My Gift To You by Lonely Shadow

ariel

it made me cry

antonia

i loved this poem it really is touching.

muzamal

wow, i love this poem

Ricky

loved it. i feel this way about someone i am confused however i belong to someone

tos

i love this poem coz i have a friend that i fell in love wit very early in our friendship but she dosent want to take it any further than friendship but we are still best friends 5 years later and i still love her and always will.

william

its beautiful and to the point.

keke

i love the poem very much it is all that

skye

i really liked this poem it really touched me on the spot and i enjoy reading poems because they really do keep me intertained an makes me think about others of whu i love and those that show they care but these poems make me realize who is really important to me , when i read other peoples poems i think of how they feel because you dont just rite any random thing its always about how you feel about your lover or your friend an so thats y i feel reading other peoples poems makes everyone realize who counts an who your true friends an family are love skye xxx

barbara

all i want 2 say is what a heart warming poem xx

Brad

I love this poem. I have a special friendship with a male friend who is much younger than me but his soul is as old as me and I so wish we were more than just friends! He's the most beautiful person I've ever met.

Kim

Beautifully said.

Brianna

i love it. i have a friend moving ferther up nort when she lives in Auckland and i hamilton. we hardly get to see eachonther but if u have a poem about a friend who lives far i'd like to hear it.

shaie

i loved this poem alot it reminds me of someone I know and want to get back with, but he wants to be friens.

Cathy

I can see your love for her and I think also your talent and love your poem. Best Wishes for you in this life journey and hope with your soulmate.

stacey

THIS POEM HAS A VERY SPECIAL MESSAGE, THATS WHY IM VOTING FOR IS

jacob

i love this poem and hope to get the girl of my dreams with it

samantha

I love this poem and can relate to it on many levels.

darrell

One of the best

estrella

its a beautiful poem is so deep and true theres lots of people that go through that and dont know what to say and you went to the point your a very good writer

kimberly

this poem is decaited to a boy that i loved every day and always will.

Moteng

I like this poem just because it express all my dark reality . Thanks. Maybe i will give 'her' they same gift,anyway it's the best for her.

maria

from the start to the end ,what a great poem.

alicia

i really like this poem the same thing happened with me and my fiance now i was with his best friend and we fell in love with each other. it is one of the hardest things to ever go through!

skylar

i love it so much it is true for soo many people!uh-hum. me

Sara

I think you should send it to a greeting card company. very will put

christina

That poem was so nice ! I love this poem I wish my boyfriend would write a poem like this to me !

katie

Yeah, I know how this one is too. I am still in love with my ex-boyfriend, and all I want is tobe with him again, but he doesn't want that with me for some odd reason.

James

This poem is really beautiful. I like it.

tonisha

this poem takes me to me and my bestfriend but he his a boy cause i am a girl good luck and good life tonisha

heather

i like this poem alot because i can relate of how like if i we're able to be with the one that i loved then when we would break up then we couldn't even be friends which in my opinion is better because they will always be there for you and you for them

gloria

it really means a lot

Rebecca

You did an awesome job. It sums up so much feelings. Thanks.

Sandy

I love this poem. It completely explains a situation I am in. The strange thing is that I am the one who isn't available, but I can hear my friends voice saying your words to me - excellent!

Debra

Great poem.

esmeralda

I LUV DIS POEM BCUZ IT HAS 2 DU ALOT WIT ME HOPE U DU MOO GOOD POEMZ KKK LUV ALWAYZ LA SEXY LADY

Emma

i love this poem. but i feel sorry for you. likeing your friends girlfriend must be going around or something. my two best friends are fithing over a girl right now. i'm trying to get them to talk but they wont. like i told them no girl or boy is woth a friendship. well i loved your poem and i hope for the best for all 3 of yall.

Eric

I'm in basicly the same situation. Bestfriend, i've started to lover her more than anything, she's still obsessed over an ex. I really liked this poem!

TARA

this peom really got to me and it reminds me about my losted friend thank you for the reminder.

maria

i like this poem and i like to derecate to brandon whit all my heart

shirley

well i can see where u are coming from love the poem!

david

wow! it's amezing poem

Sarai

Hey i really like this poem. It touch me, it is like he knew about me and my lover. But he was a crush when i met him in 7th grade all through 10th grade. I always loved him alot. Keep up the good work yo. sarai

kavitha

Marvellous. Superb. It touches me. Wish a grand sucess of your love. Your feelings are just an. I don't have any words to express my feelings.

crystal

i give this poem a ten this makes me think of my best friend he has been in love with me for 10 years now we have a pact that if we're not married by the age 30 we'll marry each other

stephanie

i like this poem because i have a friend who fell the same about me

lessly

it's really cute

Theresa

This poem was great. That is how i feel most if the time about the guy i like and i really touched me.

Blanca

i like your peom.

alise

this poem was something that i can relate to and under stand how that person ws felling at that time.

Ann

I love your poem. It touches my heart because I have feelings for someone but I don't know if they feel the same way. I hope you will find that person who makes your heart pound. LOVE has a funny way of finding you.

Alicia

i think this poem is so sweet whoev6er did it.

Jim

This touched my heart in a very special way.

Christina

I love this poem. It reminds me alot about my friend who I too like as "more than a friend" but is already " in love". Well done

Lori

Omg I luvv dis poem! It's so touching! I fell n love with it! Wow! That's so good!

jessica

this is the best poem for me and my boyfriend

machala

I know how this person feels. i have one of my best friend who i would give anything and everything to go out with. he likes someone else right now. i geuss thats the way life goes. only god can tell if we were ment to be together.

hannah

This poem is waaaaayy kool. so touching

Michele

I love this poem because it's the way I feel about someone I love and can never have for the same reason.

bella

passion in a lonely heart. beautiful

Diane

Omg i love your poem ure such a good writer wow the girl that u wrote this too must be a very special person and shes probably lucky to have someone like you

laura

The poem was great it really captures what love is all about

alex

I sympathize with you. Im in the same situation. I never found the words to explain how i felt but you have and for that you have my respect. I loved every aspect of this poem; its not riddled or anything with symbolic gestures and remarks but rather more to the point and comes across rather easily. Id give you five stars.

Linda

Great poem has alot of feeling in it keep up the good work.

samantha

I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS BETTER THEN ALL THE OTHER POEMS I HAD READ BEFORE I LOVE IT AND I LOVE U!

maha

very nice. my heart can understand the pain of this words

Furaha

Wow, i really love this poem, it symbolises exactly how i feel about someone really special in my life 2, this is exactly what i wished to say to him, hope he understands my true feelings 'bout him and maybe tell me he feels the same way about me coz we have so much in common, thanx for writing this poem, keep writing more. love from Furaha

Ali

This is an awesome poem! It's like totally what's going on in my life right now. Great job!

harlee

ill give it a 8 score it was very touching though

rochelle

i love it it touch my heart

Tony

I too have a friend that has brought sunshine onto my dark soul and warmed my heart of ice. We see each other as close friends and I am affraid to make it known that I love her for more for fear of losing that closeness that we can share now.

Eleana

Those were beautiful words which really touches onces heart but alas! it was also very heart renching and sad. I felt what she/he was feeling coz I too am in the same situation. Nevertheless, that was a really good poem. Excellent!

michelle

I really like this poem, its very related to me hoping for someone who can never be mine. that my friend

jackie

i know what you are going through, i am in the same boat as you but i am the women.

Celeste

I love this poem. It says exactly what is in my heart. My friend has no idea of the extent of my love. It is the hopes and dreams of what might be that keeps me going because being with them, not having them and living with the fantasy is better than not having them in my life at all.

Crystal

Oh my god a guy wrote this?! This is the most beautiful poem a guy has ever wrote. If this is true I know the girl would dump her boyfriend and go out with you lol. I know I would. I love that poem!

wonderwhy

This touched my heart so deeply. The way you described your love for her and your desire is breathtaking. How one can enter into anothers soul from so far away is amazing. You need more many more like this one my friend. Your words open the mind and one can visiualize exactly what your saying. I vote you win, for you have won my total attention in this Poem.

zama n

Congra dude, that was a nive poem I've seen in my life n' know wat u're goingthrough caz I'm going through the same thing too.

