About the Poem
I have learned that sometimes you fall in love with people, who don't feel the same way about you. I have been in such a situation.
This poem was written for someone who I gave my trust, love and friendship to, only to have my heart broken, and my trust displaced. If you are ever in a similar situation, you know how it feels to be used.
I Was Reminded
|by Alicia S|
|As we lay there quiet
I was reminded of all the reasons why I lust you
and the way it teased at me seductively
and the way it tempted me
and the way they seem to hypnotize me
As we sat there silent
I was reminded of all the reasons why I love you
and the way it brings such life into me
and the way it makes everything okay
and the way they seem to read my thoughts
As we stand here now
I am reminded of all the reasons why I hate you
and the way it confuses me
and the way it seems to mock me
and the way they can look into mine and not feel a thing
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512 Visitor Comments
WOW! AMAZIG! AM SPEACHLESS! i truely liked it alot. i hope u can just forget all about it. 'n' move on with ur life. you're special. i can tell. keep it up ;)
All i can say is WOW. ! im speechless i kant explain how i feel about this poem. I love it. Its so true.
I LOVE THAT POEM BECAUSE I CAN RELATE TO THE THINGS THATS INSIDE THE POEM
I give this poem a 10! Great job!
i love this poem
it says so many things in such a simple way. best ive seen so far. brilliant
Wow. Amazing. It really touched me. It made me think of every friendship I've been in and lost and the way everything they do can made you feel a different way once u feel differently about them. Great Job
its just what im feeling right now. Thanks
one of the greatest and most touching poems I've ever read.
OMG, that was so good! I've been on the recieving end of that a few times!
I loved it. It reminds me of my ex- boyfriend.
very nice one. touchyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
its a great poem. Its very life like, and i reminds me of my ex.
THIS POEM IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL about my ex boyfriend angel. i loved him with all my heart and i still do but he broke mine.
I think that's a really good poem. I know exactly how it feels to be in your shoes. Well I relate to the poe anyways. Good job. I love it!
this poem is so true is doesnt just talk about the hings we are all feeling that are the good things about what we lost its the truth. how they can change and suddenly that loving laugh and smile becomes so empty. you inspired me.
This was a great poem! It not only spoke for it's self, but it also spoke for the people that have gone through the same things!I mean remembering the other persons smell, touch, when your no longer together is tough because sometimes you just don;t want to be reminded!
i love this poem! it says every thing i feel! its so sad but true.
Having your trust broken- having someone create a false friendship, only to find out the truth months later, is just plain horrible.
wow! i love it. cuz i really feel tha same way about my guy. its crazy. nice job. maybe you'll read my poems and comment me. i write alot of poems and lyrics about love and sad things. but nice job.
omg this poem is soooo good you have real talent, i just got dumped tonight lol. but yeah its really good and yeah good job keep it up =]
this poem was great. reminds me of a lot of things.
Oh My God. this is simply they best poem I hav ever read. Thank you so much for writing this. This poem reminds me of someone. It makes me just want to cry but its awsome!
This poem broke my heart all over again.
i love this poem, keep up the good work
wow! that was such a good poem!you are so talented and you are a good writer!
This poem hit me hard. it reminds me of just how intense and the finest line between love and hate love can bring. experiencing this first hand. loving someone and hating them at the same time; for being able to show no emotion in their eyes and be so cold and unkind when all you can do is sit there beg. and cry. that can bring about the most angst to someone you love there is; is for them to look at you coldly and take back all they ever said. to tell you when they loved you it was a lie. to have you believe that all they ever shared with you was a lie and false and say it all without blinking. only to have them take it all back again when the argument is over. i love him. i hate him for it.
Very touching, and oh so true.
I have to say that this poem really caught me off gaurd. It was perfect from my veiw point. Even cry somewhat. It really touched me, and I really think you have tallent.
This poem tells exactally how I felt about someone along time ago. You put it in words so much better than I could have.
i read, and loved this poem at least three years ago. i came across it again tonight. and the feeling is the same, if not more so. gave me chills. great work!
Your poem was beautiful, and it hit home so well, that i cant even describe it. I just lost what I feel is my one true love, and this poem says everything that I have been feeling for the past few days. Thank you so much for posting it.
I love it. and so very, very true. Bitter Sweet.
This poem touched me, I am going through something like this right now where I have waited for a guy for the last year and I can't wait no longer ever know he wants me to I just want to say that you have beautiful writing abilities.
I'm having the same experience right now. I feel the same as u. This poem really made me think if this guy is really worth it. Thanks a lot for this poem.
i love it. i can relate in so many ways
Reflects exactly how I'm feeling right now about some-one x
it's very sweet and i have sent it to someone i really love
WOW THAT POEM REMINDS ME OF MY X BOYFRIEND JASON I LOVE IT SUGAR
This poem is like a great love. it has a beautiful begining and and wonderful ending. you should really have sent some of those into a poem book!
This really explained the truth of being crushed. Though sad, it vas very precise. Good work!
I'm in that situation right now. Ifeel so used. 7 months together n not only last week,he actually told me that all dis while he treated me only as a sex partner. We work together under the same roof. Due to dis,I quit bcos of him. Imagine dis. He has seen almost every inch of my body. I cant go on working there. Voted this poem as i'm in the shoes now.
I loved it!
this poem has been the exact representation of what happened to me at camp. I'm only teenager, but I've felt pain much like this. Everything U've said in this poem I felt, it is a new way to demonstrate the feelings of the heart as u did. U have inspired me to let out my emotions into poetry. I thank u. and don't ever stop writing what ure heart tells u for u help many with ure poetry.
