About the Poem
This poem describes the true feelings of people who love each other so much that they are willing to give the ultimate gift. This poem is dedicated to my one true love, my muse, my soul mate.
|by Amanda D Besserer|
|Bring me to his paradise
a feeling of within,
naked to his loving eyes
caressing me with sin
I long to feel his softest kiss
upon my dampened skin
Bring me to his paradise,
and let our bodies meet
the trickle of the rain outside
would shower us with heat,
I wish to be his fantasy
and make our love complete.
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53 Visitor Comments
I have loved this poem for a number of years, and have sent it to many lovers.
lovely . pure . real. true
I enjoyed reading this poem because I am in love and one of the most important things to me regarding my lover is that he experiences " his paradise " brought on by me. I want him to be happy in every way and solidly satisfied. His feelings are very important to me and make me so very happy when he conveys his emotions to me by inviting me to share in " his paradise. " His paradise is my paradise. Thank you for sharing emotional bliss in such a beautiful way!
I JUST WANTED HIM 2 KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM
hello amanda you poem inspired me in a very strong way and i possibly would like to discuss your feelings that made you write such strong poetry i wish you the best of luck and hope you e-mail me.
I THOUGHT YOUR POEM WAS SWEET AND TO THE POINT.
beautiful and true!
very strong loving poem!
its amazing and beautiful. very precise but yet wonderous.
I lov this pice it is really nice, it is short and sweet which is how alo of poems should be great job!
I love this poem
this is a very good poem and whom ever wrote it should keep up the good work. sincerely, SHEMEKA R. TAYLOR
Amanda was saying some of the things I have been feeling about my relationship and never knew how to say it! Thank you for saying them for me! Tiffany
Just the kind of poem I love to read. My exact words to my lover.
Very Hot. Great poem
This poem was very nice, I liked it and I sent it to a very good friend of mine.
i love this poem it's great!
I think this is really sexy and romance poem every gurl can relate to all the girls out there who want to be a boys fanties.
You poem is GREAT! ~SEND ME MORE~
i love it!
I enjoyed this poem a lot. I thought the person who wrote this took thier time and effort into this poem. GOOD JOB!
THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL I AM CRYING AFTER READING IT IT IS JUS WONDERFUL YOU DO IT
that poem was really good you obviously gave it alot of thought and in a way i can relate to it so don't stop, your poetry can take you far i know because it did it for me
VERRY NICE POEM. WELL DONE JOB KEEP UP!
keep up the good work.
I really liked your poem.It was short and simple but right to the point
very beautriful poem, would love to hear the story that inspired it
Very Good Poem..Very Nice work..
This poem was soo simply romantic..reminds me of a long distance yearning for love..beautiful
I enjoyed this poem very much. It explains how alot of feel inside.
I Love it,it says so much in so many ways.
now that was hot
It was really great! Keep um coming
Just wanna say great poem,it rocks! like so many in here that lag in imagination..yers stands out!
wow! a really good poem. It's deep, touching, perfect. I give it a 10. (*_~)
I love it. It was short and sweet.
A wonderful depiction of the endless human struggle to surrender to love.
I wish to be his fantasy too, but know it cannot be.
The use of aliteration would have created a prolotariate feeling to your poem. Thus the emphasis would have been on a confrontation of love and not a metamorphic reaction, but i am impressed
That not a bad poem keep writing
simple way to describe true love
this poem is the best of the best
Girl, that was the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was awesome!
I just would say I know how she is feeling in this and it is completely beautiful to want to give your all to be complete in osmeone else world of lust and love and passion. I like all the words that she chose.
Hits the spot
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