About the Poem
I wrote this after a wonderful dream. I believe the poem describes it rather well. I'm hoping this dream comes true. Only time will tell.
More Than Passion
|Silently she awakes and gazes upon him there.
She sees him sleeping peacefully and longs to hold him near.
She reaches out her trembling hand to gently touch his face.
Remembering short hours ago, sharing love's embrace.
He stirs just then and spies her tender. loving stare.
Then places his hand over hers, stunned at the extent of her care.
Their eyes never leave each other as she caresses his soft skin.
She smiles at him slightly as she moves closer to him.
He takes her in his arms placing a kiss upon her cheek.
She turns her head slowly, his lips for her to seek.
A subtle moan escapes her as his hand explores anew.
Passions kiss intensifies as their rhythmic dance ensues.
He proclaims his love for her as he kisses her wanting neck.
She moves her hands over him finally to rest upon his chest.
Feeling her velvet secret engulf him again and again,
And feels her building climax escaping from her then.
She arches back, catches his eyes adoring their allure.
As they reach their perfect harmony, together once more.
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81 Visitor Comments
I thought that this poem showed a great deal of passion. so much so that it seems as though you're living in the moment while reading it. I personally give it five stars! Beautiful!
i loved this poem! it is awsome i am gonna send it to my boy in iraq
this is awsome!you did great
I loved it alot!
I LOVED THIS POEM, THERE IS A MAN IN MY LIFE THAT I RECENTLY MET, AND THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT HIM IS TOLD SO CLEARLY IN THIS POEM.
i really feel this for some one that i just to be with and it make's me think of him again that was the best time
i enjoy the poem and it touch my heart and you have my vote keep write them beautiful poems
the poem vas great. it brings out the sexual feelings in man in a most adorable manner
it reminds me of a time that i din wanna let slip outta my hands. so i can kina relate to it. showed it to my bf n he loved it! i love it because it has been written in brilliant candace and expressiveness.
this is byfar the best poem ive ever read. you really do have a way with words. u helped express myself through your words, its deep, and heartwarming. keep writing me and my lover LOVE it! BEAUTIFUL!
Just felt like me in the poem with a man I love deeply.
great peoms the words i cant say
WOW! This poem defintely brought back wonderful memories. It makes me think of my boyfriend and remember our love for each other. Great poem!
I like the poem, cause it remind me the fist time I meet my boyfriend, pluse I'm a very passion person
HEY! I like, I like. Sounds like me and my hubby!
I really loved the poem and the way you expressed yourself. When I read i got goosebumps that' when you know a poem is good.
i really loved this poem, it was very deep, i felt it. keep writing
Excellent, very subtle and beautiful.
It was just like one of my dreams. I still get chills.
WOW! Thats really all i can say about this poem. I loved it.
i loved the poem it's one of the best i've read sence i hooked up to this site. trust me dreams like that do come true. it's the greatest feeling in the world when you conect with the one you love.
This poem has put into words what i cannot, The beauty of sharing. Thank you so much for sharing it
This poem is perfect. It couldn't have been written better!
This poem is very meaningful. You sure did a wonderful job Sally! keep it up :)
Damn that was tight, so much sexual intensity just reading it made me want to call my man up and make love to him all night. Beautiful Baby!
WOW! REAL GOOD!WHEN YOU READ SOMETHING AND IT GIVES YOU CHILLS AND MAKES YOU PONDER IT'S GOTTA BE GOOD! YOU CAN FEEL THE PASSION!
This is so true, and I really feel this poem, so whoever came out with the words, your amazing, and keep it up, it is so hard to get the words out you realy mean, and this poem says it all!
I felt like I was watching a scene in a movie.
I think your poem is AWESOME. I totally relate. 2 months ago ,I would have said this feeling didnt exsist . but love found ME.
Well stated Passion.
This poem gave me goosbumps! My boyfriend an I are apart and I sent it to him , he said the same thing. This is exaclty how I felt the first night we were together. This brought us closer, even though we are so far away from each other.
wow this poem was great! good job!
Sally , This is the best I've read! Truly gives one hope of what Love and bring. Beautiful !
A wonderful work
This poem was the perfect poem, I needed a poem to break the ice for someone very special, and it worked. you truely are an insperation to me. thank you so much. (we are getting married in 5 weeks and i could use one for our vows if you are up to it. )
THIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED ME AND ITS FOR REAL COZ THATS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY WIFE, THANKS
This was a very beautiful poem. it reminded me of my feelings for my husband and i enjoyed reading it very much.
Lovely poem, very personal
Without question, the best I've ever read on this site. My lover adored it.
This poem is soooooooo deep, I really loved it. It accurately depicts the feelings, emotions, and thoughts between two people inlove making love.
This poem is so beautiful and it really touched me. I totally feel this way about my husband. I know exactly what your talking about. Keep up the good work..
I really liked this poem. Totally from the heart.
i never thought id find something this intense in spirt, thank you
This is a very good poem, if I had a $1000 dollars for a grand prize give away you'd be the winner.
its an excellent poem!!
Deep enough to give shivers, beautiful enough to wow a person!!
I really enjoyed reading this - reminds me of my one true love!
took my breath away ;-)
This poem physicaly and mently moved me. The poem is a great contribution and or love story I loved it.
Sally, This poem is so intimate and so TRUE. THANKS
Loved this poem. It really gets to the feelings one experiences.
Excellent: Can't express anymore then excellent poem because I can't find the word that is better than Excellent Poem. It is a beautiful poem. Touched my heart because of expressing the true feeling of loving
excellent poem. wow. real feeling and depth.
good poem it reminds me of the way i feel about my boyfriend
Warms my heart and gives hunger to my soul
oh my gosh...FANTASTIC POEM!
Last night my husband treated me to the most amazing expression of love I have ever known. I wanted to remind him and thank him in a special way.your poem is perfect!
I have not ever felt something so passionate!
Sent shivers down my spine it was very familiar to me!
so passionate and touching; heartfelt;
I wonderful open, honest piece of very tender writing - thank you Sally.
I truly feel the kiss upon my cheek and warm, smooth hand as if it were a feather
Sally, What a beautiful poem. I will send it to my boyfriend.
Extremely sensual and gorgeous!
This poem was intriguing for me only because my true love and i will soon be reuniting and this describes how we will be once we are together again!
YOUR POEM WAS SO TOUCHING AND SO HEARTFELT. IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHED ME TO NO END. THE LOVE AND PASSION THAT YOU DESCRIBE IS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY HUSBAND, BUT COULD NEVER EXPRESS SO BEAUTIFULLY. THANK YOU.
I've been there before with the woman I love. But words will never capture the moment. Good job.
One word: WOW.
Beautifuly done, once again "Sex" is not just That, but an expression of Love, commitment
as I read your poem it sent shivers thru my body. it spoke of the love and tenderness that my fiancee and I have for each other Thank you so much for this gift of poetry
I love these poems. I put these in my favorites. They are Perfect! Thanks for this site! :o)
This poem is wonderfull and artistic and open and the one thing that exites the inner inspiration in ones sole .
I was searching for the perfect poem to send, and it took hours of searching, until I found this one. Great meaning, great expression, great detail.
I couldn't have said it better, this is exactly what it's all about!
It was very good
i love this poem. It describes their emotions so vividly..
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