina

man! i love this poem. you got some rel talent baby!

Angela

I first read this poem about two years ago. When I first read it I thought it was so awesome that I made a copy of it and gave it for my boyfriend to read. I just came back to this web site two years later and it is still on here. That's great!

marla

wow

Jamie

awsome!

jennifer

I loved it! I cant believe a poem can turn someone on like that but it did. this is the best erotic poem ever please write more of them!

Dovey

Oh My. My heart pounded reading this poem. The last line,the clencher, omg. I've been there!

Britni

That poem is the best poem I've read yet. Boy whoever or whatever provoked you to write such an intimate and breath taking poem as such, make sure they KEEP PROVOKIN. keep up the good work

Natali

This poem is soooooo good! The way Michel describes everything is pure perfection. I couln's find a better way to put it. It's beautifu.

Anna

This poem was outstanding and so true! I can tell it came from your heart. Wow! I just can't get over how good it was! Great Job!

Ayesha

All I can say about this poem is dayum what a poem.

Boogie

Yo. This poem is off the chain. Me being a female, I can really relate. Keep making those incredible poems.

There are plenty of things that I can say, but let me just simply say that you did da damn thang! I enjoyed this one, it was the best one yet! Ri

Brandi

I loooove this poem. I have never heard any good peoms before Keep up the good work.

Irina

OMG, I definitely want MORE! That is some erotic poem, dude.

God dat was good LUV IT. WRITE MORE WRITE MORE PLZZZZ

kari

oh my gosh you hit it right on the spot. this poem is the best poem i have ever read. great job!

Aimee

Where is my cigarette? This is in my fantasies!

Lonna

All I can say is "OH MY!"

Jessica

WOW! This is SO me and my boyfriend. YOU GO BOY

britt

yo nigga dis poem is hot. it ,makes me feel like im having sex with a poem. lol. keep up da good work. hellz yeah!

ely

This poem deserves an award! Keep it up!

Karen

Outstanding!

peter

at 46 I wished was true, but it is a great thing to do. lol

Manda

You WIN!

latin

This has got to be one of the truest poems i have ever read. this poem has come from Ones heart and desire. great job! It has my vote!

Maria

you could do that to me ANY TIME YOU WANT!

boo

you are so full of passion, whoever has you has your heart and whoever has your love you have their soul.

Mandy

i loved the poem. it was increatable. made me catch my breath and think naughty thoughts lol

Josie

Michael, great poem. It was a vivid moment of passion!

Mel

This was a great poem! Yoou are a great writer keep up the great work and never stop. I love this poem i want more more and more!

Mandy

This was a wonderful poem, it has such detail, that as you read it you can imagines it. Great Imagery and stimulating choice of words.

toni

that is soooo mmmmmmmmmmmm. cant put into words! i want more!

Betsy

I just have to say that when I read this poem a rush of passion overflowed my body and soul. It described me and my fiance to the "T"! Great Job and keep up the good work!

deanna

AMAZING

Shaun

I LOVED it! IT was so beautiful! other than the breast part I dont know how you thought of it!

jenny

WOW! Michael the poem was wonderfull.

Deb

This poem touched every fiber of my soul!

Terps

9. 5 out of ten!

Phyllis

mmmmm, omg, this poem blew my mind, my senses, omg, made me think of how i get when my lover gives me such great pleasure 'orally'. omg, your vivid interpretation of it all, omg, i think you know what i think of your poem, omg. keep writing, give me more. ;) ;)

Sheil

What can I say. this poet said it all! WONDERFUL!

asif

this poem is me! i feel as though the woman in the poem is me! this poem just totally describes my everyday fantasies!

rochelle

excellent!

laura

great poem! it's how i always feel..you must really know what you are doing! keep up the good work!

CYNTHIA

MICHEAL THIS POEM IS HOT,I NEVER SEEN SOMTHING DESCRIBED SO WELL AND IT WAS SO(WHEW)IT REMINDS ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND

Loca

i think that this poems is one of the best that i've read. it really got me and i can totally relate with the author

Rlee

Simply AMAZING!

