Let's Make A Deal by Diane Blue

trang

this poem touches me alot! well done

sally

This poem at this time in my life said what I needed and wanted to say but could not seem to find the words until now, but now let them be your words I say. Thank you

Latinagirl

That was the best deal i can ever imagin. Thank you so much.

jacqui

I just love the poem.

Valerie

This poem was beatiful. I am sorry to admit that I was the one that needed to be forgived. The one that hurt him so many times. The one that ignored his love and his kindness. But he never gave up on me. After 15 years 2 marriages (his & mine) 2 children and a lifetime of lost memorie's he has learned to forgive me and I have learned to open up to his love. Being loved unconditionally is the most beatiful love of all. I thank-you for finding the words that describe how I felt all these years. I'm sory for hurting you my love. please forgive me?

Brenda

Thank you ~ you've captured my thoughts precisely!

Briana

As soon as I read this poem, I started crying because I can relate to every thing in this poem. I break down into tears and fall apart every single day of my life because the love of my life doesn't even care about me.

emmy

it is really shows how am I feel towards my beloved IT IS REALLY AMAZING

Jade

Once done with this poem i was crying. its so sad but does happen to people. its frustrating giving someone your heart and all they do with it is take it forgranted

mari

wow this poem made me cry really hard. i love your poem, great work

jodi

i absolutly loved this!

Christina

Very Ironic, touching, real. So sad when I read this poem.

Dio Marie

OH, THIS ONE IS EXCELLENT!

Bobbie

I love it! I cry when i read it.

JASON

I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM. THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM MUST HAVE WRITEN THIS AT THE TIME THAT SHE WOULD HAVE DONE ANYTHING AND HE TOOK ADVANTAGE OF IT.

Crystal

This really hits home. Just getting over a man walking out of my life after 4 kids & 11 years. Thanks for writing it. makes me feel better :)

Lisa

I swear this poem was written especially for me and my past relationships. :)

Kayleen

This poem really speaks to me and basically describes what I am going through in a current situation. Very well written.

Dee

I truley felt this piece! There's such meaning in it and i absolutely LOVE IT!

sharon

can i just say, i read ur poem and the tears just fell. its amazing and really gets the point across,, when u read it u can feel pain, hurt etc. well done keep the emotion and feelings and you will be a top writer. Sharon xx

Brandy

I loved your poem, it made me cry for hours. I was seeing someone on and off for ten years and one day he told me he had no feelings towards me, i had no idea. i was crushed but your poem has brought light to my sadness so much that i am going to write it down and give it to him. it's everything i wanted to say but couldnt figure out how to say it . thank you

kerry

this poem has just brought tears to my eyes ive recently spilt with my husband and its exactly how i feel and how it was.

leon

its a great poem, hits the spot! thats the problem! its to good!

sanam

by the time i was finished with this poem i was dreched in tiers cuz u know how exactly how most of us lover feel but i still can't forgive him or make a deal like this to him my god help me forgive him soon . keep up the good work!

Lisa

I loved this poem, because I feel I'm in that situation and state of mind right now

chabelys

this poem is grate it is soo deep and it talks a lot to me cauz im going throut that rite now. and letting go is the best thing we can do

Jasmine

I love this poem and I was trying to tell my ex this exact thing today but couldn't find the words and I'll be darn they are all in a poem! Excellent job! I can't wait to read more of where that came from.

k

love it and i know how you feel?

gypsy

This poem is so very real, it touches all the bases of most typical relationships. You should be a travel agent for Guilt Trips.

veejay

great! really great! sO tOuching and the emOtiOn which the authOr is trying tO cOnvey is very transparent! lOve it!

julie

That is an amazing poem. i am right there with you.

L

I've been there. you captured my side of it perfectly.

Sabra

This poem really touched my heart because it makes me think of some of the things that i have gone through when it comes to loving someone. I recently realized that people say what they do not feel sometimes. Learning that the hard way really sux. Well ur a great poet, keep up the good work and keep writing from ur heart. Sabra

Kelsey

OH my gosh. This is amazing. Someone once told me the reason poetry is so great is because when you read something that is happening to you, you know someone else has gone through it, and they lived. This poem is just. . . amazing.

Pia

Great!

dan

i really like the idea of ur poem wouldnt it b so easy to say lets just make a deal!

Sara

I love this poem its really digs down into alot of peoples feeling that they dont know how to put into words this poem is brillent

Dejan

great. just great. forgiveing is wath we need. not blameing them for not likeing us.

Mc

this poem is just so good. it embodies almost exactly the way that i feel right now. good job Diane on making this p0em! you really set a great example for all teenagers like me!

T

thats nice 10/10

Lindsey

The instint i finished reading this poem i thought about my friend dillon and i began to cry like ive never cried before and i thank you for that because now i can let go and FORGIVE him.

Jennifer

I think the poem is DEEP. It reminds me of all of the the things I've felt in the past . I love how brutally real it is!

Aimee

wow. just wow. it captures the exact feelings that i have experienced. absaloutly speechless n truly truly touched.

Nessa

It's odd how words written by someone else can relate to so many other people by so much. It's beautiful, what more can i say?