Ambika

Touched my heart deep down. drop of my tear to you.

Sophie

i think this is a very good poem it has lots of feelings:D i love this persdon and it is so true about them

Robert

This poem hit me right in the heart. It explains so much about someone I'm talking to right now.

Janet

this poem touched my heart. I have a friend that is married that if I had the opportunity he could be more, if there was no wife.

Kari

I think taht this poem is very good. My gift to you is very relivent to my life today. Great work!

Annmarie

that poem was off the chain i have a crush and that helped me alot PEACE

rachel

this is my first time visiting this site and clicking on " MY GIFT TO YOU " is an awesome poem i totally loved it i am giving it 2 thumbs up 4 stars it was right on the button with me i am in the same view with someone i love so you hit it right on the button

Alejandra

I love this poem because this is the exact way that I feel about someone and because it is so true.

jessica

i can connect to this poem because i have a friend like that which is a boy and i want our frienship to go far then just friends so i really love this poem it is on my binder in school and all my friends love it!

Vikram

Really good one lonely shadow. But for me the girl i longed for me is now mine :).

xXxrachaelxXx

i found myself in thje same situation a few months ago. i waited and waited and now i have to wait no longer. we are together xxx

reese

i like this poem because it really touched me. it reminds me of a poem my boyfriend wrote to me sometimes when i here love and friendship poems it makes me cry because it really means something to me

Ashley

This is the sweetest thing ever. I've seen guys admire a girl even though she has a boyfriend but not like that. That was just amazing. Any guy that will write something like that about me is some one i would love for life. This girl is crazy if she wont give him the time of day . But if he hasnt told her about his obsession(in a good way), he should walk up to her now. And if he doesnt he is crazy. And if she doesnt listen to him she needs a reality check. QUICK!

rosemary

i loved this poem as it expresses, how i feel about someone very, special, to me, and thats all i can do is to love from, afar, in a similar, way

hannah

your poem is ecellent, it made me cry. i went through a really bad break up this summer,(we dated a year and 2 week) he dumped me for another girl. I loved him with all my heart and i still do to this day. we were best friends before we stared dating and he will always be my best friend till the day i die. No matter what he has done to me. this poem tells how i feel about him thin, now, and to this very day and for ever. i have forgiven him for what he's done to me. i an one of few people that you will always forgive someone for hurting me no matter the situation. to me he was an angle sent from God.

brandie

i love this poem i can defitnly relate im going throught the same process right now. but my frined is bf with my best frind and i love my friend.

cort

I love this poem because it describes what I'm feeling right now. I"m in love with my best friend but I'm sure they'll never feel the same way. I love him.

taylor

I have the same friend she is with a guy and i care about her and she cares about me.

steff

wow. this poeme really touched me. Bcuz does this guy. a really good friend. and i really love himm. but hes going out with some one else :( and every day i just want to feel his arm around me. and feel his lips on mine. but ill this is a dream bcuz i know it will never happend. All this just to tell you that ur poem really touched me and that im srry for u to. and continue writting cuz wut u write it touchizz alot of people. bye -xxx- steff-xxx-

christina

i cant believ that some one could write a beutiful poem like that thank you

diana

I really liked this poem because im also in this situation" i think i might like my friend as more than just a friend" but i cant tell him this.

amir

this is one of the best poem

Erin

I loved it!I like a boy & he likes me BUT he is goin out with my friend!

Edna

I love it. I wonder what happend next? are you guys together now? I sure hope so!

Elaina

I love this poem!

Dre

I have always wanted to express myself like this to my closest friend whom I started seeing in a different light as I was the person he chose to speak to re: his relationship problems. Thank you so much for your words, I now know how to tell him that I can be more than his best friend! Mmmmmwaaaahhh!

Daren

sniff* is it over. oh good. That poem made me ball my eyes out. seriously. You are a good poetry maker. awww (crys again).

Cornelia

An awesome poem. I'm in the same situation. Very touching because I really understand how you feel.

kas

absoulotly Love it!" Well done

sasha

wow this poem is relly beautiful. i knew a guy who was in the exect same situation and he used to tell me how he felt. u captured his feeling through the words of your poem. its really amazing!

crystal

I love this poem Because I can relate to it 100% . This is eveything that i have been wanting to put into words for my best friend who i wish to bewith but he has a girlfriend right now. This poem has really touched my heart. Keep doing what you are doing because it touches people like yo uwouldnt believe. God Bless you .

shonte

I love this poem and it speaks real life and has lots of good descriptions i can also relate to it

Nikki

My bf just broke up wit me so this poem is hard to read because he wanted us just to be friends. it was very good, it brought back good memories in the last 3 weeks.

Gloria

5 Stars ! This is a beautiful, touching, heartfelt peom many of us can relate to. Keep your chin up "lonely Shadow", my best friend waited for me for 12 years, and I'm so glad he did :o)

Tiffany

I love your poem. it just makes me think about long lost loves!

harold

you screams! you rock bro! keep it loud. it kills me

Candy

I liked this poem it made me think a lot about myself and others. Its like life is very good when your in love and thats what I like about this poem.

Rena

i like your poem alot

meek

i feel this one about some i love but their heart is already taken.

aliana

wow such beauty this poet posses, keep up the great job

nickey

wow,dat was deep. hu evr dat was, dat pron would b lucky. so yah. i wish i can sream my hed off or bust in tears, but i cn`t. can u help me?. i dn`t ko wat 2 do. i feel so lost. =(

kid

i dont reali understand the situation ur going through but after reading that poem i realised its real and wasnt intentional, its great how u both feel the same bout eachother and im realii hapi 4 u as not evey1 gets 2 b loved by the one that they 2 love!:) gud lukk!

adam

WOW This peom is real good and i have that problem to. i jmet this girl and i really likw and all. But the problem is that she has a boyfriend and they seem like they really like eachother so I guess thats the reason this peom good and the reason way this peom really sticks to me so well!

Paul

very nice. out of a the poems i've read this is my favorite and i'm going to use it if you dont mind. :P well thanks for comming up with the poem that says pretty much how i feel right now. thanks again

James

I liked this poem very much. It really touched me. It fits very close to my feelings about a lady I've known for along time. I sent this to her after I found this on your website. Thanks

Kala C

thats touching it made me say how sweet good luck ! thats true

heather

well i had a boyfriend,and his name waz Jaziz,and i loved him a whole lot!he loved me a whole lot once 2. but,he kind of fell in love with some1 else. [her name waz Chelsie]. and now me and him are just friends. but i still love him a whole lot!but i guess i don'tmatter that much N-Emore 2 him!

May

This poem is one that touches one of the deepest parts of your heart. I wish I could find out the poets real name.

tiffany

hey this is tiff here this poem reminds me a lot about me & my closest guy friend wll got to go. PEACE OUT

Iris

This was so sweet.

corey

best love poem i will send this to a girl that i lov.

mayte

I love this poem it is so real the people that you are forbinden to care for and love are the ones that open the eyes to our heart . with joy peace and happiness. and all we can do is love them from afar

Hilary

This is one of the poem that really ment something to me B/C its basicly about a friend that is willing to wait for another friend and will be there for her B/C he really loves and cares for her. making a poem for some one that you are close to and feel you are in love with em' but yet they are taken means you really got a strong heart and who ever wrote that. AWSOME job and i hope every thing worked out!*!

Davin

I just wanted to say how much I loved this poem. It is exactly the situation I am in myself. Good Job. Keep up the great work.

sable

this poem really touch my there were times when i felt the same about a few guys i have dated and i wish till this day i would of have made it work but i let it fall apart because of my stupidity.

sandra

this is an amazing poem it touched me n it shows how to never let go no matter what I did this poem for a school assignment and my teacher gave m n a on it it was the greatest poem n it realli shows emotion i know how yu realli feel

Megan

when i read this poem i could really relate to it it touched me because this is exactly how i feel about this one certain person and it makes sense this needs to be on a hallmark greeting card

Rebeca

I loved this poem! As I read it I felt it, not only because it is so real, but because I am going through something similar and I can realte myself to it!