Michelle

I thought that this poem was wonderful. Keep up the great work..

Peggy

Michael, this poem is so hot. I have a new love and it describes our first time together to a tee. Fantastic!While reading it, I did not realize I had stopped breathing. It took my breath away!

rider

*&*%#%$&^%#@$^&)__( Great

monica

this poem is me! i feel as though the woman in the poem is me! this poem just totally describes my everyday fantasies!

Christine

Oh baby! that is it I want more!

jojo

What can i say but BRILL i loved it

tya

i couldnt have done any better, whatever the inspiration was,. im sure it was great. Yo, keep up the good work.

Megan

WOW!Michael has a gift for being able to capture the true passion. well done michael.well done

Rogue

what can I say but "wow"? this was beautiful and very well crafted..amazing! keep up the good work :-)

Sandra

this is such a kool poem! it really makes u feel how u felt when u wrote it :)

Jessica

Michael, All I have to say is DAMN! That is the only word required for such awesome(fro a lack of better words)piece of work.

Tracy

I loved this poem! It described the way I feel about my husband. I loved it so much that I just printed it and can't wait to read it too him. I'm sure he'll love it. I know I did. It is perfect,.Great Poem! Thank you so VERY much!

lilprincess69

this is the best poem i have ever read in my whole entire life. it xplains everything

Anant

That was something real real real real real real real hot ! Beautifully written. One of the best poems i've ever come across !

Lauren

whoah, that got me.

Nadine

Awesome poem. Words can't express this poem. It is just breath taking

Tess

What can I say..It made my eyes water and my body catch fire. Thanks

jennifer

HOT

mike

awsome

Joe

No one word can desrcibe this poem, no matter HOW hard you try!

I agree . wow is all i can say

Oh my God! This poem is intense.

Allen

Excellent. Very intense. I only wish there was one I could feel this way with.

Raivyn

*mouth agape* that was. priceless. Very, very good, very descriptive, and very erotic.

Carolyn

Wow!Wow!Wow!Wow! This poem really got to us.Please write more like it!

selena

I LOVED IT ! I really does the trick.Makes you think if you've got it or not.Good Job

Donnatella

(Smiling.) Poet, I found your comment at the top, true and amusing. This poem is hot and shouts for more, more, more! I enjoyed reading it, but I felt as though I needed 'more.'--(smile.)

Aaron

VERY SENSUAL! for a moment i thought i was in the poem itself!

HOT!

Marcy

Very hot. I can feel his emotions..It made me sweat..

Kristina

I'm fellin hot, hot, hot! WOW! Amazing!

Joe

UNBELIEVABLE! The greatest poem I have ever read! Beautifully and elegently written!

Daniel

The poet paints a scene of incredible passion, with no hint of the akwardness that so often accompanies attempts to capture the sexual experience in words. Beautiful.

Sasia

mmmmm very heated & naughty, my favorite combo ;)

Stephanie

This poem is amazing. Wonderful use of metaphors and word combinations. I love it. I wish I could write that well. It gave me inspiration and makes me feel closer to my boyfriend.

kat

THIS POAM KEPT ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT, WANTED IT WAS LIKE I COULD SEE EVERYTHING THAT WAS GOING ON. I THINK THIS AUTHOR IS SO AMAZING AND IF I EVER FOUND A MAN LIKE THAT I WOULD HOLD ON TO HIM FOR ETERNITY!!

Deanna

WOW! That was very powerful.! This poem is so descriptive and straight forward. Wonderful!

sexybivy

you've been read from Puerto Rico..you used the exact words an expressed as no one ever has.it's done perfectly!you deserve a huuuge award for this and more!

sweety

wow, i don't find any words to define this poem.

Russ

WOW ! Thank you Michael for moving such inner feelings within me. I think I need my shower now.

Billie

I really enjoyed this poem. It was really great!

Christine

Beautiful

Rachel

I really loved this poem, it made me realize what there could be between two people. Thanks.

