About the Poem
I have always been a person who chose to write about my feelings rather than to discuss them.
Basically, I had been friends with this person for less than a year, but I knew that this was something different and something so much better than anything I have ever felt before. Before I knew it, I had fallen in love and now all I can do and think about is how lucky I truly am. I dedicate this to you - I hope you know that (you know who you are).
As Days Flew By |
| by Peng |
| The very first time I saw you, Was special how we met. You took me by complete surprise. I knew my heart was set. As days flew by, we talked again, But you never seemed to care. I tried my best to help you out, By a favor here, or a favor there. Although I made a fast approach, Our friendship grew and grew. I realized how deep I cared, But the feeling I felt was new. In time I became attached to you. From a hug, I wouldn't let go. I soon saw how close we were, And the feeling was good to know. For you, I wrote sweet letters and songs. You were on my mind all day. The thought of sleeping was nowhere near, Unless I knew you were okay. It hit me then, what I was in - A unique and precious love. For the person I said was only mine, Was an angel sent from above. The minutes without you turned into days, And the seconds with you flew fast. I could only wish to see you more, And make each moment last. The times I spent with you, Were what made my heart complete. I knew one thing for sure, Without you, my future was obsolete. And now, we love just the same, As it doubles day by day. I stare deep into your precious eyes, Yet I'm still speechless to what I should say. With you, I'm in a whole new world. You bring out the best in me. It's hard to picture you not there, When you taught me who to be. Yes, the road ahead gets hard, When things may only seem rough. But because you and I try so much, We'll stay strong and get by tough. Though problems may lie ahead someday, And either of us could be right; I promise to always be by your side, And I promise my heart, so hold it tight. And so, each night, beside my bed, When there's only bright stars to see; I pray that we may never give up, And will always remain you and me. |
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565 Visitor Comments
Tamyra
I loved this poem so much because it's like the author captured the essence of being in love and loving a very special friend. I was very moved and hope to read more poems by this author.
Briana
This is such a beautiful poem! Great Job.
charlie
Peng, Your words are as a clanging bell that resound the very thoughts that I have for a very special person in my life. I need to be patient, until she also is in touch with her feelings. Thank-you for your words. I pray that you continue to be inspired to translate your feelings and thoughts into a medium that is understood.
Laura
My word! This poem really touched me and made me realise a few tings as I have had a recent experience to this! The poet who wrote this has certainly got talent! Hope to see many more soon!
Tina
perfect, wonderful, amazing summed up our love totally thank you x
dana
wow. it really remembers me of my friend
Marie
this poem really touched my heart because i feel the same way about my best guy friend he and i are so close and i do not want to lose him he mean so much to me and i love him with all my heart.
Albert
i love it
nilda
I love this poem it has touched me. It reminds me of my friendship with a close friend.
Elizabeth
As I read this poem, I completly broke down into tears. I have already read it a few times, and I feel like I wrote this poem. I feel this exact way about a guy I have not even known for a year. As soon as I met him I knew he was the one. We are now best friends, and I want to be more then that, only I don't think he wants to be more then friends. I would do anything for him, anything at all. I only wish he knew how much he truely means to me. I really felt this poem was very emotional for me, because I feel as though it relates to what I am going through now.
Jessica
This poems was very touching because you see I fell like that about my friend but he does not know yet. it did bring a tear to my eye it was very good.
lina
i really like it its nice it reminded me allot of things i luv it
Travis
This poem is great. Kind off relates to me. Keep it up
toy
IT was awesome. I felt everything that The author was saying. IM going thru the same situation at THIs moment!
melissa
this poems says everything i feel and want to say. Way to go, keep up the go work
Dawn
When I read this poem I had one person in mind and it totally describes my feelings about him. thank you soooo much for sharing this poem with me and the rest of us that have people in our lives that mean more than just friends.
Den
Yes!
pranita
I can understand that what ever you penned down here was straight from your heart. It reflects many such hearts in this world. Its truly amazing.
amanda
this poem really touched me i love that u wrote this now i can share it with others about a great poem!
Ramatulai
A touching poem that reminds me how i truely love my husband because i can find my true feelings in that poem.
Kendra
i just love it im in this situation right now!
Elissa
This is the best poem I have read so far. Mostly because it represents my past experiences with my significant other. Very nice.
Justin
Wow. This, I swear, is exactly what I need to say to this girl I really like, but she says she doesn't like me like that anymore(, and I hope you don't mind if I use this to get my point across to her. This is by far the BEST poem I've ever read. Amazing
Tulasi
When I first received this poem, I only skimmed the contents, wondering why someone named Peng would write a Halmark card. About a month later, I went back to read it again, more curious this time to deeply absorb the contents. At that point it hit me how profound it actually was, and believe it or not, I became so obsessed with this poem for so many days that I, myself, couldn't sleep. Months later, this poem happens to be the most important thing I have ever read. I love this poem more than life, and it may be that I never stop hearing it in my head in times of doubt or confustion. Thank you Peng!
Tosha
I can relate to this poem, it was really nice.
xXxrachaelxXx
this poem is so amazing. it describes everthing in my relationship. he is my true love and my best friend. he taught me so many things and i wouldnt be the person i am without him. thank you for your poem XxX
Amiya
WOW THIS POEM WAS THE BEST I HAVE EVER SEEN AND THIS IS THE TRUTH. WOW I LOVED IT AND I SENT IT TO A PERSON THAT REALLY MENT ALOT TO ME . IT MADE HER HAPPY. I THANK YOU A MILLION TIMES FOR WRITING THIS . THANK YOU . ARE RELATIONSHIP GROWS EVERYDAY BECAUSE OF YOU . YOU ARE AN ANGLE SENT FROM GOD THANK YOU!
Josue
i realy like this poem because it just express what just happend to me.
Charity
"My God" wow! you make me cry. This is great. You stir my hope of fnding true love that knows no limits, the love that searches no end. Excellent work. Keep it up. Thank You
christine
This poem really touched me. It made me think of all the times I shared with this special someone, that is no longer in my life. Thank you. and keep up the good work. God bless.
Lindsey
this poem made me think about how my boyfriend and i got to gether! it was a real eye opener! thank you i feel like this poem was wrote about my love life.
Rachel
This was a great poem and i am feeling the exact same way right now. so i know how it feels and it feels great
jim
This is a well -written wonderful poem. Touches my heart!
merlin
this poem is awesome man
Krystal
i love that poem
MIchael
This poem was very. I can't even describe how it relates to me. Its like you hit the head on the nail. Great poem. Do you publish? you really should. You have a very keen way with poetry.
Kookie
This was very special and I can relate to these words. It made me want to cry.
ranjana
i usuaslly like poems . ihave got so much interest in reading poems especially which expresses ones emotions. this poem was something really special among the poems which i have read.
Tamekia
I think this poem really touch me inside,because me and my boyfriend have a long distance relationship and we are so much in love. Even though we may have problems we stil stay true to each other and reminds us that we really love one another and never want to be apart.
Emily
I love the poem. It touched me in alot of ways. Keep up the good work in writing poetry. xoxo
rochelle
this was so 1st timer feeling this poem is moving and very touching the way it was written is exactly how i feel the things that were said are xactly what i do. but finally it was expressed into words. i loved it so much.
jenny
This poem is very beautiful
christy
when i first read this poem i cried it touched me so much. Me and my husband meet on the enternet and was away from each other for about a year and half. we have been married for five years and for Valentines Day this 2006 I printed this Poem out and framed it and gave it to him. He was as touched as i was when he read it it reminder him of our relationship too.
Richard
omg this is the greatest poem
kayla
your poem is so good it brought back lots of memories and brought a tear to my eye
rohan
i think that poem was relly good i liked it and i had a good time readin it to
Christina
I can't believe how well you described the feelings i had for my first love, i've not loved anyone since but knowing exactly what i felt, has been felt by others, gives me hope i can feel that way again.
Cheryl-Anne
I truly loved this poem, it spoke about how valuable friendships is to every individual, support and love from friends. In the most troubling times it helps to know when friends is just there to listen too and have broad shoulders too cry on.
emma
i think that this poem is unique, i loved it from beginning to end and it touched me, thr reason i personally think it toucheed me so much was the fact is that i feel the same about a special some one and even though times seem rough (if you have the right person) there will always be a light at the end of the tunel. thank-you for writing such a wonderful and deeply expressing poem.