Bandid

It's such an impressive poem. A lot of words you compared with one another are completely nice for everyone's memories to remember. I agree " I love you" this short sentence is as powerful as great love we need.

Emily

I really liked this poem because I have feelings for my bestfriend and I really hope he realizes that I love him. In the beginning of school he really liked me but I didn't like him back. I told him that we were just best friends and he understood. After, he started to go out with girls and now summer vacation is here I finally realized I loved him from the start, I just couldn't say it in the way. My dream is for him to realize and for us to be together forever.

CARLO

I have the same situation. but what can i do??? she just see's me as a friend! shoots!

Sanjib

It's too romantic than i thought. Great!

me

ur poem is so touching im in tis situation love my friend really love but he love sumone else i do love him very much. but maybe im an idiot as i just sit and just watch

arianna

i love this poem its the best one here

eric

this poem is realy good it made me think of my x who is now with someone else but i still think about a lot

TERESA

this is a great poem. i fell for my best buddy so i can relate to this. thanks

Sydney

I loved this poem. It truely says how I feel.

Leza

This poem is so sweet and touching!

Rachel

this poem was cool cause i have the same thing i love some one but his with someone and its sad cause i want more then just being friends with him.

Ife

I love the poem. Im currently in the same situation. That poem gives me hope that one day she ould be mine

mark

AMAZING ! when I had Read the poem there was this feeling inside me that wants to burst forth.

ranjan

its realy good and express my feeling

angela

i really feel this poem it happen 2 me once before but the only way that it happens is cuz just like that guy told me friendship last more den everything in the world is hard 2 see that serten person with anot5her person will really hurt u but u alwayz got 2 know that u learn from it u dnt cry for it.

ada

I LOVE IT

jess

I am in the situation described and fell the way said about a male friend of mine. Watching from afar does hurt but this poem reminds me thats what i ahve to do. jess x

Jessica

Cool Poem.

erotic

This poem exudes the very essence of a forbidden line. It is beautiful thankyou. Erotic

Jessica

Hey good poem.

Sarah

I love this poem for one reason. It applies directly to me. I have a friend that has turned form a frind to my love. Though I know I can never have him, I will always love him. Thank you for the wonderful poem.

flora

I love it, because i can relate to it.

GIGGLEZ

I loved the poem it describes how you were feeling so that made it a little more touching an kind wishing you the best with your writing *GIGGLEZ*

Jean

I love this poem because it describe a relationship I have with one of my friend, it say everything I want to say

Breezy

this is xaktly how i feel 4 this 1 boy but it sucks cus he has his baby girl. I LOVE THIS POEM . IT IZ SOOO TRU!

louisa

this is so touching and it expresses exactly how I feel

Yorlenis

LOVE THE POEMS

Gustavo

Man when I read this poem I knew it was true because this is how I feel about a friend I have and I just don't know how to tell her. I sent her this poem so that she can see that this is what I feel about her. Thanks

lyn

It was very touching and it definetly was about what i am going through right now!

Louis

it touch my heart. it explains what i think like if the writer is me the wrighter is a great one.

candance

this poem really touch me it remind me of my love for some one very speical to me and i wish that he knew how much i care about himthanks for writing this i loved it.

CHARMANE

i love this poem it really touch my feelings

dyantie

a wonderful poem that represents most of the girls' love story. it makes me reflect to my own journey in loving the unreachable 'star' that cast over the dark sky. it gives me the strength to carry on. to love him.

aasha

this is one of the very nice poems i've seen. some verses realtes to some of my friends.

Ariana

I like this poem. One of my good friends had sent me this poem, but after he sent it he said it was by Lonely Shadow. He did not try to change anything about the poem. This poem should not only be noticed by others, it should be out for others to know that their not the only ones with a friend that they like and wants more than a friendship. Also the person who wote this poem should be warded for its good work.

Jasmine

I like this poem that it made me cry when I thought about it in my life when I had someone to do that to. Please e-mail me more I really liked it. Thank You Jasmine Manigo

yanyse

i like this poem bcuz i fel the same way and i just wish to hv the person in my arms all day but he is my friend and theres is nothing i can do since he is in love with someone else but has feelings for me to.

TASHA

very very goooooooooooooooood. 2kudo's for you.

dimed light

I vote for this poem because it touched my soul.

mai cee

i love this poem because i am also in the state of this poem. but for i it is to a guy. Lonely Shadow you are a wonderful poetry for this poem has touched me because ive alwayz wanted to write a poem about my feelings but you already have and i thankyou for i had neva thought of this. once agin it is a lovely poem. thank you for sharing it with me i hope to read more of your poems.

Bekah

I think this poem is very great and obviously the person who wrote this is in love with someone, but can't tell them because they're heart belongs to someone else. This poem touched my heart because I to am in love with someone, but they don't know it because my friendship with them is far more important to me than losing them by teling them that i'm madly in love with them. Well, g2g so, l8ter. LOVE ALWAYZ, Vampire15 A. k. a. Bekah

Kaitlyn

Amen. I am recently getting over a break up, he is dating someone else now. This REALLY effected me.

alberta

i guess it touched me cause i find myself in the exact same situation

Larry

I really enjoyed this poem. It''s what I'm presently experiencing, always admiring from afar. Thank You.

faakhar

dear your poem is so much touching and felt deeply God bless you take care bye

carol

I really enjoyed reading your poem. It touched my heart. It really showed the true meaning of friendship. I would send this poem to all my friends.

Cristina

In this work the author made me feels right there with the poem. It's a very good poem, very deep and thoughful. It shows a lot of courge to go through that situation, and I have lots of respect for the author, for I know how its feels to go through that situation, damn, im going through it right now.

Carrie

This Pome has very true meanning. The writer makes it sound as if you are their lover that they care for deeply.

Valerie

Wow i loved this poem i almost cried because i too am in this situation but now i can't do anything about it because the girl he likes likes him too and she is a really good friend of mine.

Angel

That was just like something that i have been in and to here it it just brings back life

tiffany

it was a very good poem. i am very happy for you . i bet that you are a good friend your self and keep up the good work. Bye

Robert

This poem really touches my heart as I have a frienship with somone from overseas. Very nice. Thank you Robert

Sanchit

I loved this poem because I can really relate to it. Good Job Lonely Shadow! =D

vivian

erm, tis poem is so meaningful. it is the best poem i never heard. wat a nice poem.

Aldo

I rate it 10 It is a wonderfull poem

Lyzeth

This poem was so niice It reminded me of a familiar situation

Natasha

it was true like i have felt this way before like i neva knew how to say it today

Diana

awesome poem very true exprienced by me thanks it is just the way i feel for some1 who is very special thank you for writing such a nice poem i appreciate you wonderful!

daniel

it was touching it reminded me of this gurl i once knew we grew up 2gether but when i was younger i couldn't imagine me an her 2gether but as i grew i began 2 see how beautiful she was and how smart she really is but i waited 2 long 2 tell her and i lost her she moved an found someone else but katrina will always be in my heart an 4eva known 2 me azz kattie

shari

I loved your poem it remined me what a love i shared with someone once and now that person belongs not to me and inside i do feel the words of lonleyness

Rachel

I can relate to this poem because i was in a similar situation.

stacy

i really liked that poem. i am a married woman and have a best friend who is a guy and i love him.