Shirl

I think I need a cigarette.....and I don't even smoke! Very vivid writing - I love it.

Christie

Whew.I'm a little out of breath here. Very sexy and more importantly, very beautiful. Congratulations on the ability to see sex for what is should be.

Jason

GREAT JOB Thank You

Michele

Steamy, what else can I say..... love, sex.... so beautiful. Thank you for such a wonderful poem.

James

Wow! As a guy reading this and thinking about my fiancee and I . . . well . . . She loved it too. Thanks for the great poem!

OLYA

that was a great peom

Andy

BRILLIANT never have i read a poem that captures my attention so completely.

Chianta

The poem was realistic and it makes you feel as if you were the object of his affection!

Jim

My sense of Love became lost in the wilderness of life. This has helped to find it again. For that I thank you.

Tish

As I read this poem all I could do is hold my breath, and wish my lover was here with me! I literally held my breath! Great poem!

Snoop

This was the shit-really-It totally says how I love my Shelly

Nara

Oh, my GOD! Its perfect

Serge

THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I'VE EVER READ!!, You got some TRUE feelings for that girl.

Nikki

Totally hot!

jackie

The best I WANT MORE, MORE!

jill

all i can say to this is O MY GOD, where do men like you live :) awesome work

Gina

WHOA! I'm wiping sweat of my face. I'm going to my man's house.

Melissa

Oh boy.

Paula

Your poem made me cry, its good to see that there is a man out there that can put this kind of a act into such beautiful words.

Baybe

Micheal, Your poem was great.Your described it very well..It was full of lust and sexuality, but was not at all dirty..great job!

Kimberly

WOW. I LOVED THIS POEM SO MUCH I SENT IT TO MY GIRL FRIEND.

Rachel

Excellent!

Bambi

You have inspried me with your writing, i once was lost but now you have inspried me a great deal to carry on, and share this with my lover as we experience this each night.

Liz

Michael, You wrote the words that describe me true.. I always want more just like she wants you!

NATHAN

IT WAS JUST 2 RIGHT!

sarah

i really like this poem. it is a very sweet poem and it remindes me of so much good job!

Rich

Wow man, your lady MUST be smiling! Tell us more !

Angel

wow, i'm a vergin. yeah, whatever. but, hummmm.. he he he.. well guess what I'm gonna be losing soon??? I hope it's just like how your poem describes it. that would be 2 good 2 be true tho. anyway you're a good poet and you're honest too. i can tell cuz you obviously write about what men think 24/7..

Bobbie

This poem made me feel as if i were with my love in every way. Cant hear enough ,dont stop .

Sandy

I love it!

LIZ

I don't know how many times people have wrote WOW on the response list but WOW..That was a great poem

ashley

That was beautiful, that poem just hit me right there looking back on the nights. Absolutley wonderful

Christina

This poem was so sensual and sincere. His words came out like a voice that told what his heart was saying.

Oksana

I wish my boyfriend wrote this for me!

Alesia

Very vivid detail. nice use of words..it seems as though you were writing this poem while doing the act described in it. VERY GOOD WORK!

vanessa

that was really intense.sounds like you two are really close. when i was reading it i felt as though i was their with you.its really good..i write poems also!

shun

that was wonderful!

Oscar

She agrees with me - you said it right.

San

You're right, some of us just don't get enough...and your poem is absolutely beautiful!

wet

WOW! That was so awsome! Keep it up! I want to feel like this again!

Britt

WOW! That is A GREAT poem! WOW! That Is Really Good! I Love IT!

Jewel_Orb

WOW! Describes every feeling I have ever felt. KOODOS!

Melissa

I want more! This was so sexy and so hot! I loved it!

Marion

This was unbelivable, it made me feel every detail, your girlfriends' a lucky girl.

sara

DAMN! this is the best poem ive read in a million years..ok,ive only been alive 18 of em, but i know how it is to be on the receiving end of this is, and its how u described it.i love it!

Hayley

ABSOLUTELY BREATH TAKING..I'M SPEECH LESS BCOS U HAVE CAPTURED EVERYTHING!

