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I wrote this poem after my first serious crush broke up with me. I didn't know of any other way to express my feelings. After the tears ran out, I allowed my soul to cry this way.

Goodbye

Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we'd be apart
When you held me, you said "Forever"
Now that you're gone, I know you meant "Never"
Saying you loved me with that look in your eyes
And that, too, was a cold-hearted lie
Your tender touch, a soft kiss
Two things about you I will miss
As I sit here thinking of you
My face is wet with tears past due
I should have cried long ago
But I just loved you so
I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind
A hurt so deep, it cuts like a knife
But wounds heal, and I'll go on with my life.

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8 Visitor Comments

savanah
that was a beautiful poem. it touched my heart in the deepest way it makes me cry
sergio
hi i'm 23 and i live in chicago and i just wanted to tell u. As i was sitting here feelig sad about a love i lost, i read your stuff u make me feel strong and helps me get bye now i'm a man and i tryed everything i could but when the other person gives up, its to late and even the strongest man feels a broken heart but when i've done all i can. i just have to say good-bye . so hopfully one day i can be in love, a love like a 16 year old where nothing in life is more importent then the one who make u feel like a lil kid again and then maybe i can be happy. just a fan peace
yasmine
i loved this poem . it touched me a lot . it was real, strong and very powerful . all i can say is good job
natasha
this poem really touched me i just suffered from a breakup becuse of some real real wierd situations in the relationship but your poem has been the best one ive read you really have a talent
Rosy
I really liked it alot it was Great!
silje
a really great poem!!!
britt
i loved the poem i love writing SAD poems! i just wanted to say" KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE MORE POEMS LIKE THAT!"
Cayhra
This is a beutiful poem I write some poetry but have never seen anything this wonderful

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