Can You See It In My Eyes? by Sandy Fioretti

Becca

You completely put my thoughts into words. Thank you.

DeAnn

I can relate to this. I like & care deeply for a good guy friend of mine & scared to death of ever losing him. I think he knows that I like him more than a "friend".

Emily

Hey, thank you so much for this poem. It expresses exactly how I feel about one of my friends. It's hard, you know, living like that. But reading your poem really helped me. Thank you again.

Shawna

I loved your poem i am always saying to my boyfriend can't you see it in my eyes.

The gangsta of love

This poem made me think about this girl in my class this year when i graduated middle school , and now were going to 2 completely different high schools , first it started out as friends but then i fell in love with her , i loved the way she did everything , when she was appcent from school i wouldn't be myself without her and right now i still can't live without her , i think about her all day everyday , and i can't tell my friends or parents because my parents won't understand and my friends will laugh at me, but this poem tells me i'm not alone.

Angela

You definately have my vote. You have put into words something I experienced some time ago. I never had the courage to utter not even a word about it.

lori

This poem was as lovelu as a flower. I enjoyed it very much. I would love to se more by Sandy Fioretti. Thank you, Lori

sarren

i else thahe future i don't know if i can tell know what this means i just told someone estreday that i liked them alot and thn iasked him if he would ever like me the same way and all he said is i like u as a friend and that is it now i don't know what i am going to do in the future

Mignon

This is a very good poem. I love it, you know why? Cause that is what I am experiencing right this very moment. I love this guy, he is a very close friend. He has always been there for me. I was coming out of a bad marriage he made be strong and help me move on. I loved him then and I still love him now. Every word on this poem expressed how I feel about M----. Thanks

Amber

i think this poem is very good. keep up the good work.

samantha

hey this poem is great i like it it relates to a lot of things tha ti know of and what goes on in my life with the guy i truly love

Trace

Very well done; please share another, you do have talent

tequila

great poem i thought of it as me cause thats exactly how i feel.

Maria

omg. this explains how i feel. its very gud. i really like it

Carlos

This poem is madd g0od it goes for me too and my girl.

Brittney

I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM BECAUSE IT ALSO COULD RELATE WITH ME AND SOMEONE I REALLY LIKE :)

Ashley

I feel the same way about somone and is amazing that someone wrote a poem about how I exactly feel

jessica

nice and hot poem

sadaf

i love this poem. it is really touching. the wording is nice and says what most of the girls want to say who r shy.

CHASITY

I love this poem! I am in the same situation and this poem explains it all!

Loke-lani

Well, this poem is very strong and I recommand people to read it. Enjoy

DeAnna

I really can relate to this poem. it says all I am feeling right now about a friend. a friend I am in love with. Thank you for sharing it!

bec

I know exactly how you feel :-)

sandy

I could really identify with the words penned by you. They hit so close to home. Thank-you for sharing them with us.

candy

your poem is amazing a know how u feel the same thing has happened to me however a am married so a cant say nothing my heart is ripped in 2 a so donr have a clue in what to do however a just wanna say fantastic poem

Raechelle

I really loved this poem for I have a friend that I want to say"I love you"

jen

i like it

Mandy

loved the poem. i know how you feel. my love for him goes on but he does not. he took his own life when things werent going to well. your words shake me to the core and brings tears to my eyes, for the love i had, had to die. but i remember the good times when i could touch him, and wish everyday i would of told him those three words. I LOVE YOU!

Kimberly

This poem was great. It made me feel a lot better. I am going through the same thing right now. Never told the guy I liked him and now I am moving away. Hanging out with him all the time hurts yet I still can't tell him how I feel.

asia

i liked this poem. it says everything i wanna say to the person who has had my heart and dosen't know it since 6th grade and i'm in the 9th grade now. i've been wanting to put all my feelings in a poem but i just didn't know what to say and you just said it all. i love this poem.

saruh

your poem touched me deep down in my heart. your really good and writin poems and how to show your feelings in them. i envy you.

Shaecole

VERY INSPIRATIONAL

Pennie

This poem was very good. I enjoyed reading it. I treminds me of my boyfreind. I loved it.

Sonia

this poem is what you call magic! ive always been interested in poems of love etc. , but this is one of those poems that can never be forgotten! gurlly you really got talent, i trully wish you the best of luck with these poems! i hope to see more of your poems cuz trully there beautiful. hope to here more from your art!

tamzin

i like this poem because its about love and admiring someone, which are things that i like to write about. i also took a liking to this poem because like many others it says things that we all want to say to someone we love or admire.

Amy

I Know how it feels to love someone so much and not be able to tell them because your scared of what there reply will be It is so much easier to write it down then to say the words aloud

Marche'

this poem is so touching

Julia

OMG that is the exate same way i feel this poem is the best poem ever i went on a hunt for something for my msn name and i found this poem and wow it really touched me a lot i just can't beleive you put my feelings into words. love the poem i really do and i am gonna send it to the person i think i love.

meag

i love it i love all the poems i form this sit

Ann

Love it!

CandyGirl202

This is exaclty what happen to me! But i had to tell her I'm a girl u guys knows wat this means. She never talk to me again I only see her. Love this poem.

jonathan

i feel like this. man its so crazy how u can feel 4 someone and they dont even know or have the idea that u might just b in love wit that person. its SUPER hard to tell them because u dont know what they r going to say or how they r going to respond to what u tell them. i dont want to mess up my friendship wit this person but u dont know what to do bout it. u really cant do anything but sit back and wach what happens. only time will tell. i might get them one day but i might jus never get them who knows?

Tony

This poem is special to me, because I have a friend/co-worker that I simply adore. We are in customer service, so I wear jacket and tie on the job. I've gotten numerous compliments on my attire, but there is only one person I crave approval from. her, but it just doesn't happen. Plus, she has other friends we work with that she goes out clubbing with, so I don't really feel in the "in crowd". I just look from afar and speak cautiously about my true feelings for her and it hurts.

billy

i to fell head over hills for a friend of mine i was so scared to tell her because i did not want to lose her as my friend.

portia

loved it keep up the good work

bryan

thats a gd 1

Dark

i so like feel something, i lost my true love because i was afraid to lost her friendship, so i deny some love, . i wrote her lot of poems but that will never bring her back, great writing

Ayo

I like this poem because something of this nature happened to me until i lost her. Thanks

kopji

this poem is just great,it reminds me of great things. Thanx for that.

Lostwithoutyou

Lovely wording. I loved my best friend from 13-to 18 and never told him how i felt we went our seperate ways and after i got married he called me one night to tell me he loved me. I had gotten over early years but i will never get over that call.

Sunshine

The poem that you wrote was very good. Keep writing!

jason

THIS POEM IS VERY TRUE.

Lexy

Great poem. God knows how many times I've been down that road

pamela

i really really like this poem!

Jo

beautiful. honest. real. mylife. now

Judy

I really like your poem. keep up the good work.

Christan

This poem is awesome. It sounds like something I would write. Its amazing.

kimmie

i loved this. i have felt like this before and it just touched me.

johanne

I feel the same as what this poem says, i love someone but am to scared to tell him.

AISHA

I WENT THROUGH SOMETHING LAST NIGHT AND IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART AND I SENT IT TO MY FRIEND!

amanda

this is so true and so real, we all get this sometimes, sometimes too many times.

Robinson

Just wanna know everyone that this poem really touches me. It makes me relieved. I love it. :D

ryan

hey. i love ur poem its exactly how i feel. only in my case im a guy. haha. love it. n i love ur choice of words.

Lumary

I wish to thank you for this poem because it just put into words what I could not! It perfectly describes what I am going through in a current situation. Thank You!

Neil

This poem really speaks to me. being a poet myself, I know that it takes a special sort of inspiration with creativity and a little emotion to create a masterpiece such as this. Thanks

shovannya

this iz a beautiful poem it seem intresting and i love it alot

bacon

expresses how i feel

India

This is a wonderful peom, and I think that it is something that a lot of women/girls feel, but are unable to express. While reading this poem, I found that it summarized the way I feel about a certain someone. Maybe I will share this poem with that special someone or maybe I'll be moved to write one of my own. This poem expresses all that I feel and I never knew that it could be put into words so simply.

himanshu

this poem is awesome. coz. this is what i hv experienced for 2 yrs. but than i commiteted a blunderby asking her out, i got rejection n i lost my all time fren, so i'll recommend all my frens that never fell in love with ur fren n if u fall than at least don ask her out, otherwise u hv to cry a river. PEACE

shanzay

i was too much touched by ur poem i personally feel . To fall in love is very easy but to keep it . Its very difficult. i can feel hoe much u luv dat person . u should let him knw n knw i'll never say NO.

steven

that was very good i liked it i would also like to know how you got that it was good

jelly

i love this poem so much because i ahve found myself in this position its hard to tell sumone how u feel 4 dem

Skye

This poem is very true and a great poem I myself love to wright poetry and I can tell these words come from deep within you good job mate:)

angele

oh my this poem was so awesome, i dont know you but i do know one thing about you and that is, you are a great poet! this poem was the best poem i have ever read, and i read a lot of poems, i am a big fan of ryme and this poem was just so perfect, i would like to wish you luck with the rest of your poems, it was beautiful and very touching. thank you for your time, angele

Derrell

Great job this is a very inspirational poem i think you've done a food job the poem talks about how you want express your fellings to another person but is afraid of what the answer is many people go through this but you've written out your feelings this was great

jess

This is a really good poem in every point of view. The exactly same thing is happening to me right now. It made me cry & smile in the same time. It's wonderful.