TASH

This pome i so lovely it is what is happening to me at the moment n i can see it all in that pome

tiff

i love that poem. its beautiful you are a great author! your poem made me cry. cause thats exactly what is happening to me right now

janet

Simplistic, yet, profound.

mita

this is so true. it clearly portrays the bitter truth and pain of a broken heart.

xangel

Your poem is how my heart feels thank you so much for putting thoes feeling into words

Danny

Words so simply chosen yet so very significant.

Kelly

Amazing! Those are the exact words I've been looking for. Thank you for finding them.

Karin

I loved this poem. I have a friend I'm in love with that doesn't return the feelings. He made that very clear last night and this poem seems to say exactly what I'm feeling right now.

Peachez

I was looking for a poem to send to my ex. I am going through an emotional time right now. This poem was exactly what I was trying to get acroos to him. This is beautiful poem.

Sharon

This poem touched me so much. It has happened to me before years ago and just recently happened to me again. Same person but even though I didn't get too close to him this time, it still hurt so bad. I ended up working with him and when he left for a transfer, I didn't let anyone see the tears and the ones that did, I came up with an excuse. I don't want him to know how much I'll miss him and I won't burden him with the idea that I still cry and I still miss him just as if it was the first time around. I'd rather keep it to myself, because I always felt invisible in his eyes.

Catalina

I love this poem so much. Honestly when I read it, it touched my like no poem has.

crystal

That was an awesome poem. I loved it!

Kaylyn

i know exactly how you feel - i love your poem

JASMINE

I love this poem it is really great. I'm in the exactly same situation I give you a 9

Kristy

Amazing, I cried. Im glad i'm not alone.

Jackie

This poem came very close to giving words to my pain and embarrassment. It was very validating, especially where it spoke about "playing games" and "being pathetic"! It helps to know someone else knows what I'm feeling at least.

marguerite

i think this poem is good

rasa

omg! i love this poem! its like, exactly whats happening to me.

ashley

i loved it. it was sooooooooo good

zizi

I loved this poem! It expresses true love.

Jon

awesome, so sad though

carmen

excellent

MELINDA

OMG, do u live in my marriage or what? this is terrific. keep up the good work.

samantha

this is just like me and my ex- boyfriend he was such a jerk!

Melinda

Ms Diane Blue it is so true about your peom. I love it so much that that peom brong back to this one person. He made me feel Just like your poem. I just want to say i like it very very much.

zeisha

this is exactly how i feel about my ex-boyfriend who broke up with me 4 days ago who i had been with for almost 3 years. thankyou for writing such a great poem :)

alejandra

i love this poem i could actually relate to what it says!

carol

i loved your poem .

Dee

I truly loved your poem. Thank you so much for sharing.

Miaka

The Poem truly touched my heart and brought me to tears, it is exactly what I've always felt for my ex-boyfriend. thankyou so much

theresa

This poem is special to me. it's how i feel and could'nt put it into words. thank you

Crystal

I am living this poem.

shana

I really liked this poem because I feel that it touched the main core of how people feel when love isn't exactly reciprocated.

victoria

hi i just wanted to say this ment something to me cause i know how it feels

vivek

Wish I could write one like this.

siko

this is realy geat poem i realy feelt what u said i konw waht u talking about all i have to say that nothing deserve weldone

Judy

I think this is a very wonderful poem. It says it all, it discribes most one sided relationships to a T. Wonderful job, and nicely put.

Angel

Thanks for making me realize I'm not the only one feeling this way. This poem really touched me, it said exactly what I was feeling at the time.

S

Love this poem it sums up how i feel right now.

sandy (sis)

this is a great poem good job

Kathy

What an amazing poem. ! I love the twist! Very powerful.

Wendy

I love this! It's very appropriate in my life right now.

Renee

I love this poem because this is the way i feel about a relationship that i wanted. It is so great and wonderful

Serenity

As I was reading your wonderful poem tears were falling down my cheek. As I am hurting still for the same reason this poem tells exactly where I am at today, thank you so much for sharing it.

Diane

this poem really touched me. it is exactly how i feel with my partner . (or is he still my partner?) It just totally describes the relationship im in now. its sad but beautiful. thankyou for sharing it

arkmikel

i really like your poem. she deserves to read this poem and i deserve a better woman rather than her. thanks a lot and 'hope to read more of your works.

Jaded

I'm going through something like this right now. This poem has made me feel better somehow.

happy

when i read this poem, i was just surfin the web lookin for somethin interesting an havin a good time talkin to my friends. i was in a real good mood but when i read this poem i just sat and cried. i dont usually cry but it hit right at the heart, sayin exactly what i felt with someone when i didnt know how to say it myself. and i love the poem for that because it hit an emotion, and thats what a good poem should do.

Christina

I really love your poem. I have been dealing with getting over my ex for so long and this totally fits our relationship to the tee. I had to email this one to him because it says everything that needs to be said. Great Job! Thanks for sharing it.

Josh

This poem says exactly what i feel about the girl i like.

Nathalie

I never thought I'd find the perfect poem that says exactly how I feel. Thank you it was beautiful!

