About the Poem

I wrote this poem when I was once madly in love to a very sexy woman named Rosa. She was a woman filled with so much passion and love.

The Heat Of My Desire

by David Farrar

In the still of the evening
Without sunlight to intrude
I see the twilight's in your eyes
As the moon sets up the mood

Playing music soft and low
While romance fills the air
I can't help but feel aroused
The very moment you come near

You submit to my embrace
While candles flick their flame
And the smell of sweet perfume
Seems to drive my lust insane

As I look into your eyes
And run my fingers through your hair
I taste the sweetness of your neck
As I nibble at your ear

I then whisper words of love
As you answer with a sigh
And in a very sexy way
Your sweet body comes alive

Your the heat of my desire
As we slowly come undress
I then start to lay you down
While you welcome my caress

With your luscious sexy curves
You have a taste I can't resist
And your breast show some response
When I touch them with a kiss

As I soak inside your love
To a sexy love condition
Feeling passions start to rise
While making love in all positions

You give me so much pleasure
For ecstasy is here
With you wrapped inside my arms
To this heated love we share

Now no one can come close
To this love that we inspire
For only you can fill this joy
And the heat of my desire

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177 Visitor Comments

i loved this poem. it was very sexy

david

this is exactly what i have been trying to express to a girl so special in my life. the poet that wrote this is forever in my prayers. thank you so much from me. crazy dave

Rachel

A truly amazing piece of work!

Alison

wow! that is a good poem. i cant tell you how good i think it is, that poem has just blown me away. well done, alison.

Dametria

that is so sweet

Tijuana

that poem is so very nice ur wife must love u!

Danielle

I love that peom! it is really good one. :)

craig

i like this poem very much because this is how i feel about my girlfriend(WIFE).

Patty

This is a great poem. It said exactly what I have been thinking. Way To Go!

adrian

My vote just means that I really like the poem

kevin

I am having a very passionate affair - right or wrong - this poem does it full justice. Love has no boundaries!

Sheila

This poem is very moving and it reminds me of my boyfriens Nick of four years and the love that we share for each other!

kyra

I really enjoyed it. It had so much passion into it. Im goind to give this to my man

Dominique

THIS POEM WAS OMG. NOW I HAVE TO GO FIND MY BOYFRIEND SO HER CAN BE THE HEAT OF MY DESIRE!

Diane

This poem moved me - thank you for sharing.

SUSAN

This describes me and my man. This is exactly how he feels! Thank you to the author!

Salm

Such a lovely poem, well written and it makes you love the one you love more dearly. I love this poem

smitha

its was wonderful.

William

Very poignant poem. thoroughly enjoyed it and the sentiments it expressed

Danielle

i love your poem it was awsome I would love to read more! Keep up the good work

Shannon

I can relate to this poem for I have man in my life who heats the blood that flows through my veins with the slightest touch or smile. Only sad thing is that I am not marrying him in six weeks. I LOVE THIS POEM!

Dawn

VERY EROTIC. A++++

conrad

I first read this poem about 2 years ago. It moves me today, as it did then. My girlfriend liked it too. Let's see if she remembers (no longer my girlfriend)

nichole

this poems brought tearts to my eyes and the that you say makes want to things if you feel me

Lynette

Its nice to see a man in touch with his inner feelings to display them in the words of this poem. WUN

Martena

The poem was so romantic and made my boyfriend feel so good. He was ready to cudle even more when he read the romantic poem.

natasha

this poem was so great im not even a man but I feel the same way

Danielle

This is a wonderful poem about how someone feels about the one they love. i wish i could write some things like that.

wendy

I really enjoyed this poem. I have always wanted a man to feel that way while making love to me.

Yoshi

AWESOME. JUST AWESOME

Jeremy

Beautiful

monica

i really like it i would give it to my boyfriend haha

whitney

this poem i so good i thank you so much for writing this! Im only 16 amd this touched me so much! Thanks again! ***whitney brannan***

maria

this is wonderful poem it was amazing it really shows what most passionate relationships go through.

nico

its touchin

Estelle

What an amazing poem. it's so full of passion.

Dannielle

I really like that poem. It touched me dearly. It reminded me of the love of me and my partner have for each other.

hope

this is very touching can relate to this u are awsome keep them comming

makus

a truly wonderful poem congratulations

Amanda

Now I think that this is the bomb. I really really like this one. I can really relate to it, it's really great!

EBONY

VERY INTENSE. VERY INSPIRING. LOVED IT!

JESSICA

I LOVE THIS POEM, I WOULD LOVE TO SEE SOME MORE OF YOU WORK. SOME MORE LOVE POEMS. WHEN YOU HAVE SOME EMAIL THEM TO ME.

David

David it was great thanks

Lucy

Very exotic. You have a great choice of words. Keep up the good work.

lindsey

WOW! when i first heard this poem i thought it was so moving but what i didnt no is that my boyfriend didnt write it for me like he sayed he did and i hope your reading this

Arelis

It is wonderful to know a men could express their passion so beautifully. I felt like I was there with him at that moment. Great Job. I loved it

Christopher

This poem has substance and really lets me feel what it says.

mrs.taylor

i love the poem. it was romantic a i would like to read more.