Nichole

This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read.I loved it!! Please write more like this soon.

Wonderland80

AMAZING!!!! :o)

Samantha

this is a very lovely poem

erica

this it the hottest poem. All i can say is give me more!

LEVITICUS

WHOOAAHH, WHAT CAN YOU SAY BUT WELL BRAVO BRAVO!

Kari

Words can not describe what this poem did for me.

Jessi

WHEW! That took my breath away that made me think of the way me and my b/f make love Ithink I will send this poem to him.keep writing man your good!

Sonia

This poem is so intense. I have no words to describe the feeling. Keep up the good work.

moniqua

You really could turn people on with that kind of poetry.keep it up your a good writer.

lantana

Wow am wet thanks gosh i can't wait to be with him the poem deserve more than bravo !!!

Alison

excellant, beautiful expression of love.

Amanda

It is a masterpiece. It explains exactly how my boyfriend makes me feel. Truely passionate.

Randy

I am not truly a poem person but I thougt this one was GREAT!!!

Sherry

This is one of the best poems that I have come across thus far, and I have read alot of them. My boyfriend lives in California and I in Pennsylvania, So we communicate by phone, and this poem really describes how we are together. Thank you.. Its really beautiful...

Ideaolist

This poem is among some of the best I ever read. Keep making em hot.

Angel

I LOVED THIS POEM ... IT IS SO BREATH-TAKING!!

Denice

This poem give me the words to express the way I feel. This poem is so real!

kim

Wow- what a poem! It really makes me wish my boyfriend wasn't a couple hundred miles away right now! I hate being at college!! :o)

Shellie

very erotic, the kind of passion we all crave, surely??!! beautiful!!!

Lawry

This gal of mine also wants more! A poem written for me.

Diane

WOW!!!!!!!!!! I can hardly breath.

steve

SUPERBLY DONE!!!!!!!

Sha

Give me more!!!!!

Saiqa

MASTER PIECE!!Breath takingly beautiful.....surely can drive lovers crazy....

NATASHA

THIS POEM REALLY GOT ME HORNY AND WANTING MY HUSBAND TO HURRY HOME FROM WORK. YOU DIDI A GREAT JOB IN DETAILS AND EXPLAINING OUR SEX LIFE AS NOT SO NEWLY WEDS. THIS POEM WAS THE BEST ONE EVER WRITTEN ABOUT GREAT SEX.

Zara

That was amazing, you are so in tune with your emotions. I am definitely sending this to my boyfriend because I know that thats exactly how we feel when we're together.

Jennie

WOW, I loved this! Sent this along to My Love. This poem made me blush with desire for Him...got my heart to pounding thinking of him next to me. ~smiles~ Thank you.

Todd

Hay! That's porno now. My girlfriend loved it.

Suzanne

wonderful....I love the ending!!!

Larry

We apparently have two insatiable gals.

WINTER

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM I CAN FELL IT AS A READ IT IS AS IF WHO EVER SAYING IT IT REALL HAPPEN I LOVE THIS POEM I LOVE THIS POEM.

I needed a cold shower badly after reading such hot stuff!I hope my JILL reads this many times!Thank you.

Paulina

All I can say is, love me again, let me devour and dive into you!!

Lav

Took the words right out of my mouth!

Taniesha

This poem is all that and some okay!! I was getting aroused just reading it. I give you a Perfect 10 for this!!!

Kajun

WOW!!! This is the best poem I ever read in my life! You made me want to get off of work and go make sweet love to my husband just like you wrote in your poem. Great job! Hope to read more of your poems.

SweetBijou

Intensely sensual! Wow!

Sheena

Oh my god!!! That poem was beautiful, it was so true. It made me think of my boyfreind. I WANT MORE!

Deb

Very Hot!!!!!

Danielle

That poem is well what can i say me. This is exactly how me and my boyfriend make love. I love this poem it is wonderful.

De'Anna

That poem was insanley sexy! That is a definate striker!

veejay

ooohhhhhhhhhhhh!!

