About the Poem
Wanting to capture the essence of a time of passion in an open meadow. And the continuing nature of love, the progression of feelings as well as the building of relationship. The nature of time counted as moon travel.
|by Daniel James Burt|
|Moon hangs, almost full
pieces of cloud scatter,
glide in soft, summer breeze.
We lay in our meadow
listening to the sound of night
her head nestled on my arm.
Night air made for kissing
dances upon our skin
chilling wherever is damp.
She stirs, quietly calls,
my name hangs on summer eve
floats about our meadow.
She sighs, moves closer
snuggling in, once again
her breath stirs, awakens.
Hands join in gentle caress
exploration shared and renewed
oh, so smooth and lovely.
We turn, lips meeting
slow, softly, delicate
building quickly to demand.
Crying out, beginning and end
collapsing, breathing ragged
moon hangs, slightly fuller.
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55 Visitor Comments
it captures the emotions of the writer, and in so doing, the write managed to give it poetic justice.
I love nature so I can feel this poem to my heart
this poem is so sweet it reminds me of my lovely dear clerence. keep it up
Thank you. The poem was innocent (gentleness is good rest for the soul), did not take advantage, exploit, or assume. It made me cry, and crying was the release I needed after a summer without my love. Thank you.
I'm a strict judge, not anything is acceptable to me, but this is amazing and true art!
this is the way it makes it so easy to find the right keep up the good work
I met my soulmate online at a music site. He lives half of a world away. We fell in love. We have not met in person yet. Since this is new, we record our voices with a little music in the background and send it MP3. I decided to record poems of Love and passion. Passion is a new word to him that I had to explain because he is just learning English. I loved this one. Thank you for sharing it.
i enjoyed that poem very much it was wonderfull
This was a beautiful poem and very well wrote
I love the way the author captures the imtimate moments. Sensuous but not raunchy.
just so elequent, passionate, beautiful
I LOVED IT, GREAT JOB,
This poem really touched me. I am doing A-Level English Literature at the minute, and reading this gave me the chance to look into it deeper than when you first read it. I basically untied the whole of the poem, and seen the deeper meaning of it. I believe this is one of the best written poems i have read to date.
As soon as I read this it it reminded me of my girlfreind.
that was the most sensual poem i have ever read. Keep up the good work
this poem really touched me and you should post more of them
I think it is a wonderful poem. Brings memories.
this poem touched me deeply keep,up the good work
REALLY A GOOD JOB. KEEP IT UP!
i love this poem it actually made me cry when i read it. thank you daniel james burt for making such a beautiful poem i absolutely loved it.
Wonderful, brought back some beautiful memories
its nice to see a boy expressing feeling so willingly and through such well-written prose
it was a wonderful piece, i liked the descriptions used to describe the sition it was beutiful touched me,
This is a very touching poem. it said things that I think about but, are unable to set to words. Thanks, Darrell
Well When I was reading it, it felt like I was really there with someone. Someoen that I was gonna spend the rest of my life with. But yet I haven't found it. It was a really interesting feeling that I never felt before.
It was a very warm and understanding poem. For someone to understand the poem they had to have gone through it it was wounderful thank you for letting me read it.
this is a intensifying poem
This poem is beautiful, it touches me, inspires me and makes me think. Keep up the good work!
this is the most sensual poem i have read on love. it has touched me because that would be how i'd explain my first night with my first and present girlfriend! thank u it was a pleasure to read
sounds like someone who has really been there. BEAUTIFUL!
i vote yes your poem is on point its bangin i loved it keep writing
Baby this is one of the reasons that I fell in love with you. You always know just what to say
I enjoyed the vibe of this poem which leaves of feeling of natures influence on the power of seduction. I rate this poem on the higher scale
beautifully subtle, soulful
Touched my heart, my soul. and the heart and soul of my love as well.
What can I say other then it is a truly sublime piece of work. You have encapsulated the feeling brilliantly.
"Night air made for kissin' dances upon our skin" That is incredible! This is really a wonderful poem.
Just so beautiful!
That was so sweet. OMG! I never knew a guy could express so many feelings.
It is nice to see that atleast one man out there is not afraid to say what he feels. This is a type of guy I would love to get to know! He has real talent!
I have always wanted to lay outside during the summer with my boyfriend and just relax and i never found a poem that suited that need thank jyou so much and i just sent it to him
i have a boy friend, and we broke up, got back together, borke up and got backk together, and the whole time, this was what we needed to stay together, i love him, and he loves me just a bit more
Beautiful. It's really great. You are so talented!
A sweet poem, that heats the soul. Goes slowly and tastefully. I really liked it.
i give this poem a 10 out of a possible 10.excellent wording.nice work daniel.
I wish I could find a man who wasn't afraid of his feelings and could express himself so freely. The poem was suttle yet expressive, romantic not lustful. Thumbs up for a 21st Century Man!
That's very deep, and the moon sounded very romantic!
You did a wonderful job think the poem is excellent
this was absolutely breath taking
very moving poem, I was never into poetry until I came upon your site.
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