Jessica
I really like this poem. It is really touching for those who love friendship.
Genia
This poem is beautiful. I am in a similiar situation right now and your words made alot of sense to me about my own feelings. Thank you, you have given me a sense of clarity.
katrina
that poem reminds me of my boyfriend and I it hits the spot. unfortinatly my boyfriend is no longer with me today, but when he was alive we had the same feelings like that and he grew on me. I loved him very much and he loved me too, I hope that you wont have to experience what I have, just hold on tight to the love of your life because you never know when they could not be there the next day.
Angie
This poem was the best that I've read the words fit me and my platonic friend to a T. Beautiful poetry.
patricia
as soon as i started to read this it hit me. everything in this poem is me and somebody that i hold very close to me. i printed it out and gave it to him hoping that it would make everything better and it did and i just want to say thank you this poem said what i couldnt say and it made his see things in a different way
Ka'Mesha
good job
John
I like this poem because it reminds me of what i have been through with my ex who i still abosulutely love with all my heart and soul
crystal
i vote this poem b/c is was really touching to me in many ways and alot more people may be able to realate to it. love ya
alejandra
i loved this poem it gr8!
michelle
I loved this poem. It was Great.
Terica
U know m life story!
Jasohn
Sometimes you just find words that somebody pened that specifically talk of your feeling.
stacie
I read this poem and it sparked a hope in me that my boyfiend and i will be able to pull through the difficult times that lay ahead and that we face today. Our love started out as a friendship with an undesribable bond and has turned to love, resulting in us as a couple. I will keep this poem in mind as my sweetheart and I travel through the times ahead, both good and bad.
britany
i liked this poem alot. it reminds me of me and this guy i am with now. he lives an hr away and neither of us drive right now. not to mention he works like crazy. but im diggin him alot. and i never want things to chnage between us. i love you james!
shorty
i loved it i actually had a relationship just like it so i know exactly how it feels. kep writting the great stuff.
Marie
This was a beautiful poem, and here I thought I was the only one who felt that way. Especially never wanting to let go of the hugs. I hug my friends all the time but HIS hugs mean so much to me and I hope I never have to live without his loving arms. (and everything else too of course)
samantha
so beautifull those words so pure. tears roll over my face. this poem moved me I am sure. I love this poem and I would love to read more
Catherine
i love this poem. you did a great job. these are just the feelings i have about my best friend.
Piero
Great. I start a distance relationship in the last month, and this poem is exactly all what we both feel one for each other. Peng you are a genious. Thanks.
char
your poem was very touching because the words said it all that some1 can feel for a person who they truely love. i no that now coz i was wiv some1 i loved and no longer wiv him now after 7months we ended it and now not even on speaking terms good poem though and all the best
Leslie
I really loved this poem because the relationship that i am in is excatly how i feel about this one speacial person in my heart.
Crystal
This is a nice piece of work. I liked how the author transitioned to one verse to another. It flowed the way it should be. To top it all off, it described the way I felt before. Good job!
The Poet
The poem had a good rhythem and made me want to keep reading kinda
Sheena
This poem was BEAUTIFUL!
Diantra
Very beautiful
jess
I liked it. it was full of heart-felt emotions. great job.
Jennika
When I read this,everything I feel for the man I love is in this. He taught me how to be. I love him, and he is my best friend. I wish I could make him see my truth. thanks for the poem, it is the most beautiful and painful thing all at the same time to be so in love with someone.
Evelyn
This poem is very realistic and touched my heart a lot! After reading it I realized that LOVE in return does really exist somewhere, and that you should never be afraid of taking chances. I give this poem five***** for sure. I'am definately going to write this poem down for myself hopefully today. Keep up the great writing.
sharesa
very similiar experice
jessica
hey i really like your poem. ive been with this guy for a little over a year now and weve been through a lot of ups and downs and some people dont agree with how i handle our situation but i really feel that he is the one for me and i love him to death. and from being with this guy for so long ive started to write some poems and of course there all about him. i really loved your poem it wa amazing
Madhur
Nice One!
queen of poems
this poem is quiete a pretty little thing you could do with thinking your words over a little but is really beautiful and keep up the good work and maybe one day you could go really far with your tallent
Gloria
THIS PEOM REALLY DESCRIBES MY FRIENDSHIP WITH MY BEST FRIEND. HE HAS ALWAYS BEEN THERE FOR ME AND I WILL LOVE HIM TO READ THIS PEOM AND SHOW HOW MUCH I CARE!
Anjelica
this poem is so moving it reminds me of my situation. I have a friend who i'm in love with and it hurts bc he doesn't care for me.
Katy
Hey Peng, this poem really touched my heart ,because i have a friend just like that. thank you for putting this on the sight so many people can read it and cherish thier friendships with others thank you so much Katy
paula
This really touched my heart. I hope your love for each other will last a life time. Your writting is almost undiscribeable. You are a exstremly wonderful writter.
YESENIA
beutuful poem
Buffy
This is a really good poem.
Heather
I really liked this poem, it sort of reminds me of my best friend and I, and how we became what we are today-and that is explained in 1 word. "unbreakable". Very nice poem, very unique. and very deep as well. great job!
Colt
This is the most meaningful poem I have read in a long time. It really hits home. Thanks
Lucy
This poem was so touching. Im sure alot of people can relate to it. It made me think of someone special in my life and in my heart!
fabiola
oh my Goossh! i love this poem! it says somany things that im going thru with this guy that i love very much! its almost perfetc. this poems is awesome!
Shantell
I absolutely loved this poem. It describes excactly whats happening to me now. When I read it, it touched me so much I just started to cry. You did a wonderful job on this poem and it was beautifully written. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
angie
that was just a great poem it really explained every feeling you go through when your in love
Amber
I loved dis poem, and I sent it to a good friend of mine and he liked it very much, it was like an outline of me and his relationship. I love dis poem, keep written folks!
Melissa
This is a really good poem. It reallyhit my heart because me and my boyfried was a friendship that grew to love. We are getting married next year.
angela
This poem touched me to the point of tears it reminds me of my own relationship to the t and is just simply beautiful thank you
wilson
this is great poem very well but .
Dulce
I really loved this poem because it is just like the situatuion I am living right now. It's ike I wrote it from what was happening to me. It's great. Please keep writing poems like this!
angel
this poem is the best dam i would give up anything to write some poems like these but i really like this poem because it touched me very wellll done ;-)
alexis
It was really deep. When i moved away from my perfect dream guy i knew it was over.
Kabie
Love this poem. Really makes me think of the special person in my life.
Cory
Great it's just wonderful and expresses great emotion which I feel about the one I like and well just wonderful
JaZmInE
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM AND I FEEL JUST THE SAME WAY ABOUT MY CLOSE GUY FRIEND. I GUESS I'M IN LOVE BUT I'M TOO SCARED TO TO TELL HIM MY REALLY DEEP FEELINGS FOR HIM
Roseline
I loved this piece quite alot. I fell in love the same way and it reminds me of my own special love who became my hsband to date. It shows sincerity of the poets heart.
Josh
the Peom was awsome this girl i met was the girl i loved for 4 years but this time she still does remember untill to day so thanks to the author
Danny
Very Nice! You have a gift that makes people love.
danae
the poem is very good saying that a good friendship can be very easy to turn into love. b/c that person sees how much that he or she cares about that other person.
Charles
This poem definitely has the passion of the love felt between true friends. This reminds me of a situation I am in now and says everything that I could not say. Excellent work.
candance
I LOVE THIS POEM TRULY. REASON BEING BECAUSE I CAN RELATE TO EVERY LAST SINGLE WORD. TRULY A MASTERPIECE IN MY EYES.
Lowen
its a very touching poem
Joe
This poem is expresses my heart to a T!
Tinecka
This poem was very touching and i really really liked it
Jamie
That is exactlly how I'm feeling right now whenever I'm around this guy I feel like he'll never let me down I could never be hurt and this guy is just an awsome person all around. thank you
arpana
great poem seem poett had written for me same like my story. thank u n request u to not to stop writng love u
Tashia
This poem touched me so deepley! This poem describes exactly how I feel abouy the man I am together with right now, whom I am also engaged with now. At first he was my best friend and I could tell him anything about me and slowly, day by day we got closer and closer. Now we are planning on getting married. Thank you for writting this poem, now I can tell him word for word how I feel about him without leaving details out!