Zoe

A lovely poem that touches the heart

Mel

OMG!. This poem is awesome. After getting out of a 6 year realtionship I recently dated someone for a short while, and you totally took the words outta my mouth! Great Poem!

a!s

tis poem is soooo touching. i can relate to the feelings. as i've been thru it. thx 4 expressing lots of pple's feeling in such a nice way Diane.

Jessika

i really love this poem. Diane you write very well. you had to go through this in order to write it as well as you did and i feel you on this. best poem yet!

Angela

u did a great job, its so true, love never seems to love back, y is that? i love this poem, it just brings to life the reality of what love really is!

Sheri

wow , my thoughts exactly

Neo

This is the saddest poem i've ever read and the best.

Zoe

Wow! this poem really hit home for me! i'm glad i'm not the only 1 who feels like this but i'm sorry it's happened to so many other people. xx

marie

I know how you must have felt because that is how I feel now! wonderful poem reads sraight to the heart.

Dalia.

actually, i felt really happy to read this great poem as it's true. it can touch anyone reading it even they didn't felt what you felt or what your poem was trying to say. having a great way to express your feelings make your poems really nice and can touch everybody. THANKS FOR YOUR GREAT POEM.

Shobha

Wow,awesome indeed! Looks like Diane took those words straight out of my heart.

b

This is one of the sadest things I ever read and is exactly how I feel. It made this aching that I feel in my heart that little bit worse and yet I feel that there are others who understand what I am going through.

nicole

this poem made me cry, it really hit home. although i'm not sur the deal of which you speak is entirely possible. but i loved it non the less.

Rahil

This peom seems like to be written just for me ,and I wish the the person who didnt share the same feelings like I did , has a chnage of heart after reading this , and so for you Di.

sexc_pwincess

oh my! this poem is so gorjus, well done for bein strong ;) in some ways it relates to me and my ex boyfriend which brings me tears weneva i read this. well done huny! :):)

Jenna

This poem moved me to tears! I just got out of a 2 year long relationship, and I could relate to this poem so much! It is very well written!

DeeDee

OH MY GOD . YOU HIT MY HEART LIKE A MACK TRUCK WITH THIS ONE. I'M FEELING SO BAD NOW AND YOU EXSPRESSED EVERY FEELING IN MY BODY . OH MY GOODNESS I'M ABOUT TO CRY . YOU TOLD THE TRUTH SO WELL.

Alexandra

This poem explains how it is with every guy I go out with. Why is it the girl always seems to love the guy more then the guy will ever love her? It hurts. I'm only 14 years old and the thought of guys always being like they are now, scares me. But I have relized something over the past year. Just because someone doesn't love you like u love them does NOT mean they don't love you will all they have! But yes this poem is the best poem i have ever heard and it touches my heart. U have great talent and im shocked!

tori

i loved that poem and i truely could relate. i thought it was awesome great job- most definatly the best poem.

Angela

this poem says it all

liwen

Exactly what I am feeling right now, somehow it just feels comforting reading the poem

Laren

simple but effective. Love it!

kim

this poem makes me want to cry, it is so honest and truthful! i know what the author is going through ive been there but could never put it in such nice terms. this is a truly inspiring poem.

Salma

woooowww. gr88888888888 one

Snow

Oh man, this poem ROCKS! You sound like a smart girl Diane. Few of many. I love this poem! Its very unique.

k

this is a very nice poem

Becky

This is an excelent poem. When i read it i got this feeling in my heart. I could relate so well to it. This is outrageous. good work!

Arin

I love this poem. And it's so fitting for what I'm going through and anyone who is or has gone through a one sided relationship. Where one person cares and gives thier all and the other doesn't seem to notice or even care. Thank you!

Laure

i can totally relate to this poem. i fell in love with this guy and we became really good friends since we can't be more than that. but now he has another and we've grown so far apart and i dont know what to do

Ness

It wasn't supposed to make me laugh, but it felt good to know that someone else feels just like me! That poem is great!

Lesli

I loved the deal u made! It's just what i was looking for to give to a certain perason.

Tree

I really liked this poem. I'm going through this right now. This helps a little

mario

Thank you for the eloquent piece. Going through something like that now, I was looking for some music to pass the sorrow: miles, coltrane, wonder, sade, even holiday. Your poem was the lyrics to my sorrowful song. Thank you, from "the soldier fighting the losing battle".

jamie

Your poem told the story of my last relationship with a very close friend of mine. It says everything I have been thinkng but could never find how to put it into words. Thank you!

sam

i love this poem i have felt that way a guy i know but for some reason i did;nt see it as clear as i do now thanks to your poem it is great to see such great talent in my own generatiion .

luis

this poem really touched me because there was thisgirl where the same thing happened to me as in the poem. this is a really great inspirational poem

lisa

Wow! u said it so perfectly. This poem touched me, made me cry, helped me. It is exactly how i feel but couldnt express it. U have done it perfectly.

Nanci

She was reading my mind! This is beautiful. Thanks Di.

jody

Hey, I just want to say that your poem is lovely and it expresses so many people's feelings. I can't get over a lost love, and this poem has described that love! xxx

CHANTAL

This poem made me burst into tears. Everything in it is so real. Just keep your head up baby.