Jamie

I love this one! Absolutely straight foreward and to the point. (in a good way. )

ririt

this poem really touches me! it happens to me now. i've told him a few months ago but you know. everything changes! he avoided me and has a relationship with my best friend. it makes me really sick. but,,what can i do? he doesn't love me and i can't force him to love me

Megan

hello. i think thius poem is really good! i like it very much since it relates to me due to the fact that im startin to fall for my best friend. its hard cuz u dont wanna ruin ur friendshiop but still on the other hand want to persue something a lil nore than juss friends. this poem really touched home with me

physcocutie

when i read ur poem it was like u read my mind. )nice

Angie

I love this poem because it reminds me of my boyfriend named Kyle! It is a great poem!

kayla

great

Jody

Wow! I feel like that poem was written for me about someone special in my life. I just wish I had the courage to tell him.

Jessica

That's EXACTLY how i feel!

TASHA

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Delrae

This poem really shows amotion, sadness

Missy

Your poem is absolutely beautiful. I am an unhappily married young woman who has fallen in love with someone that I never thought would be more then a friend but I have begun seeing so many qualities in him that I wish my husband would have. I am struggling with some serious issues. Do I stay and hope my husband changes or do I go and see if the person that I have fallen for loves me back (I've been told he has feelings for me too but has been hurt before so he holds back his feelings)

anna

it speaks the truth and it reaaly touched my heart

brittney

GREAT

Laura

I Love this poem. I am in the same situation right now and know how it feels

kaylea

i have onlymjust read this poem and i love it because it is asactly what i feel about my exs brother anthony i have wrote him no end of letters but he never replies and thanx too this poem i have finally realised what i need to do so thankyou

jsamine

it was great thanks for sharing you great ideas

tiffany

WHAT A WANDERFUL POEM U R SO COOL. LOVE IS A HARD THING TO FIND AND I CANT FIND IT

Valentine

This poem has really touched me, cause I feel the same way. And you were right, it really helped save my sanity. Thank you, that you took the time and wrote this down, it's really wonderful!

alex

i know i am a guy and all but this poem explains how i feel about one of my best frinds (who is a girl) i dont have the courage to tell her. she may not feel the same way. great poem.

Autumn

I think this was a great poem but I thought I should tell you that if you are writting form experience then dont be afraid to tell him. "Hearts are often broken by words left unspoken" He may just feel the same but you'll never know unless you tell him and the worst that can happen is he wont feel the same but then you know he's not "the one" Always, Autumn DeShae

R'shea

I know how she felt because I'm going though the same thing right now with my best friend and i just don't know if me telling him how i feel would mess up our friendship so i feel what she is saying

cekena

This poem really touched me becauuse i'm going through the samething right now and i just fell in love with this poem after the first stanza.

naz

This is the first poem that has touched what im feeling at present. You could say im in the same situation and am scared to admit how i feel. The words are perfect and feels like it was written especially for me. Excellent work!

emmanuel

That was best love poem I have ever read. If I wasn't a man I'd cry, that's how good it was.

Alicia

I love it. I have felt this way before. I told. It wasn't a mistake. I felt relief. The love was not returned the same, but there is love there, and we are still friends. You described it all perfectly. Amazing.

C

This actually hit me really hard. you put in to words what I have been trying to write for a while now.

stephanie

That poem was really good it almost made meeh cry that same ting happened to meeh i felt the same about my friend but i was afraid it would interupt or friendship

DELANA

I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS VERY WELL WRITTEN

Audra

I love this poem. It's put together so well. Reading is made me think of what i'm going through right now. I am friends with a guy who i like more than just a friend. Sometimes i feel like telling him how i fell, but i'm afraid of his reaction. This poem really touched me. Great work.

Kiara

I love this poem. it describes what i'm going through right now with this particular by i've had feelings for a while now.

Kyung Mi

Love your poem girl! I feel the same way about a guy here at my school. Yeah he knows I like him, it's just that we're both scared to talk to each other. every day it's just "hi" that's all! ^_^ hope you feel better! and write to me if you want! Laters! Kim Kyung Mi PS Love you and good luck

Kaiya

hey there. i love your poems! it touches my heart.

dawn

i felt that too and confessed my love to him and all i got was. thank you. so is it better to hold it in ? for me it was

abby

this poem has touched me because this is everything i feel with a friend everyword describes how i feel thankyou

Regina

I loved the poem. It really said a lot without a lot of words

james

this poem reminded me of how i felt when i fell in love with my best friend but luckly she became my wife she is the best thing that has ever hapened to me we now have 3 great kids and the love has never waned thank you for reminding me of the love that makes my life complete

jessi

this meant a lot to me becouse , there is a boy i really like. and i cant talk to him about it!i really enjoyed it

Lucia

Can you see it in my eyes is the begining of all relationships. Its a wonderful poem that I have shared with my friend.

pradana

that poem really describe the way im feeling

carmen

This poem reminds me of something that's happened to me before. I like this poem it's deep.

rebecca

i thought the poem was really cute and it made me think about my boyfriend

Fiona

I really liked your poem very much. The title grabbed my attention. I feel the same exact way that's in this poem. I like this guy very much. But he doesn't really see what's going on like he's blind folded.

Laura

This is beautiful, I couldn't have described my feelings better than you did in these lines, Thank you

Jess

I think your words are perfect. You are really talented!

jennifer

i just want to let you know how much i love your poem. it was actually sent to me by a friend before christmas. i didnt know how he felt until then. it means alot to me.

WHITNEY

I THINK THIS POEM IS SO SWEET. IT MAKES SOME PEOPLE CRY BECAUSE IT IS SO SWEET. !

magz

i vote for this poem because when i read it, it made me think of a similar problem that i have at present and has made me consider coming out and telling him my feelings

shorty

that was amazing i write poetry but that is like nothing i have ever wrote and read you get all kinds of emotions while reading it. i LOVE it

Becky

This poem reminds me of a position I was in with a guy I've known forever, but can't bring myself to tell him how I truly feel about him.

jaslene

i like how the poem was saying alot and rhyming at the same time and it describes how i felt at one point in my life.

Scott

I loved it. It really touched my heart. It is like what I am going through right now. Beautiful!

Angel

I loved this poem. it totally explains my feelings and my thoughts and everything i couldnt find words to say is right here. this put things in perspective for me!

Sara

wow. amazing , fabuloso i dont have the right words to express this poem its so beautiful and touching, im going through the same situation right now and i dont know if i can tell him or not. its totally hard to do it. yah ur poem is absolutely wonderful. thanks 4 writing it i finally found someone who thinks like me. yah. xox. by

Brandi

Your poem was great. it tells how your feeling and all the crap us girls have to go through. it also apeals to me because i have a friend who i'm in love with but i'm afraid to ruin the great friendship we have acomplished. GREAT JOB

Amber

this poem is just how I'm feeling deep inside .

Barby

This poem is awesome! Its exactly how I feel about someone, a good friend and I would like to tell him but at the same time am afraid of loosing that special friendship

heather

this poem is amazing. it expresses how many other other people are feeling. by reading this it has given me the courage to tell the one person i turely care about how i feel. ts amazing thanks for the lift me up!

Susie

I love your poem. It is right on the dot of how i feel with my current boyfriend. We have this strong connection and we have been dating for two months and i really want to say i love you but i am so scared what his reaction will be. I want to spend my life with him, he is all that i think about and talk bout. Thanks for writing that poem it was really sweet and i lllooovvveee it! i may send it to my bf. and see what he says bout it.

Noelle

I just love this poem. I've been in a situation exactly like this. I never told my friend how i felt. He went out with everyone else and i always knew what was good for him. I knew everything about him. But, when he realized that i was feeling these emotions he lost me. I moved on to someone else. But, i still think of him and how we probably would of turned out. I still have mad feelings for him and hope that we can still just be friends.

Nikki

Beautiful.

Shandrica

I love love love this poem. I can really relate to it. Great job you really have talent.

Rosalind

I think this poem it the spot i am in the ecxact position and it exteamly touched my heart on a scale from 1-10 i rate it above 10

Lien

I really love your poem. It explains the feelings that a lady goes through but not sure how to express it through words. Your poem really inspired me deeply and one day I hope to write an piece as beautiful as this one. Your poem is truly heart touching.

Jade

Very good poem. It really ched my heart and inspired me to writemy own poems. Continue reaching out!

vincent

Prity awsome but can you write one on asding the one you like out.

Astyyin

I feel this person im goin throguh the same thing

Amber

This is a very nice poem. I would love to recite later on in life. It is a perfect description of shyness and scared of a girls fragile emotions. I think this is a lovely poem.

Courtney

i like this guy but he is so blind if he just actually looked in my eyes he would see it!

mel

i can relate to this poem because it describes all the feelings an words i wish my boyfriend could know

Vernon

This poem really spoke to me. It reminds me of the kind of bind that I'm going through with this girl I love but, I just can't find the words to tell her that I do.

Kevin

This poem exactly describes my fear of saying I love you to a friebd I've known since six years. very touching poem!

brandy

this poem was very touching. it had a lot or meaning to it. that is exactly how i feel about my best friend adam!