JODIE
This poem touched me, for a breif moment I felt as if it were me I thought is was great I love poems that grab you. This person has talent. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Javonne
I loved this poem. Me and my best friend hooked up, and we have been in love ever since.
Debbie
I have a new man,we are just friends,right now,but we are getting ready to move in together,in another town and state. Your poem expressed my feelings for this new friend,and the way,I hope it grows into more. I liked your poem a lot.
Ranniyah
This poem is very touchng it reminds me of me and this boy. i rate this poem amazing and wonderful. you should be in a poem bookor sumthing.
Robin
Oh my god this poem just touched me inside it is the greatest that i ever heard and i bet you wonder why. It is because this poem just describe everything that i have been through and felt for the love of my life that i have been with for 4 years i mean it is special you are a great poet keep doing what you do and i promise you'll achieve in poetry is special!really its a beatuiful poem! -Robin
Poppy
It is a very subtle line, indeed, the one between love and friendship and love. I have lost friends because I did not know where to draw the line and when to stop them. It is a very delicate situation when a friend proposes or makes a move towards something more. You are scared that you will spoil the friendship if you allow them to do it or even if you don't. In the end, though, it is all the same. Not many people are equipped to handle situations like that. I was not, but, now I am. It was lovely reading this poem, thinking of all the things that could have been.
dawn
I really liked this poem. It made me think of my ex boyfriend. At the first of our relationship this is how he made me feel and it was a good feeling. I wish that it could of been that way through out our whole relationship.
Wolverina
This poem explains exactly how I feel with my true love. As I read it I realized the author is in love because I could relate to every single word!
Angela
this is one of hte most touvhing and well put together poems i have ever read. to the writer: you have done an amazing job with this peice! good luck in the future with your writing. im sure you will make it very far.
not0riouskid
Yo who ever Wrote this you are the best i've seen so far man so much feeling and emotion in this poem the frist thing that came outta my mouth was DAMN you have no idea what you've worte it's like oneway street strigh in to da hearts man DAmn good stuff
Lisa
Beautiful and very touching poem!
Mindy
This poem is very much heart felt, it's not a poem that was just made up. I feel almost the same way about the man i am in love with. Everyone feels in many ways, when i read this i was touched and knew that who wrote it, ment it. Love is precious and when it is true, this is how we feel.
Natasha
This poem put into words exactly how I felt. It was just what I was looking for!
Harris
This is a very pleasant poem. its real poet and explains feelings in reality . my girlfriend only said "waaaaaw" as it said it all!
Stacie
My name is Stacieand i was really have a hard day because the day that iread this poem was the day the man that i was dating/sleeping with were suppose to have a long talk about our so called relationship. we had 3 scenarios and they were 1)stay at the pace we were going 2)walk away but still remain friends or make a commitment out of it. i forgot to mention that he already has a girfriend. we have bothe told each other that we did not mena for this to happen, but it has and we have to deal with it. when iread this poem it just struck my heart and i now know what to do. THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD POEMER LOL!
Danielle
I love this poem, it's so touching to the heart!
Dale
I was looking for something special for a dear friend, when I read this peom, it was so perfect that someone on this great blue marble captured what I was feeling and how I felt and put it into words. Thank you. Thank you for this site
Didier
damn pretty nice poem . i can use this . lol ;)
majick hippo
I can really relate to this which i find amazing as i am not normally someone who feels like this thank you
Deandra
This poem is one of many I hope! It's a great poem. I really liked it. It touched a little part of me. Thanks for your work.
chinika
I loved the poem. its almost scary how much I can relate to it. its like you took how I feel from my heart and put it into words. I cant wait to read more ;)
Marty
When I read this poem I had to read it again for only a few weeks ago I wrote a poem so similar I could hardly believe it. I think your a really good writer and can really express your feelings. If you carry on you'll fli high!
mike
i loved this poem words cant express how this poem is
tamara
hey i loved this poem. i feel the same way and i can really relate to it i have printed this out and put it in a frame and hung in my my room i love it thanx for inspiring me!
tara
this poem touched me in away my boyfriend does too, coz my boyfriend maded me the person i am today and i give my heart to him this day forever coz i love him
Marlene
That poem was one of the best that i have ever read.
dragon
its really warm n touching. good one.
Natasha
This poem was perfect. It really touched my heart.
loretta
Fantastic! Awesome! This is exactly what I was looking for my husband. It came straight from the heart and said everything that I couldn't. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to reading more like this!
Idanie
This poems is an inspiration to me, i love how it described every details
Leila
I think this poem is really good. while i was readig this poem i stopped to think about my ex-boyfriend. i was wondering if this poem is really true or not and then it came out to be true. i been searching for a poem thats just true about me and him and then this poem comes along. keep up your good work!
melinda
This poem touched my heart in so many places and I realized exactly how I see my relationship now. I hope to read more in the future.
Krystal
I fell in love with this poem because it has real feeling not fake stuff! the feeling was real and so heart felt! i loved it!
Brooke
In two words, breath taking. This poem is just beautiful. Everything in it explains how I feel and how things have been going in my life. Thank you, keep writing.
April
Your poem was great. It expalins exactly the way I feel about that special someone, from the beinging to the end!
Kristina
i can't believe someone feels the same way as i do. i just met a guy about 4 months ago but as soon as we first talked, i knew there was something more than friendship. he came to realize the same. we are friends before lovers, but our love will never go away.
Meghan
THAT IS AWESOME! you need to keep writing because if all of your poems are this good you will be famous some day! this reminds me of me and a guy named Jason! Thanks for writing such a great poem!
BRANDIE
this poem was very touching
NATHAN
LOved the poem u have a uniquely beautiful way of writing , i feel the truth in it.
Ken
I want to thank tou for writing this. I, a teenager, am struggling with my life and there has been one friend who has alwys been there for me. That friend i love dearly and I could not seem to put my feelings into words. I, a poet myself, struggled to use my pen and paper to express my only emotion, yet i found myself here, and with luck, and the will of God, i found this beautiful poem. Thank you! Tahnk you! Let us only hope that she will enjoy it as much as I did.
Tay
I think the poem is really sweet. I rate it WONDERFUL!
toni
this poem is the best I've herd all night, it soundas like me and my boyfriend-Zack
KIMBERLY
I LIKE WHAT YOU WROTE BECAUSE IT MAKES ME THINK ABOUT MY BOYFRIEND BECAUSE ONES WE WERE BEST FRIENDS, AND I GUESS YOUR LOVE GROUS FOR THEM THAT'S WHY FEEL THAT SPECIAL SOMETHING FOR THEM THAT YOU CANT NEVER STOP THINKING OF.
Yashira
I love this poem it touch me alot. So who ever you out there keep up your great work. I would love to here more poems about you.
Rachelle
This poem really touched my heart. I was trying to find words to how I was feeling and this poem hit it right on the nose. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
John
This is very good. Loved this. it touched me. It is like our relationship.
Nina
I love this poem! It was exactly what I was in search for! I loved the way the poem sounded just like me and my boyfriend- Trent! It's so breathtaking and moving! This poem ROCKS!
LiL
Thanks for writing this poem. I been looking for something that would express how i feel about this one friend i have. You have created the perfect one. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
liby
THis is a wonderful poem . it makes me feel the old me and my first love .
edward
its a beautiful poem. I felt all the emotion poured out into his work i liked it alot.
KIM
IT WAZ BUEATIFULL I GAVE IT 2MY BOYF NE LOVED IT
Tina
This poem reminds me of someone I like. This poem is a heart breaker. I like this poem alot because it shows alot of feelings for someone. Peng you are my favorite poet.
Yugi
THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL USUALLY ABOUT SOMEONE I No. u r very good! ^^
Christine
LOVED IT!
river
I loved this poem it brought tears to my eyes it is exactly what i have aleays wanted to say to my best friend and also crush aaron. keep writing great poems like this.
LeeAnn
I just wanted to let you know that poem was very touching. You done a great job writting it and have a very special talent.
Michelle
I love the poem! It sounds just like me and this guy i am like in love with and i knew it when i first saw him!
Erin
Your poem is awesome. It describes my relationship with a friend perfectly. Thank you. I needed to know that I wasn't the only one out there feeling the same way
RuthAnn
What a great poem, I just got lost in it!
Laurent
Thanks for reminding me of those first wonderful encounters. Your words are true and worth remembering when hard times try to destroy something special.
