About the Poem

Love plays many factors in our life. Yet every time we take a chance something comes along and messes things up. We really don't focus on the sad side, or give recognition to our tears. Without them we would not be able to move forward, or love again.

Pain Of The Night

by Sweett

Watch as this tear falls into empty space
See it fall into life's nameless place
Can you see the sparkle as it catches the light
That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight
As it falls watch it, its color has changed
From blue to bright red, it has a wide range

There it goes all alone, it continues to fall
With it, it takes the emotion, the emotion of all
Wait, can you hear it? A sob has broke free
Has shook the lungs cold, but yet it continues to be
Here it comes, a force has been built between the eye
A wall of shear water, it's now time to cry

A shudder, a scream, darkness envelops your soul
The darkness of the night has taken its toll

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53 Visitor Comments

SLEEPY

As I was reading it, it touched me. I loved the poem

progress

I really felt this poem. much respect for being able to bring realness of the dark into the light of others eyes. peace and love progress

Bryan

This is a great poem that can relate to anyone.

Chris

EXCELLENCE

Jayme

amazing

morpheus

Its a great poem!

Jocke

It is a realy good poem, i realy like it, it´s just that way i feel sometimes :)

sabrina

it was so awesome,i loved it, i cried my eyes out when i read it. so i give my props to the poet who wrote it.

spaceboy

And one vote from me!

Susan

Excellent poem . Perfect . My compliments to the author :) Thank you so much .

Graham

Beautifully constructed. As a severe pain sufferer, it touches my heart.

shannon

i think that this poem is, a very very good poem. very well thought of and just realy good

Raven

I really liked this Poem it almost brought tears to my eyes.

Amber

I like this poem. My boyfriends dad beats him and I have tried to help him. I've gotten him into shelters to stay away from his dad but his dad finds out where he is and makes him go home. I lay at night in my bed and I cry because of all the pain I have in my life. Thank you for showing this poem it is basically how I feel right now. Amber

mira

i like so much to read poems written by people . but really it was a nice poem. i like it so much. im not interested in voting but coz i like it. im voting . wish that u will write one special like that.

damian

I liked it it is how i feel the pain the darkness every thing this poem saved my life

Dori

HEY YOU JUST DESCRIBED MY EVER LATING NIGHTS. WELL AT LEAST NOW YOU KNOW SOMEONE ELSE IS GOING WHAT YOUR GOING THROUGH. NOW YOU JUST HAVE TO MAKE ONE THAT SHALL TELL US WHAT ARE WE TO DO.

Linda

This is such a nice poem! It touches my heart deeply. It made me cry.

Claire

I loved it. As I was reading it, it touched me. I loved the poem. Yeah, it's time to cry.

Bill

you poem was so touching. you have a great talent. keep up the good work!

nobody

hey sweett, this is a great poem. you have very deep and very powerful emotions! but still in the darkness of everything there still is hope, just sometimes it's hard to see.

Daisy

I LOve this is touch me

megan

Nice Poem! :)

ashur

Omg this is a truely amazing poem. its goes well with what my life used to be like. its truely amazing. and really special!

otravitza

You have my vote! It's a great poem. Very touching

tracy

This poem is amazing. The description is exactly how I feel. You are an amazing poet!

stephanie

I think this poem tells everything you feel when you're going through depression. It is very well-written. It is so beautiful.

Rebekah

This poem is so true and it touched me in the heart where there's some empty space.

donyele

this poem i can relate too in many ways. keep up the good work.

Ashley

Wow, this was a great poem. I like the style, how the words were used ect.

K'Lee

One of the most beautiful poems i have ever read. Great work

Maria

this poem made me think about how I feel inside. This poem is really nice

Rachel

It really shows what happens when you have lost some you love. I think this poem reminds that we will never forget any pain of losing some one because at night when you can't sleep your mind wanders, and it will remember the pain of that time or event. the poem is great, though.

Lora

well . wow! what can i say ! words so strong & direct . it's touchy & sad

Adnil

U have the talent to describe the true feelings of one who is torn apart, waiting to break free from the pain. Excellent Sweett!

christy

A couple of months ago I whatched my grandmother die. This poem helped me a ton. Keep up the good work and know you helped me get through the pain. Thanks soo much.

ashi

i really love this poem it is a great poem

Yanitza

I LOVE IT. VERY. IT HELP ME SO MUCH.

kay

this made me cry! its beautiful!

sandra

i totally enjoyed this poem,it left me thinking that those of us who cry are not alone

Robinson

this is exactly what i have been through. a night full of pain, a night full of sorrow, a night full of cries but no one hears it

onebadwolf33

i really liked this poem.this is how i felt after my divorce. still feel this really hit home with me. keep up the good work.

gordon

Very touching, it shows the true pain of sadness and depression

Reema

this poem is so touching. and i really liked it. it really suites my situation.

Rosa

This poem was just great! I felt alot of what it was about. Thank you for sharing

Julie

Such expression of REAL emotion! I really related and liked this truthful, deep poem.

LiNdA

I love this poem.

You have hit the nail on the head! The last stanza could stand alone! To be able to verbalize the hurt.

Yana

hey hun ur poem is really good

Danny

I know these tears and the feeling that comes with the night. Well said.

KFC

i dont really like sad poems but this one is great! You take a little teardrop and describe it with such impac that is so wonderful! I write peoms too but mine are more like happier but still this is a wonderful poem!

Joe

just beautiful

Maegan

This poem almost makes me cry because all the times i went without crying cuz i hold everything inside and its like im really afraid to cry, its weird.

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