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I can't say enough about the pain of deceit. It renders the soul and rips through ones heart
Broken And Shattered Promises |
| by Pauline Hamblin |
| You told me that you loved me It seemed easy for you to say But you failed to prove it The first time temptation Came your way You told me we would last forever And I believed your words were true But the words that you had spoken Seemed to have been forgotten by you. |
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9 Visitor Comments
tara
short poem but meaningful great job.
Vannesa
thanx 4 blessing me with your beeutiful words. in using your words, you touched my heart.
Trip
it's great. but who feels the greater pain? the speaker or the one to whom it's spoken?
sandeep
wow . simple words, yet deep. s.
Courtney
This is exactly what happened to me. the 1st temptation was all it took and the promises of us and forever became nothing near reality.
Dreamer
You realy tell it how it is, that was a realy good poem.
Sara
This is a great poem. Good job. I know the feeling.
Sarah
This half way decribes what I am feeling right now.
phil
Put my feelings into words. Great, great work.
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