Bon
Your poem was great! it said everything I was feeling about my new boyfriend! Keep up the good work and I'd like to hear more poems you've written! Thank you so much for writing down what I felt!
Rose
This poem exactlty related to my situation and relationship with someone whom i really love and how we met and so on. and i really want to thank the author for this poem
sandra
I feel youre poem,it came from youre heart an flowed into the hearts of others, who hav met, or about to meet one another. Beautifully written. and youre name alone has a certain something, u r truely gifted. please continue. #:-)
Kim
This poem touched my spirit. Thanks Peng
Kim
I LOVE this poem! It touched my heart so. I met my g/f when she was going through some ruff times & this poem describes my days with her just as if the poet lived it with me. I read it twice & cried both times. Thanks for the memories.
shyam
i love this poem. it suits me so much. its just amazing.
Shar
This poem was very deep. It fit the situation I'm in perfectly!
Ash
Great poem. keep up the good work!
Chelsea
This i a great poem. It describes me perfectly!
Jade
I loved te way you described your feelings so beautifully. It reminds me of how me and my boyfriend Josh- we met in the weirdest way, we were friends and with other people when really just wanted each other. All I have to say is great poem and I hope everything works with your friend. :-)
Sara
I just what to say that the poems they help me a lot and i am happy that they are on the internet. Thank You
Faith
Breathtaking!
Titas
This is just great. I think that somebody has read my heart and converted the feelings there in to a poem. I cant express my gratitude for this poem and the poet
kim
its really sweet i like it. u speak everyones mind at one point in time think u
Carla
This is a very good poem it really speaks exactly what is being felt from the heart!
April
This is the sweetest poem I have read in a long time. It touched my heart.
jesus
i think this poem was great , this is exactly what i was looking for,thank you for making this poem
Daisy
i really like this poem because i can truly say that i relate to it. i've fallen so hard for one of my best guy friends also. the problem is, i don't know how to say it. i'm so scared that i might ruin our friendship. =T
Pilar
Thank you for writing what I couldn't say myself. It's a very true and powerful poem.
Cupid
I am female and i fell in love with this girl last year, this poem describes it all. i love poetry i try to write it my self because i think its a good way of expressing your emotions. A well-loved poem!
J
There are no words that exist to describe how beautiful & real this poem this - for the first time, I found a poem that said exactly what I felt for someone - THANKS!
Arin
This peom is beautiful and totally fits what I feel.
Chris
I really like this poem for the fact that it brought out everything that I went through with my new love. And how I feel about him now. It was a really good poem and I myself give it four big stars up.
sha
simple, sweet, beautiful
nate
all i can say is what popped in my when i was done i am speachless
chery
Hey I like your poem. Your a great writer, keep it up. Your poem is easy to ubderstand and even if someone wouldn't been your situation they would still unserstand what you are expressing. Even though you don't know me I would love to read more of your poems
Aina
am not good in this but let just say that i was amaze by reading ur poem. its very touching n well excellent. keep it up. take care
Tammy
that poem was SO great, it seems like it was made for me and my boyfriend, he moved recentally, and i don't get to see him every day like i used to. in a couple of months he's moving to europe and i wont be able to see him at all, so i sent him your poem and he told me he is going to print it out and keep it to remember me.
Margo
WoW! This poem is very good one. I feel same way, and keep up writing the poem!
Nelly
This poem captures the true depth of love at first sight. It touched my heart with its warmth vibrations of fluent words. Much gratitude to the author for the gift he/she has.
Candie
Thsi poem is the best I swaer it is soo good ans you tell it was well thought out! Exellent
Angela
I absolutely love this poem! it describes my relationship so well. Josh and I have been together 6 months. we met a year and a half ago in the most unusual surcomstances. i want to thank the author for sharing this poem with us.
DEANDRIS
THIS IS A VERY SWEET POEM. IT'S VERY EMOTIONAL AND IT GETS TO THE POINT ON HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT THIS PERSON.
Anna
There are so many things I could say about this poem but to put it plain and simple,I LOVE IT!
STacy
This was a sweet poem. I loved it
Lynds
This is an amazing poem describing love! I felt as though I was looking into a mirror of my own love life while reading the poem for the two are identical!
SNOOPY
well this poem is good it would relate to everyone that iz in love with that specail person it makes me think about this girl i realy like
Larrie
The words flowed and touched me so deeply. This friend of mine that I care so deeply for, but that never gives me a chance to get to know me, is the person I would want to share the poem with. You said the words that I have always wanted to say to him. It made me cry.
Heaven's
This was such a sweet poem. It relates to my relationship with my boyfriend, who I have been going with for almost a year.
Renee
WHEN I READ YOUR POEM IT TOUCED ME SO MUCH, BECAUSE IT SOUNDED SO MUCH LIKE MY HUSBAND AND I SO I PRINTED IT OUT TO KEEP! KEEP UP THE WORK!
Danielle
I think this poem can relate to many people in this situation. Peronally, I think this poem is a really common situation and this poem really expresses our exact thoughts and feelings. It felt like the computer were reading my heart and feelings.
Lutz
I found this poem relates to me in so many ways, it just took my breath away. I really like it and would like to hear some more of your poetry.
Rod
great poem I can relate to this as I have fallen for my best friend /flatmate and feel that she is my angle sent from above just for me .
Die
This is a very incredible poem. good job, and i can say i relate to this poem very well.
Die
I just wanted to say that this is a great poem and thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Michael
Definitely thoughts that I can identify with. Very beautiful in its simplicity.
Alice
Wow, I was taken ababck with this page. Amazing.
Kasper
WOW! Peng this poem is more than an amazing, its truthful and its very deep in emotions.I'm battling right now with love or the girl that i love but this beautiful poem has read my mail totally and put words even to the way that I feel toward my girl. Its a master piece Peng hold on to it. Great and amazing job and dont never become so hard hearted that you cant feel it.
Matt
This completely relates with me and my love Katie.
Cassie
i can relate to this poem so much. this is a great poem keep up the great work. :)
Barbara
I would like for the author to know that this poem was perfect. Just what i was looking for and i gave a copy to a special person.
ABURNELLE
ONE WORD: "CLASSIC" !
Lucy
I have cryed all day when I read your poem - As Days Flew By - It does have a great impact on my life. "Keep - up the good work"
Jamie
This poem makes me think of a lot of things. Right now I've been talking to this really sweet guy and for some reason he has started to make a difference in my life. We are now going to go to Homecoming together and I'm so excited to being going with someone special to me.
Shwu
I love your piece of poem here as it truly brings out the beauty of finding oneself in love and what's more it started out as being friend in the initial stage. It does relates a bit about me yrs back when I did let one of guy friend know abt my feelings for him...He did not feel the same abt me but nevertheless I did not have any regrets about pouring my hearts out...in fact right now we're still friends in contact:) So i urged those people out there never be afraid to voice out your feelings as we only have 1 chance in life to gain our own happiness and we wun have any regrets in life once we voiced out our innermost feelings.
bElieVe
a piece that thoroughly descibes all the inner feelin'.protray the detailed stages of a relationship.well-witten. deep one.
Lindsey
I can really relate to this poem..it was worth while to take the time to read..keep writing..
Bridgette
I love it!
Kelly
wOw!!! i like this poem so much.. itz really kool... its almost like sumone is goin through the same thing as i am... wOw... peng.. ur such a great writer.. u should keep on writing..thanxs...
Mandi
Peng, this poem was awesome, I dunno how many people I sent this to, but it was a lot! You really know how to get people's attention that's for sure. thank you so much man!
HAKIM
what is to be said;our real thoughts. wonderful!
Carrie
it's beautiful
Amber
well i like this b/c i knwo what you mean. i have a guy that we have bascally the same relationship and it is really hard to she him go through girl after girl and i love him dearly btu there is that friendship there that i dont want to ruin but i still love him.. thanks for puttign this out there b/c that lets meeh know im not alone.
lindsay
This poem is something I can reallt relate to, thank you !
April
This poem is perfect! Thats how I met the man of my dreams..and now we have been together for about two years....we started off as best friends too! You are a good writter, keep up the good work
Aaron
I really liked this poem because I can really relate to it, because I met this girl @ work last year, and from the moment I first saw her I knew I would end up falling in love with her.... and it happened.