Samantha Alice

This poem reminds me so much of myself. My boyfriend doesn't realize how much he means to me. I feel like he takes me for granted sometimes. Well I absolutely love your poem.

Shanay

Now i really love this poem. It was very touching. You are a great writer. I wish you luck in your writing career.

diamond

hey . i think this poem is so true it happpens to alot of us and i know for a fact that the samething always happenes to me great poem i love it

mark israel

it's great!

duc

your poem touch me very much, you are such an exellence poet.

Trisha

I Love your poem. It explains excatly what i am going through. I have been friends with this guy for 3 years and have steadly fallen for him but am worried about what would happen to us as friends if he finds out. He told me that he doesnt wanna ruin our friendship in anyway. I dont know what to do everyone around knows but he still cant figure it out. Thanks for writing this it helps by letting me know that someone else is going through the same thing.

jocelyn

yea thats a good poem i once made the mistake of goin out with my best friend we only lasted 3 to 4 days cuz we felt wiard as we werent ment to b 2gether u should tell him ur feelings and dont b scared cuz if he rigects u then tell him that if u guys can still b friends. GOOD LUCK!

shante'

this poem is so real. i love to read this poem. basically it true about most relationships that some young teenagers go through.

Kindle

That poem is so amazingly true like ive liked this guy for seven months and everyone tells me that he likes me but then he goes out with other girls and like i cant get over him but like what other people said he doesnt realize that i think i love him no matter how young i am.

Death

l just love the poem goes round it simply talk about friendship, it relates on me tnx for this poem l can give it to my beloved friend! tnx too also to the author who rote it!

watcharline

well I vote for ur poeme because am going though the samething with one of my friend. we been spend so much time together and now am having some felling for him and am affraid of telling him but keep on hopping he will see it In My Eyes but I geuss not. thanks I really love ur poeme

Scott

This poem described exactly how i feel about a close friend of mine. Everyday that's how i feel. That was an awesome poem, keep it up!

SABRINA

AWESOME!

Malinda

I love this poem it describes my situation to the tee! I wish only that i could could tell this person that i do love him in that way. maybe i will. this poem is to him *jake*. I Love you

angela

It really got to me in my own way because i am a girl but i am open to my sexuality and there was a girl who i thought was my best friend and as time went by i felt more strongly about her but i was afriad to tell her myself and i didn't want anyone else to know in my family so i just let my feelings hide inside and it killed and now it's too late but that is exactly how i felt.

d

wow,I really enjoyed this poem. I have the very same feelings for someone special,we're best friends though. It's a very lovely poem.

kimberly

this is a wonderful poem, i was blown away when i read it because everything thats written in it is exactly how i feel bout someone. so two thumbs up to Sandy Fioretti :)

Rhonda

This poem is so beautiful and I really can relate to it. it really touched home.

Christopher

favorite

jackie

I really like this poem. I am there right now. I love him but he loves someone else. But he knows I care. I like this poem alot

Nicole

this poem really summerizes how i feel with this one guy. i couldn't have said it better myself. this poem is really cool

Angie

Wow! Completely Speechless.

Andreas

Aww sweet Sandra, is this really true it sounds so. you have to start by saying you have someothing difficult to tell, explain how and why you are so afraid of ruining things then you can both decide to continue or no. Maybe he/she is just as afraid!

Arun

Really poem is very good i want to give this poem 10/10 very goods look into my eyes . If u dont have words to say u can express ur feelings through eyes

Alex

it AWESOME i can relate to it soo much!

Ann

I truly loved this poem. I know the desire and the love you felt because I fell for a friend of mine. Beautiful job, take care.

MONIQUE

THIS POEM WAS BANGING! SIXTEEN SNAPS AND A CLAP!

Shawntae

I give it 2 thumbs up, 5 stars a snap and a twist! it reminds me of a poem that i wrote about a close friend of mine that i adore. :-)

Sunday

This poem relates to a problem I am having and it really expresses the feeling! I want to thank the author!

robert

that was so nice for a woman to hold all those feelings in then finally express them on paper but the question is did she give it to the desired guy it was intendeed for im a self acclaimed poet i love to write a good poem

Marketa

This is a good poem it told me alot

kay

i love this

Cory

This is actually how I feel about the person I like it really touched me and made me think of her. Good Job

Sandra

This is a very cute poem! from a scale of 1-10 i give it a 10 Sandra AKA: KALI

david

the poem tells the truth that i feel by the one i love

Kylee

This poem is great! I really like this guy and i've liked him for a while now. I just found out though he likes sumone else and when i heard it i felt like i was torn apart and ive never felt that way before. Keep writing poems you are good and inspiring.

Green Devil

This is an inspiring poem I feel exactly the same, i fell in love with my best friend(a guy) and i'm WAY TOOO sared to tell him. i hope we both get up the courage. if i were to give you a percentage i would give you 110% :)

Louise

i can really relate and feel to this poem. I am there too. Very good poem.

MABEL

I THINK THIS POEM TOUCHES ALOT OF INDIVIDUALS. I GIVE IT 110%

mannie

this poem is so true. you just wish that person knew how much you want and need them

Lyly

This poem is romantic and that's what makes it a sweet poem.

Ellen

What a wonderful poem! This is exactly what I feel and have wanted to say. my feelings are finally able to be read by that special someone that I do love with all of my heart.

kaley

i know EXACTLY how you feel. this poem was great and it expresses the true feelings.

Jessie

I LOVE your poem. i really do. it inspires me to inspire other people. thats what you do. you inspire others in that situation to just express their feelings.

samantha

This is one of the best poems I have ever read. I am also am having the same proublem that you are and it is very hard.

Tammy

OMG,,,this was so perfectly put. Thank you. I have loved and lost. Crossed that line of friendship and now our friendship is hanging by a thread. Wish I had seen this poem long time ago. Much love and Aloha to you, Tam

angelina

it is a beautiful poem, and the thought is one every single person feels, at least once- for some people its more. well done.

Typhahnnee

This poem describes a lot of what I'm feeling. I Love it! Great work Sandy:)

Lori

This is so great! I am there in my relationship and I can relate to those feelings

Candice

good

Ruthy

this poem made me cry . i can totally relate to it . it's so difficult to explain . but this poem was the only poem that had such an effect on me . it's . unbelievable .

ramon

i can really relate to what you are saying because thier are girls i'v fallen head over heels for but were to scared to say anything because i became their friend and thank you it did save my sanity

Amber

I really liked this poem, so much, it made me cry, because i moved away from my best friend and he is a guy and i think i am starting to fall in love with him, and i saw him this weekend and reading this poem made me realize just how much i care for him, and it hurts me even more because he has a g/f and i know that i can't be with him because of that, but overall this poem is super and i'd give it 100 stars if we were rating this poem in stars.

barbara

Girl. You just spoke for the many women out there who can't say it, want to say it but don't know how to say it. Perfect.

kylee

i love this poem it reminds me of a boy that i know named cord i really like him alot but he has a girlafriend so i will have to wait but until then i can still like him

Lauren

This poem really touches my heart. I can't think of a better way to describe the feeling of loving someone and not being able to tell them. Your poem tells the truth about this and I think you wrote the best poem I have ever read in my entire life.

Rachel

this is what i feel right now so i loved it good job

Autumn

i really like this poem, and im dealing with the same problem also.

Christine

Thats how my boyfriend told me he felt like when we were firneds. I wish I would have noticed sooner.

Sarah

I really like ur poem. It made me realize how much i love my boyfriend. Good Job i wish i could write my feeling down just as u do.

issa

Wow. best one I've read in this site ^_^. Made me cry myself, especially because I've been keeping my feelings for this guy for almost 2 years. I'm still kinda afraid of rejection, but this poem has really touched me. Great job. (",)

Edma

i love the poem, it is exactly how i feel about this guy, but i just don't know how to approach hime and i felt that you knew exactly how i felt . I felt that the poem is about my own personal feelings and i can really relate to it. By having this poem i will be able to tell him how i feel without going way overboard Thank again for such a great poem

Mercedes

Loved it. U do a good job expressin yer feelings. I write poems too

Lesley

I've been in the same position and she hit the nail right on the head about how it feels to want something so bad but fear holds you back. Beautifully Written!

Kathleen in NYC

Fabulous quality writing . I can absolutely relate to this, because I am experiencing the same too . It did help me to understand my confusion just by reading someones else thoughts of their own personal pain. Thank you for sharing such deep and beautiful thoughts . good luck too, Kathleen in NYC ;0))

Ava

this poem touch my heart

ms.riddler

oh, my GOD! i simply love this poem. i have a"friend". not even sure if i should call him like that and i truely love him there is no doubt in my mind that he is the one for me but he does not think the same. how do i know?i can see it in his eyes. he knows that i lyk him but he appearently does not feel the same and it burns lyk hell.

TASHA

I LOVE THE POEM, I'T REMINDS ME OF ME AND A FRIEND

Sam

I love your poem. It tuched me so much. That is how i feel right now with the guy im with. He cant see whats right infornt of him.

Samantha

I cant tell you enough how true this poem is for me. it says everything i cant put into my own words

tasha

THis was a good poem and i enjoyed it very much

babu

I convey's what i meant 2 say 2 my love.

stacey

this was amazing, it expressed exactly how i feel! if only we could bite the bullet and have the guts to send it to the one we love.

