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This poem was written on Valentine's day of '99, the product of a year's worth of torment from a relationship that ended prematurely. I don't know if I'll ever be able to move on.

Falling

Still falling . . .
floating free
motionless spinning
within her gravity

My black hole heart
devours both moon and stars
I absorb her light
and am left empty

Darkness approaching
Eclipse beginning
The solstice of my sadness
Rotates on its axis
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8 Visitor Comments

Tanzi
very beautiful!
Rodelyn
i vote you, coz im yhe one falling.
nancy
this poem really touched me i loved it it discribes everything i went through i really loved it
Madie
i Love this. thats true. you riGht
channelle
love it
nida
dat poem is soooooooooo sad. i guess i can do wit dat 1 when im feelin sad.
Brian
I'm feeling the concept.
Doug
Excellent imagery from astro-physics!

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