Leah

YIKESSSSSS!!!!...Way to go Michael!! You gave me a cardio workout while I was sitting still! Keep up the good work..*S*

Andrea

I hope to someday be with someone who is so taken by me that they write such poetry! ;-) Keep up the good work.

Theresa

Just wanted to say i really like the poem, and i really want to read other ones from you.

undercoverlover

This is a very unique poem, it expresses what I feel many of us feel when we are in love and so passonately involved with the other, sometimes we need to reflect back on those feelings that we once had and thought we lost,this poem brings back those feelings!

Carrie

This was a great poem about making love that most people cannot put into words.

brandy

that was a way cool and erotic poem and believe me my boyfriend just couldnt stop reading it. . .neither could i

Jodi

bravo!

nikki

this poem perfectly describes the passion that my true love and I share you hit the nail right on the head (keep writing!)

Angel

this poem ,made me speechless with desire,i loved it .it was so detailed and erotic,just what i was looking for ,thank you,its a verry nice poem.

Mia

WoW! that poem was absolutely beautiful I don't know what to say, just good luck with your wrting cause i felt that and it was deep keep up the good work.

Martina

Thank you for sharing your poem. It reminded me of many memories, and im sure more will be had. Take care and smile:Þ

Linda

That is a wonderful down to earth poem.Thank you sent it to my boyfriend!

wish

Huuh!, what a daydream!

Rina

This poem really makes me arouse......so does my fiancee....& u know what happened next!!!!!

Secret

Damn!

ash

damn man! ur so good! gosh your poem is so breath taking!

dori

I read this poem often.:):)..what a feeling.

Johanna

** Excellent Poem **

Trevor

i am not normally a poetry lover but this pome is so intense that i read it over and over again and everyone i send it to is in awe

Amber

An excellent poem. It was like I could feel and understand what the writer was saying.

leticia

I believe you captured the experience in such a passionate but "tasteful" way.

cassie

i wish !

dave

hey dude ,hot poem,real good,my baby will love this one,keep it up ,

debbie

I can identify with passion and desire you express so vividly in your poem.... thank you for filling my mind

Debbie

I found this poem beautiful. It captures the human emotions that go along with making love.

Jimmy

I liked this poem alot!!

JENNIFER

THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS IVE READ IN A VERY LONG TIME...EXCELLENT!!!!JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO READ..

Tabitha

dude..very good petry i wish my boyfriend had talent like that*hehe* rock on!

Italian_eyes

Well....Ummm...WOW !!!...let me catch my breath. Your poem was filled with lust, foreplay, excitement, it was erotic, seductive, sensuous, heart pounding, extremely passionate, just very, very HOT....I read it to the woman I love and she responded.... well let's just say...Thank you (smiles)

Brittney

this is a veery great poem! I have been there, and experianced some of that, so i can realte from where its coming from!

angela

great job!

erica

This poem blee my mind away. never in my life have i read something so real.

mumma

All I can say is, wow, I feel better......

Savannah

Absolutely amazing! It's every girls dream. A man tending to all the womans needs. Historic!

Ivo

It is just perfect

angela

Well, just saying the poem did the job for me...hehe.

suj

" !!!!"...i am speechless

Sarah

Very emotional and real. Makes you feel as if Michael wrote this while in the act.

LINDSIE

THIS POEM IS SO REAL. I LOVE THE WAY IT MAKES ME FEEL. IF I COULD TALK TO YOU I WOULD TELL YOU HOW I FEEL.

Lane

Hot, hot, rhyme, rhythm and what not. GREAT Michael.

crystal

I loved this poem. It was fantastic!!!

Phil

I read this poem and it sent chills down the scrathes of my loved one. Hope you don't mind, but I had to send this to her. I wanted us to both enjoy this orgazmic poem. It made me howl, like a crazed wolf.

Carol

WOW~~~THIS POEM IS OUTRAGEOUS!!! VERY VERY SEXY!