Eve

Too true. I have written at least fifty versions of this same poem over the last several years. Poetry created by emotion awakens our souls. Your poem like so many of my own, not only awakened but also stunned and alleviated the pain in mine. Thank you.

Anna

Dear Sandy, Amazing Poem. I always felt so much for him. I feel as if im infatuated with him. I need to tell him how i feel. And this poem inspired me 2 tell him how i feel Thank u

Myke

This poem is on point! i loved it i sent it to all my friends (including the girl ithought of when i first read it). lol.

John

It reminded me so direly of a time when I once feared the same thing. I know what it's like, and I admire you so for writing such a beautiful poem.

doesn't

I love your poem, it has a great format to it, very powerful. There are no words to describe how much love i have for this poem.

Shabreka

I loved the whole style of your hidden feelings, and how the author feels that the EYES tell all that he/she is feeling. This is an amazing poem and it deserves 5/5 stars! Great Job!

Jani

Wow this is fantastic! And you have soo much e-motion please keep writing more of poems like these

Bianca

I love di poem it is really serious and relates to alot of people. Very Good.

Davina

it really took my breath away its the same feelings i am dealing with i really admire this poet thank you so much

Katelyn

This was the most touching poem i think I have ever read. I know exactly how the writer feels, because I have had the same feelings for a friend for many years. I just can not come to face my feelings. I hope you will and not wait like I have.

jeff

I love this, it is as close to anything I have seen that touches what I am feeling right now. thank you

Bridget

I loved it. It hits close.

Mustafa

I really liked you poem,cause it helped me alot to express my feelings towards my. L

precious

i lov this poem! all of us chix are goin threw this!( :

KRISTEN

I totaly Know what your feeling. It's good to know others feel the same as I do

Debbie

Wow! This is exactly how I feel. I came from an abusive relationship so I'm really afraid to say "I love you" to anyone and there is a special someone now.

Wendy

so true.

angel

i really enjoyed reading this poem because its a life relating poem. thanks i appreciated it a lot

Davan

This is an incredible piece of poetry. It reveals my feelings about a special friend like it was my own words.

Lois

Sandy has said things I have been feeling for along while in this poem. I too am afraid of losing a wonderful friendship if I was to voice my true feeling for my friend. Very well written Sandy you took the words right out of my mouth and put them on paper. THANK YOU.

Shay

I thought that the poem was nicely put together. I understood and felt where she was coming from

sheneka

I have to say that your poem is great! The state of mind in the poem is the same state that I was and still is with my boyfriend. I think that I am going to send it to him and I know that he will just luv it. I have to say he will lluv me even more than the day before. I write poetry too, but not as good as you. I need to use m talent more and write about everything that happens in my life. Like I said before the poem was awesome and thanks using the gift to inspire others!

Heather

I love this poem. It describes everything Ive been feeling for the past 16 years for a good friend of mine that just has no idea. You just said it all. Thanx!

amanda

this has got to be the best poem i have ever heard. it describes my situation and the things i am feeling to a tee!

Jason

This is truely a great piece of work. It relates to me in everyway. I loved this girl but i fear to tell her how i feel. I am still frightened whether she would laugh at me or say yes. She is one of my best friend but still these words of I love u stayed in my throat. i still don't know wat to do.

michelle

this was a good poem thank you for sharing

Theresa

This poem is really touching because it somewhat fits how I'm feeling about a friend of mine only it's more lust. Great Poem!

honey

i think your poem was beautiful

nancy

TOtally amazing!

Kim

This poem really touched me because I felt the same way about a friend of mine and I didnt want to tell him because I was afraid of what he would say. That is a beautiful poem. I wish u the best.

Ayana

You have a way with words, and I it just touched me because I am feeling the same. And I did give this poem to my friend who I have fallen in love with.

Brian

this is the one i cud relate to. i also shared this experience sittin' in front of her.

boobie

I read this poem. and by coincidence i surely can relate. I love the poem

bridget

i thought this poem was the best b/c it explains someones true feelings about how they feel about a friend and just dont want to tell them because they dont want to lose them. ( i also have/do felt/feel this way and it is very hard to deal with)

Maria

I had been that way, but i couldnt express that feeling into beautiful poem as she wrote

crystal

this poem got 2 me because its how i feel every time i see my best friend he is also my ex-boyfriend but i still and always will love him

Sandra

This is a very touching poem. I can certainly relate. For I have fallen in love with my friend, but I dare not mention it for it will lead to my demise. Great Poem with lots of feelings and very touching.

Vannessa

that was really good

Danielle

I really enjoyed this poem, because it explained my situation and how I feel towards a certain someone right now! It's great, I couldn't have done it any better myself!

Ariel

This is an artistic poem. I absolutely loved it. I have the same problem. And I must confess. Great Job!

Sarah

Your poem was great I really liked it and I bet anyone who has been in those situations would say the same! I'd love to show u some of my poems. Keep up the good work . sarah

Michelle

This is a great poem! It described just how I was feeling!

Pink

This poem is fab, it has really left me speechless!

kitten

i loved this poem!

Scarlet

I fell in love with the poem when I read it. The title of the poem was really what caught my attention to reading its entirity. Once I was reading it, I was stirred and felt the same way the author describes. I am going through a similar situation, actually the same dilemma and this was perfect to have read at this moment of time in my life.

Katie

I love this poem because it reminds me of what is going on in my life right now. It helped me get through a few things in my life. thank you Sandy!

Lisa

THIS POEMS REALLY HITS HOME. I'M GOING THRU SOMETHING LIKE THIS RIGHT NOW. I WISH I COULD SHOW THIS POEM TO THIS MAN, BUT I CAN'T. TOO MUCH OF RISK.

Jessica

Great pattern. read smoothly. can feel the anxiety and anxiousness. thumns up

ashley

i love this poem you really summed up what i think for a friend of mine, i love him so much, and he knows it but his heart belongs to my best friend, so i'm in between a rock and a hard place, yu never know things might change, i'm only fifteen after all, but i had to tell you how much this poem touched me, its perfect, wonderful you have a gift and i'm kindof jealous, thank you. natsumi

Chelsea

I love this poem because it is exactly how me nad many other teens feel right at this moment. I am in love with one of my best friends but I don't know how to tell him. This really helped me and I think I've decided to tell him. Thank You. Oh and this totally earns a 10 in my book! Thank You!

tiffani

This One Makes Me Remember The Way I Feel About Me And My True Lve

kashia

i have just come out of a relationship, and i felt the same way right after it had ended.

BRANDON

WOW. Im feeling this way about a friend and i couldnt explain the way i felt, but the poem couldnt have come at a better time. awesome poem thanks.

m

The poem said everything that i wanted to tell that special someone .

Jackie

Beautiful poem

krystal

GREAT POEM i know exactly how u feel i sent that poem to my friend and he is know my bf

lucia

I really liked your poem this really helped me

Fernando

because it describes exactly how i feel about someone, plus it is well spoken(written)

Nieva

i find it so true

Amanda

Wow, if that isn't perfect I don't know what is.

MaLynda

I love this poem. it describes the relationship I have with a friend. that I never thought I would like. but know Im deeply in"like" with him. this is MY poem. to. you(J. A. M)

jeremy

very beautifull poem. i used it to tell a friend how i felt. i didnt take the credit, your name was writen as athor. it was the most perfect poem to size up that situation. thanks, i hope she responds well

bri

cause it reminds me of how i feel for someone in my life

trisaca

i understand 100% i fell for a friend more than once, and wrote about it. it's a great way to express your feelings. i liked your poem alot. good luck.

asfgd

I feel this way. I'm voting because it expresses my feelings so well.

Priscilla

I love your poem because it reflects a part of my life. I am going through the same thing.

Katie

I really liked the poem because this is exactly how I feel for the guy I like most dearest

Reneeolivia

hey yo that poem's great the last great poem i heard that mad me think was burnt ages ago yall poem really touched me to know im not the only person that feels that way well it got me thinkin' your poems great. hope to here more of them in the future

Verlenia

This poem was the best poems that I heard in ages. I think this girl/woman should win a poetry contest if she enters one. This is how I felt about telling my boyfriend that I love him

Alyse

Wow. I think I'm going to cry. I think that everyone can relate to that. How people can be so blind sighted by something so clear. That was an amazing poem. The best on here I have seen so far.

Jennifer

This poem is just what I was looking for to give to a friend who I am hoping will be a Lover.

Ericka

Loved this poem, I have had the same experience. you expressed it so well

Joni

I read your poem and just wanted to tell you that I thought it was great. It was just really easy to read and it hit home.

Toya

this is a very beautiful poem. These are the same exact words I want to say to my ex.

Rahul

Excellent. Nice poem . poem is your but feelings r mine. Good job.

Elle

It's like reading my emotions! It's scary but this poem expresses just how I'm feeling at the moment! Thanks for sharing it!

Sarah

I LIKE YOUR POEM SO MUCH. I UNDERSTAND HOW U FEEL. I FEEL LIKE THAT TOO. I HOPE U FINALLY GET TO BE WITH THAT SPECIAL SOMEONE.

kay

this poem was truly wonderful and say exactly what i need to tell someone who i love but is beyond me as he,s marrige but we are freinds. i guess that will have to do.