Chelsie

Wicked!

Kristan

This is a poem that describes me so well! It is unbelievable! I love it so much!

terri

WOW! So I,m not the only one!Thank you for knowing how it feels xx

Terry

Great Poem!

choccy

I think that whoever has been toyed with in this got the short end of the stick. Sigh, and i know how they feel

Charlene

I love this poem. it is enough to show the other side how much you care, even though the other person is a jerk. Nice job..couldn't have said it better myself

Melanie

This poem descibes a relationship that I am in that is very simailar to the one she talks about in this poem.:)

Michael

I Loved Your Poem. Now Can We Make A Deal? I'll Love You A nd You Love Me. LOL

jen

So, I have been dealing with the break up with my boyfriend aka.. the one that got away, and all in the wrong way. I was blaming myself when really, he's the stupid one. This poem allowed me to get mad. as any dumped girl should be, because they have been rejected. Any way, thanks.. and as the Spice girls used to say "GIRL POWER!"

julie

you said it i felt it!

Kelly

This poem was very touching it explained exactly how me and this kid i really liked were. He did the exact thing to me making me believe it was true and then he went off with my friend. Love hurts but sometimes you just have to get past it. Thanks

nitza

I think this poem really proves a point,because sometimes we give too much to somebody who doesn't give enough to us.All the do is make us seem like if we aint worth nothing or like they are better than us.

Elizabeth

I can really apriciate this. it hit close to home when I was thinking of an ex not quite gotten over.. its very good

Jamie

This poem is sooo good. I am in a relationship right now that goes perfectly. Thank you for sharing it with me

angela

perfectly described wat i feel rite now. thanx alot

Sarah

OMG! This author was reading my mind..I recently told my exbf that enough was enough and this poem just cut it to the quick..It said everything that i couldn't

Abhijeet

lovely

Jeremy

This poem describes so much my love for a certain woman, her scorn to me, and the fact that I am incapable of being angry with her. Thank you Di.

Sunan

I have been in love with man for 10yrs. He and I were really good friends as well, but he also knew how I felt about him, and his respoonse was that he's not responsible for anyone feeling a certain way about him. Well, I sent him your poem, and all hell broke loose. He said he never expected to recieve something so mean from a friend, and to stop. I no longer speak to him. I figured if it didn't hit so close to home, why the anger? Thank you, you expressed what I'd been feeling all these years.

Kristin

This poem is so touching I find myself just crying reading it, yet it helps. Thank you so much for writing this poem it really helps me into moving on past this prolonged crush, it also makes me realize that I'm not alone in these mixed up emotions.

sunant

I am in an unrequited relationship with my best friend. I love him and have for years. He knows this and cannot/or refuses to return the same feelings, though he says I make him feel special and happy. Has he ever sat and wondered what do I get from this? This poem says it all for me..

Zoraya

This really describes how I feel at this moment. I really liked it and I hope to read more like this.

maddi

i liked this poem beacuse i liked this guy for over a year and he didnt even give me a chance dont judge a bood by its cover! because looks arent everything!

nfg

unbelievable---awesome poem

Ranjan

Lovely poem.what more can I say.I don't have any words.

Carolina

This poem is great,i recently broke up with my boyfriend,and i sent him this poem,it describes our situation,i'd like to read more poems,by this author!

LESLIE

WOW THAT WAS SUCH AN AWESOME WAY TO EXPRESS ONES SELF, TO THE POINT, IT MADE ME THINK.

Amanda

That was verry cute.. I could completly relate

Erin

This poem was unbelievable. It explains a relationship that I have with someone that I like, perfectly. The ending line was great. it left you hanging and really made you think. Great Job!

savannah

i like this poem alot.this is how i feel about my boyfriend at the time.it was ll good tell i told him how much i liked him then we drifted apart.were still together but its rocky.he avoids me like in the poem i think he really does.

Rona

Having recently lost the greatest love of my life, I was sure this author must have been reading my heart. A very powerful poem. So powerful, after sending it to my X, we were able to be friends again. Thank you so much!

Sarah

I really liked this poem. Catchy and honest.

lauren

How well written, i dont think there is anything so frustrating as unrequited love, and here the poet sums it all up very cleverly

Phoebe

i like i like! where is the next one? i can totally relate to how you were feeling as you were writing this poem. thanks for clearing my head with this!

Jamie

I really loved this poem.It really expresses how i feel about this guy I like. Thank you for sharing it with me.

Superman

This poem has touched meon a level none other as. Being a poet myself.. I think this had a lot of meaning. And I'm Currently in a similar situation..

Tracey

OMG this poem is so fitting to my life right now. I can really find some comfort reading it.

Bernadette

i can really relate to this poem. it was great

Alisha

This was an amazing poem. Its the truth! Some boys just cant see what is in front of them! I'm sorry he didnt care, but you should relize that you can find better. Try to let go of this jerk, my hopes are with you.