Sam
About 6 months ago, I became friends with a guy, and from the start we knew there was something between us, now we are starting to get closer and soon I know we'll give a r/ship together a try and I'm sure it'll work for the best - I'm not good at putting my thoughts down, so thank you for doing it for me! This poem touched my heart like I'm sure it has to everyone who has read it!
forsaken
i'm speechless....what a beautiful poem
Tara
I really loved reading your poem it made it all seem worth it. Love that is. Thank U!
Lalith
Beautifull
Michael
This is a great poem! I am planning to send it to a girl I really like.
Friend
this is the best --> i wish i could say more !
bethani
i literaly cried when i read this poem becauseit reminds me of me and my best friend>>i love my girl like my own sister! i can talk to her about anything and the first time i saw her i couldn't stand her but then i gave her a hug one day when she was crying and we have been friends ever since then
evelyn
what a well worded poem. i too have a hard time in vocally speaking my thoughts..but this poem hits all the right thoughts and make them seem endless,in words. great job!
ChElSeY
1 word: WOW !
Jessica
This poem reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend. He's away at college and I miss him like crazy when I can't see him and when I do get the chance to be right next to him the time goes so fast. We hang on so tight and even when things seem to get rough I can'thelp be realize without him I wouldn't be complete. This poem captures that feeling and I'm so glad so may people know what it feels like, it's the very best feeling in the world. It's an amazing poem!
Praba
This is an EXCELLENT poem! amazingly written, so simple, yet so effective! great work!
Amy
This is a beautiful poem. It's exactly the way I and lots of others feel. Thank You for writing such a touching poem.=)
Angel
All i can say is that it was really deep and i could totally agree and understand it..keep on writing, your really good
jennifer
i really loved this poem. it brings me back so much memories. you really know how to touch someone's heart!
shang
This is an excellent poem! I can relate to it.
LUCY
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM WHEN I READ IT I THOUUGHT ABOUT THE GUY I HAD BEEN SEEING AND HOW I FELT ABOUT HM
Monica
Great poem! I loved it
Mau
Excellent! Bravo!
Zack
WOW!
Shorty
This poem is kool. love the way how Peng express it self! keep up da good work!
Justin
This poem is great! This relates to me and my situation exactly! If things are going good, but you want them to be better, I am sure this poem relates to you in 90% of it. I can't get over how great and true this poem is!
anshul
it is just too perfect.. relates to me sooo much. great job mate
Robyn
What a beautiful poem! LOVE it so much!The way you chose to depict it was beautifully set.Thanks for writing it.It's going to remain in my mind forever.
Shavon
I really felt conected to this poem. Last summer, I went to a summer camp and told myself that hopefully I wouldn't get feelings for any boy there because the camp lasted only 6 weeks split into 2 sessions. Well the 2nd 3 weks a new boy came from my home state. At first he was just a friend, but then it also grew into a feeling of .dare I say.. maybe. Love. Everytime we talked, hugged, smiled, or even looked at each other, I felt my heart skip a beat and my temperature rise and drop. He gave me chills. I still talk to him occasionally even though he lives 40 min. away. I still care for him and also onday hope that we will be together. Thanks to your poem I have found the words that know how I feel.
AnN
I LOVE THE POEM.. AND I HOPE U KNOE THAT..:). TALK TO U TOMORROW.HOPEFULLY U SEE THIS..MUCHLOVE BYE
andrea
This was a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
Elizabeth
All I can say is wow. I sent this poem to my best friend. We're in the middle of trying to decide whether or not we want more than friendship. It touched both of us and we've decided to make this "our poem." Thanks for helping me tell him how I feel. :)
bank
This poem meant a lot to me because I was in love with a girl who I just met. And like this poem, I just strating to fall in love with her. I LOVE IT! THANK YOU FOR THIS LOVELY POEM..
Kate
This is an amazing poem. The words seem to take a visual effect! Thank you!
Baby
Your poem brought tears to my eyes because it fits me so perfectly! I have one thing to say to you keep writing those poems!
jam
I LOVE YOUR POEM .KEEP WRITING YOUR A VERY TALENTED WRITER!
bhelygirl
i was really moved by the poem. it makes me think of my having someone really special in my life. the way that we met and the chance that is given to us. it makes me feel that what we have is really special and that no matter what, he will always be in my heart. even if he's not around right now to cheer me up he'll be always remembered. i'm always thinking of him and i'm looking forward to the day that we'll be together again
Bruno
I really like this poem it reminds me of myself and a very good friend of mine. we have both fallen in love with each other from the moment we met.
LaRissa
That is so true I was the same way with the guy that i fell in love with the first sec i seen him I write poems 2. i really enjoyed reading this one!
JAcob
This was a very sweet poem. I hope you and that special person do well together.
natasha
the poem is beautiful people love it keep the good work up you are a pure poet good luck
trecy
I see why you have two stars**! Your awesome! You deserve many more stars. You really know how to touch a persons heart; you touched mine!
Lauren
WOW! U must b so pleased that u have soooo many votes! This is a lush poem and I will b sending it 2 my boyfriend! Cheers! Keep writing! xxxxxx
Tammy
This poem really touched basis with me and my relationship with my boyfriend. Those are the same feelings I had when I first saw him and still have, even through the troubles.
amanda
I loved this poem! I was really what i am going through right now. I understood it so much. It was excelent I loved it
Jessica
It is a very touching poem and it kinda reminds me on how i got with my guy
Shannon
I loved this poem! I was looking for one to describe a relationship I was in, and this one fit to the t. Thank you!
Natalya
This is one of the greatest poems ever.
D.A.G
I think this is a great poem with a lot of meaning.It relates to my situation.I only hope that my relationship is strong enough to make it through the rough times.
Jasmine
This poem is great! For realz! It explains every thing that has went on in my so called "love life" And explains that if you stick together that everything that was meant to be will work out!
CHULA
THIS POEM SAID THING THAT MY HEART FELT BUT DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO SAY! THANK YOU FOR THESE WORDS. YOU ARE TRULY GIFTED!
leen
I really love your poem..It really hit meeh..I'm so touched to your poem.
april
This poem is very good it describes a relationship I once had.
Steph
This poem is great. It reminds me so much of some one in my life. Thanks for writting that b/c now i can tell that special someone i care. Thanks and kepp writting.
Eric
Perhaps one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. It is truly touching and moving. I hope this is one of the best in this category because it definitely deserves that title. This poet has some real talent and this poem is great!
curly
really describes in a perfect way. N it close also to my condition rite now.
Tonia
THIS POEM IS REALLY BAUTIFUL I'M SURE IT IS A POEM WE CAN ALL OR HAVE RELATED TO IN OUR LIVES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KEEP WRITING POETRY!
Ino
My mouth is agap when I read this. Bravo
DeeDee
I LOVED it.iT touched my heart. I wish i had my first love back in my life but what can we do when he wants not to be with me me but that other person too.I miss him dearly, but life goes on for each day that goes by it has made me strong!
Anil
The poet very beautifully describes the feeling when you realize that you are in love with your best friend. By best wishes to the poet for such a touching verse.
Karen
I thought this poem was awesome,because the man I am in love with this fits him perfect
Ethan
i can totally relate to this poem. ur a GREAT poet keep writin poems like this! it seems like whoever you wrote this about or to u love em with ur whole damn heart! again GREAT JOB
Stan
As I read this poem, all I could think was 'Wow, this is me..' It's very well written and I love how it can relate to probably everybody else out there. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
juli
this is one of the best poems i have ever come across. maybe its because i can relate to. i too have a man that i love and would never want him to leave. VERY AWESOME
Rob
Your words say it all, i wish i could think and write words like this. My "special" friend Lusha from Australia will not what hit her ! Thank you
Stuart
A moving poem that reaches to the depths of your heart
Dianne
This poem discribes exactly what I have been going thru. My friend of years....turned into a lover....and then the love of my life. I believe that because we are friends (and were friends frist) that our love will last.
Lubasha
very cool poem. i felt as if the words were mine because it so relates to my relationship with...ehm...him, who i met online except mine perhaps didn't turn out to be as much as this.
Troy
I think this person has a great talent.And wish him/her the best
Deana
This is a wonderful poem. Keep on writing.
Lauri
That was so beautiful! It was really moving.
shygirl
this poem is good.it relates to me alot.when i read it i was amazed of how much it related to me and the wonderful man i am with
Amanda
This was a way sweet poem it reminds me of something ive been through but didn't end all that great.
errica
This was a really cool
katie
hi ! that peom is so sweet ! this is true and i really like it! i hope you do some other poems like that ! GOOD WORK !
asia
I like the way the words came together with so many different poems of my own only this is one.
