About the Poem
This is a poem about the loss of hope, the loss of love, and the loss of reality. Written for personal reasons, it has taken on a life of it's own. And this feeling haunts to this very day.
Losing |
| by Jade X. Phatonis |
| losing all I can see. nothing remains. dripping slowly away the tides recede and I stand alone. I look down from the precipice that is my life and wonder where the tides go. will they return to fill my gaping soul? or will the waters dry to flow no more and leave me standing and breathless? all I can do is wait. watching from my precipice, all I can do is wonder. |
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19 Visitor Comments
Anni-rose
i vote you're poem 10/10 becuase it reflects on my life with my dad as i always hoped that he would ring me for my birthday or christmas but he never did i thought i wasnt part of his life and the poem is exactly how i feel. i losted all my hope and i am now 12 and he has never rang me ever. please write more poems like this i love them.
jessica
u better win cause i put my vote on u k
Jodie
Heyy. this is a really nice pome. its kinda what i feel in ways. from the years i lived. but yeah ceap up the work i will be checking for more. from. Jodie
Josh
I think you are in the position has iam now
silly
Sadness will always remain
melisha
This poem is really nice and has touched till the bottom of my heart!
silly
Never alone. love stands beside you, always!
justin
i think this poem is awesome! great writing
Arbria
This poem realy touched me i realy admire sad poems this one realy hade this edge that just made me feel something special about this particular poem.
brittany
i lyke your poem cause it give back my memories bout my grandpa cause my grandpa passed away by a heart attack
ilona
hey dat was a good poem its sad and it makes ppl think good jod ! keep on do wut u do :) ilona :)
jesse
that is amazing jade, you could write an antology with swtuff like that. You have a real way with words and that is a real gift. It describes how i sometimes feel perfectly. ;-)
Samantha
This poem was very well done. It expresses a rough moment I'm going though, I guess that's why it caught me.
jency
Really appriciating the author. It seems - all words came from the bottom of his heart. It reveals his stoic nature.
aleen
this was a really good poem and i like it a lot keep uo duh good work :oP
cammy
this is a very good poem and very true
Larry
Jade sometimes we need to just turn around and walk to a new beach.
nikki
great give it a 10!
Samantha
Th poem expresses how I sometimes feel with my friends.
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