Eva

Wonderful poem. It really reached me. I cried hard because of this one.

lynds

THIS POEM SUMS IT ALL UP, THIS HAPPENS ALL TOO OFTEN, NOT JUST TOO ME, BUT PLANTY OF MY FRIENDS, IT DESCRIBES SIMPLY THE FEELINGS OF SOMEONE GIVING ALL WITH NOTHING IN RETURN.I FEEL THAT POEM WILL ALWAYS DESCRIBE ME! GOOD WORK

princess

This is a great poem. I can totally relate to it with a guy that I really liked, and he totally crushed me in everyway explained in this!

amz

Very moving, i hope he realises what you are giving up for him. Your a brave girl, to forgive such a heartbreaker! Keep writing poems, your very good :-)

Olivia

What an awesome poem! This is the exact situation I am in with my now-boyfriend of almost two years. When I read it, I felt like it was written for me! It expresses how I feel right now, and I just might share it with him. Thanks so much!

Karissa

I read this poem over and over and over again. This person must be a good poet. Grrrrreat work!

Sydney

I find this poem very intimate.

Stephanie

great job! well done

Lionexen

sPlEnDiD

Nya

yo great poem

Steph

The truth is: it's excellent. Very.

Katie

I cannot help but love this poem forever.

April

I am am absolutely a great fan of this poem! I hope it gets more votes.

Krista

I love this poem so much. :)

Kristan

This is the best poem I have ever read. It has the most truth! I mean, as son as I read this, I could tell that it was exactly what I was experencing! It is an excellent poem! Great Job!

Tom

Wow!

quincy

this poem was great

nived

this is the exact poem i have been searching for to express my feelings and sadness. This person who reads this feels his or her mistake. This poem has a wide meaning

María

All I'm gonna say is. Gosh, what a wonderful poem you wrote. I wish I was as good as you. I might end up using this poem with someone if things don't work out right. I'm hoping not to use it, but time will tell. Thanx for writing such wonderful things.

penny

loved it

ImissYesterday

This poem rules, I'm reading others, but up to now, this is 'the' poem in this site

Heartbroken

YOU KNOW I ONCE THOUGHT THAT NO ONE CAN RELATE TO HOW I FEEL UNTIL I READ THIS POEM. IT REALLY TOUCHED ME MOSTLY CAUSE I AM STILL GOING THOUGH THE HEARTBREAK.

amy

very good!

katie

I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH IT SOUNDS LIKE ME AND HOW I FEEL I THINK YOU DID A GOOD JOB!

Kuresh

I recently broke up with some one who I really loved. It was after nearly 8 yrs after my first break up that I got the courage to get into another relation with someone I loved. The first break up wasn't the fault of either, as it was destiny, she loved me even when she was on her death bed. The recent one ended up bitterly much against my wishes she went of with someone who I don't know about.

Andrew

I once said that these words were the words that my soul yearned to speak, and i wasn't lying. Its been almost a year and a half, but I still feel pain when i think of my ex. Thank you Di, I never would have been able to express this clearly to her without your poem.

karen

this lovely poem is making me cry. I am crying right now as it expresses all my sadness and hurt

Thaddeus

AWESOME!

Mari

I really think this is a very nice poem i had a recent lost love.

Brian

Excellent poem! I, as well as many others I'm sure, can definitely relate to this poem in so many ways. Keep up the good work! It helps us that have a hard time putting our thoughts into words.

Brian

wow, this is so in tune in how i feel about me and rosey. she tried to love me but never as much as i loved her. :(

Joey

I love the poem. It looks so simple, but it's meaning is deep. I'm feeling much the same, and it's so unbearable to realize that the person you need SO much doesn't really care anymore.

Laura

This poem is beautiful - it says everything I could never say!

RODNA

This poem correponds so much to my present situaton. It points out all the things that I know are there,but just don't know how to describe.

Hayley

WOW that was awesome.such reality..Ive been in both shoes b4 but its so true how one can go unnoticed when U like somone so much!

Andy

This poem expresses exactly how i feel 4 mai crush. the classic 'one-way traffic' love... amazing work

Sarah

This poem is describes my situation perfectly.

Kris

i'm learning to forgive someone too...

Althamese

great poem!

EVELYN

I REALY LIKE IT THIS POEM BECAUSE IT IS SO REAL AND IT IS GOOD TO MAKE A DEAL WITH SOMEONE WHO JUST THINKS ABOUT THEM AND NOT ABOUT US THE ONE THAT LOVES THEM.

layla

that was my life in a nutshell

Cash

That is a sad,but great peom.I'd give you a 10 outta 10.

estefania

it is so good

matt

oh yeah, this one definatly rules. I am in a very similar situation with the one I love and this one touched me

nilesh

its fentastic.. it's superb. its excellent.. just cant believe that some one in the world is just like us, who can help us to express our emotions via his words.. i cant write more because i dont have words to describe the poem i can say it is superb

kerri

I can relate,it's been forwarded to the unforgiven!

Nick

I really did enjoy reading this poem. I sent it to the one that I felt this way about and he was also truly touched, so much that he asked why I hadn't told him my true feelings earlier on. I felt it was too late but now he seems to think this is just the beginning. Thank you very much. My dreams of out friendship being developed finally did come true after many months.