Pakou

I loved this poem. thank you for sending it to me. I appreciated. thank you.

heather

This is exactly how i felt about this one guy. he was new to my school, we became good friends. i started to really like him. i was really scared to tell him how i really felt. then just this year he moved away. ive talked to him once and told him that i missed him. i havent talked to him since. i still think about him all the time and wish i could just see him and joke with him one more time. this poems is exactly how i felt about him!

Stephanie

I love dis poem! I would give u da highest score! This poem relates to me too!

melissa

hey, wudd up?well i just luv the poem its the exact same thing that i feel for my guy friend but i dont think he knows!well you did a great job!

Pakou

I really love this poem. It reminds me of the time when I use to like this person in my school. I was afraid to go and talk to him because I was scared what he might answer me back. But then I realized what he feels about me too. We began to talk to each other and becomes real good friends. Now I know that no matter how you feel about the person that you like, you need to try and give a chance. Thanks for putting this poem in the net.

sara

i give you a 10 on tihs poem. wait what's the highest you can go? cuz i really like the poem. props fuh you

Kristina

AMAZING POEM! TOOK MY FEELINGS OUT OF MY HEART AND PUT IT IN PENCIL AND IT IS THE SAME AS THE POEM.

Beverly

Hey girls! I know the same feeling becuz I have one on one of my male friends as well,so poet writer you did a BIG deal for us to release a GREAT deal of pressure off of our shoulders. So hats off to ya girl! Keep up the writing so you can make words a lil' more easier for us.

Avion

This peom i simply wonderful. And has made me able to express what i could not say in words. Thank you.

ana

wow!very amazing. i could picture the pain you feel!you have talent. youre words are simple yet very deep!good job

ashley

omg-i loved ur poem-it was great-it made me think of all those times that i was alone wit marcus n' realized exactly how in love wit him i really was-and how i couldnt tell him cuz of how much i loved having him as a friend-there 4 me all the time. my point is that i loved ur poem and i felt like u were writing it 2 me-it really makes u think-we are all connected throught our feelings.

emily

Wow. this poem was really exellent, and for me and many others, close to home, loving someone so much andd not saying a word is hard, thanks for putting it into words for me. I just wish I had the guts to give it the guy i love.

Roxanne

I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS GREAT

chloe

this poem has helped me thanks - i had a crush on my best mate n told him in the end through this poem n we got 2getha thanks so much x x

Meghan

Wow! that was awesome! i really like that poem! it reminds me of a guy i really like but he won't even give me the time of day! that was really good!

Britt

This poem totally explains somethings in my life. the part about longing to say I love you but cant because your afraid what that other person will say.

Amy

well i think that this poem is true cause gurlz are affired to show their feelingz to boyz and you describe it very well.

MIKE

YOU SAID WORDS THAT ARE ECHOS OF MY HEART

Jason

I love this poem. It is exactly the same thing i am going through with my best frien since kindygarten. i just cant explain it but i love her.

Rosie

I adored this poem. It describes so well exactly how I am feeling about one of my best friends. Thank you soooooooo much, this is a wonderful poem!

baby girl

i love this poem beacausei feel in love with this guy name gary and this really describe my feelings toward him

Tabitha

This poem is so true. I totally agree with you! I couldn't have done what I'm fixen to do with out your poem that I just read

stacie

hey i just wanted to let you know that this poem is great!i mean that it is just how ii feel about my boy friend thanks for writing it

kim

Poem was really great

heather

i thought your poem was great i really felt it as i read your a great poem writer keep up the good work

Sophie

Wow! this poem really explains how i feel about one of my bestfriends i am fallin for him and i just don't have the nerve to tell him at all

jill

great took the words out of my head

emily

i really liked your poem. i can really relate to it. it was sweet.

Clare

Your poem really touched me. I have been liking my good guy friend for four years, and he still doesn't know. I'm too scared to tell him because our friendship to me is very valuable. When I read your poem, I thought that, "One day, it will be me and him. " I'm still waiting for that day. I saved your poem on my computer and everyday, when I get the chance, I read it. Just lovely!

Sandy

Your poem was sweet, it just what i want to said to my friend ryan but this im going print and give it to him great job i would love oto hear more

Arianna

This poem really touched me. Why it did is becuase I am going through the same thing right now. I have a guy friend that only wants to be my friend, but I can't seem to get the guts to tell him how much I really do care about him. So this poem really helped me out and made me see that I'm not alone. thank you!

U

Aww. this poem like the others too are so touching. I go through the same thing to so i definitely understands. Exellent Job w/the poem. You speak for me too.

dianelle

that realy touched me you made a change in my life

Loren

I loved it. It reminded me of this guy that I like. If you make any more poems please let me now. Really Good!

jessica

wow!. that is how i feel right now.

lizz

wow. i can totally relate

vinetta

thats was a very touching poem,i feel your pain and longing for him. keep up the good words,take care.

Lizzie

I really love this poem. When I read it, how physic I am to know it's soo about me! I can't wait to give the guy I have a crush on this poem, so he knows what I feel about him. Thanks a lot! I owe you!

Tierra

yeah, I liked this poem. Cause this poem is like,related to my problems. So the person who wrote poem this poem, keep doing ya thang , ya heard me.

KAtS

Great poem! I have felt this way before, but the best thing to do is tell the person how you feel, i did, and found out he felt the same. "Love unexpressed is a crime against the heart"

Ethan

This poem touched me i sent it to one of my friends it mad her cry. I told her i didnt wirte it and she didnt care i got to see a swile on her face we are now closer togeter than ever before i really like the way you wrote

Alicia

Wow. I really like this poem. It describes exactly how I feel about my one of my male friends that I have known for 2 years. I absolutely love it!

Leilani

I love this poem. I actually fell in love with a guy friend and he does not know how I feel about him right now, and this expresses how I feel about him perfectly.

cesy

I love this one!

Azee

This poem perfectly depicts the happenings of my friendship. I always wanted to tell my Best Pal that I do not consider her just a friend, but the fear of loosing her was always in my way. I wish Someday I could tell her and she understand it as well

Lor-n

your poem describes my life! I like my friend devon but I'm scared to tell him because being friends is better than being nothing!

diane

I loved it. xxx

Karla

This poem is so realistic. i know where you are coming from. Wonderful, WONDERFUL job.

ariel

this poem is exactly happening right now to me. i love the boy that i can't face

Shannyn

Your poem hit home real quick i'm happy to know that i'm not the only one going through such dilemma. hope things worked out let me know.

Jackie

this poem says exactly how i feel and how i would really like to express how i feel inside.

Ashley

i realy loved your poams ther realy toughtful of you

Chase

I truely know how u feel. I wish u good luck and the courage to say it cause i wen through that 6 months ago with my best friend. Now she is my girlfriend and i love her even more.

natilie

I LOVE THIS POEM IT TOUCHED ME LIKE IT WAZ SO REAL!I WOULD LOVE 2 WRITE POETRY LIKE YHIS HOW IT TOUCHES PEOPLE. U READ YALL WILL LOVE IT 2

Linda

I just have to say that I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM! I CAN DEFINATELY RELATE TO THIS POEM! IT IS DEFINATELY FULL OF HEART AND I CAN TELL THAT YOU PUT ALOT OF EMOTION INTO IT! GREAT POEM!

mariela

it's a really nice poem it puts in prespective how love can be very difficult to express when you don't want to ruin a great friendship

miranda

this is the best love poem i have ever read so far. Because i too have a dilemma like that. so this poem is so cool!

valerie

I am going through the same thing w/my best guy friend. Him and I have been friends for three years but we have been best friends for two years, and i never knew i had a feeling for him until he hooked up w/a close friend of mine. and it's hard to deal with. I just realized things too late. But ur poem gave me comfort. I'm hurting less,. thank u sandy.

kim

i can relate to the poem for i too am in love with my best friend but i cannot tell him how i feel for the fear of losing him.

Carla

This poem really helped me cope with my situation. I'm in the same boat. I couldnt have said it better myself. i really enjoyed reading it.

ellie

I know what you are feeling because I too have the same problem as you.

stephanie

This poem was emotional for me being that I have been in a position to where I have recently had to, as well as my x-boyfriend, let out our feelings that we still have for eachother. This is what was going through my head as I stared him in the eyes as I cried. You are a very talanted writer.

Robert

this poem tells of what im going through right now. Your poem has given me the courage to tell the person i love how much i care about her and the feelings that I have for her. this was a beautiful poem and i wish i could write like you. thank you for iving me the courage to tell her this valentines day

magdey

I love this poem. I's amazing

Tony

I Loved tis poem. It explained exactly what I feel about someone that I long to say "I Love You" to to.

CHERESSE

Ican really relate to this poem so much because this is how I feel about my best friend. It's good to know that other people feel the same way.

tookunfuzed4yoo

hey i really loved this poem n i can seriously relate. the feeling just hurts but i hope u feel better n get thru it=)

Michelle

This is exactly how I feel about a special friend of mine. I wish that I had the courage to tell him, but I don't want to ruin what we have.

