About the Poem
When taking a break from my computer at work, I thought about my fiancée and this little poem came rushing out of my pencil.
When Our Bodies Come To Meet
|by Marie Paradise|
|When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.
I can hardly wait to taste you
In the darkness of the night.
I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.
When our bodies come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
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21 Visitor Comments
I just love this one. The cadence is part of it. The use of space. Mostly it's the way it makes me feel.
that was very warm to read, I loved it. Please write more
that poem was good.
hey, that was a really good poem. im 15 and me and my boyfriend have been dating a lil over a year, and ur peom really made me think of him.
i read this poem to my gf, and it seems that she feel in love again , thax its helpin me lol
This poem is wonderful.
taht hot the poems sem like macking love every nite good job
All i can say is WOWZERS! Its short and i love it. I am a poet too but i caould never write like you! Hey that rhymes! Keep it Up!
The poem is really touching. It reminds me of my lover whao we used to work together. Keep on the brilliant work.
that mad me cry soo much.
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YOUR POEM IS SO GOOD! I LIKE IT VERY MUCH
please give up the day job. im just in a new relationship and that was fantastic.
your poem expresses the way i feel for my boyfriend, thank you
I love this poem so much. It reminds me of the way I feel for my girlfriend
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I´m speechless! Just love that poem. Amazing.
When trying to find the words to express myself to my love.this poem said exactly what was i my heart. I am not good with words but his poem gave me a chance to express what I feel in heart. Thank -you ever so much.
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