Tek

This poem is too good.. Props to the author, for making the blind see..

Alyth

This is so true.. Brillant poem

Juan

This is a very good poem, it speaks the truth.

Kara

I think this poem has so much meaning to it, as a younger girl I am I think love should happen right now and since I read this poem I think about all the things that my love has done that are really mean and I jsut haven't noticed it thanks!

Shauna

This poem is awesome! I sent this to a guy that used me! Totally fits my life!

Alisha

this was a really good poem I just gotta say keep it up because I really understadn what u went through and I eman theres alot of stuff that I keep inside because I can twrite as elequeantly as u can so yea

Vera

when i first read this poem I cried...because it reminded me so much of me and my boyfriend!! it's an awesome poem!!!!! thanx

Steve

One of the most heart-felt thoughts describing the turmoil felt in an unrequited love...Very well spoken!!

Heather

I have to say this poem is great. So, many things said in so little words. I love it! I have an ex that this poem is perfect for. Great job and keeping writing!

fallon

i think this poem kinda relates to my crush i have had on this boy for 6 years and he still does not notice me like i want

Poetry

Di, what more can I say. I write poetry myself and all I can say is that this is love. Beautifully written. Need I say more?

Jason

Superb!

Cissy

Touche'! You have a gift my friend, go and get published so others may share!

Kate

i have felt everything in that poem before. it kind of put my mind and heart at peace. very awesome.

Lisa

THIS POEM WAS INCREDIBLE. THANK YOU FOR EXPLAINING WHAT I'M GOING THROUGH BECAUSE I NEVER COULD.

Nathan

An incredible poem.

mandy

THAT WAS SO CUTE! I CAN RELATE TO THAT ONE. YOU ARE NOT ALONE ON THAT ONE!!!!

Wonderland80

WOW... I'm speechless- the poem says it all...once again... WOW

Katt

All the pain in my heart expressed. The most direct hit to my heart ever. Great work

chinky

what more can i say...i saw myself through your words...tears rolled down my cheek.

janine

great stuff!

Jermain

This brought a tear(several actually) to my eye.

trini

very well put. wonderful poem

Linda

I was truely touched by this poem, and I have read many, it was the Best.

Åse

A wonderful poem! Just what I'm going through now:-( It's so hurtful when the person you love (and who loved you once) don't love you..

Jaco

What a deal...!

Shinomizu

I felt this way exactly - and unluckily it happened with my best guy friend. Too much love can kill you - if you're not wise enough to keep some of it for yourself. I think we all have felt this way sooner or later, and this poem expresses in a wondeful and catching way what often we don't know how to say - even to ourselves. Good job! Thank you :-)

Dawn

Wonderful-- speaks to me!!

Diana

This one is really great and so true. I can feel and understand the poem because I am going through this right now with someone. Thanks for sharing!!! Sincerely, Di.

Shar

Fascinating!! Simply amazing!

Amberly

Di, This is the most incredible poem I have ever read. I have been in a relationship with a boy for 6 years and this is the poem that is ending it all. He plays games with me and now he wants to stop; however I want to stop him. I love him and he is breathtaking to me and I worship everything about him; however I have never had anyone pinpoint it to the perfection that you have. I hurt and I will hurt for a long time to come, but I deserve better. Thank you so much you'll never know how much you have had an impact on my life. Thanks, Amberly

Heather

It was one of the most beautiful and truthful poems I have ever read.

Annie

i love this poem

Andrew

these are the words my soul yearned to speak, but i couldn't seem to make it say them. I thank you from the very depths of my soul...

Ash

I got a friend of mine to read this poem and it changed our relationship...In a good way, but not the way I wanted it to. He respects me more now though!

HAYDEE

I LIKE THIS POEM ALOT.I LIKE THIS GUY BUT HE IS ALREADY TAKEN,IT HURTS SO MUCH WHEN U WANT SOMEONE AND THEY DONT FEEL THE SAME WAY.GOOD WORK

Ashley

It made me cry....(and I have my reasons)

MaLinda

Di, Your poem is such an inspiration to me. Believe it or not, I am going through exactly all of the things you stated in your poem. Now that I have read it I seem to find another aspect to my whole situation. SELF LOVE! Thank you very much, and I wish you the best!!!!

Bob

How do you care for someone so much, and the other cares so little. Does that person fear the passions of that love

Philip

I have no idea how old you are Di, but I am a man in my 40's who was reminded once of my youth, and how even at my age it can happen again.

DOUG

HOW DID YOU FIND OUT SO MUCH ABOUT ME? I WAS TOUCHED DEEPLY BY THIS POEM. THANK YOU

jen

I really loved your poem

sups

I just loved this poem. Its beautifully written.keeep up the good work Di.

mike

this poem really hits the nail on the head thank you

Emily

This poem made me feel like i wasnt alone, this poem i could really relate to! i love it!

Lizar

It's one of the best poems I have read

cindy

This poem express exactly how I feel right now. Thanks for writting it.

Millie

This is a great poem, because i feel the same way. This is for all the guys out there!

Beverley

My heart is breaking because the man I love doesn't love me, this describes how I feel

Melanie

I don't think anyone could have said it better. Thanks for expressing how I feel.