Jessica

That poem was so beautiful and touching! When I read this poem, I thought about my guy friend that I have fallen for. I am not good at expressing how I feel about him verbally, but with this poem, I can express how I feel about him on paper. Thanks.

yamara

I like the peom. I think it was so sweet. And it was so sweet that i give it to my boyfriend. Thanx u

Megan

Oh my god, i LOVED this poem, i know how anyone that thinks this way feels, thanks so much for writing this poem, it helped me discover what was really going on with me

Kayla

It was a real good pome and I like it very much

Ericka

I almost cried while reading this poem. I have been friends with a guy for 8 years in which I have always felt very strongly about. Just recently we talked sightly about how we felt for each other. However, I really want to tell him the "whole truth" of how I feel. This poem brings out every thought that has crossed my mine. I know I love this guy. This poem helped me to realize that.

Janet

I love this poem. It feels so real when you read. I can't describe the feeling in words.

Steve

This poem is the only sad poem I've ever read. It is about true love, but too real to declare it. I believe it relates to my life

Mel

I really loved this poem. It is exactly how i feel about this guy have known for 2 years. He knows how i feel but i just can never say "I love You" to him. This poem is an inspiration.

Jessi

Great poem. It is excatly the opposite of wht I'm going through. But Great.

Wow

This is a wonderful poem it describes my realtion ship with a new friend. Im afraid of the answer and cant bring my self to tell her hwo i feel.

Kayla

hey i really thought bout wut u wrote it was great adn it made me think. maybe i should juss tell this guy how i feel. neways ur poem met a lot i hope to read more!

Toya

i really like the poem it had a lot of feeling if ti was on a scale 1-10 i will pick 10

marc

I got only two words to say: great poem!

Cam

Sandy, I can appreciate the difficulty of expressing, emotion towards a friend I'm going through the same thing right now. VERY good poem.

behna

it was great

Eliza

I read your poem and it applies to me on so many levels. I just recently started dating my best friend. The thing is I have been in love with him for years and I want to tell him but I don't know if he feels the same way and I don't want to do any thing to mess this up.

neil

Its excellent, wish i had come across this when i needed it a few years ago

TC

I WAS TOUCHED BY THE LONGING IN THIS PIECE. A BURNING PASSION ON THE TIP OF THE TONGUE NEVER VOCALIZED, WHY CAN'T THEY JUST SEE IT IN MY EYES. THIS IS A GREAT POEM!

Renee

This is my first visit to your website. This poem hit the nail on the head! It's as if the poet wrote this poem specifically for my situation! Many thanks!

baz

this poam means so much 2 me because i know how exacly this gril feels.

Nice

You just described the feeling I'm having right now! Excellent job you did! Indeed, it helps .

Kim

Your poem was so beautiful. it makes me think about the florida gator that I love most.

Shay

Your poem is beautiful. I know exactly what you felt. I have found myself in that position before.

heath

this poem is where iam at with a special someone in my life thanks

danie

This poem is amazing,very few poems actually reach out and touch my heart in unbaleavable ways. This one did. That is all I have to say.

mae

I have only read a few but I can not believe how I am not the only one who has fallen for a friend! No matter what the circumstance this is great. I know, now, that I am not the only one who does such a "foolish thing. " This is, at this time, my favorite. Please continue writing (the author of this poem) you seem to have potential and unfortunetaly reality! Thanks!

Felip

i think this poem is touchfull. so if you gave this to the guy i believe he would have been touched and would have fallen for you

Gail

This poem went straight to my heart

Yessy

Something like this happened to me with my bestfriends boyfriend. Him and i got real close me would tell me his problems with his girl and then I started liking him and my other friend told him and he felt the same way for me also so we talked about it and decieded to be more than friends (at the same time he was with my bestfriend) so everything was alright at 1st untill ny friend told me that she thought her man was playing her so i felt bad but i loved him. I still love him but we really dont talk anymore and they broke up because of me

holly

hello i so much liked ur poem cause it said almost what i want to say to my ex bf that i care about and that i can only thin of him weve been friends for yrs but i cant bring my self to tell him how exactly i feel and it hurts like a knife running down my spine and i know he loves me to but is just to scared I love you SPIKE

kailash

Thatz was really beautiful.

Erika

I really love this poem! I am in the same scenario, but I am married. I feel more close and passionate to another man. I got married at a young age and I am changing. It took the other man to make me realize that. I want to be with the "other man", but don't know how to tell him or my husband. The feelings are strong, but I don't know if they are mutual,I can only assume by looking in the "other mans" eyes when we make passionate love that I have never made. LOVED THE POEM!

jason

your poem is so kool thank u

Jan

I cried when I read this. I feel no one understood how I felt when it comes to have crushes on a certain person I knew best. that was why I tried hard to move on by pushing away.

Ebony

I'd like to say that your poem is very sweet and that your talented and keep up the good work and God Bless you.

Susie

This is a great poam and perfectly explains what i was going through. We've met in kindergarten and ever since we were nest friends. Whenever I'm around him I will be paralyzed and I yearned for his touch. Actually I did confess my love to him and now were going out. Things couldn't of been better between us.

hana

i feel the same . love it!

Kena

This poem is so good. I t says everything I have been thinking about someone special. Thank you for saying it the way you did.

von

this poem was the tight and i loved it so so so so so so so so wonderful

Ray

This is a great poem. I fell in love with my friend more than one year ago and have been too scared to tell her as I know she doesn't feel the same. This poem was a great release for me, now knowing that I'm not alone. Thankyou Sandy.

Kay

Beautiful and so truthfull!

kathy

this poem is very bueatiful. just last night i finally told the man of my dreams that i love him, i'm afraid it might of scared him tho. if i would of seen this poem before telling him it would of made things much easier. i felt he needed to know my feelings about him.

Sammi

This poem is awesome. It's exactly what I'm going through right now with one of my really good guy friends.

Ashlee

i love this poem. i have a friend that i feel this way about. i want to tell him how i feel, but every time i try to tell him i get choked up.

nate

this is a great poem it reminds me of a friend i know

Amanda

This is great, this is just what I am goin through right now. It hurts to see him though with someone else. It has brought depression. But keep up the good work

Hanna

I can definitely relate to this poem. Kudos for bringing words to how I feel

Natal

this poem describes all my emotions right know how seeing my boo makes my day and how my heart breaks every time i think about how he doesn't even know that i like him GREAT POEM

Mandi

I really liked your poem. It expresses the way i totally feel about someone right now. They're a really good friend, and people think we're dating cause of how we act, but i can't bring myself to actually go for it! Once again. love your poem!

Ana

Oh. ThiS poeM is GOO! i coulD relate 2 it A LOT! Good JoB!

Angel

Love your poem. Not only is it well written but i can definently relate to it also. I'm in love with my bestest friend, and i dont think he knows. and ive always wondered how he cant see how much i love him in my eyes. everyone else can

Jenny

This poem sums up my feelings better than I could have expressed them myself. Thank you for writing this poem for your own good and for mine as well.

Jess

I love this poem because it has so much heart and passion put into it. It's like a painting with words that I could stare at for hours!

JEN

I LOVE YOU'R POME. IT IS SO CUTE, BUT THE REAL REASON WHY I LOVE IT IS BECAUSE I LIKE A BOY WHO'S A FRIEND, AND I'M CRAZY TO TELL HIM BUT I CAN NEVER FIND THE COURAGE TO DO SO!

shady

The moment I read your poem I felt what you were saying. I can really relate to your poem, because I too fell head over heels over my friend. I love it! =)

Laurie

This poem made a grown man cry. The heart felt words convey the true anguish of unspoken love. I know because I walk the same path.

jems

i can definatly relate to your poem. i may only be 14 but i had the same experience. he won't go out with me because he is worried that it will ruin our friendship that we have had for so long. i love him and your poem expresses exactly how i feel.

Amanda

I really enjoyed reading your poem I also sent it to my friend Paule and she liked it too. I'd give it a 6. 5 it's pretty cool.

Mindy

I really loved your poem. It made me think of the boy that I love but I'm really scared he'll not like it and turn me down.

Amanda

I really love your poem, because it describes the exact feeling that I have. I been best friends with this guy for 9 years and I have fallen madly in love with him and I am afraid to tell him. I'm afraid it will mess up our very special relationship that we share and your poem is really touching.

Tiana

I love it.its soooo beautiful! I'm in the same situtation now. It really touched me and made me feel like I'm not alone. Great job and keep it up! It's Wonderful!

Dee

This is a really good poem. I really tells how i feel about a friend of mine. this will help me. thank you

Lindsey

This is an awesome poem. I liked it because I'm pretty much going through the same thing right now.

Megan

I love this poem! It reminds me of someone I know.

diane

this poem is the bomb! it's exactly how i'm feeling!please give this girl an award!

vanessa

I can totally relate to this poem. It is extremely true and full of feeling.

Sara

The same thing is happening to me right now. I really really like one of my friends but i dont want to tell him for fear of losing the relationship we have already but i also think he likes me more then a friend too. Im just so confused and you poem helped. THANK YOU

Sandy

i was looking for the right words to describe my feelings and came across this poem.suffice it to say.i need not look any further

Susan

HEY you did a WONDERFUL job on this poem. I love it! It made me feel so sad because I'm going through the same thing with my friend. He's so funny and nice.I don't know anyone else who has that special personality like him.

crissy

i really love your poem it reminds me of how i felt when i was in love with my best friend but i didn't know how to tell him, i was always wondering is my eyes would give me away

kristie

Great poem! It reminded me of someone. It reminded me, of something - "That I just won't ever know!