SHELLEY
THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL PEOM. I LOVED IT ALOT, PLEASE WRITE MORE.
liz
nice poem
Megan
This is how I really feel about a speacial someone too.
kelly
This poem explains all that has happened between my partner and myself. It was beautifull, I nearly cried, thank you for putting into words what i thought.
John
So inspirational and written with true HEART.
martin
This poem really touched me, I have fallen in love with a girl who I only knew for about 3 months. When we were together it felt so right so I told her how I felt and she felt the same, but since then things have changed. She feels that I am everything she wants in a boyfriend and really fancies me, but couldnt imagine herself being intimate with me, and I feel the exact same way. We are both very confused
Christie
I loved this poem. It explains a situation that I had once come across. It made me just sit back and think.
wendy
i thought that was a very touching poem and you show how you feel very well through your poems
Amiel
it's tight! it's the perfect poem for what i'm goin' through.
GERALD
touching,,i love this poem so i send to my friend to know my true felling to him .
Joe
I just went out with this girl I've loved since Kindergarten. I never had the courage to tell her that i love her. Since the night of the Homecoming Dance the other night I haven't been able to get Alex off my mind. I now know what to say to her when I see her again
karina
Beautiful poem. This same exact thing happened to me and my current boyfriend. i met him and fell in love but it took him a few months to feel the same for me. this poem was beautifully written...A+
Keri
OMG!!! This poem made me speechless and that is hard, almost impossible, to do.
Amanda
I really enjoyed the poem. My friends also thinks that it's great.
nicole
it was a good way to express the way a lot of people feel your not alone becuase sometimes i think i feel the same way.
ashley
this is one of the best poems i have ever read...it expresses my relationship perfectly...excellent work
Amanda
This poem was fantastically and wonderfully written...the way this author expressed her intermost emotions toward this person to whom this poem was written for was amazingly wonderful and easy to understand.....this author is extremely talented and I hope that she will continue writteing poems as fantastic as this one..
Joy
This poem was incredible. It described my situation perfectly. I've sent to a few of my friends and they like it, too. GOOD JOB!
Muffin
This is so AWESOME!! Definitely one of the best poems out there! Very sweet!
Justin
This is a beautiful poem that captures exactly how I feel with my girlfriend. It is a great poem to share with that special someone.
Christin
What a wonderful and well written poem! I totally can see myself in these words you've wrote. Keep writing!
Matt
wow. Thats no amazing poem!
Wonkko
Thank You
alicia
i think this poem is good as it expreses my feelings also about a guy a i love
Darq
It's a great poem, very sweet, and very well written
Sherry
As Days Flew By, I have to tell you, This poem really does say it all. I made me feel that I actually living it. I sent this to a very special friend of mine, Because it says it all. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. Thank you.
Lawry
You stole the words right out of my mouth. Nice job.
kika
I once had this feelings. I was 5 when I first met my bestfriend and at the age of 10 I knew he was the one for me, it took a while for him to get the clue.. what we had was beautiful We grew up together, played together, cried together.. He was everything to me. We could handle anything that passed our path. together we were strong. Untill one day we had a car accident and the love of my life was taken away from me. That was one year ago. Love is something very special, and although "that" person is not there anymore..his smile, his face, his smell will stil be with you..in your heart..Forever Peng, Thank you..Keep up the good work
snowball
this describes the situation i'm in soooooooo perfectly!!!! thanks for writing this wonderful poem for us all to read! ;)
Kim
This peom really describes the way I feel for someone and I like when poets write poems like that!!!
Tina
You are blessed. You have truly known love. Your words express an understanding, that all of us wish to achieve.
stephanie
wow! very good =)
brandy
this poem is just how me and my boyfriend are.I love him with all my heart and I would do anything for him.This is a very sweet poem.I'm speechless.Peng,just keep them comming.
Joanne
This poem really moved me. It has feeling behind it.
Sunni
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sandra
this is a very beautiful poem.
Jessica
this was a very good peom i wish i could write like that
Lawry
Thanks. You said it for me.
tejay
A wonderfull poem thats follows to the letter a relationship i am now in with someone how i have been close friends for 10 years and lovers for the last 5 months.
Jessica
This poem is so moving!! I loved it so much! It hit everything Im feeling right now!
Sandi
This Is the Best Poem to describe friendship turned to Love
Michelle
I love this poem!! It's perfect for how I feel about my boyfriend right now :) Thanks!
Julie
I love that poem it was really touching! i feel the same way to my "specail friend"! =)l
donna
very nice, reminds me of me and my boyfriend, starting out as friens and turning into something more than we never expected. Thank u for bringing back memories
Sandy
I would just like to say that that's a beautiful poem and that it hits home.
Rohit
simply GREAT !
Mark
very moving
mel
Excellent! Best poem i've ever read!!!!!
David
This was perfect.
Kiz
This poem is about chris owen
mike
this is a very beutifull poem and it is very nice
Shaun
So close to my friendship with someone! Great poem!!!!!!! -Shaun
Beeann
This poem is the bomb!!! That's all I have to say about that!!!
Xanx
Your poem is very good. It is as though you had described everything i felt. Thank you very much
kaylia
this poem is just says it all. It's like my thoughts and feelings were just pouring out into your hands as you were writing this poem. thank you....
STEPHANIE
THIS POEM WAS SO TOUCHING MY BOYFRIEND WANTS TO READ IT AT ARE WEDDING THIS JANUARY. THANKS FOR THE POEM. KEP UP THE WORK
ASHLEY
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM CAUSE IT IS HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY BEST FRIEND ALTHOUGH HE JUST DOESN'T SEEM TO NOTICE!MAYBE IF I SENT THIS POEM TO HIM HE WILL RELISE WHAT I NEED TO SAY!GOOD JOB AND KEEP IT UP
Linda
i really enjoy you song i cauhgt my heart. well im married to one of my best guy friend and now we love each other so much. we care.
Kori
I have been through this exactly the same thing. It's all true and I am now sending this to my best friend, my boyfriend of one year and 8 months!
mason
it was really really good so email me i need to talk to you peng
Lisa
This poem is the best it made me have tears to my eyes because i have just fell out with my boyfriend/bestfriend and i loved him so much im just praying now that we get back together and it remined me of him espeshley the end!!!
Shanna
Great poem! hits really close to home, cause I am in a very similar situation...its rare that a poem could bring tears to my eyes!
Daniela
This poem perfectly describes the relationship between me and my boyfriend right now! he means so very much to me and i wouldn't trade him for the world!!!
Patrick
This poem really meant allot to me. It was a picture of the exact way me and my wife to be have spent the last 7 years......
REDDEX
I really liked this poem it was tight. I wish I could write like that.
mel
u touch my heart, it's very wonderful, very reality. see u'r next poems
gordon
i can relate to this poem and find it quite moving, i'd love to see more
Gill
I was able to identify with this so much. It really tugged at my heart strings. Thank you so much.
Madeline
In one point of my life I felt like this. But is a lovely poem so the words touched me.
emily
very good poem!
Mitchie
You say you write instead of talk, as do I. Your poem hit home so much that I really hope whoever you wrote this about realizes how lucky they are.
caroline
this poem said exactly what i wanted to say to my friend and lover. thank u
Shyann
Wonderful! Thank you. Sometimes emotions so overwhelm us that we find ourselves only feeling but without words. It is often a gift to send to a special someone, when you can't find words, but someone else has written them for you, to give in the times of silence with profound love. This shows the love and bond is strong, and that very special someone feels the gift of your loving spirit. Thank you so much for giving me words I couldn't find thid day, to share with a friend when I lost the words to say. Shyann
Saundra
This poem is touching.. Really makes the heart sing
Colin
i really like this words of emotions....it's deep and touches the very soul of everyone's dream.
Chris
This is a GREAT poem. It fits me and my girlfriend perfect. I love the poem. I just can't say how great it is.
Beth
This poem is exactly how i feel for my best friend and lover...Without her i'm nothing....with her i am everything...One day there will be no more waiting...I will be with her forever in life and death..
sara
this poem represents everything between me and my boyfriend!
cindy
i was very touched by your poem.It brought tears to my eyes!!
Ashley
I loved this poem because it was almost an exact account of how my best friend and I met a year ago. It was a very beautiful poem and it made me cry!