Alex

this poem is very thight

Katrina

I like that poem very much, it really interesting, and likewise of whats happening out here in this world today.Love can get lost and by-guided in many ways.

Marise

I totally adore this poem. This is the way many people feel, they never get there love in return. I'll give this poem a 200% vote

Jesse

this poem is really touching and i like it alot im gonna tell all my freinds about it

safara

this poem is the exact description of how i feel(towards that certain someone) its a lovely peom :)

Bianca

Wow...im speechless...this is perfect

Laurie

This poem gave me a very familiar feeling, made me feel very numb.

ShoeBowl

I just wanted to tell you that that poem was so true. Every word made complete sense. It was a really good poem, and it had a lot of meaning.

Marcelo

Incredible poem!

vanessa

Reading this poem has helped me to accept reality,and at the same time be okay it.

jessica

This poem is cool and I can relate to evrything. I sent this to my boyfriend

marina

wonderful poem, bitter sweet and touching

Gregory

This poem is an outcry of a wounded heart, but how noble, how decent and intellectually smart it is! No whining, no self diminishing complaints, none of narcissism or showing off I love this poem!

Joey

i found the poem very touching,it is sad just to think how many people deserve this poem. people really should read this poem and look at themselves

think

this poem describes in every word my last relationship i flet excatly where this was coming from.

4_B

It's the best poem!! i can certainly relate to dis 1

Cain

I loved this poem. Im in an identical situation with a girl at the moment. Although she kind of drops hints that there could be more than platonic love between us, she quickly changes back into friend mode and Im left feeling really quite empty. Im not one who likes to give up easily though. *S*

very

very very nice! now dats for me

Preya

Brilliant!

bonnielynn

Your poem is truly one that hits home with so many of us. In reading it, I felt it touch my heart because I know all too well how it feels. Keep putting your thoughts down. It helps!

Andrea

I rellay feel that this poem captured the true inside and the struggle of a relationship that I'm currently involved.

Irina

I like this poem cause its real. it says what she feels to the point. i feel what she does, i am in lvoe with some one but apparenetly he doesn't feel the same way. that mess hurts. this poem says it all :O)

Claudia

I really enjoyed that poem

hope

This poem really described how i was feeling at the time that i found it. Sometimes we know how we feel, but can never put it into words quite like the poet. If i had to rate this poem on a 1-10 scale, i would definately have to say it is a 10, with 10 being the best.

Heather

Love the poem! Great JOB!

YOLANDA

GREAT POEM I REALLY ENJOYED IT

liz

i can related to every word you wrote, as if it were coming staight from my heart. I m still working on letting my feelings go. i don't think i will ever lover another man the way i lovedf him, and yet He made a fool of me! never again

Tillie

Beautifully done.she has put into words what all of us have felt when trying too hard to hold on to a lost love.

Glenis

this poem says it all. we have all been there, done it, got the tee-shirt

Carolina

WOW! that is am O*sum poem i so love it cuz thats how i am only i cant tell the person and i wish i could. i love the poem it`s super

Natalie

it makes alot of sense. and it reminds me of alot. its good

theresa

that made me cry! i loved it!

chris

I truly love this poem. I was touched deeply by it. It was exactly how i feel. I sent it to a girl who did all of that to me, i am trying to forgive her, but she kinda doesnt care. If you have any comments on what i should do, will you tell me

liana

i absolutely adore this poem. it's very to the point and many will be able to relate to it.Many thanks for such a beautiful poem

Chris

Di, I think that the lets make a deal poem was perfect. It was perfect in many was and it just got you into it and that is what people look for

Colleen

when i read this poem, i almost cried. it's such a well-written poem, and you can almost feel the author's pain

Pat

Great poem!

Nancy

I really liked this poem as I also have experienced these exact circumstances. I couldn't have put it in any better words then Di did. I forwarded this poem to the man that broke my heart. Thanks Di for saying some things I could not find the words to say.

Hailee

It's a poem you can really realte to, and I love it!

Selina

'dis poem rox

cleo

this is greatest poem ever i hope the author can teach to write poems like this because someday i would like poetry to be my second career

Jay

This is so true and i cant believe someone has finally said what needs to be said. This is just so amazing. You hear only the good things in a relation ship but finally you read about the side that everyone is usually on.

christina

i love this poem its everything i feel written down for me to see. im sorry anyone has to feel this way cause it hurts

Tracey

This poem really touched me, as I have been right where she is thank you for sharing your gift of poetry

Erika

I love this poem its so sweet and it reminds me so much of me and my ex

sona

Nicest poem to explain just how much pain you feel and even after all that, you're still considerate enough to "forgive."

katia

this poem is very good at expressing how one feels when they love too much.

Kyna

This poem is really great and expresses the feelings that many teenagers, both male anf female have when they talk about loving someone who doesn't love them back. This poem perfectly describes how I feel about the love of my life who was once there and now doesn't even know that I exsist! Thanks for writing such a great poem!

Deena

A very strong poem that made feel touched and sad for the poet

debbie

It really struck a chord, wonderful writing.