Rain

I really love your poem. Wanna know why? I love it because it's my experience. I love a guy who doesn't love me in return. I LOVE YOUR POEM.!:)

mary

I think it's really beautiful and it really has emotion. It's so real.

shannon

this was a cool poem!very tuching

Jessica

This is one of the most romantic poems I've ever read! It literally took my breath away!

kelly

That was great! I just wanted that to be said. I think every one has had that feelng about a friend at least once in their life. I know I have! Once again that was a wonderful poem!

Ashley

this is a really good poem. its exactly what im goin through right now. thanx now i know im not alone

sn0flake

this poem is GOOD! its what i am going through. the only difference is that my friend has a g/f already, and he have been such good pals that he dosent realise that i have fallen for him. guess i will never be able to tell him.

Jeannie

This poem describes everything that I am going through right now. I am TOTALLY in love with my best friend Hoyt. He is the most amazing person that I have every met in my entire life and now I know how to tell him. He is coming over today and I am printing this out and giving it to him! I love this poem and i think it is absolutely amazing!

Redd

I luv this poem, it reminds me of someone. Keep up the good work!

cathy

I like this poem, I'm sort of a poem collector. And plus I like this comment room, not like the others i went to. Well anyway I like this poem

Amie

I think that is a great poem and I can totally relate to it.I have this one friend I have known forever and have feelings for him and he doesn't know it.

Raiderchick

A good poem. Very realistic.

lilcandygirl

its very NICE! i can really relate 2 your poem! i have a friend i really love but he's courting my best friend. lately, he talked to me that he broke up with my best friend coz the one he truly love is me! isnt great?! luckily, my best friend isnt angry at me. i hope you'll work for more poems! you can put into words what we are feeling! thanx and good luck!

Eric

This is a very beautiful poem!

Die

This is an incredible poem I know exactly what you are saying. I am in that situation now and it has been a year and a half of those feelings. GREAT WORK

Colleen

This poem perfectly describes how I'm feeling right now. Thanks for letting me know I'm not the only one!

Nicole

FANTASTIC! I really love this poem. This poem remained me to one of the guys that i loved and i never tell him that i love him!

Sam

I can honestly say that i relate to this poem. It was great! I was feeling a bit down today, so i decided to get on the net and check 0ut the poetry. and i'm glad i did! Excellent!

Amber

i cant tell you in words how good this is..its written very very well for a poem and to tell u the truth its exactlt what im goin through with my best friend

BECCA

YO I LOVED THIS POEM.IT SOUNDS JUST LIKE A SITUATION IM GOING THROUGH RIGHT THIS MOMENT.I GLAD TO KNOW IM NOT THE ONLY ONE.

tyer

i really liked your poem

Iageka

this is a cool poem!i luv it alot!i can really related to it..go on girl!

Kristy

I like this one! It really desrcibes how I feel towards one of my friends!

Lawrence

This peoms is great. It perfectly expressed my current situation. It vocalized my own feelings.

livE

This peom completely relates to someone i like who I talk to all the time and I just cannot tell her.

Jay-r

thanx sandy I think this poem was predestined for me to send this a very speial gfriend in my life her mane is Keriffe she is the best thing that ever happened to me..aaatleast not yet but after reading thins person I think she will see how muck I love her..thanx again

Khemraj

Sandy, u tought of the same thoughts i have at this moment for my dear friend Malarie. I still fear how she would respond to words from my heart.

The

I thought this poem was tight. It explains that special "thing" you have for. well a "Friend". I know exactly what she went through.

Aburnelle

i just have to give you credit, this poem, in a way has helped my relationship. thank you.

Erin

this poem is very good and will make alot of seccess in the future i think!

isabel

I love it. Its just exactly what i feel for my close friend but i don't know how to tell him. Im afrais that if he knows my feelings for him he will take me for granted and i'm afraid of that to happen. Thanks for this very great poem. Now i know what i should do and where i am.

Midnight

This describes my relationship with my best friend Paul so well it's scary. I'm actually going to print it out and send it to him. Thanks

Kiria

Ohh my God, this poem is awesome..it is like if were writing for me! Keep writing darling, you've doing well.

dav

i digg the way the feelings and emotions where spilled, i see myself inbetween each line..very nice very nice

ANGEL

IT IS SUCH A GREAT POEM IT IS EXACTLEY HOW I FELL ABOUT MY BEST FREND CHRIS THANX

Andy

This poem is truly real and this is a problem that alot of people have includin myself.

Tammy

I have been reading poetry for a while,to help me find the words to say to my frien,and in this poem the words are as I have wanted to say.The words in this poem are beautiful,and I know from what I have read you have went through what I am going through,I hope your pain was put to rest.Great Job.

Smooth

The poem has a melody on its own. it's smooth groove is like a dance in the breeze in the night as the breath of the poet touches life..

Sean

Once I tried to say I love you to the woman I love, but I ran out the door before she heard me, and I don't know where she is now. "But am scared of your reply. Terrified like a child" Sums up how I felt when I ran out the door. I wish I would have told her sooner, because now she's gone and I'm alone and depressed.

Becca

This is such a beautiful poem! It describes so many teenagers when they realize they have feelsing for a friend. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the near future

sam

I love this poem so much. It reminds me of someone I like but too shy to tell them.

Jennifer

You know, there are a lot of people who can relate to your poem, including me. I am so happy that there are other people in the world that actually know what is going on. I like how you expressed your emotions and how, with that, you hit me in a place that doesn't get touched too often......my heart. I am glad that I found this place and your poem. It probably was hard to put it in words, I mean, how you feel. I am in the same place you are. But, I think I am going to tell him how I feel because it just hurts too bad. Thankyou for letting us hear what is in your heart!

phyleasha

I loves this poem sooo much that I sent it to my one and only lover.

Kimm

your poem is perfect! I am in a similar situation with this man I am crazy about. But I am so scared to tell him how I truely feel, even though HE is the one who makes the first moves! I'm just afraid of getting hurt. I wonder if he'll ever know my true feelings?

Michael

I really like this poem because it reflects what I'm going through with a very dear friend of mine that I love so much, but she doesnt have the same feelings for me as I do for her. But this helps deal with the situation better. thanks.

kim

This is very good

Tawnya

I loved your poem. It reminds me of what I'm going through with my friend Keith. I don't know how to tell him how I feel. Your poem made it easy. Thanks

Levi

This is just how I feel about a girl that I work with. Thanks it has helped me understand what I have to do to win her over. Oh tea! And the poem Is FANTASTIC!

IMRAN

vote for this poem just in three words. LOVE LIVES FOREVER

Fleece

I think I like the girl who wrote this poem. *grin* Girl, this poem is awesome. Would you pass me another animal craker and that other thing please?

Liz

Perfect formulated the doubt and the heartache, we all well know, it is an excellent poem. I ask myself: if he/she were the RIGHT person, we wouldn't hesitate to tell him/her our feelings, because we could trust him/her. This is the point:TRUST.

Andrew

This poem was exactly what I was looking for. I too fell head over heals for a friend and this was just what I needed...Thanx!

Nara

all i can saay is its beautiful, simply beautiful

Timon

i think this is good for winning some1 heart.thnx alot 4 this poem imma give this to this gyrl i like ;) ;)

Viga

Thank You! Excellent job! I wonder how is your relationship with the frien now?

Angel

Sandy, did you write this on my behalf? My secret love will forever remain.

Melissa

This poem is so good, it describes everything I am feeling and don't know how to tell him, maybe if I give him this poem he will understand. Thank you very much.

Simone

I am SPEECHLESS!.. This is how I feel about a special friend of mine. I LOVE this poem! You definately have skills.

kacie

that poem was the best it relates to alot of people myself included.keep writting that was great!

Amy

This is a wonderful poem. Each day someone struggles with this problem. I Love it

Brighteyes

I am glad to know that I am not the only one going thru this. My best friend is my soulmate. What to do?

meg

this poem is extremly good i feel that you should get credit for it

veronica

i love this poem is really expresses how i feel about this one special person i never thought i would find the right words to say to him but your poem will help me out a lot thanks.

Hasz

I wish i had found this poem three years ago.but anyway I'm now happy with my family so does him. He is still my friend and I still ove him but in a different way .. :) Sometimes you just things happen for a reason.

Kara

hey, i think this poem is so kool! I feel the same way about a guy that i really like & love! I know how you feel!

Scott

This poem relates to mostly anybody. I know it most describes my feelings torward the women that I love. The poem is awesome and is beautifully written and is brilliantly said.

abby

I think this is one of the best poems I have saw in a while. Very touching :)

akira

I absolutely love this poem,and I can really relate to it.But i wonder,did the author ever tell this person that she loves them?

sam

beautiful..

KMB

THIS POEM REALLY SPEAKS TO MY HEART. I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT A FRIEND. RIGHT NOW I WISH I HAD THE NERVE TO TELL MY FRIEND THE WAY THAT I FEEL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Chelsea

This is a really good poeam and I will give it to one of my crushes.

Amanda

Hi, I thought that this porem was a very touch-full peom

Melissa

I Love this Poem. I felt the same exact way about my Best Friend Paul, and i went for him.. Now we have been together for 2 months and still going strong.

Tru

I really liked this poem. One of the best I've ever read at this site. Maybe it's just because I like rhyming poems, but that's only because they flow better.

