About the Poem
This poem describes the true feelings of people who love each other so much that they are willing to give the ultimate gift. This poem is dedicated to my one true love, my muse, my soul mate.
His Paradise |
| by Amanda D Besserer |
| Bring me to his paradise a feeling of within, naked to his loving eyes caressing me with sin I long to feel his softest kiss upon my dampened skin Bring me to his paradise, and let our bodies meet the trickle of the rain outside would shower us with heat, I wish to be his fantasy and make our love complete. |
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53 Visitor Comments
Cecelia
I have loved this poem for a number of years, and have sent it to many lovers.
nikki
lovely . pure . real. true
MaryAnne
I enjoyed reading this poem because I am in love and one of the most important things to me regarding my lover is that he experiences " his paradise " brought on by me. I want him to be happy in every way and solidly satisfied. His feelings are very important to me and make me so very happy when he conveys his emotions to me by inviting me to share in " his paradise. " His paradise is my paradise. Thank you for sharing emotional bliss in such a beautiful way!
JONNIE
I JUST WANTED HIM 2 KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM
anthony
hello amanda you poem inspired me in a very strong way and i possibly would like to discuss your feelings that made you write such strong poetry i wish you the best of luck and hope you e-mail me.
Lettie
excellent
VICTORIA
I THOUGHT YOUR POEM WAS SWEET AND TO THE POINT.
Chrissy
beautiful and true!
Monica
very strong loving poem!
Robyn
its amazing and beautiful. very precise but yet wonderous.
Amber
I lov this pice it is really nice, it is short and sweet which is how alo of poems should be great job!
Oceania
I love this poem
sarina
beautiful.
Shemeka
this is a very good poem and whom ever wrote it should keep up the good work. sincerely, SHEMEKA R. TAYLOR
Tiffany
Amanda was saying some of the things I have been feeling about my relationship and never knew how to say it! Thank you for saying them for me! Tiffany
corinne
Just the kind of poem I love to read. My exact words to my lover.
Pamela
Very Hot. Great poem
Candice
This poem was very nice, I liked it and I sent it to a very good friend of mine.
nicole
i love this poem it's great!
Triasia
I think this is really sexy and romance poem every gurl can relate to all the girls out there who want to be a boys fanties.
Katie
You poem is GREAT! ~SEND ME MORE~
vannessa
i love it!
Brooke
I enjoyed this poem a lot. I thought the person who wrote this took thier time and effort into this poem. GOOD JOB!
ANNET
THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL I AM CRYING AFTER READING IT IT IS JUS WONDERFUL YOU DO IT
Mandy
that poem was really good you obviously gave it alot of thought and in a way i can relate to it so don't stop, your poetry can take you far i know because it did it for me
salome
VERRY NICE POEM. WELL DONE JOB KEEP UP!
inita
keep up the good work.
ChArLEnE
I really liked your poem.It was short and simple but right to the point
jeannie
very beautriful poem, would love to hear the story that inspired it
Jennifer
Very Good Poem..Very Nice work..
Jen
This poem was soo simply romantic..reminds me of a long distance yearning for love..beautiful
rangle1
I enjoyed this poem very much. It explains how alot of feel inside.
Misty
GReat poem
Stephanie
I Love it,it says so much in so many ways.
Kate
now that was hot
Ashley
It was really great! Keep um coming
David
Just wanna say great poem,it rocks! like so many in here that lag in imagination..yers stands out!
Leighe
NNiiccee!
Martha
wow! a really good poem. It's deep, touching, perfect. I give it a 10. (*_~)
Precious
I love it. It was short and sweet.
Violetz
A wonderful depiction of the endless human struggle to surrender to love.
BDA
Lovely
Susan
I wish to be his fantasy too, but know it cannot be.
Dr
The use of aliteration would have created a prolotariate feeling to your poem. Thus the emphasis would have been on a confrontation of love and not a metamorphic reaction, but i am impressed
Cindy
Quiite moving
Dustin
That not a bad poem keep writing
Mariann
simple way to describe true love
Sylvin
this poem is the best of the best
Tiffany
Girl, that was the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lindsay
that was awesome!
kanisha
I just would say I know how she is feeling in this and it is completely beautiful to want to give your all to be complete in osmeone else world of lust and love and passion. I like all the words that she chose.
Lyn
Beautifully said...
mark
Hits the spot
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