You was talking about me. After 3 yrs I realize love was never there I was blind by lust yet I though he love me the way I love him
this poem reminded me of a feelng that drifts in and out on a regular basis i believe i know exactly how you felt when this was written.
I can so relate to this one. Thats how I feel with my most recent relationship.
And to think all this time i thought that i was alone. This is the BEST poem that i have ever read. The only thing that makes me differ from the rest is that this explains my current relationship and its not just a boyfriend it's my husband. I guess anyone who has ever loved has felt this huh!Anyways i just want to say thank you!You have let me know that i'm not alone with your poem.
I think this is a great poem it descibes exactly what i feel right now.
This poem rocks it just gave me strength to keep moving forward when I was thinking of going back to my sorry ex
. this was a nice poem. thx alot. it realy touched me as plp say. it was wow. : )
This poem was brilliant i loved it. its the best poem i have read yet! Jox
Your poems touched the spot on how I feel about my ex. Nice job.
This poem was very very good! I lost my only love three months ago. He stood in front of me with empty eyes as we said goodbye.
s0 t0uching! it leads me t0 cry. i really L0ve it sweetie. keep it up!
I just wanted to say that your poem describes a circumstance that I am going through right now and I think it's great that because I couldn't find the right words and you could, makes a difference.
WELL I HAVE NoTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS POEM EXCEPT it was great! im lookin forward to seeing more poetry written by you! !well done!
I can relate so very well with this. well done
I think this poem was so touching. It ended so perfectly. The way you ease through the poem and watch feelings and everything unfold. I will definately learn from it
it reminds my of the fight of our hearts, and a simillair situation. we all must falter when finding true love that doesn't reflect back again.
THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN IN A WAY THAT TOUCHED MY HEART. THIS POEM RELATES TO ME IN SUCH A WAY TEARS WANT TO COME OUT. WHEN I FINISHED READING THIS POEM I WAS REMINDED OF MY PAST THAT I TRIED TO FORGET AND I THANK THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM FOR LETTING ME ABLE TO REMEMBER THE PAST THAT ITRIED SO HARD TO FORGET. REMEMBERING THE PAST MADE ME REALIZE THAT MY LOVE FOR THAT ONE SPECIAL PERSON HAS NOT FADED, BUT HAS GROWN. THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME REALIZE THAT.
your poem really touched me and reminds me of how sometimes i feel about my boifwen.
This is by far one of the best poems i've read in a long time, i've been the exact situation and know just how she feels. 10/10 for this one!
I broke off with my boyfriend of 4 yrs, he had 2 children from a previous marriage and so did I. He wasnt supposed to have anymore children, however, I got pregnant 2 yrs into out relationship and that changed everything. I totally feel your pain and have been apart from him for 2 months now. still I wonder if he ever really loved us or me for that matter, for I too look into his eyes and see and feel nothing.
I really like the peom, I can relate to it and can totally understand that burden of not knowing whats really going on and feeling like a fool, it is a great piece.
This poem really made sense of what love is really like, In the beginning there was passion, truth, and love, but something triggers our mind, and we get a dose of reality.
love and hate hard to believe you can feel both for a person. liked the poem . felt the loss.
i cried when i read dis man holy
I COULDNT HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF. ABSOLUTELY PHENOMINAL
I picked this poem out if spite but i really thought it was great so dont give up, dont loose faith give that poem to someone who will not regrate. but it was good so talk to you later ok even though i dont know who you are so anyways bye.
Excellent! Very well done.
excellent. it is unfair that we ever feel this way but perhaps it is the lesson we all must eventually learn. i hope true love finds you :)
this poem touched me because i have been in this kind of situation one too many times. Its not hard to be deceived when it comes to matters of the heart.
You took the thoughts right out of my heart.
Thanks for the poem, it really moved me.
this poem is so good i know how you feel cause im going through the same thing right now GOOD JOB its real good
I enjoyed every word. When you read a poem and/or a story you are to feel the emotion the character feels, and I must say I felt every word!
This was amazing.
BURN! its sooo true. u think ur in love with someone. but, then they change and show their true self
You Nailed It! That was me staring into those eyes! Great Job!
Wow what a great poem,I have been married 8 years and done nothing but be faithful and loving to my wife,She has now turned round and said she no longer knows if she wants me,But she dont know why,I would love to show her this poem but dare not,I hurt horribly,Nothing I say or do changes anything.
this poem touch me, cause it remind me of someone i have a crush on. Well, every tuesday and thursday between 8am to 9:15am i would usually see. Because we have a class together. i got a love at first sight feeling when i see him. And he would usaually stare at me like he likes me or something. Also in class, he would turn to look at me and smile or something. But i'm too shy to smile back and kind of give him a evil look or a confuess look. now i know that i like,although i'm not sure if he likes me too. cause i would usually hang out and go places with a guy friend of mine all the time. He happen to be in that class to, so when he's late. i would call his cell and ask where he is. probably that make the guy that i like think my guy friend we are something or whatever. but now, i don't have any class with my crush and realize i really like him,though our nationality are different.
this poem cut right to the bone. Im going through the same motion myself,,,,aint it funny how sweet love can turn so sour so quick,,,,you really must have been hurt and I feel for you from my heart,,,and hope life will give you true love and well deserved love again. hang in there
poem makes sense! love it!
i love this poem i have been used before and it makes you feel like crap and it makes you feel so un wanted i rate it 10
This really was a beautiful poem. I really relate to it, actually, more than I thought I should. It's uncanny when you read something that so describes you. your thoughts and feelings really brough to life by another's beautiful words. Thank you for writing this lovely piece. I'm really grateful.
i loved this poem, it reminds me of the way i feel right now.