Baby

this made me think of things i have that i never thought of before

Sidni

Damn! this has to be the best peopm I have ever read in a long time. You go boy! Your girl is quite lucky to have someone who values the true meaning of sex.

Branwen

This poem really hit home when I read it. It is very beautiful and I would love to read more of his poems.

Secret

Can I have you for my own?

danielle

wow that was an excellent piece of work that fefinetly leaves you tasty as well as thirsty

KatiaT

I was wondering if you could e-mail me that poem cause that thing was off the hook!

Kari

this, is a good poem. it's very.....descriptvie! I like it!

My heart is racing!!!

peter

Excellent i will send it to my lady

RODNEY

I LOVED THE POEM ANDSENT IT TO MY FUTURE WIFE AND SHE LOVED IT

Monique

I don't know about everybody else, but sex is exactly like that with my man. Thanks, Michael for allowing me to relive those precious memories while I'm so far away from him.

Bren

I think you are very talented and I really appreciate your dedication and talent on writting poems.

Mendy

Perfect

Kristen

I loved his work!! It must win!!

Kori

This poem puts some graphic images in your head.

Miss

EXCELLENT poem, very moving, the best!

Baby

micheal i gave this to my husband and we liked it and it really changed our sex life. and u have really out done yourself

Tara

This was just an excellent poem and expresses exactly the way my boyfriend and I are. I was so happy to have the privaledge to read it. Thank you

Mel

Very nicely done...

Jesse

This poem was very erotic, the writer used words that helped you imagine exactly what the writer was talking about. It was very sensual, erotic. I think it is really cool that a guy can write so beautifully, senusally. I wish my boyfriend could write like that. I am sure the writer has no problem finding women! Wow!

Jen

Your poem was so vivid, almost real. I wish I could write as well as you.

Danielle

this was a very discriptive poems it was the plny poems that came really close to what i was looking for. thanks always D.A.

CHUCK

I love it and sent it to my wife

Solissha

I love it!

Laveena

I loved your poem, it made me lust for the act you so acurately described

Ayisha

Simply Beautiful.

Wanda

This poem, is so touching because I am in a relationship, that have caused me to want more, and it seems like you found inspiration when I needed it the most. Thank you so much for touching my life.

Tara

Whew! **wiping sweat from my collarbone** Is it a little hot in here or is it just me?

Rain

WOW is all i can say...that was breathtaking

Dan

Hot. Like watching body heat (Kathleen turner) :) I loved it.

April

It was as if i was being touched in ways of passion. This poem is the BEST. I love it.

Dawn

oh, how true. powerful

princess

this poem was great

Amanda

excellent!

norman

Totally erotic! Allows your mind to live every moment.

David

Most awsome I was totaly thrilled on the edge of my chair it was totaly romantic and very warm. I loved how I felt like I was there for this act of such pleasure but really was not awsome take care.

yesenia

this poem was tite! I digged u alot with this poem keep it up man!

Celia

Very nice poem i loved it not many people can describe passionate love the way it was described here.

Rose

I love the passion and truth that was put into this poem!

Aphrodite

This poem makes me want to meet the author and see if his actions are as great as his poem is...I'm here for you baby!

Tina

That poem is so true, I know exactly what you are talking about. It exactly how I am too.

The

This poem is probably the best that I have EVER read in my life. Hey Mike, you keep writing like that and you'll get more women than you know what to do with! Keep up the good work.

Laura

It was breath taking!

mirna

Michael, I really think you have a wild imagination about passion and love. OHH, Honey if every men were like you baby. mmmmmm I think you are very erotic. LOL

babylease

That is with out a doubt, something that can make your heart race. Very wonderfully written.

Debbie

Very sensual and erotic to the mind as well as to the body... Very effective in arousing not only the physical needs but the sensual of the mind,body and soul.

monica

it's the bomb

jamie

I have chills all over, you have a real talant.. it was incredible

Rose

More! is a awsome poem. Very seducing! I wanted to send it to my lover but didn't only because I feel that it belongs to you and your's truly. You are a very awsome poet

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