Lori

You are the man! I could imagine myself right there. You have a deep expession that can only come from passion. I would love to read more of your work.

Janice

This touched the depth of my soul, the very feelings that I could relate to in my current relationship.

tabitha

that was a truely a wonderful poem

Lovely

I would love to see more of your work. It's so real and it doesn't seem written. It seems more like you're sitting right beside me telling me a story.

Courtney

goodness gracious! i loved the poem! it was amazing. i began to reminsince and chills were sent down my back. keep up the good work!

Narenzgal

Very exotic!my guy luv diz poem!

candy

you go david! i love this poem. i am really feeling you with this. keep it real and good. for you have a talent that must go on. i really truely like this poem.

Sharla

I love it

Deandris

this is a very special poem. i love every part of it. good work.

Gary

After reading this poem I had to send it to the person I thought of and love. It described exactly how I know I will feel the first time we make love. I couldn't have thought of the words myself.

Sandra

I Love This Poem! Its So Deep & Sexy! It Made Me Want To Go Home To My Boyfriend. David You Truly Have A Gift Keep It Up!

nick

wow, i don't know if that has ever been put like that before

Liz

That has to be the best poem I've ever read! I got completely lost in it. Keep up the great work!

jaide

excellence

magda

love it!

Rebecca

it was touching!

Tameka

I really love the peom it remind me of myslef i would rate this a ten

alores

this poem was great. it reminded me so much of how my boyfriend and i are every night. you did a very good job, and please keep up the good work

DADDY

I WAS REALLY FEELIN THAT. KEEP DOING WHAT U DO!

Short

hey babe i just found your poem and it made me fall in love with you all over again (if that's possible)! never ever stop writing these awesome poems because if you do i'll. well you know the rest! can't wait for more to be published.

Chardonnay

that poem was deep,very passionate, and sexy keep up the good work!

Sara

OMG! I absolutely love this poem. I'm so glad that there is a guy who can write a poem that has meaning but yet is still about guy things. I would love to read some more of your poems. You're a great poet.

Erica

I really love this poem this is how my fiance makes me feel

saxon

this poem was lovely and within each word i read, memories of my husband and i, just comes alive. your poem did that for me and i'm very greatful. keep up the good work this is the best poem yet

Lish

David, you are truly blessed with the ability to have words come alive. This poem is so pure and private that I do not even want to share it w/ someone. lol. please continue to write!

Dik

I always am astonished and surprised when I see how some people can find so easy words to tell so much. My deepest compliments and respect for this poet.

will

very well written

debbie

this was a very beautiful poem. i can really relate to it, because i am hopelessly in love righht now, and i can really feel it.

dena

I thought this was a really good poem. I hope to find more poems from David.

Michael

This is very descriptive and drips with passion

donna

i really love your poem. it is very sexual in all types of ways. it explains how a guy feels about a girl!

TIA

WOW, THAT WAS SO AMAZING. IM SO IMPRESSED. IM GLAD SOMEONE IN THE WORLD HAS/HAD THE FEELING I DO RIGHT NOW.

Brittany

I really don't know what to say about this poem. It was amazing. The words were so strong, passionate, and intimate. I think the poem was better that a perfect 10. Very beautiful. Great Job David!

Irina

Wow, you got skills! I wish a guy would write ME a poem like that.

Jazmi

This is a deep poem that seems to be true about love & lust!

Kat

Your poem sent shivers down my spine.

med

realy a fantastic poems i liked it.

Manda

HOT! This poem was sweet. a real turn-on. You go boy! :)

Brittany

I loved this poem so much!

dana

Thank you David this describes me to a tee.

Zolee

hey my friends! it's a top hit to my heart! my love is named Rosa.

Yari

he got talent he real it's how ladies out here feel it describe me it's the way me and my boo! feel 4-real thats the dazzle my nazzle.

jean

congrats! it's a great poem.

Aweda

I'll tell you how I felt about this poem when I start breathing again.

liza

Absolutely devine. i can taste it. very moving. well done

Sarah

Amazing, truly a beautiful piece of writing.

Shea

I really enjoyed reading your poem. You have a nice choice of words. They (words) say alot

yamyam

i love it.its ggrrreeeaatt

Loretta

Loved it, it was so emotional.

stephanie

this poem brought a tear to my eye when i read it. it makes me think of my one and only love and it totally expresses my feelings for him. it is very touching.

Danielle

You could just feel the emotion in this poem and im gonna read more by this person. Great job! Keep it up

Green

All I got to say is..WOW

Megan

David has true talent. Very well done.

heather

I think this poem was intimate and very sexy! I love it!

Elizabeth

I really liked your poem

Becky

This poem reminds me of my fiance. I love it.

Trinity

I love this poem.It has alot of meaning and is so sweet that he wrote this for her.

Donnatella

Oh, poet. I could most certainly feel your desire in this poem. She was a lucky lady. This poem was also very soft and gentle. Good job.

gina

it was soo amazing. It made you picture the love and intamacy being shared. to the one who wrote it you are unbelievably talented.