Lori
This was very moving. It captures feelings felt by many at one time or another.
David
good!!! Very Very impressive... very very nice... but not sweet as me!!! hahahah... i am the Best!!! hahahah... ()() ('') (0)(0)
Erica
This poem shows how special that someone is to you. It expresses your inner feelings which I think a lot more people need to do. I enjoyed reading the poem and hope all things work out for the best
Sara
I absolutely love this poem!!!!!!! It is exactly the words I've been looking for to say to my fiance' on our wedding day.
charles
very very good
ujala
by reading this poem i went back to how i first met my loved one n how now i have been deeply involved with him that i cannot seem to live without him
melissa
this poem really touched my heart. it is amazing and so true...
Curly
This poem has some many connections for me in my personal life. I too have a special bond with one special person that I met online. This is him /us.....
VJ
Good thing that words were able to contain what I really feel about this friend of mine at present and I found those exact words in this poem. Thank you very much. I know that this peom would definitely strengthen the foundation of our friendship.
christy
I just think this is great and also it says words that are in my heart that i cant seem to put into words to say myself
nathaniel
I think this poem is from the heart, and what makes it so touching to me is the it seemed to be experenced by the auther
Thaii
Wow..thats all I can say. This fits my situation so well. I couldnt have said it better.
Amit
I donot have any words for the praise of your poem. Just great. I would like to listen to you again and again
Leah
I thought that it was pretty good. I have some poems that sound a bit like that, yet I liked it.
lisa
I really like this poem, the words to this poem is what i feel about one of my friends. We bothare to scart to get into a relationship, just in case it dont work out. And we really dont wanna mess up our friend-ship.. That is why I picked this poem.
Melissa
This poem is very good and creative. It describes what happened between me and my friend. who ever wrote this good Job
megan
the best poem it really says how i feel about my friend. I have never been this touched befor. really the best!
Reetika
I needed a poem for my 6th class assignment. I found this poem very interesting and nice.
Joy
i love this poem my bf send it to me and its now our poem it says what we feel bout each other i really like it
Dana
I think this poem is really beautiful and I believe you meant it from the bottom of your heart.
nestor
i think that this is cool it is realy deep into the soul.
Rose
Perfect!
Jackie
This poem describes exactly what I feel for my love. I hope you don`t mind if I show it to him
shaun
this is a poem that realy describes how a friendship between lovers should be, both friends and lovers. It is the best that describes the relationship that i have with my woman.i love your poem
william
It takes alot to make me cry, but after reading this poem. I could not stop!
Alex
this poem is amazing
Beth
I thought this poem was completely inspirational. I could fully understand with the author.the feelings..the emotion..I thoroughly enjoyed reading it..
leo
i like it i loved it you im thinking about giving it to a girl.
Josh
This poem was very moving and fit my situation in life to a T
Iris
This poem truly touched me because it describes everything I feel towards the new love I found. Thank you.
Donna
this poem reminds me so much of the relationship that I have with my boyfriend Scott. We started out as friends, good friends, and something just grew. Thank you for writing this.
Laura
This was a very touching poem and I think that it is a wonderful way for someone to express themself- I hope poems like this continue to be composed, because it truly inspired me!
Taylor
I really enjoyed this poem- it had voice and really spoke out to me. I am a young aspiring poet, and I hope to write this well someday.
Barbara
This poem really touched my heart...it reminded me of when my husband and I were going together thru tough times... Thanks for the memories
Ren
Well done...
Christa
I really related to the poem, I loved the easy flow and the captured feelings in your words.
n/a
I like this poem, I am in that situation and it tells exactly how I feel.
Trinity
This poem is soooo beautiful! It really touches my heart. I guess.. because I'm going through the same thing. I really admire people who can pursue their LOVE and what they want. This poem should really get some regonition!
ROY
I love this poem, i realy do.
Stephanie
It's beautiful
Jerry
How did you know?
Mike
This poem I find to be very beautiful,passionate and careing.I enjoyed sending it to a friend!
Dnewton
Good job!
Glenda
i really like this poem because the same thing has happened to me. Me and this guy were real good friends and then we started gettin feelins for each other as more then just friends. Now we've started a GREAT relationship that is goin on 3 months!!
Greg
incredible!
Vicki
I thought the poem was beautiful. I have been with my boyfriend for 3 years now and before we started dating we were good friends..I can completely relate to the words in the poem, it was almost as if I had written it myself!
Leigh
i loved it--read it to my boyfriend and it made him cry.. it explained our feelings so well.. thank you
Karl
This poem is like my relationship with my girl friend
Glenn
Your poem made me think of someone very special to me, thanks and keepon with the beautiful writing
Tegan
This was and is a great poem!
derrell
very nice
Vicky
It seems so real
ruby
this poem reminds me of my boyrfreind and i. that poem means so much him and me. it really proves that you could really love somebody. thanks again.
Peter
beautiful poem, very well written
sarah
i was able to easily relate this poem to a friendship i have.it made me smile while i read it and was quite heart warming.
Therese
love It!
Jacqui
WOW! the minute i read this poem i had to smile, it reminded me so much of me and my very special friend Luke.
lindsay
I thought this poem was excellent. Very well written.
lil_babygurl
This poem means alot to me because this same thing is going on in my life. I didn't realize how much I loved a close friend(now b/f.) This poem expresses exactly how i feel about him.
Dwight
I too have a relationship with a woman, we are both married to others, but our friendship is unique and we do not want to make mistakes to us or others. We want our friendship to last a etenity. It was a very appropriate poem, thank you for writing it, it was awesome.
Don
Outstandig......says it all if you know what love is...and its obvious this author knows all too much what it is to love.
Christin
This was a really good one. As much as I love writing and reading poems, I thought this was really good. :o) I felt touched by it. Keep on wrting 'cuz you have a talent.
MELISSA
i love this poem very much.....
Shoshana
This author is really something great to persons like me, that I also make my own poems. All types. Love, life poems. I really admire your soul, your touch.Congratulations
barbie
This is a wonderful poem..it says so much.
Kristi
I love this poem, it descibes everything that i feel but never knew how to say it. It is awesome
Cristina
I really enjoyed this poem, for this has recently happened to me. I wanted to much to be with him, but I was pushed away. Now he has come to me and I think I've decided to be with him. Thanx
L.
I really really liked this poem. I feel the same way with one of my close friends and I can relate to this poem. Well, i think this is one of the best poems i've heard so far! keep up the good work peng!!!
sendy
Good Work!
ricardo
This poem just touched me.
Debra
i really like your poem
Marcus
This is Deep. I like it a lot
Nicky
you hit the nail on the head. such an impressive poem on the advent of more than platonic love has yet to be seen by my eyes. please keep writing, for i'll keep on reading.
BRENDA
Seems like the author read my thoughts, I am touched by this one.
tia
this poem really moved me because i can relate to it. I found it very inspiring and moving!
Kim
I love this poem.
Ricky
I really like your poem ,it was like, you were thinking exactly what I've been feeling.
Heather
This fits my relationship to a tee. A very beautiful poem, this is a poem that will definetly be used at our wedding.
micthell
I really thought this poem was sincere. This reminds me of this special lady friend I know right now.The words describe everything we feel about each other since we first met each other. I enjoyed this poem, it the best I've read in awhile.
Heather
I totally related to this poem. I loved it. Great job whoever wrote it!
arnold
This is a great poem!!!!!!!
Desiree
I KNOW THE FEELINGS THAT THE AUTHOR IS EXPRESSING AND I LOVED WHAT WORDS THEY USED TO DESCRIBE I LOVED IT.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
baby
This poem has touched my heart in so many ways..it reminds me of my bestfriend and her relationship that she had with this boy...i enjoyed reading this alot
nate
im in the same situation im friends with this beautiful girl and i want more i feel i love her
Beverly
Wow! This is awsome. Everything in this poem is exactly how I feel about my best friend! I think I am in love with this poem. It is wonderful!
Donna
I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM. THERE'S THIS GUY THAT I'VE KNOWN FOR ABOUT SIX MONTHS & IN THAT SIX MONTHS, I KNOW SO MUCH ABOUT HIM & HE KNOWS THINGS ABOUT ME THAT MY BEST FRIEND DOESN'T EVEN KNOW. WE HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON THAT I PINCH MYSELF TO MAKE SURE I'M NOT DREAMING. WE SPEND A LOT OF TIME TOGETHER. I'VE REALIZED THAT I'M SO IN LOVE W/HIM. I DON'T WANT TO TELL HIM HOW I FEEL BECAUSE I'M AFRAID HE MIGHT NOT FEEL THE SAME & I DON'T WANT TO LOSE WHAT WE ALREADY HAVE.