Great poem it was exactly how i felt when i saw my ex after a long while. He hurt me so very deeply & when i was standing with him it reminded me of how i really meant nothing to him.
this poem is so wonderful! i love it! it summed up every feeling that i have for an ex-love whom i still love so deeply!
this made me think about the boy i had onced love. and all the things that reminded me of why i loved such a person. a person that didn't give a damn about me. or least until he got what he wanted and ran.
I love the poem it was so great and very true becuase as i was reading it I was thinking of this guy i use to be with and your poem sounded just like him keep doing your thang.
i loved your poem. i can really relate to it. it reminds me of one of my ex boyfrends. this poem is great its as i ur saying u ove this person yet you wonder y.
this poem is absolutely amazing, the way the poet has used the words very appropriately. it's beautiful!
to the author, i am hoping right at this moment that you moved on from the horrible experienced you had. i mean real moved on. I am really glad to have read your poem because i was reminded too about what happened to me years ago. anyway, the poem expressed what the poets feelings and what happened to them. It was really sad to be on that kind of situation. i hope i could write my poems here. take care .
i loved this poem i thought that it was great and i hope that you keep writing good poems ttyl! peace out!
ahh i love your poem. it just reminds me of what i ahve to got hrough everyday. i love this guy who loks at me and sees nothing more then a friend. sometimes not even that. im lucky on days when he say s hi or hey . before when we attended a smaller school me and him were together eall the time. now he has a girl friend and me . im lonely adn ahh he just tempts me soo muuchhh with his personality and his eyes ,lwugh . smile his everything.
This poem brought me to tears because that exactly what im thinkin when im with "him"
yes yes yes yes yes
That is a beautiful poem. it descibes exactly how I feel. Well done.
Very wonderfull it reminds me of my tricky girlfriend i was touched
That is so very true. I have just experienced these exact emotions and thought over the past two weeks and I wish I could have been so eloquent when I wrote about it. Bravo!
my sentiments exactly. better words have not be spoken
i think this a really good poem specially since i just had the same feelings about what i'm going through. you know how to put it better in words then i do. i love the poem good job!
That poem is so good it make me open up to see how ever thing is that poem is 1,000,000 percent good. Good Job
This poem reminds me of the way i am w guyz sometimes. i give it a 10 !
Nay Nay Heart
I love it sooo mucho. i can totally relate. keep writting so maybe u can publish a book one day.
This poem tought me because it reminded me when i was going out with a guy. i always thought he loved me but i guess i was the one that loved him. Dont you gils wish when would real love come to us or if the guy we're going out really likes us i Bet You Do.
All i have to say is, Thank You. This poem relly touched me. Thank You.
omg i really love dis poem it is exactly wut im goin through right now wit my ex whom i am still in love with
This poem is so full of truth! This happened to me before but that only made me stronger, and realize he was nothing. I love your poem. Priscilla A.
I love this poem because it expresses how one characteristic of someone can bring so many different feelings along with it.
This poem truly reminds me of a relationship I was in. It's very touching to me.
this really touched me i dont really know what but i think that it is really good. as a poet myself i understand what your sayin. newyas im outt now . peace
This poem reminded me a lot of my own life. It is very well written and I would like to tell the author thank you for writing my feelings with your words.
beautiful. I love the ending. It's so true. It made me cry.
This was amazing! I felt like I knew EXACTLY what she was talking about! A true masterpiece! :) I loved it!
Wow, and just like that someone else found the words when I couldn't and I am in absolute complete awe
Man this peom is awsome I loved it it really touched me i know exactly what it was saying. I see my ex everyday and it kills me.
keep continuing to write poems. word!(nice)
This was one of the best poems I have read, and it really explains my ended relationship with my ex. Who I thought loved me as I loved him but does not feel anything for me now, and wont even be much of a fried to me because he can't even be around me. So this poem really touched me and really explains how I feel. So I am glad that I have stumbled upon it. It is a really good poem!
Wow! Thats deep. I wasn't even going to vote for any poems I was just browsing through, but when I read that poem I had to vote for this one. I'm going through the same thing right now. My boyfriend is smiling all of the time and he doest consider how I feel, but every time I see him smile I feel as if everything will be o. k. In all actuality he disguising the problems through his smile. Trying to make me think everything is o. k. This poem is wonderful.
This poem excactly reminded of my ex boyfriend and how I truely feel abut him. This poem explained it prefectly.
Your poem really explain how I truely feel about my ex boyfriend
Awesome, this definitely is heart felt!
hey i love this poem i mean it touched me i am young but i once had a relation ship with a boy who i dislike now but he is moving on and so am i!. meg write me back if ya can. i write poems too
this is so beautiful i know just how u feel im 15 & im in love w/ this boy i went out w/ in the 6th gade & we broke up & ever since then i cant forget about him it is so hard so i love this poem cuz it reminds me of him even tou ill never get him bak cu he has a nother girlfreind & he loves her =( infact 2 day is his birthday & he is now offically 16 i miss him so but yea keep on writing this is amasing
this poem is so true. u think u know someone so well yet they can be a total stranger?? and when you are with them, it means everything to you yet nothing to them , fantastic poem. well done!
Awesome! Very well written! I have been there before!
I really liked this poem it reminded me of my ex.
this poem touched me! its excactly how i feel about my relationship!
He's always asking me why him and why I love him, But im know the reasons why I hate him
This poem is very moving and so very true. I'm going through this type of thing right now. It helps a lot.
I have read a few poems on here, but yours is the first one that really touched me. Everything you said rang true to my heart. Thank you for posting this wonderful poem.
when people poems about what god has done,they really inspire me. your poem is amazing. verona
This poem makes me want to cry it reminds me of the way i felt after this dirtbag lefted me. You are awesome!
