About the Poem
This poem is about a very close friend that I fell in love with. But I never told him and he is now deeply involved with another. This was my way of finally letting my feelings go.
|I am weak now
having attempted to
cry out all feelings and
emotions for you:
In one breath you
make me smile and cry
in one phone call you
lift my spirits and
plunge me into depression
Your voice can build up
my hopes and shatter my dreams.
You leave me wondering, yet
How you do it,
I'll never know.
And that you do it,
I'll never breathe a clue.
At least not to you.
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26 Visitor Comments
Wow this poem is really pretty. When i first started reading it completely touched me. Is so beautiful!
Perfect. Exactly what I have to do, only he does have a clue. No matter what, I now know that I would never have him, although my heart wishes otherwise
I like the poem a lot because im going through dis stage at the moment although im only 13 i have loved n been loved, hated n been hated but wat always hurts is having what you love and losing it
gosh. this poem really captures my heart. i can relate myself to the author of these poem. what can i say?! two thumbs up! good job!
i so understaind how you feel when you wrote that. i hope everything worked out for the best. the person that made me feel that way is gone out of my live. it was a great poem keep writing your very talinted
this poem was great
I am really immpressed with your poem. It reminds me of the boy i like.
Strange, I didn't feel you reaching into the depths of my soul and yet here it is in writing on this very page. Awesome work!
i can really relate. i loved someone and i just found out that he's goinf out w/ someone else. i want to blame him, but he never knew.
I think thats just make me have soem life in my body thankyou very much for that sweet poem
You don't know how much i just absolutely love this poem. I'm in love with my best guy friend, but we're "just friends" and whenever he talks to me or hangs out with me he can make me so happy and depressed at the same time. i just loved this poem. its exactly how i feel.
You described it right down to a tee!. I've fallen in love with my best mate, of course he is in love with some one else. You described exactly what I feel. AWESOME WORK!
Excellent poem, I have the same problem this moment with a female friend of mine.
Great Poem!It really describes how i feel.
I love this poem. I'm in love with my best friend, and he seems to be the only one who doesn't know. I think I might give him this poem. Thanks for writing it.
I felt like that poem was written for me, it said everything I was feeling. Thanks alot, this is the best healing ever.
I like ur peom. I feel the same way about me ex boyfriend I will never let him know how bad he hurt me.
this poem express how i feel about my best frind eric who i am so in love with but shhhh dont tell.
It's funny how other people in this world all so feel the same way as i do adout someone the can have because they belong to someone else.
i couldn't have put it in any other words.
*sigh* this poem is very true i know this feeling all too well. This is a really good poem.
this is so perfect for how i feel. it is sooo true, I love it. It has all happened to me and I agree
That's the whole truth and nothing but the truth.
I thought the poem was very simple yet well thought out.Also being that I could relate to it made me enjoy it even more.Isis keep up the good work
I have a very hard time expressing my feelings. This poem is exactly how I feel about someone who loved me once but is now just a friend.
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