Tiffany

I luv this poem sooooo much it reminds me of a lot of guys i wanted to be with i wanted more than to be friends.

phume

Your poem is wonderful,just today i was telling my friend to pray for me cos this is what i truelly feel for him and i hope its a phase that will pass. Thank you man

Theresa

it was very nice

shawntea

it reminds me of my situation

christal

wow! thats all i can say

jackie

this poem really touched my heart because the same thing happened to me and well i have like a guy for 3 years for the same reasons and this poem just speaks the truth. and i can relate to it a lot. i am glad i came to this web site i will never forget this poem.

michael

this is a lovely poem it is real the writer did not hesitate to say the truth. i love the way he moved through the lines i love the way he played the strings. you could dance to it even without knowing the words of the song

Total

So true so very very true. could have been my own words

jazmine

i loved the poem it touched my heart i feel the same way about this boy

Tan

I totally relate to the words and the love behind them. I'm in the same situation but she got married and we're still friends and it's still hard.

shikha

It's so beautiful. "My feelings have been given words" ,thats what i feel.

niki

i like this one because i have a crush on a boy who is my friend, but i have a bf and he has a gf. i have a feeling that he likes me 2. But when i see him w/ his gf he seems so happy. so i guess i'll let him go. thankz 4 typing a great peom!gottogo! laters!

Juan

A passionate expression that I share for one who is now drenching my mind teasingly with desire at the thought of her, but she says lets just be friends. LOL Not take it too fast Ohhhh my passion. Thanks for putting it into almost perfect words.

oliver

same what my status now, very touching in my heart!

SEXC

I HOPE U NO DAT YOUR POEMS R DA BEST DEY TOUCH PEOPLE LIKE IT TOUCHED ME ITS REALLY HARD TO GO OUT THERE AND TOUCH PEOPLES HEARTS BUT U HAV A GIFT SO KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK

Link

Very well done.

Tony

this poem . made me start crying, this is the exact same stuff thats happening to me now. great poem

sexc

at poem is great it really touched me way to go

John

Thank you for such woderful poems on this website. They are all awsome and thank you for lettting us use them. Thanks again.

khai

I totally agree. I feel the same way :\

Britany

This poem is really good. It reminds me of something I'm going through right now.

quynh

This poem is really really true about real life and it happens to me too

Kelsey

i loved this poem

Camille

hi. uhhmm. your poem is very nice. i know that most of the people these days are in love with their friends especially "best friends". i was ALMOST one of them. thanx for writing this poem. continue writing!

Mj

i like this poem coz its really strikes me no!i remeber my bestfriend in highschool which i quitely love for a long time but life as we know is not simple as that!but still eventhough were still apart now i continue cherished our friendship we share!

AMBER

IT IS A NICE POEM.

Antonio

this is really great poem. i can really relate to this poem

Cass

Felt the passion in your words to a friend. Well expressed.

Tanya

I really liked this poem. It totally went along with the situation I am in now. I give it a 10.

cinthia

that poem is so beautiful!I like it!

Luke

A beautiful poem mate, described my feelings exactly and not only that but written in such a way that the one I want to be with could understand and therefore appreciate my feelings. Thankyou

Amy

I feel that I relate to this poem very much. I feel the same way about someone in my life that means very much to me, also.

jae

dreamy

Rob

This poem really explains what I am going through. For nine long years I have sat n the darkness and watched a girl that cared for look passed me and now I have her attention, but still can't say the words, and this poem really says it all. Thank you for helping me find the words to say.

Rob

it fit's almost perfectly with how i feel about a friend of mine. i care a lot about her, more than friends should, but i wouldn't quite say i love her. yet.

alexis

I liked this poem cause it is not just about friends it is about loving girlfriends and boyfriends it touches my heart helps me know that i shall love everyone not just the people you like & love it shows me how i could love everyone

Jessica

good

Long

I think your poem is very good. I too feel the same way for another person but i couldnt do anything about it but wait.

Cecelia

wow. my brother is in this situation. he is so in love with his best friend, jen. she has a boyfriend, whom treats her badly, yet she feels obligated for some reason. he has loved her since the day they met.

diggory

it is just one of the most beautiful things i have ever read in my life

Paul

it is a wicket poem i almost cryed well i am gone now you did a great job by the way.

cassie

this poem reminded me of my friend jason

Kuba

Hi, a really nice, touching poem. Being in the same situation as described in the poem makes me understand even more how you felt writing it

gayle

i liked the simplicity and genuiness of the poem. the poet has beautifully potrayed his feelings and sentiments in few simple words.

mikkha

a poem thats romantically well. blends all your thoughts summing in one thinking that makes you wonder . it makes me dream. PERFECTLY AWESOME! keep on goin'.

lekzi

i loved it. i know how you feel because i have been through which i am right now i like this guy and well he is going out with my best friend. thank you for writing it you've really made me think about it depply. hope it all works out

lianne

actually im at the same situation. i realy love my best freind but i have to let him go

Andrew

This poem was beatiful it touched me deeply. It is exatly what I have been thinking for so long put into words. Thank you.

Don Francis

Your POEM touch me. i believe in Destiny. Hope 1 Day we will meet each other. keep in touch! Hope you will success! TAKE CARE! GOD BLESS!

Triana

I never thought I would find a poem that resembles my situation. I met a guy and "fell in love" but he had a girl, found that out weeks later. He swore he told me but after I knew that it didn't sit well with me and I didn't want to be bothered but always wanted him to know how I really felt about him. This was a beautiful poem, thank you!

Maggie

I think this was a great poem I'm alone in love with a friend and this really touches my heart.

SABRINA

I LIKE THIS POEM. SOMETIMES THIS IS HOW IT IS WHEN YOU CANT HAVE WHAT YOU WANT; ONLY DREAM.

wendy

the reason this poem meant a lot to me is bc/ about two days ago, i wanted to go out w/ this boy and he said that he didnt want me as a girl friend, but he did want us to be really close friends!

joshua

that poem was so touchin it made me cry

sonn

its a really nice poem it talks about a friend that i really like.

Julieann

i can relate to this poem very well, you have captured the truth and inocence within a friendship so deep

Estrella

I loved your poem it is what a lot people feel for there "friends" but the way you express it is beautiful.

Bud

I loved this poem. As I was reading it, the whole time I was thinking this is me, this is what i'm going through. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

varij

love lies in simplicity.

jasmine

i loved the poem it pored out all the thoughts i coluldnt explain

priyanka

it is a beautiful poem. so real that i could feel it. i wish someone loved me that way. god bless.

courtne

you are the best

Laurie

this poem means so much to me, cause all the feelings i have inside is like this poem i feel so happy and release all the strength inside of me. thank you for having such a nice poem that means so much in my life. i love this poem. *laurie kong*

Dalila

This was an AWESOME poem. I love it very sweet

T

I really liked this poem it was exactly how I was feeling for a girl and I didn't know how to describe it. This poem did it very well. I had her read it to show her how I felt and all she said, "Good poem. " I guess that relationship won't be going anywhere.

A.B.

i reall like this poem it is exactlly how i feel about a girl in my class

david

this poem touchs my heart in many ways. i feel the same way you do

JAZMINE

This poem is SOOO touching I want a guy to dedicate a poem like this to me! I think you are a romantic guy!

tracy

i feel the same. that was unreal

Aadrian (girl)

this is a great poem keep up the good work!

Danielle

I think this poem describes what many people go through. I am truly amazed at this poem. It is wonderful.

Ashley

man! that is sooo true for me! its just like me and this guy! I love that poem!

Emily

I think this poem is very beautiful the person that wrote this must have very strong feelings for another person, well I know how they feel. Lonely Shadow has a very great talent that they should share with the world.

Richard

exactly what im going through. i told her i love her, she told me she felt something too, but she stays with a guy she says she isnt happy with, i dont think it would work out between us anyway, but i can still hope and dream

bimbo

the poem shows a lot of depth and u can feel d warmth of d luv the writer feels for the other party.

sarah

it really inspired me

Hendrick

Wauw. Love is mysterious in it's own funny way! How my love to a friend of mine is still unanswerd by the same reason.

LINDA

I myself look at this poem in my point of life. I feel all the words that are wrote. I see it as if I wrote it myself and I would like to tell the wrter. you have done a good job with it. I felt from the beginning to the end.

Denise

Great poem. I know the exact feeling!

LoRita

This was a great poem I have a friend that i'v never met in person, but i feel such a strong attraction towards him I really don't think he feels the same. I know that there maybe someone else, but I still long to read this poem to him I just hope that he won't take it to the heart. This was really a great poem thank you so much.