It reminds me of a relationship i was once in.
Very Good Poem!
WOW THAT WAS JUST GREAT WELL MORE THEN GREAT.
All i can say is WOW, its great it really got into how i feel thanks for writing this great poem!
this is great. guys tend to do that
Soooooooo true. Felt like my feeling was talking.
I really felt the poem was great cuz it was right on target of what I was feeling at the moment. I loved the poem because it was straight foward no fansy dansy words to express how u felt
it was really good. i loved it. )
Dear Alicia Hi :) Thanks for keeping it real. Keep your head up!
this poems is my favorite poem ever i can relate to it like no other--your an awesome write-Carrie
I was looking for a poem that suited me with everything thats going on in my life. The tears rolled down my eyes as I read line after line. Its amazing how a poem can touch me like that. The truth is in that poem; guess my emotions are real.
i like her poem coz it touches my heart the way she express although not deeply but it does touches the readers heart and makes us feel the same she has feeled
this poem is really nice, this is what i've notice from my ex, who i still cant give up on.
I am so sorry who ever hurt you! But the poem is life. You love get hurt and move on but don't lay it. Nicely done, write some more. BYE
i really related to it! i think so many people feel that way! short but strong!
Your poem really touched me. My boyfriend of a year and a half is out with one of my friends right now thinking that I dont know about it. so I guess your poem is now my reality. Thanks for helping me move on!
It explains it all. I relate to every single word this poem consists of. The pain is slightly eased knowing there is someone out there who understands the feelings taking over my life. After months of trying, the feelings i feel have been put into words, thank u
This! is so completely how I feel. A 22 year old little boy, I have never loved someone the way I love him. But I have never hated someone the way I hate him. Because so many promises were broken and how he cant make me fall so deeply in love with him, and just lead me on. He told me he loved me. he said I would never again be alone. He lied. When he looks in my eyes I don't see the same thing he see's in mine. He see's love and devotion. I see lies.
oh my. what a turn. what a relationship. and what really happens and such. tis lovely
Beautiful progression, very well crafted. Meaningful choice of words. Feels very "real"
lovely poem! it describes exactly how i felt about my ex boyfriend
Ma, that poem was tight to dealth; I almost wish I was that dude you was talking about
couldn't explain it any better myself this poems really the thing.
Alicia, Bravo. your poem too Reminded me of all those things I love/hate. life is a strange, yet wonderful thing. full of this love/hate; pain/pleasure; different? I think not, it's much the same. Bravo to you for recognizing it for the rest of us! Thank you
i love this poem because it is something that most people can relate too, and i definently did. the way that you described how you can fall in love with certain qualities of a person, but in the end find that those are also the things you hate about them was absolutely beautiful and one the most honest things i have ever heard.
wow,, many girls have been through that one before,, very well put.
WOW that was excellent i like how it starts all like heres what i felt for you and then it goes into heres how i NOW feel for you! that was really good!
I absolutley love this poem, I read it over and over. I have felt this way for so long and you put very real feelings into words so well.
beautifully written, excellent
I totally felt this one in my soul, this poetress has captured what most women have felt at some point in a past or present relationship. Thank you Alicia!
Oh my GOD, This poem hit home for me. It seemed to say exactly what I have felt a time or two in my life. Great Job Alicia!
I loved your poem it was so touching and true becuase my boyfriend has a way with words he could be lieing but i'd never know because the way he looks at me and smiles and tells me everyhting will be fine when i even know it wont.
I love it! I can relate to everything that the poet had to say in the poem. Keep up the good work
My 6 year relationship has just ended and this poem says everything about what i was feeling.
Clever Poem, Very good. This poem matched words to my feelings.
This poem is a true ispiration. I recently was hurt profoundly by the love of my life. Your poem really touched my heart!Thank you!
all i can say is it hit home. loved it
i feel this way towards meleah, a dear friend. this poem really spoke to me, only if our love could be true, if only she could love me too
Your poem was VERY VERY good!
I loved this poem. I felt it deeply, and I feel like it's all the things I would like to say, it was great. keep it up
I love this poem because I could totally relate to it. I was hurt recently because I fell in love with my best friend, and it turns out that he doesnt want to be with me, well he can't be with me, so it understands exactly how I feel!
I like this poem because it touches me the way its telling you why and why not it or whoever likes you.
I loved it. It's funny how a simple poem can really explain the pain.
I just got out of a relationship. I thought I knew him and us so well. When I look back I now see how our relationship progressed much as the one in this poem did.
oh my gosh. that was the most touched that i have ever been from a poem! those were the feelings that i am experiencing put perfectly into words! it is so hard to look at someone and kno that ur n love with them & u can't b with them 4 other reasons. keep up the great work. thanx 4 the inspiration. write on
Alicia you are a talented writter. I write too,and was moved by your poem. I recentley had the exact same experience. we must remember though it is thier loss of a great person,and it wasnt meant to be. Our prince is still out there.
I take that every word in this poem was meannt to represent the way I feel about someone! Its rather consoling to know that there were others in the same boat as I am now! Phew! it also gave me a relief to send the poem to that person concerned!
this poem is amazing. i can totally relate. thats like everything i ever felt about that situation, and your the one to have put it into words. its beautiful.
Simple and powerful. Well said.
Girl ya poem is so real and everything u said really touched me!
This poem touched me and is exatly how i feel right now, over a boy i thought i loved.
I feel in love with your poem and it was just what I feel like it made me just click in too in it.
