About the Poem
Sometimes losing someone can bring a pain so fierce it is almost physical, and your whole world becomes that pain.
Agonistic Spirit |
| by Jayzee |
| Thinking of you- acid rain falls- or are those tears which burn fiery paths of hurt down my face and on my neck- where I can't swallow or breathe - can this choking be my end? Yes- but the pain has just begun as the heart thirsts for love but only soaks in anguish - which drains it of life - tearing a jagged scar- a raw wound open and screeching - echoing through a tortured mind - then time is the enemy - all that remains is a skeleton of agonistic spirit - singing a haunting melody - "I'll love you to the bitter end. " |
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It had just touched my core.
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