Khaleah

This poem is very heart warming and it describes alot of the feelings that you have in a friend and lover situation and it gets a thumbs up from me.

Mark

Simply an amazing poem, well done. This poem sums up how I and a friend feel towards each other, we are both in relationships that we cannot leave, however we discovered our love for each other and promised each other that it cannot go any further. Thank You

Donald

This poem fits specific needs This poem fits particular needs It has special application To special lives

Roland

that was a very good poem I would give it a 10 on 10 this poem touched me because I have a best friend and more I am with her I am feeling things abouth her I love her.

Marc

I truely love this poem, it describes how a person can have feelings for someone they really love, GREAT.

krystle

i loved it because i had passed through that latley and i know how it felt not to be able to have the person u love and that u were only best friends with them. it hurt me so much seeing him with some one else but now that i got him im thankful.

eric

This is me. I am in love with my grade school jr high and high school sweetheart. They are all the same woman. we are in our thirties now have children and both divorced. I love her and am going for it.

Carla

this poem really inspired me. it reminded me so much of a relationship i had once with a guy that i adore most. although its not set on the same base it still can be seen in another way. Thankyou for writing this poem.

Candace

This poem is a everyday thing that people go through life. And i think it's a wondferful poem. It can really bring back my thoughts of people.

fee

this poem beautifully encapsulates the excitement, ecstacy and sheer agony of being in love with your best friend. very moving.

Karen

* Beautiful *

John

That made me shiver. It was so beautiful, really, and so terribly downheartening. It feels heavy admitting it, doesn't it. Keep spirits, hope for a miracle, and I will too.

Pete

I am in love with a married woman and I know I shouldn't be, but this poem sums up how I feel. Thank you.

Amy

I think I am in love with my best friend, because this poem describes every emotion i feel when i am with him. Thank you.

joanne

OMG who evea ritten tht poem thanx eva so much it is brill xxx

Courtney

That is so beautiful

mariana

wow! i loved the poem, the author touches my heart, it was like what he felt was so real so beatiful. and he expressed it in a way not many could. i bet many of us have felt like this just can"t seem to express it fully.

Laxton

you did realy good when you wrote this poem. you are a poet. i hope to read more of your poems in the future.

yancy

i really love you poem it is really good.

Brad

Some poems you can relate to, some poems you live I'm going through this same situation right now. that's why I cried when I read it. It's a beautiful poem bjs

Elvis

Great poem, the same reason I write poetry, love.

lin

wow it's so touching!

renner

wow great poem. im happy in away that there is other people out there that feel the same way i do. it perfectly described my situation. thank you for sharing your poem.

Yixi

I thought this was a very heartfelt poem, i'm going through a similar situation with my best friend and it's nice to know i'm not alone. Love is Forever

stan

I love this poem I write poems to but this is bester then want I can good it's very very very good have you got any more like this one

tate

i really like, mean looved the part of having envy for the wind wow I understand .

Heidi

I LOVED YOUR POEM I THINK THAT ITS THE BEST ONE AND I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT SINCE THE MOMENT I BEGAN TO READ IT I REMEMBER THE SITUATION BETWEEN ME AND MY FRIEND I WISH THAT ONE DAY I MIGHT HAVE THE COURAGE TO LET HIM KMOW HOW I FEEL.

shabash

bravo!aint i touched. thought i was being too emotional with a mate's gal but as they broke up, i went ahead to let her know how i felt about her,true to my feelings she felt same, but strangely we are now miles apart and looking forward to seeing each other soon,then we'll look ahead to the future,your poem is like my story being told by a soothsayer. kudos and keep it flowing.

Pink

Very good! Especially for someone who is going through the brink of being in love with their best friends, but afraid to tell them! Such as myself, I am falling for my best friend, but I think he does have a clue, reading poems like this lets me know that I'm not alone and it's not wrong to feel this way about your best friend. Much love to u and keep up the good work!

rita

Exactly how I feel

Susan

Beautiful. Exactly what I wanted to convey to another. Thank you for your gift of talent.

Mike

I vote that this pome is alsome! it rockd!

beth

its so tru. cuz ive felt this way about someone for so long and uve finally put it into words. thank u!

jessicca

I really like your poem

Vernita

This peoms tells how I fell about someone now that I work with.

meandyou

we were all alone on a blanket surrounded by candles in the park, i had her favorite music playing. I recited this poem to here and for the first time told here that i loved her. we have been side by side ever since. sometimes words can speak to the heart like nothing else can.

Mirela

This is such a loving and wonderful poem and whoever it is writen to i'm sure would be very touched by it. I suggest you show it to them becuase a poem like that can caoture anyones heart!Your are very ery talented !

Jason

My friend and lover said goodbye to me today. She has set off to another land. The pain I feel has no equal. I try tell myself that pain is just weakness escaping the body. This, I can say no longer. For my pain is my strength. The strength that will lead me to her once again. Your poem has really helped me understand how I feel. For that I thank you.

NICOLAS

I truely like this poem, when reading it I am reminded of a sprcial young lady whom I have known for many years, although we have always been good friends secretly I have wished we could have a chance to become more.

bituin

I fell in love with the poem, I felt like crying the moment I read it. Its the feeling that I just can't express to a special friend.

Leigh

i think that was so sweet. i wish someone wrote that about me. i wish you luck and hope you get the girl. or got her.

jazmine

these poem is so awsome! you are a really great and talented writter! you never know mabe one day you'll be a pro at this!your poem really touched me and im pretty sure you touched alot of other people keep it up!

Shara

That was just a beautiful poem. Keep up the wonderful work.

Tony

fantastic . moments in my life too

marc

I really like this poem, devloping feelings for someone is a difficult process to begin with but when you have feelings for a young lady whose heart belongs to another is even harder. I have been there.

kelly

I truely loved your poem!

MICHEAL

I really like this poem, I am reminded of such a young lady who I know and think is pretty special.

stevie

that was sooooo sweet how wondfull

Elizabeth

this poem really touched me. If you had to rate it 1-10, I'd give it a 12.

Jennifer

There are no words to express the way I feel about this poem, except that, at this very moment that girl in the poem is me. And every word expressed by this poem has been said by the other person which happens to be my best and wonderful friend. And my heart goes out to him for caring so much.

Sharon

I read the poem and felt it reflected my situation perfectly! It made me smile but feel sad at the same time, for sometimes you find a love that you just cannot have.

Deshawn

Such softly spoken words as the fragrance of a rose, If into your heart that one could see beyond the door steps of friendship, That bud would surely blossom.

Amber

i realll love this poem. It says exactly how i feel about my friend. Nice poem.

sezen

ýa wonderful and romantic poem. ýt touches all the human being at some point or another. it shows my feelings against my close friends. but ý don't make anything against him because he is both my close friends and elder me. he is 18 years old ý am 21 years old. ohhh ohhh it is very bad situation

cindy

i thought that it was really really great it reminds me of a friend that i have.

dana

this poem means alot it means that if you are in love make sure the person you like likes you. on't spread your feelings until you find out. i actually loved this poem is was very passionate.

Ashley

Oh my goodness, this poem was so nice. i couldn't stop smiling after i read it. This was the most enduring and sweet poem i've had read yet. Good job

amanda

I loved this peom there is this guy that I used to date and I still love him but he is with another girl and this poem is just brilliant I think it was written just for me. thank you lonley shadow!

Adrian

Awesome, beautiful. I Write poems but nothing like yours. Your poem is so inspirational. Couldn't be better

Genie

I love this poem. I read it and actually thought that it was written for me. Wonderful

mistie-dawn

i like it.

kennon

that was a good poem. i really truely loved it. it was amazing

Sara

This poem desribed exactly what my friend thinks about another one of my friends. I shall send it to him!

Cupid

A wonderful and romantic poem. It touches all the human beings at some point or another. what a way of opening one's hear? Thankx for this piece of artwork.