I loved this poem. ! It is amazing and very true. It reminds me of myself right now as that is the way i feel about this guy. I am soo glad i found your poem b/c it will help me with a very big decision i have to make. You are very talented!
this was a really good poem, i loved it, even if it doesnt love back
i really relate to this poem- at least im not the only person feeling this way! why is it that we can feel so much for one person, but they dnt even feel a tiny bit of it back?
that is so true i know how u feel. that is my ex boyfriend exactly.
this poems reminds me of my xboyfriend all the felings i had for him until i found out he cheated on me i could see it in hie eyes .
this poem fights my life right now. it really makes u relize that ur not the one with the problem.
i loved this poem it reminded me of my first puppy love.
hey. that was a sweet poem. it happened to me a few months ago , and im still not even close to getting over it , i really love him so much. and it sucks. the pain is like never ending , and i want to die. i feel asthough no one loves me. and that i will never love anyone again
I really liked this poem because it really does happen all the time with us girls. It helps us to realize how guys can be. On a scale from 1-10 I give you 100
hello. i like your poems alot! they describe me in every way. your poems are the best! keep up the hard work!
i loved the poem it really touched me down somewhere deep i loved it
it was very gud and it reminds me of alot
I related to this poem very much. I loved the contradictions that this poem reminds us of. I especially liked the last verse.
I really loved this poem it really touched me as it reminds me of my boyfreind. Also it's beautiful in its own way!
It was just wonderful!
hit the spot, very honest and very true
Thank you for geting that throue to me guys are just users well at least 95% of them
this is the best poem i've ever read in my life. 4 REAL!
This poem has touched me. The words in the poem is how I feel about that special guy. To the auther. This is a great Poem, keep up the good work.
I was in a on again off again relationship for 4 years. I always felt that I loved him more than he loved me. It hurts when I think about him and I feel like my heart will never heal. I was memorized by all the same things that this poem describes. He too felt nothing. This poem is exactly what I needed to read.
I just loved it!
Nice, reminnds me of what I am going through right now. Nice, very nice.
wow. this touches my soul deeply. this is exactly where i am in my life. thank you for putting my feelings into words! sl
I have always loved this poem, it is so beautifully writen and wonderfully put. Brovo. ~Kate
This poem is so true THis is who I feel after my major breakup
Wow, i love your poem. That sounds like the same thing that I feel right now. and its probably the worst feeling,, loving somebody but hating them at the same time, its like those two emotions are at constant battle with each other, but. love the poem
best poem ever
Wow, as I read this poem I felt like I relieved my past. My heart skipped a couple beats, and I found myself remebering what I once felt and still feel for a guy that hurt me.
This poem explained perfectly how I feel about someone I care alot about, and it brought back so many memories of a relationship I used to be in. Without too much explanation it explained alot.
I really like your poem because thats the way i feel about my ex-boyfriend, and its cool that someone can fit some many feelings in to such a little poem!
Wonderful poem I can feel the emotion behind it I loved it
i really loved this poem, it reminded me very much of me and my old boyfriend. it made me cry
i love your poem so much! i can really relate to it. it brought tears to my eyes. i felt as if you knew what i had felt and put it into words for me.
i think your poem was very well written, i just went through those feelings but only wish i had the gut to tell her to her face
man girl u snapped on this poem i can RELATE so much wit this poem i just started breakin down when i read this poem and the same time it made me kinda forget about the guy that is hurting me well just know that u did a great job and damn thanx for makin me fell better
god how true is this poem for me at the moment x
I think this was perfectly said, and in most instances that is how we really feel!
i enjoyed this poem very much it related to they way i feel about a relationship that i once had. i hope you continue to write your wonderful poetry.
this is a really good poem. i really like it because i can relate to it because the same thing happen to me.
. couldn't have said it better myself. Beautiful poem.
I have never, ever, ever been able to voice how i feel about Louis, the (unrequited) love of my life. Finally someone has put emotions into words. Beautiful. thank-you.
You put a lot of thought into it and it has so much meaning and it defintley touched me~Great work~
i like everything u wrote in your poem. i just broke up with my boyfriend. and it's so hard to forget him,,,i keep thinking about the cute things he use to do. the way he use to look at me. and say he loves me in my ears. the way he use to touch me and tease me. i hate him so bad at times. coz he looked me in the eyes and told me he does not love me anymore. how could that be possible. how could he's love fade away. i bet he does not even remember me . ur poem is one good stuff
Wow. this poem was awesome. It put a huge lump in my throat. I've been here before too, sadly. I still am. But anyways, keep writing. it will for sure take you far! peace~
this is a wonderful poem. make more, they're great.
I thought this poem was wonderful! Reading this poem brought back memories of my ex boyfriend of seven years and how simple things such as his smile, laugh, and eyes changed over time. You truly captured the love and hurt you feel in a relationship. You are very talented. I just wanted you to know that.
omg! it made me cry. this is exactly what i feel about this girl i want to be with and she kinda doesnt even notice me being here. i dont know what to say im speechless right now. ill right back later wif some thing that makes more sence (u)
girl! i just love your poem. its exactly what i am feeling right now about a friend that i love, and he doesnt know about it.
This poem is beyond words. It really hit my heart as well as the thoughts that runs through my mind. Its a great poem.
very good poem! It really did touched me soo much! you are a great writer!
U READ MY MIND
I loved it because it reminds me of me and my ex-boyfriend
I really enjoyed readin this poem. I love reading poems about emotion and this one had something about it that made me love it right away. It's so great to be able to vote these poems that have great understandings and to compliment on the poets talent
This poem hit home for me. How quickly all those wonderful things about a person can become what you hate most.
I was so extremly touched by this. I have felt this way for 3 years. I loved a boy and he loved me back for a little while. This peom explains our relationship so well. I love this peom. Amazing.