EVA

bravo! Well done reminded of an x.I'm still healing:(

Lisa

I love This poem, it says exactly what I would like to get through to my husband, If he would only notice me and my pain.

cherah

that poem is really good. It is so true I can relate so perfectly pretty damn sad!

Elina

I loved the poem. It was like it took the words right out of my heart.

Lisa

Perfect.

tara

i loved this poem. it made so much sense to me. it reminds me of me and my boyfriend. we don't see eye to eye on anything. thanks

Valerie

It hit my problem on the head.

Tukata

I really like your poem. It is straightforward and very concise. I like the way it expresses the message that "I'm hurt" but also i can feel that the person in the poem is strong. Great job :)

Michelle

I have had this emptiness on my heart over a past relationship. I myself am not creative enough to express my words in such poetic beauty as "Di" and I found this poem and sent it to him and finally felt closure. Thank you, thank you so much for helping me accomplish this (I don't know the voting scale but I would give this a 9.7 out of 10)

Tiffany

loved it!

gina

That was an excellent poem, in fact im about to send it to my crush, because thats the only way I can express how i feel. Thankyou for finding the words for me.

Jo

A heart wrenching and totally accurate account of a one sided relationship. To put it in to words of this clarity takes emmense insight and courage.

stephanie

omg it was really good

dy'er

Wow,this poem hit me like a ton of bricks. This describes a situation of mine to the tee.

Dessie

who told Di My sad love story?! This poem is so appropriate!

Tiffiany

This poem is very inspirational, I connected with all your words, that's exactly how I feel concerning my boyfriend.

Teresa

Loved the intensity of it. I could feel her pain.

Sally

So sad .. even sadder that I can relate to it

squiggs

id like to say i loved your poem, for me its almost as if you fought back against the one that hurt you. in a way there is two sides, the hurt and the hurters and this poem fights back, for you and for me, maybe for our whole side. thanks for your thoughts and feelings in this one

Lee

i can feel for the poem. It brings out the hurt the author feels, yet does not suggest hatred. Basically, it is beautifully written.

Jenn

Great poem! It is exactly how I feel about one of my friends now. He used to like me but I couldn't go out with him then. Now I like him and he is back with his old girlfriend who treats him badly. I love him and want to be with him forever - he know it and takes advantage of it to. I try to tell myself that we are just friends but I always find myself hoping for more. His playing games with my emotions doesn't help! Good luck in your situation. I feel for you. :)

trina

nice!

April

That is truly a deep poem. I loved someone once in that very same way and still do. But we became best friends after 3 years. That poem touched my heart and spoke to my soul. Great Job!!

Lisa

such an inspirational and such a true poem for all of us who have loved and lost

Suzanne

OMIGOD! that was such a good poem! I really really really liked it! I, myself cant relate to it, but I know someone who can and they were really touched by it! that was a really good poem!

ashley

I liked this poem so much because my best friend is a guy, and its the way i feel about him.

lori

i really enjoyed this poem. it says everything how i feel at this point in my life. i needed something like this to make me feel better about myself and to move forward. this poem is so true! thanx.

Cecilia

Very good!

Rebecca

I recently sent this to my ex-bf. It speaks the truth. Although he took it as ME apologizing to HIM, I received the message loud and clear!

Derek

This poem hit home on every aspect of the relationship that I am currently fighting for to keep alive. Every line is true and as much as I hate what my girlfriend is putting me through, I know that in the end forgivness is the answer.

ashley

that is a very lovely poem that is so very true.. we all want some one we cant have and sometimes i think thats unfair but i suppose its for the best cuz we all have our special some one out there.. but once again that is a very outstanding poem i really like it. so i give it a 10

Tim

AWSOME!

Felicia

This poem is so on the money when itcomes to those one sided romances.

Denise

I just loved this poem.Never thought that someone else could be feeling the same as I do right now.I talked to him on the phone this morning, and eventough he was really,really nice to me, things between us, can never be the way they were.... I love him, but he just 'likes' me.... Just thank you for writing this poem.... It makes me feel a little better!!

donna

Di,thought this was fantastic and borrowed it to make a point to a friend (did not claim it as my own though)except to say i wish i had written it.Great stuff

Christian

WOW! Thats the first word that comes to mind when describing this poem! I absolutely loved it, I don't ever vote for poems I just read them but this one really started me thinking. Bravo Di you wrote an excellent poem!

jannyly

Hello Di, Very good poems, thanks for telling my feeling.

Mikkel

very beautiful

Tom

Knock out!

Amit

Excellent poem! This is exactly how I feel at this very moment. I have been searching for a poem that expresses how I feel, and I found the perfect one.

Mart

Sad but True !!!

Saf

It's a really good poem. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend in a way. Anyways, good job! Tops! It really did somthing to me.

shannon

this is a great poem

MysticColors

omg....perfect........good going...nice job........so very true.......thanks for writing it....

carrol

After reading this poem my first thought was to send it to every man that has ever broken my heart.

kristy

great poem

Milissa

I love this poem! This poem puts my relationship with jason into words that i could never explain to him but now I can thanks!

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Let's Make A Deal

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