Manoj

I have no words to say because I am facing this now very badly and I really love this poem

Clarissa

hey!This poem iz really tight and i know that it meanz alot to you. its really sweet and it really made me think about what iz going on in my life right now

Jennifer

I think this poem is so incrediby good. It's so true in every way, and anyone who is looking to be with there best friend should have them read this poem because it works. I did and I have been with him for a year and everything is great!

Mary

shadow, heart stopping poem. it was like you were writing down what my heart was saying. i really like this guy but i cant tell him. wonderful poem and i wish you luck. you deserve her

Saraie

The poem was realy tuching. Iloved it.

alissa

I fell in love with someone that I could never have last year, and am still loving him. Your exquisitely expressed feelings are precisely what my soul has exuded for so long. Thank you for sharing your deleriously gorgeous, God-given talent with all of us.

Bronwyn

Your poem made me realize that Friendship is so easily crossed into Love that we forget that we are just supposed to care for our bestfriend not fall in love with them.

Brittney

This is such a beautiful poem. I can actually feel your longing and pain drifting off the computer screen! I hope things go well for you, because platonic love is like a inactive volcano. Thanks for sharing.

Cherry [G]

great. just great.

AliAngel

This poem is truely moving and all true. I maybe a girl but I know the feeling the auther felt. Dont let that girl go- it sounds like your in love. Good luck writing more!

Joseph

That is the most meaningful thing that I have ever read, next to the Bible of course. It described the exact same way that I feel about this girl. You did a wonderful job, and I hope that your wish comes true!

Sophie

This stuff actually happens to other people. This is a great and beautiful poem. I dont think i'd ever have the guts to say that to my best friend even though i Love Him.

annie

beautiful. she is one lucky lady

cn

hey you really did a good poem

jamie

Absolutely love this one. touched me deeply. Made me cry. Thank You.

Debbie

Oh my god. That was the best poem i've ever read in my entire life!

Stephanie

thats so good i started like my friend my best bud mylo buti realize hes a great guy to go out with but way to awesome of a friend too lose but go for it fight for her!

EMELEE

I LOVE THAT POEM CAUSE IS VERY SWEET. I READ IT 4 TIMES AND IT MAD ME THINK ALOT. AND I DEDICATE THIS TO MY BEST FRIEND.

anbalagan

the poem has really impresed me.

stephanie

Cool. I really like this poem very much. i was once have a fear with a guy that goes to the same church as i go to. but when we broke up, i know that we suppose to be friends only.

mark

know exactly how you feel my friend. I have been trying to sum up the same kind of words myself but to no avail brought a tear to the eyes as well THANX

jessica

i loved this poem it reminded me of my best friend pierre and his girlfriend arielle and his other best friend abi

SAMERA

OH THIS IS A WICKED POEM I WISHU CAN WRITE SME MORE LIKE THIS IT NEALY MADE ME CRY BUT I LOVED YOU'RE POEM MORE THEN ANY ONE PLEASE SENT ME SOME MOREIKNOW THAT THEY WILL BE REALLY WICKED

Michael

Absolutly loved this poem! i have the same feelings

maxi

friendship is a special gift given to us all. Remember that deep love and deep friendship results in huge risk but after reading this poem I have hhanged my mind. You can love but donot forget that you are friends and friends only

Jenae

Oh my god! That was a real heart touching poem. I could relate to the poem and I am sure many other people can too because that was one awsome poem!

jessica

that was a good poem. i think everyone feels like that about sumone. i do!GREAT JOB!

Anna

this amazing poem touched me so much. im in a love triange rite now. an online friend & i fell in love with each other the trouble is that hes engaged to a friend of mine. this brought tears to my eyes cuz we both know that we cant ever be together

Jayla

I related so easily to your poem. for the past 3 years my best friends and me have been having this on going good battle between the two of us. when we first had feelings for each other and told each other we both were in relationships. now that we are both single we are still overly confused. I hope all went well with your friend.

Jens

Thanx a lot for this poem; that are the most wonderful lines of poetry i have ever read. I like to compose poems in my free time but mine do not come close to the perfection of yours. While reading it, I felt as if it was talking about my feelings towards my friend , who means more to me than anything else in this world. I am so desperate sometimes that I lie in my bad at night and cry just because of her. Thanx a lot for this Poem

wonderful person

omg that is so cute i love it that must have really come from he heart

sarah

awwwwwwwwww! i feel the same way about this guy! what a wonderful poem! brought some tears to my eyes!

Urban

I loved this poem, man. Great job, I know I sound like the oft mentioned broken record but I know how you feel, dude. My respects

ruji

I feel the same way too , i was inlove to a man who is my best friend and its so hard but im thankful to God for giving me a chance to call him min ebcoz i own him as MY BEST FRIEND , i also dream that one day he is mine ready to love me . the poem is good it touch me.

John

Beautiful. Suresh, I know how you feel man. What can I say. blessedly beautiful poem. I wish I had the courage to give it to her, but I can't stand losing her! Great poem man!

A

This hits too close to home. This very same thing happened to me and two frinds of mine. I had feelings for one but, my heart belonged to the other. Great poem

kelli

I can really relate to this author and his poem, I hope things can turn out for him.

Carol

What a beautiful, beautiful poem!

Liz

Wow. i didn't know that it could happen to someone else. i feel the same way about my friend but sadly it will never be. great poem, so expressive. love it.

Maris

That was an amazing poem and it almost made me cry. Keep on writting them. GOOD JOB.

envy

just wonder but did she found out that you have feeling for her. I guess I'm going through the same thing as u are. I just want to say I like what u said about the girl. sorry if I'm being stupid writing this, I don't usually do this.

ALANA

I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. I UNDERSTAND THE WAY YOU FELL. I HAVE THIS FRIENDS AND I LOVE HIM MORE AND ANYTHING AND ALL HE WANTS IS TO BE FRIENDS. I UNDERSTAND THE HURT THAT YOU FEEL.

kari

ur poem was great. it kinda relates to me and a guy named marcus. uv inspired me to tell him how i feel

david

a great poem that brings out the innermost thoughts of many people in the same situation.

laksh

this poem is very nice and it shows my feelings. what ever i feel within myself is there. if iam able to write 1 like this it wld be so nice

isaac

To me that is a beutiful poem. I have a friend her name is theresa and she is so sweet, but sadly we're only friends althoug i wish it was more than. This poem relates to me, to my life.

Rich

That was wonderful. I have similar feelings towards a special friend and have felt the same pain (so to speak).

nick

wow. this exacly describes my situation, i luv this girl almost more than life and i think of her all the time but she migth be goin out with sum1 else but it kills me cuz i want her so bad and i feel that i want her more than him. thanks, this is great inspiration.

Aina

this is a briliant poem, i was touch by the words written. ohhh well, to love n to be loved is the most beautiful things in the world. Thanks to u Lonely shadow 4 d wonderful poem. keep it up

Pasha

the best thing i've ever red! write more 'bout love, from now on you're my favuorite writer!

Jess

This poem is sweet and it sort of tells the story I'm walkin through at the moment.

katie

omg this is like the best poem i have ever read! I hits me in so many ways and i just cant help but to tell you. thatx 4 sharing this.

Robin

My heart belongs to one man, but I have a different love for another male friend of mine, so I can relate with this poem.

Dan

hi umm this is so neat that these words u write our exactly the word i need to say to a buitiful friend of mine that is in a bad relationship butis having a hard time and i have felt for many years these very thoughts and fellings and i would just like to congradulate u on ur buitiful talent thanx again i will write back to tell u wah happens thanx so much

Maria

I love to see the beauty of your soul in your poetry. Thanks for sharing this beauty.

Chris

This is a really great poem. It reminds me of my friend so much and how much I love her.

Rose

This poem explains alot about friendship being much more. It tells also that not both will feel the same.

ashlee'

it seems like you have gained a lot of interest and love for this girl. almost like a crush,only better because she knows how u feel and u don't have to bother with the question of would she like me back?it was the perfect poem for that particular perfect situation. hope u well with your friend or hopefully more than that by now!