Thats real. After a breakup it does seem like the once magnetic charm that drew you to someone, it seems like those features are the things that pain you the most.
This was a GREAT poem and I love the way that you wrote it because I feel the same way right now, just can't seem to find a way to explain it. Now I know that if I am thinking about my boyfriend and how frustrating things can be sometimes, I can just read your poem. Thanks for sharing your feelings because when you do you find that you touch people, like me! Keep writing!
i loved this poem! It is one of my favorite ones. i could really make a connection 2 this poem a lot. i even printed it out b/c 2 me, it's true, all the reasons why i started 2 like a guy, i ended up hateing him 4 some of those same reasons 2. well, i loved u're poem, i like poems that i can make connections 2 and i made a connection 2 this one.
i really like your pome and i thoght you should know. it really made sense and i understood wher you were coming from "bye"
it's really touch my heart!
it just touching
it was good cuz i als write poems and this to me was my syle.
All I can say is WOW! I am sitting here in tears and it's because I am going through this thing right now. Thank You for blessing me with your presence and the presence of this poem. It's what I needed to hear. THANK YOU AND GOOD LUCK IN THE FUTURE! Kesha-Louisville Ky.
I fell in love with a guy i was with for almost a year. And all of a sudden he changed and we broke up for good. Now he doesnt talk to me-even though he was my first everything. I really like your poem i can relate to it a lot. im sorry u had to go thru the hurt. i kno how it feels but it doesnt last forever
I totally know the feeling, me and my boyfriend, of 10 months, just broke-up (we're still young, high school) but I had loved him and it does help to know that other people are feeling the same things you are.
This poem is so touching i mean i really felt what you were trying to say in this poem. i can relate to it all. hope to read more of your poems goodluck in the future
GREAT POEM! Every time I feel sad it seems like poems make me feel better and make me realize that I am not the only one in a situation like that. Lissy
this is a really great poem. it sort of hit the nail on the head about my feeling towards someone
i heard this peom before and everytime i hear it, it always sounds beautiful to me. i can really relate to it. so uh. yeah bye
very good work. Continue to write you have great tallent
I CAN TOTALY SEE WERE UR COMING FROM CUZ I O WAT IT FEELS LIKE BUT I HOPE U GET OVER IT LIKE I DID EVENTUALY!BEST OF LUCK!
These words expressed EXACTLY what I'm feeling for my "special someone". I couldn't have written it better myself! Great poem!
Wow!That was an excellent poem!
I thought this poem states the way a lot of teenagers feel about their first love, i know it seems to capture my feelings for a certian someone, you're a really good poet!
there is such a subtle difference between love, lust, and hate, and that subtlety will often blind us to the true nature of a relationship. those that are doomed from the start. i enjoyed the way you touch on each emotion, all triggered be the same aspects of the other in the relationship, all creating different responses depending on the place the couple has grown to. relationships grow and die. you captured this well.
This was a very touching poem. It reminds me of my current relationship. You almost took my thoughts straight from my head and put them on paper. Only I couldnt have made it sound so good. You have talent, keep writing
Hey i love this poem my bf and i broke up 4 months ago and this fits perfect
this was a very touching poem. I LOVED IT. you are a very good poet!
Hey Alicia your poem was awsome I remembered my first love and when we broke up I thought I would miss him but when he came back I looked into his eyes and didnt feel a thing
This Poem is awesome. really touched me and made me realize. thanks
I really liked this poem, and i can really relate to it.
This is a great poem and it realy hits home.
This poem really touches me and the way that i felt about another inparticular person at one point in my life.
this was GREAT i abosolutly LOVED it i really feel that way that for writing a poem that relates to me
real good poem, really true aswell!
****sigh**** Thats exactly how I feel about my recent ex. This poem really touch me deep.
i like the twist from love to hate the way you could love someone and then hate them. very nice thank for sharing it
This poem touched me in so many ways. It remined me when I lost my first love and the reason we broke up. The hatered and love I felt for him in the end. So thank you for this poem, you put in to words what I have been wanting to say for 5 years now to him.
I LOVED IT!
It's a great poem! I can relate to every single word in it. Thanks.
This poem is beautiful! You have so much talent, dont ever stop writing. Your words have so much power behind them especially the way you put them together!
Hi alicia! i think it is a wonderful effort. my boyfriend broke up with me after one and a half year of relationship. he used me,insulted me and hurt me so much that your poem really helped me to move on. thanku
This is a great poem. It made me feel like I wasn't the only person who has been in that sort of situation.
Somehow it explains it all.
dang this poet gave me goosebumps! its totally true! and you put out your feelings perfectly.
i really love your poem. i know how you feel, i went through something similiar. but i cant express myself so beautifully
This is exactly hoe i feel about my boyfriend. thank you for saying it for me
I LOVED IT. it related to me in every single way. i guess the worst way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside them knowing you cant have them(but you have to deal with it one way or another, right?)
MAN THIS WAS ASOME IT IS SO TRUE THE WAY U SAID EVERYTHING IS JUST THE WAY IT IS. WHEN U DO ANOTHER ONE LIKE THIS OEN PLEASE SEND ME A COPY. CONGRATULATIONS!
Yes, this says it so perfectly. I feel where you are coming from, I have been there too. Thanks for sharing this.
i really like this poem because it me reminds me of me and my boyfriend and how in love i'am with him and he make me feel the same way because i love him so much it confuses me at times to.