Sheila
The poem is written so emotional and touching. It expresses true love and care, that's what I love about it. Also the quality of the poem is great. Everything just fits perfect and flows smoothly.
Jenn
This poem explains excautly how I feel.
Brandy
This is a very good poem
Aaron
I love this poem. It's very good.
rick
awsome keep up the good work peng:)
jojo
It's really good. Keep on writting
Beth
I love this poem. It reminds me of a guy friend I have. Keep writing.
robert
I read this poem to my wife and it made her cry. She said this meant more to her than I'll ever know. Thank you Peng. God Bless
mary
i really liked this poem b/c it reminded me so much of my boyfriend who i love very much!
Diana
I Love this Poem! The feeling and the emotion is exactly how I feel!
Tukumba
I thought this poem was touching and very familiar. It truly captured the feeling of a friend falling for another.
John
lovely poem that captures my present situation in a perfert way; I had the feeling when I read the poem that the author knew my situation; thank you
Janice
wow...that was beautiful
ernest
this poem was the best poem that i could get that matchs my feelings about my girlfriend.
Cory
I was searching for a poem for a good friend - who is now my love and life. Thank you my search is over
Sarah
I love this poem. It touches the truth like no other poem I've read before. This is absolutly a brilliant and touching poem.
Dara
I really like this poem except the last line. "Staying forever you and me". If you love someone don't your personalities mix and you take part of them with you everywhere you go, same or different sex relationships?
Giulia
This heart touched me and made me feel like everything in this world had a reason for being here.
K
Truly touching!!
trouble
My boyfriend found this and sent it to me when he knew I was having a really horrible day. He's not normally poetic, but the fact that he would take the time to find someone's words to express his feelings was great. Thank you for expressing what I see in his eyes.
Jose
I really enjoyed this poem it put in words the feeling that were in me.
SHARY
I write poems every now and then and I've had people in tears reading them. I must say this is an excellant poem. Keep up the good work and God Bless.
Candi
THIS POEM IS SO DEEP AND STRONG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, IT IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ SO FAR!!! MAKE IT NUMBER 1!
jade
..it's good to know that someone is feeling the same thing i am..if only there were more of us. =D
Ruud
It's a very beautiful poem.
dy'er
Im speechless.
elena
i love it
courtney
This poem reminds me of me and my best friend. I like him alot and he doesn't know about it. Someday I hope to tell him but I still haven't found the nerve!
Kera
I really love this poem
Litsa
i think this a VERY awesome poem.it connects to my feeelings about my friend ????, and im sure a lot of other people's, i just wanted to say good job and good luck!
Zack
Awesome Poem! Very well written.
Walner
This poem is nice I enjoyed reading it. I think you write nice keep it up,you are good.
Dawn
This poem is very touching! It brought tears to my eyes! You can tell it was written from the heart! Thanks for a great poem!
Amy
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM AND IT REMINDS ME OF THIS GUY I MET OVER THE SUMMER. IT REALLY RELATES TO A LOT OF PEOPLE.
sharny
That was a very good poem! keep up the good work!
PASSION
I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM SO MUCH. IT'S LIKE YOUR HEART JUST POURED OUT TO YOUR BOYFRIEND.
Eryka
I really like this poem. I think it is really sweet and I give my promps to the writer good job.
punk
you did a wonderful job on this. you've described a i've known very well. it captured me. again, great job!
Andy
I LiKe ThIs PoEm... My HeArT SkIpEd WheN I ReAd It CaUsE It'S sO SwEeT. It ReLaTeS To Me So Much.......... ThAnK YoU!!
meaghan
awsmome poem. its beautifly written w/ a great out look on love 4 once. Definatly a 4 star poem! I think my boyfriend will enjoy this poem! thankyou:)
Danny
This poem puts into words what I feel. I have never been one to be able to write down what I feel but this truly explains my relationship with my best friend and now the love of my life. Thank you and keep up the good work
chris
very nicely done.this is one ill print and paper is exspensive.
david
awesome!
Diana
I sent it to my husband..we were separated last yr and have since gotten back together.we are heading to our 15th wedding anniversary..thank you
ZaraJo
This poem is so wonderfully heart warming and touching. It fully describes the process of my feelings for my boyfriend, who I love with all my heart, from the first time we met..to being more than friends..being new to having a relationship then realising how deep my feelings were for him days after when he said, "I Love You". So here I am, congratulating you on writing this poem..(I will use this poem on Valentines Day!)..and I hope to read many more of your poems in the future
peter
true feelings are hard to express
steven
i love this poem it excatly describes how i feel about i friend i have known for a couple of years
charlie
This poem is really speacial and i think the poet has a lot of great talent!
katherine
This was a really good poem. She was able to cacth something.That other people could not see, and the person how they felt. This poem can let them do that. This is a really great poem. Keep up the work Peng!
alicia
this poem is very sweet, it really makes me think about this special person in my life! i can totally relate to it
Kate
Your words came right out of my heart..thank you
marie
i love it! it reminds me of me and my best frend which i truly love with all my heart. But there is one person standing in between us -his girlfriend.
Kelsey
I really liked this poem it had a lot of the same feelings I am feeling, I rhink you did a great job
amber
This is one of the greatest poems I have ever read!
loy
the poem is great i can't say anything. what ican say more is you are a great poet. you are greate.
Elizabeth
That describes my current relationship perfectly!
she
this poem was tight. the writter gets into the mood and realy express what is in his soul,mind and body and this is outstanding.
Jason
Amazing poem as it sums up a lot of feelings i am going through, so to Peng the author, it is moving words.
Amy
This poem is so awsome! It totally deals with the situation that i am in with this guy that I love so much!thanx for this
FlowerDragon
Oh! The TRUTH, the truth, you speak it SOOOOOOO well. I actually just met this guy less than a month ago, I can't STAND being away from him. There's so much there, between him and I. Of course I have no idea if he feels the same about me. Anyway, wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL poem!
Carlotta
As i read this poem, I could truely see the emotioms behind it. It was truely touching.
mystic_mallory
wow this is fantastic.
imran
THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER SEEN.KEEP ON WRITING THIS KIND OF POEM
natalie
that was really good!
Jesse
this is a great poem. I love it very much and touched me...good work..:)
Kristina
I would like to tell you that this is the most insiteful thing that I have ever read. It describes my relationship absolutely perfect. It is very touching.
skyblue
i love this poem it is great
Debbie
This is an outstanding poem. I can relate on a personal level.
garry
I was looking for a poem to send to my fiance, and this seems to sum up our lives together.
ryan
hello Peng, you really said it all!! thank you for findng the words.
staysea
this poem was great. i have a lond distance love and it sounded just like us.
odun
I have the same feeling so real and so great
Justin
This is one of the best poems I have ever read. It is very touching and moving. It captures how every relationship blossoms
Megan
That poem was the best one I've read on here so far. It completely describes how I feel about my boyfriend...I might even send it to him : )
George
This poem has touched me in such a way that it has even brought a tear to my eye. It reminds me about one girl i started talking to again that i've been in love with for a very long time. This is how we are starting again but i have told her how i feel about her. She is my very best friend. Thank you, you've touched me.
Nickie
I loved the poem. It was well done and really sweet.
candice
i just found the poem to bed read at my wedding in may 2001.it's just beautiful.
Sheila
Would like to say what a truly nice poem this is. You get the feelings written down in such a lovely way.
Marion
This poem really touched me deep down. Sweet and to the point.
Ashley
i really like the way you put it together, it remindes me of how me and my ex after 2 years used to be.
CABz
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS EFFORT!!!
Jaclyn
awsome poem...expresses feeling that are so true and precious.
Amanda
Your poem, is very great. I love it very much.
tina
I really was touched by your poem , it was beautiful. I feel it described the way I feel about the person I am with now and the love we share, thank you for such touchin heartfelt words
R.J
This is an AWESOME poem!! Keep up the great work on making your poems!
Geoff
The poem is how I feel.. about this girl!
Stephen
I gave this poem to my loved one who cried as she read it. A beautiful poem.
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