Dee

It is beautiful. I was looking for a poem that would express the way i feel about someone and when i read your poem i could have cried. it was the most wonderful thing that i have read in a long time.

Tony

I'm giving this to my friend and telling her i love her. Because of this poem. Thanks so much.

Sean

Hey I know exactly how you feel. There is a girl that i really like but all she seems to want is to be friends. This is almost the only poem that has made me think about her. Its great. Well Done

sam

this is a very good poem

Shacker

Great poem. I feel the same way. I'm in love with an old high school friend. I've been in love with her for more than a year now. I'd do anything for her. She's seeing someone else though and I don't want to ruin anything that makes her happy. I've been trying to find a way to tell her i love her without destroying our friendship. This poem will help out alot. Thanks. Good luck to you.

Damien

I loved that poem it says exactly what i want to say thanks

chris

this is so touching and it hits me on so many levels i loved it

rebecca

what a beautiful poem, this is how i once felt but i ended up lettting go.So i hope your dreams can be answered someday if the yalredy haven't

Suresh

IT'S NOT SIMPLY THE WORDS WRITTEN BY THE POET ALSO IT CONSOLES ME SINCE I AM TRAVELLING TIN THE SAME BOAT.I HAVE A FREIND THAT I LOVE MORE THAN ANYTHING BUT SHE DOESNT FEEL THE SAME

Aaron

hey man that was great i read it and it almost brought tears to my eyes because that poem touched so close to home its like how i feel about this girl in school that i like but can't have her because she is going out with some one right now her name is Breanna and she has the most beautiful eyes and the best smile i have ever seen.

Jodi

This was a very inspiring poem and it describes my situation exactly.

Deon

Your poem was wonderfully written. I've been through the same situation before and I know how difficult it is. Keep up the good work!

Byrus

This is poem is excellent, I have someone that I feel this way about and I have told her but, I never could say it the way I wanted to, poetry or straight out. But I think she'll understand now. Amazing poem shadow keep writing

Aaron

Hey, dude, your poem is tight!The girl i love and i are in about that same situation. God bless ya, dude!

kerry

if someone had to to give me a poem like that i would love them for ever. excellent.

LonelyPoet

Your poem is great, like all the rest. Your words mean so much, if only they were said sooner and at a better time.

jazmine

you have written a beautiful letter to your friend as i can see it. It's really nice to have a friend like yours and it's really hard to find as one so be carefull cause love isn't immortal as friendship

Donnatella

Poet, I like this poem. It sounds as if a love triange is in the mist. These things can be deadly and someone is going to get hurt. Someone needs to make up their mind. This is a good description of the, ever so often, love triange. Don't just listen to your heart, listen to your mind as well.

Shine

Thank you for posting this beautiful poem. It helped me to understand and accept that what I am feeling for a friend is a beautiful thing, although painful. It's nice to know I am not alone in my joy and sorrow.

Missy

I think that this poem is great. It is sad cause i know how you feel. I have been there and i hope that everything worked out.

lone

I loved your poem. Exactly how i felt. it really touched me. i SO know how you feel. ;(

david

Well i can relate to that poem so much one thing is true it is one of the hardest things to do sometimes feels like the heart is breaking and it hurt so much, very good poem

Earl

my favourite line would have to be 'I envy the wind that runs through your hair,'sometimes i think people are able to describe a certain feeling- that interconnects with others.amazing.

Dark

Very Creative, Touching and I give it Two Thumbs Up because it describes my situation in life.

JONATHAN

THIS POEM REMINDS ME OF ME RIGHT NOW CAUSE I SUDDENLY HAVE FEELINGS FOR MY FRIEND AND SO DOES SHE BUT HER HEART IS WHIT ANOTHER MAN SO THATS WHY LIKED THIS POEM ALOT

KATHY

I FEEL THE VERY SAME AS ROBERT AND HIS NAME IS ROBERT TOO! IS THAT YOU?

Cham

I can really relate to this poem. I like it so much I'm going to use it to express my feelings to this girl that I have grown to love.

nadine

THE WORDS IN THIS POEM WERE SO ELOQUENTLY PUT THAT THEY SUCCEEDED IN REACHING ME IN A WAY THAT FEW POEMS OF SUCH SIMPLICTY HAVE BEEN ABLE TO. LIKE SO MANY OTHER COMMENTORS ON THIS PARTICULAR POEM I MORE THAN ONCE HAVE FELT THIS PARTICULAR WAY ABOUT SOMEONE. I WAS GLAD TO READ THIS PARTICULAR POEM BECAUSE I THINK THAT THE WRITER STRONGLY FELT THE WORDS HE WROTE JUST AS I DID

al

Incredible. I have a very similar situation going on for me myself, and I must say its chilling and powerful to read something like this. Good work.

Chimaera

great poem, i'm in the same situation right now. and i don't know how to tell my best friend that i love her. and your poem is exactly how i feel.

LACEY

I LOVE IT IT REMINDS ME OF MY FRIEND.

Aaron

this poem is the best. it explains the relationship i have with a freind and its very true

Carmela

You have a heart...Don't ever let it go much luck to you smile =) ps-very beautiful poem..it really made me think bye

priscilla

i think your poem is great, because it just make me think of my own very,very,best friend

Boo

What I found most touching was the effortless grace the poet uses to make each reader feel like they are the ones in love. To disclose your love to a friend is one of the hardest choices; when you know your friend is in love with you is an even more challenging position. This poem gives us all an opportunity to make the love between two friends less disarming and more a celebration of your friendship.

Janice

Don't I wish my best friend would have told me that. Oh well, at least he is still my lifelong best friend.

bambamm

This poem speaks. I currently love some one who is petrified of the level of commitment I present. Only thing is that they dont' know that I know this. I have known her for a while, she always involves her self with guys that she clearly knows are not going to work. I am patient though, I have been here for a while now, I'll wait some more. This poem reminded me of her.

prasad

it is really nice one keep it up

elena

i wish this poem were for me from a special person who i love. how simply beautiful to share such kind words. i think i'd fly to him tomorrow like an eagle if it were.

Hawk

Good poem =)

Chris

The poem was wonderful. It hits the feelings I once had directly, and I believe that is why so many other people have voted for it. It captures the essence of that love, half-hidden away for your closest friend.

Delly

I Like it

Dave

I know the sentiment of this work only too well. Well done Lonely Shadow.

Matt

You expressed exactly how I feel without too much symbolism. Easy to read and appreciate

Jigga

This is one of the most intense poems I've read in a long time. I say this because it put into words exactly how I feel about one of my friends. Thank you Lonely Shadow and keep up the good work.

Irene

After reading this poem, I wanted to cry. Right now I am going through the same situation. I want to tell this guy who is a very good friend exactly how I feel, but I am afraid to because he has a girlfriend. But the thing is, is that he shows alot of interest in me. I really like how you poured out your heart into expressions that everyone can relate to. Good job on the poem. It was very heartfelt

ryan

thats tight im goin through that right now wit my friend kristin and that is exactly how i feel ur good u should keep writen and keep inspirin ppl

Santana

Your poem totally explains what I have recently found out my friend and I both longed to be together for so long but never took the chance to be together till now and we are so much happier than we even imagined when we apart.

pointlessStar

that was vary cool to say and it was so emotional. thank you

Nicole

This is such a sweet poem. It reminds me a lot about me cuz im always falling for a friend that i know will never be more than that.

keisha

omg, this poem is soo good it really hit me where it hurts, & i think that she will go far w/ what what shes doin, & all i g2 say is go 4 it gurl keep writin & never give ^ no matter what happens

Jackie

Well done! I think this poem was well written, I'm sure there have been many of us in the same situation..I really like this poem..

LoneStar

Many people read the poetry, but not everyone can really feel it in their heart. I thought your poem was excellent. I can relate. I've been there. I am there.

Kelly

I loved the way you expressed every detail as you went along. Nothing is better than when you say what is going on. Rating out of four:****

Peggy

Absolutly the best

amy

THIS IS A VERY DEEP POEM THE WRITER REALLY POURED HIS HEART OUT. I THINK IT IS A GREAT POEM ,GOOD JOB.