Alteris

your poem was very touching, and i love everything about, keep it up

Clark

wonderful,

Kyra

I think this poem is good, very good. His coice of words and positions are erotic.

Christian

Your poem was excellent man. You are really good. Keep it up.

Seba

EXCELLENT

Kristie

Okay I have 2 give you your props excellent towards the end of this poem all good got's 2 give ya a 10. Keep up the good work.

liz

This poem is beauitful. I can completly relate to what youwrote. I printed it out and gave it to my fiancee for V-day..He loved it..The best thing about your poem is that you can feel everything that you wrote, which is awsome.

Mayra

I love this poem.It explains everything me and my sweet boyfriend feel! This poem is real touching

Kelly

This poem was truly touching and very passionate. You could feel the authors memories and love that he once had for Rosa.

amanda

excellent poem very well written!

Lissa

That was so wonderful it made me feel so warm inside.

Larissa

It sent chills down my spine. I wish my boyfriend would write stuff like this for me.

Jackie

Lust and hungry between two lovers.

Barbie

*that's very romantic*

Tyrico

It's all good and I can definately relate to this! Keep up the excellent imagery!

Heather

Totally captivating!

melissa

i felt the passion in this poem, and it gave me chills.

Teri

I thought this poem was wonderful. I could picture every detail. Being in a long distance realtionship is hard, but when I send this to my boyfriend hopefully it will give him ideas for when we meet again.

Naren

This be a heartwellming poem

Rob

Very sensual, very mood inspiring... A powerful poem!

arghh

Ranea

Wonderfully written and very passionate....bstgirl

russell

great poem says exactly what i was feeling.

GEORGIA

LOVE IT,

Heart_of_Jazz

It is a very lovely poem that flowed nicely... it was good...

Kim

I love this poem this is the best one.

Peanut

It's good to know that there are still people out there who like to have sex.

Brown

WoW! That was a VERY nice Poem! I Loved it!!!

Starr

Boy this poem has prominate tender heat. I loved it!!!!

Larry

He's up to it again. This guy is tops. More please.

Danny

This poem is so hot! This is how I like it.

EVELYN

I FELT ALL THE PASSION TO THE POINT IT WAS ME WHO WAS ROSA!! WONDERFUL FEELING

Istvan

Kickass!

Mary

Love this poem,Would love to have my lover send me a poem like this one.

MELISSA

DAVID THAT WAS A VERRY NICE POEM I LOVED IT. HOPE YOU HAVE A LOT MORE LIKE THAT ONE.

Lawry

He is super and should write more

Alexandra

A Beautiful poem of sexual love...and much more.

David

This was a fantastic and well written poem!

Hans

Love and lust, i can't resist the feeling, and this poem is filled of it. Gentle but hot. You simply have to read it!

Jessie

Great!

Christine

I really liked your poem. It was great, it was so real.

Charolette

Bravo! This poem was written with excellent taste. I would like to see more of David's work.

Stephaine

LUV IT.Describes me and the luv of my life.

tiffany

I think this is a good poem . I really Know what your talking about .

JAMONICA

THIS IS A VERY LOVING POEM AND I REALLY DIG WHAT YOU ARE SAYING.

sugar

i love that poem it's very deep and full of feelings keep writing poems

Beverly

That was a GREAT poem...in a way it describes how I feel for the love of my life when he is near me!

Robert

This poem is exactly what I and My love feel when we are near or apart. But never apart for long. Thank You

tll

excellent.. food for thought. i have a long distance love that is coming in 10 days and this was insight to their visit.. thank you

lorraine

I always wished for this kind of romance. I had it once but it vanished into the night. It is comforting to know that there is men out there who feel things like romance. great job!

Clifford

The poem is very powerful. It really caught my attention.

Gabriel

This poem is fantastic

Donna

I absolutely loved it. Strangely gentle yet simply erotic.

Johnna

Words such as this cannot even begin to utter from a pperson who has not experienced true love. This was so beautiful and heartfelt. I could just feel the words as i read them

Rachel

Your poem "The heat of my desire" was one of the most endulging poems i've read in a long time.

Gina

I do believe this poem was VERY well done. Thank you.

april

I really liked that poem

Karebear

I really love his poem "The Heat Of My Desire", because it is the bomb,it really blew me away.

surfrun

good stuff

Jose

this is a great poem and it relates to me in every way

Farah

This is so beautiful, so vivid, it makes you feel what he was thinking when he wrote the poem

lani-gurhl

touchy!

Robbie

Its very touching and in dept. It gets you into the feeling of actually having that special some one right next to you feeling there sweet caress.

Lindsay

So sexy yet he brings in the hint of love they shared as well! Awesome!

sandi

THis is a well exicuted poem with the proper choice of wording , dedicated to a lucky woman, describing his love for her clear down to her very soul.

teah

I think this is a really deep poem I liked it a lot.

Sarah

This poet is very talented,and so are many others but i really like his work the best!!

shanaya

now THAT is a love poem!

norm

EXCELLENT

GalaxyHunter1

This is a great poem,capturing some heart felt passion....good stuff..reminds me of Yeats....too cool

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