Darren

Incredible. I've been through this once before, and am going through it again right now.

tickles

the poem was absolutely great! it really describes the way i feel to a man,whom i really,really like

John

This is a very good poem. I liked it. However, I think it should be longer. There should be more. The author has set the stage for a dramatic confrontation. Their eyes should meet. There should be a confirmation - either Yea or Nay - about what these two sets of eyes see, what they confirm or deny in each other. This poem has the potential to tell a story.

Ginger

This is an amazing poem. It is so much me that I can't even believe it. Keep writing.

j

I feel the same I think that I am falling in love with a friend but not a really good friend I really do not know what to do

JD

I have looked everywhere for a poem that explains how I feel about my best friend of seven years. But they all seem to be leaving out something. This poem is me to a tee. I almost cried the first time I read it! It's great!

Toni

This is a great poem. I can totally understand what you were thinking when you wrote this. I am having the same problem now. Great Poem!

John

What can I say but wow? This poem is incredible..Upon reading it, feelings that I did not know Ifelt rose inside of me..I realized that that is exactly what I am going through with a good friend of mine..I feel that I love her, but am scared of what may happen if I follow through.

Tina

this poem is perfect.

keisha

omg, GREAT, i loved it SANDY, i say say keep writing keep goin w/ ur gift, the way u write hits me right where it hurts i mean its a good hurt but it was great & ur words come from the heart* & i think u need 2 keep writing tell every1 what u FEEL INSIDE! & i wish u the BEST OF LUCK i love it KEEP SMILIN

DeeDee

I LOVE THIS POEM! It is very well said..what more can we say when the one whom we love is just so far away!

mandi

I loved this poem. It is exactly what I am going through right now.

huey

yo thiz poem iz so beautyful its iz deep i dont think i have ever seen ah poem that has discribe how i feel about its grl i know she is beautyful i wanna thanx sandy thiz is ah work of art & u have ah gifted

martgaret

the poem explains it self it's great!

Jude

I love this poem. You write down so many feelings that I'm sure many friends have towards each other.Very cool.

LaToya

I really love this poem, it really brought tears to my eyes because i've felt this way about some one really close to me.

tricia

i really liked this poem. i am starting to fall head over heels forone of my guy friends, but im just to chicken to tell him. i hope that when i give this to him that he will feel the same about me.

ken

Always had problems expressing myself but when I seen this poem I knew my new lady had to have it..Thanks

Malcum

I have been looking for a poem for so long that states exactly how I feel. This poem hit it perfect! Thanx!

teffane

I thought this poem was beautifl because it's so true. Alot of people can relate to being in love with someone and not having them know it.

jesi

i love this poem because i am too affraid to tell this girl i am in love with her, and i see her every day at school and we just mumble a little hello, and walk on past. one time she tuched my hand on accident and i acutally fainted. thank you

Trees

Hey there! Loved your poem. It made me remember what I went through. I fell in love with my best friend too, except I did eventually tell him - and now we've been together for 3 years and he's my soulmate and I so don't regret every telling him how I felt. I'm glad I took a chance and went with what I really wanted. Better to have tried then live in regret.

Denise

You brought tears to my eyes and actually, I sent your poem to a man that I think I am fallin in love with. We are very good friends but I just do not want anything to mess up our friendship. Thank you for the thoughts I could not find words for.

michele

i love this poem. it is so true

Mark

I absolutely love that poem. I completely feel that way for my best friend but like yourself I want don't want to ruin our friendship; she means alot to me- where words can't explain. excellent poem keep up the good work

Jess

Outstanding

Tommy

I have really enjoyed reading your poem that you had posted. I really felt the feelings behind the Poem. You seem to have really felt feelings for the person that you were writting about. Good luck on your future poems, may they be as good or better than this one.

amanda

i thought this was a woulderful peom i love it i printed it out with all my other peom

kim

Great Poem, I know the feeling all too well.

Aprille

This poem was wonderful I feel this same way about my best friend you have my vote.

Tom

same thing that happen to me. Just like that poem.

erik

it great and i can relate

OPAAL

This poem has me written all over it.You see I'm in the realtionship where I'm totally into this guy but since ive been rejected before im some what distance afaid of being hurt again.

tiffany

this is a wonderful poem and i dedicate it to kiley.i love you with all my heart.

Maggie

this is the awsomest poem i have ever heard. it describes how i feel about someone and its perfect.

Sasami

This is a very very good poem. It describes how I feel most of the time.

C.

This poem hit right at home for me.

Shannon

This poem describes exactly how I feel about a friend of mines. It is so true and meaningful to me. The poem flowed exactly like my thoughts in my mind.

Amanda

I just started seeing someone I work with. It's only been four days and I want so much to exsplode my feelings toward him but am scared to death, because of my fear of being hurt once again by a man. Your friend:) Amanda Falwell

jake

I really enjoyed the way you got into your poem it makes me smile to see some one with such emotion in their work. i just wanted to say that

Adriene

i am feeling this it is flowing and nice i can relate.

merryl

my friend asked me to print this poem out for her. it relates to her compltly. she has told the guy and even though he doesn't feel the same way he does watch what he says to consider her feelings.

Kristen

I think that this poem is so true and heartfelt. This poems describes the feelings towards a guy I have loved for a long time, wanting to talk to him, wanting to hold him. Though, I cannot find the words to say how much I need him. This poem describes exactly how I have felt. Once again, this poem is beautiful.

Bernard

I really enjoyed your poem. You took the words write out of my mouth. As a fellow poet, it is nice to find someone who can express emotions that are often hard to express in a simplistic way.

carlos

It just souds with what I am going throught

Robert

I thought the poem was really good and it the author has some good taste, She really knows how to write, and i think she did a good job.

Theresa

This poem is exactly how I feel twords a wonderful man.

Sarah

I really liked that poem it was really good work I wish I could write stuff like that I am going to give that poem to a friend because that is how i feel about him.

Jeanne

It was as though you wrote this poem for me to send to my new found love. And I did. It's beautiful. Thank you.

Diana

It is very nice, I cant say it in the words this poem is amazing

A,manda

This poem brought tears to my eyes!! I LOVE it so much! You are a great writer, write more!! Amanda Stevenson

Jenni

This is the perfect poem for a friend of mine- you is grapaling with this- I am actually going to send it to her now. Wonderful job!

Jeff

This is great.I am going thru it.

Raj

Brilliant Expression. Lovely structure. Beautiful feeling

Stephanie

Whoa! You hit the nail right on the head. Keep writing what the rest of us can not put into words. Awesome!

Celenne

I related quite well with the writer's emotions in this beautiful poem...very elequently written!

angela

u captured exactly what i was feeling 4 my friend john i thanku 4 this truly amazing poem that has touched my heart

yogendra

the best

deb

You go girl. This poem is one that most people can really relate to keep on writing! Simple Wonderful.

Michelle

ABSOULUTLY FABULOUS!! I CANT TELL YOU HOW TRUE THESE WORDS ARE-LOVED EVERY WORD.

TINA

Hey i love the poem and can totally relate to it, thanks!:)

Rich

I know the exact feeling as I am feeling it currently..How do I confess? I do not know.

Jo

Think this was written for me. I guess there are a lot of others in the same situation. Thanks for expressing your feelings as though they were my own.

Jessica

I feel exectly like this about my friend Jimmy but I just can't tell him. But in time I guess!

LAKISHA

GREAT!

diane

This poem rocks. After reading hte summary I decided to read it because it sounded just like what I'm going though. After reading it I felt as if it was written by me. It totally touched base with the feelings that are between my guy friend and me, but only I have no clue how he feels.

Gib

I really enjoyed this particular poem. Memories and past experiences entered my body once again from reading this. I thank you!

Sheena

I really like this poem. A lot of people, including myself, have been in this situation.

Linda

i think this poem is great. i have experince it already the way i felt when i have a crush on someone. this poem have shown all the feeling that i have for so long.

MARIAM

I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM I DID NOT KNOW HOW TO TELL MY BOYFRIEND THAT I LOVE HIM AND THIS POEM SAYS IT ALL HE ASKS ME ALL THE TIME WHY I LOOK AT HIM LIKE I DO. AND NOW WHEN HE READS THIS HE WILL KNOW.

Ashley

Ireally liked this poem!

janis

I really liked this poem, it describes what i am going through, all the feelings, it feels good to know i am not alone.

Linsey

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read on this site! It sounds just like something I am going through right now. Thanks again! It might just give me the courage to tell that "special someone" how I feel about him!

leesah

very touching poem made me think of how i feel about someone

w

Very good one.

meg

i think this poem is has an incredibly accurate descriptive nature that tells a story almost everyone can relate to. i loved it.

Ross

I thought It was expressed very Well.

shannon

this poem really touched my heart and soul there was alot of meaning and sorrow but a wonderful poem

Miranda

That poem just described everything that i have been feeling for a friend of mine for the past 4 years.....Words cannot describe how wonderful that poem was.

Lani

The only thing I can say is, "that is beautiful"

Kari

I think this poem was beautiful and meaningful.

Ching

Very romantic and simple. I'll keep it to give to the one I love.

Leslie

This was a nice poem, because I can relate to this

KRISTEN

I LOVE THIS ITS SO CUTE

john

i really feel exactly how you feel and i always feel like this.

Christine

This poem describes exactly how I feel about one of my friends....I can identify with the poem totally.

kellie

The poem ios quite beautiful. I am going through something very similar with a wonderful man. I have fallen head over heals for him but he doesn't know it yet.

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