Kalani

This poem relates to something that I'm going through right now and this is the first poem that i read and it's just so describes what I'm going through...I love it

argyris

I am deeply mooved by your words

ANNA

I THOUGHT THIS WAS A WONDERFUL POEM BECAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY.I HAVE A FREIND THAT I LOVE MORE THAN ANYTHING BUT SHE DOESNT FEEL THE SAME BUT I FEEL HONARD JUST TO BE HER FREIND

Micheal

I really like the poem man very touching.

Katie

I really like this poem because it perfectly describes my relationship with a close friend of mine.

ZAO

hey nice poem man too bad its a rip off of victor hughes old poem but dont worry you will find the words to express your feelings some day

Laura

I think this was one of the best poems I have ever read!

Bernadette

can understand these feelings.

Dennis

very nice! keep up the Good work!

mm

Lovely in every way. Says so much, deep with feelings and emotions conveyed perfectly.

Brandy

I Have A situation like that and your poem tells it word for word! It really touched me. Your a great poet.

sal

I finally found poems that are straight from the heart.Keep up the good work.

Martin

Supper! It was like someone reading my mind.

Brett

this is one of the most beautiful use of words that I have ever witnessed. I have recently had these exact same feelings . . . this poem really touched me

kelsey

this poem is exactly what im going threw right now i didnt ever think that i would find a poem like this one

angela

I really liked your poem. I have been in the same position myself and it was a very good poem.

Susan

This verse really says it all for me. It's just how I feel right now. It expresses just how one needs to suppress their feelings in order to keep their friendship. I love this poem.

M

This is an incredible poem, it sings to my heart as it reminds me of a similar situation. I am sure that the woman, for whom this was written, knows in her heart your true feelings. For such strong feelings to be expressed in a poem, this love will be impossible to conceal. Thank you so much for sharing your poem.

Michelle

That poem was so sweet, it was great to have someone tell another person in so much depth how they really feel.

Patrick

This is one of the best poems i ever read!!

Khryste

This poem is simplistic, yet for anyone that has been in this type of situation it hits very close to home. Thank you Lonely Shadow, you put into words what my ex-bestfriend and now present other half took two years to show me. Had he taken a lesson from you I would have known true love much sooner, but never the less it was finally said and it seems that the chance taken by fate has won.

Kristen

I think that this poem is so beautiful. It captures the meaning of true love. I also had the same experience of liking one of my friends, and this poem describes exactly what I have felt. This poem comes from the heart, and that's what makes it so great. I truly and deeply love this poem, and I wish for the best to the author. Once again, it's really beautiful.

The

this poem is the carbon copy of my life. i have the same feelings for my best friend, but she loves another. now she has move 10,000 miles away and my love only grows. my thanks to you for a great poem.

Jacie

it's very beautiful the way the author expressed about her friend.

jeremy

hello that ws a great poem i guess the reason it is so great it because i am going trew the same feelings for my best friend and it is killing me she has a b/f but he does not treat her as good as i would but there is nothing i can do she is coming over tomarrow and lastnight i talked to her on the phone and when i got done talking to her i thought of this to say to her if i could come back to this world do you know what that would be?one of your tears because i would be born in your eyes live on your cheek and die on your lips i think she will really like it well great poem and good luck i know exactly what you are going threw

jimmy

This poem has all of the words that I want to but cannot express muself. It has a wonderful feeling about it. Thank you very much for composing it.

lyhn

superb

Danielle

awesome poem

Frank

That poem is so great and beatiful. I feel so touched by it for its deep insight.

shelly

BRILLIANT

Paul

This poem is so true, I know how this feels as it happened/happening to me!

Tony

This poem is summup of my whole life, its beautiful, I would love to hear more of it

Josh

This poem really hit me when I read it. It describes exactly how I feel. I almost broke down in tears. Love can be very painful but I'm glad to see I'm not the only one that goes through this.

Hellen

I think this poem is really good, and I can really relate to what it's about.

Trevor

I like the poem because I'm in the same position.

Val

This poem is soo great. It reminds me of something that just happened to me recently and it couldnt be written any better...thanks Val

Zia

Wondeerful poem!

mario

This one touches the heart,I can relate to it.I only wish I had written it.

ROBERT

THIS POEM TELLS JUST THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT A GIRL THAT I LOVE

carlos

thats som fly shit you've written...even as a thug it actually touched me..gracias

DarkestKnight

WOW, it was great. Exactly how I feel.

Fire

I thought that this poem was very touching, the author is very talented. It was like it really got to me, only few poems are that powerful.

steven

i loved the poem it reminds me of me and my friends

Jen

I think your poem is awesome, my closest friend means the world to me, and we were in a similar situation and I was the one who longed to tell him that I loved him but because of his situation I couldn't. He was with someone else at theat time, It made it really hard for me to finally tel him. Your poem is amazing.

Patrick

I love it its my favorite poem i have it printed off andframed on my wall

Kojo

Wow! This poem is really great. For a moment I felt this moment was meant for me. it is really good. keep it up and have a happy valentine.

DAVID

great poem im tryin to see will i send it to my friend but im afraid how she will react

rebeca

its a very touching poem

Tiffany

This poem is so lovely. The words are just right to say to the friend I have (which I want to be more than friends).

enoku

too true. very nice.

Graciela

Dear Lonely Shadow, I just read your beautiful poem and I really related to it. You have an amaizing talent, I am glad that you are not letting go to waste. Thank you for writting poetry that is to inspiring.

vilong

thanx this is a kick poem from reading this i have a really good idea of getting this girl that i like any way thatnx again :)

beautiful1

Mushiness does NOT equal love.

leesah

such a nice poem... speaks the truth for me

Amanda

I really liked this poem alot because it is actually very hard to explain to someone how you feel about them but this poem is very well written and tells the person you are best friends with that you are in love with them without messing up your friendship!It was great!

bruce

HEY! NICE ONE, very, very very good, I'd never thought feelings inside a person sounds better in words. I'm in the same boat as you, this poem had to be 11 out of 10

juli

beautiful!

Daniel

Your poem touched my heart so much that i had tears in my eyes. I to want to be more than friends with my best friend, but she too has a boyfriend. Your poem is the best i have ever read

Sheena

This poem is very deep. I read this poem and thought about how many experiences I have had like this. The poem is very touching

layla

this poem was sent to me & it truly touched my heart & brought tears to my eyes. you have a beautiful & heartful way of expressing yourself. thank you for sharing it with us.

Nisa

I do not think that I have ever heard any other romantic line in my life that is more romantic than,"I ENVY THE WIND THAT RUNS THROUGH YOUR HAIR"! Truly beautiful. truly amazing.

penguin

it is the best

Matthew

Exallent

Roy

I just wanted to thank you for this poem. I have recently moved away from my bestfriend and she means the world to me. But i really wanted to explain to her the feelings that I am experiancing when I am with her. I do not have the guts to tell her about my feelings, but I need and want to. Luckily I came across this poem and it vocalizes every thing I want to say to her, so i printed it out and am going to give it to her when I see ehr tonight, cause I am back in town to visit, but I desperately wnat her to come back with me.

terry

these words touched my heart.

Susan

This is a very beautiful poem it makes you wish someone felt this way about you.

Noor

never felt better...good work!

Bill

Your poem so perfectly puts my feelings into words. I'm deeply in love with a friend at work. She is seperated but still married & very afraid to start another relationship. She greatly values my friendship & I would hate to lose that. Thank you for your gift of poetry! It's a perfect gift to give to my friend.

kristen

I thiught your poem was great, yeah its hard when the person your in love with , loves someone else. Im in that same place. But keep your head up and be strong.The right one is out there somewhere!

Arul

This mail really touched my heart....coz I'm going through the same feeling's

skip

this poem was phat! perfect to send to my best friend who i feel the same way about.

Jordan

i have read a lot of love poems in my time.i have written alot to.but this one..is one of the best i have ever read. its so true.i think you know how to take most peoples feelings and put them into words.

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