My girl said she cared for me and loved me. We were togther for about 6 months. She had sex with my best friend(supose to be best friend). It crushed me, this poem tells exactly how i feel. THANK YOU
hey gurl, i really like your poem, and i know how you feel because the exact same thing happend to me, just wanted to tell you how of a good job u did.
this poem was very good,i liked it alot it brings alot of emotions back from when i was reminded. just writing to tell u how great the poem was to read.
I love this poem, it fits alot of what I'm going through right now. I hope things are better for you now
ME AND MY FIRST LOVE CHRIS BROKE UP IN MAY AND THIS POEM DESCRIBES EVERY ASPECT OF MINE AND HIS RELATIONSHIP. ITS A GREAT POEM. I LOVE IT!
A beautiful poem by someone who truly knows when a heart has been abused and shattered by a lover.
This poem was amazing. I felt every part of it. It really hit home for me.
wow I've been looking for a poem to express how i feel you hit the spot.
It was very special & simple, the way she worded it is exactly how we can think & feel all those contradicting emotions at the same time yet still know you love that person for all those reasons. So much said between the lines, I like that! Very nice poem, I loved it!
That poem was very nice, and I liked how you made it flow like that. I'm sure everyone knows how you felt in that situation. Keep up the good work and keep writing poetry like that.
this is good
Oh! My! Gosh! I read this and was like "this is about my friend Joey!" I had a HUGE crush on him when I was younger and I was only his best friend and it hurt me SO much! Everything you said in that poem is true. Thank you so much for that awesome poem!
Fantastic! It said it all!
I like this poem a lot. I GIVE THIS POEM 2 THUMBS UP!I was dating this guy for about 3 years and it cescribes perfectly the way I feel about him now. Thanks!
Good. it really represented the fine line between love and hate. I liked.
WOW thats all i can say. you readm my mind and put in into words.
BEST EVER! Going through the hardest split up after 9 months and that meant heaps thanxs
I think that this poem is really stunning! I hit me so hard, and I realized that maybe, I once did that to some one who i love. Who I really love, your poem has touched me so deeply, thank you for making me so aware of others and their feelings. I will be gratefull for the rest of for-ever
Such an awesome poem! It was so great i wrote it in my journal to read over and over!
wow. that was amazin! it reminds me f my ex. we broke up recently but i stil luv him but his always around wit oder gals playin up. it upsets me but ders nuthing i can do. i jus av 2 cover my feelins wit a smile.
oh my God! This is great!
*crys* oh girl, i know what the feeling is, i had it past weekend, i was in love with a boy, he seems to be in love to, but i was whrong :( your poem is realy nice!
That is such a great poem. its so real. thats exactly how i feel when i think of my ex. she messed me up so bad, and that poem is the best ive ever read
OMG I LOVE YOUR POEM! AS SOON AS I READ IT I FELL IN LOVE ITS SUCH A GOOD POEM!
When I read the poem, I was thinking to myself, does this person know what I went through? The poem made me feel like I'm not alone. Good job!
KEEP WRITING. YOUR BEAUTIFUL.
Thank you SO MUCH for for putting my feelings in such a beautiful poem. I am going thru a break-up from my boyfriend who lied to me and used me. This helps ease the pain.
i dont know what to say. i'm sure once i stop crying i'll think of something.
Gurl that poem was so good and its true too. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. you have a talent thats good!
I Like this poem because of the fact it reminds me of someone who I have loved for a year and a half but he has said some things lately and i hate him so much but good job on the poem.
VERY GOOD POEM. I have never read another poem that so clearly and exactly relates to what I feel in my own heart. I had to read it over and over again. Thank you for writing it.
I read your poem and that last part really struck me. The only thing that came out of my mouth was "darn". Very good ! very. good.
i love this poem it really connects to the way i feel about aguy that has just recently broken up with me
Your poem brought me to tears. I related to every word you wrote.
wow! ur poem is so true and i can completely relate. ur sucha great writer. keep writing about the same topics. i feel the same exact way as u, so ur not the only one
I can relate to every single word on your poem. It is soooo true for me. I love it. You're so good. Keep it up.
awsome poem. i can relate to this poem very well. wow i just can't get over this poem
I love this poem. I have been in the same situation. actually I still am in this situation. This poem made me cry the first time i read it.
This is a poem that doesn't just relate to teens but almost everyone. I enjoyed reading it and I think you are a good poet so I hope to have the chance to read more of your poems
when I read this, I was reminded. how silly I am to still love him, but how confusing it is. why do people who write so beautifully have to be so sad?
this poem was very good I really liked it a lot. It was nice how they put the same words in and then put different feeling for it and still make sence. I give this poem a 100000000 points is the best one i've read so far
I seem to be findin it very very hard to get over the boy i love and ur poem jst describes exactly wht he does to me cept he uses words too which hurts even more, i wonder sometimes frm wht he says to me if he cud still love me but maybe that is just false hope. o well its all i have left. Thanks for the poem, it was beautiful!
Alicia i really loved your poem, i really can relate to it, i was just in a relationship for 3yrs and it all ended and the past 5 months that we havent been together everything in your poem relates to how i felt towards him, it really brought me to tears cause i was looking for a way to let him know how i feel towards him and now that i have found this poem i can! thanks.
This poem touched me in so many ways. I know how it feels, i was there once. Keep on writing!
I thought this was a very good poem. It had alot of meaning to it.
You have been blessed with the gift of poetry. I can say this because only REAL poetry moves this hard heart to tears and yours expelled a select few that had been perpetually entrapped. Do not ever give this gift up that you have been honored with. you will touch many souls.
wow that poem hit close to my heart. i know what you went through and how it feels. this poem is excellent
well, what can i say? your poem about sums it all up doesnt it? u must have felt the same sadness i have felt.
Wow. This is one of the most "Truth Filled" poems I have read yet! ~~Bravo, Bravo~~ Thanks for sharing it!
This poem seriously brought tears to my eyes. I can relate to it SOOO much. Thanks and keep up the good work!
this poem was great
This is how I felt about my ex. He read this and now he knows. So thanks for saying what I couldn't. It means a lot! Great Job!
oh my gosh! I accidently got on this site. well b4 i was always looking for a poem that reminded me of this guy i use to be with. i read your poem and it hit me this is it! thanks so much!
It touches my heart!bse it relates exectly to my siutation. thanks 4 writing this poem
i love ur poam it is so what i feel inside and did not know how 2 say
that was an awesome poem. every little detail i have felt before and i am in the exact same boat as you. kudos to your skills! keep writing!
Wow alicia that was really beautiful It brought be back to past relationships in life and i completely related to it . It was short and followed step by step of a love unwanted by another . It was great
simple but sharp. i like it
Dang girl that was tight! thats all that needs to be said bit i will say more. everything that u have expressed in this poem, i have felt. the way u could love one thing about a person and then turn to despise that very same thing. i loved this poem girl. do ya thing!
Alicia, Your poem truly touched me as I have just gone through something similar. Thank you for your poem as it has made me realize that we must go through this in order to know "real" love when it arrives. Thank you!
This poem was really good. I have been through this drama myself. I can relate to the way the author felt at the moment they wrote this poem.
I love your poem. It says things I wish I could have thought to say to someone who needs to hear them!
that poem was so beautiful,and yet so true! i can truly relate to everything in that poem. keep writing!
wow! Ur poem blew my mind, I always try and find poems that relate to my life and urs hit it right on. I love how you worded it and everything. I'm just getting over a guy like that. Thanks for writing that poem!
Its so trie for so many people. Great poem that touches many hearts.
This poem was so great. It reminded me of how I felt in my last relationship exactly. Thank you for sharing this.
What a lovely, heartfelt poem. You have put my agony into words. I too, lost my heart to a man I had trusted & admired for many, many years. One day he just decided he was done with me, it was over without a gentle word spoken. Sent a brief note by e-mail,will not speak to me on the phone, nothing, as if we never exisited. Our paths will continue to cross, he is my daughter's uncle, who is more like a father to her. I have never felt such betrayal, I am sending your poem to him.
Amazing Poem! It perfectly fit my situation and made a real connection with how I was feeling!
This poem speaks directly to what I am going through with my now forever ex. It makes me feel good that I am not alone out there in my pain and confusion.
Uwwww! This is goooood!
Alicia, your poem moved me so much. I wish that I could have wrote something like that. When I read your poem, I could feel the words. I mean I could really feel them. The exact same thing is happening. And I can't seem to get over it. I understand exactly what you mean, you love someone. yet you hate them so much. So confused. Love sucks, but this poem rocks. Keep up the good work :)
Your poem expresses exactly what went between this guy and me. To make a long story short, he waited for me, he promised he would wait as long as it would take 4 me to break up with my boi, well, i did, but in the end i decided to work it out with him, i told the guy just to stop waiting for now and, so after that he just got mad how he wasted his summer waiting and that it's goodbye. well just wanted to say great poem. keep writing
alicia, I loved your poem. Right to the point and honest.
your poem was from the heart, it moved me and brought me to such emotion that i can't explain. what a wonderful way to express how you feel. sorry things didn't work out.
great work. and I wish you the best of luck. By the way it made me cry just about hysterically because of the truth in it.
i love your poem! is it okay if i copy it? i can totally relate. i know how u feel. it sux even more if it's ur best guy friend though.
Great poem. i can relate to what you wrote, and i could never write it down in a connected way like you have, connecting the part of him in which you were initially attracted to, the part of him which you fell in love with, and the part of him which you hate. thank you for peicing it together for me !
this is one of the best i have read it speaks the truth about how we may love things about someone but we end up hateing it,this poem its great,fantastic theres no better words than that.
that poem is so true i have been in a sitution like that 2 with the same guy i thought the second time it was different and in a way it was but i was used and thats tha i have to move on hes not worth my time or effort.
I was. ReMindeD! :) THanks for creating this Poem
Girl Your poem is great I can totally relate to it but isn't funny that now that you hate him you still love him? That is the sucky part of love! They never leave your heart. later girl, honey. g
This poem was sooooo on point! I loved it. plain and simple. You said you wrote it to someone who used you. well, I can relate. It's funny how you can love someone so much and hate them so much at the same time.
it's the little things, isn't it? for me, it was his voice and his smell. the once warm voice is now ice cold. i loved the symmetry with which things were transformed.
I love this poem, me and my boyfriend of two years just recently broke up after being engaged to each other for about a year and a half he tore my heart apart but aparently it wasnt ment to be and this poem said exactly everything i felt but after all the pain and tears even though i thought i couldnt make it through this i have moved on and looking for my TRUE special someone
ohh my god. i love that poem. but then in the other hand is very sad . i know what are you feeling . and i am sorry about what happened
Ahhhhh. get out of my head! this poem is awesome and i just hope you keep writting!
When I read this poem I had tears in my eyes. The poem touches so many emotions that one goes through when dealing with a heartbreak. Thank You for your words. It lets me know that I am not alone!
This poem is so excellent. it made me cry when i read it becaue i have been in that situation. you are a very good writer
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. SHE WAS WITH ME FOR THE PAST 2 YEARS AND IN THE LAST 2 YEARS,SHE BROKE OFF WIT ME FOR FEW TIMES AND WENT WITH HER EX. BUT EVERYTIME AFTER SHE AND HER EX HAD PROBLEM SHE WILL COME BACK TO ME AND I TRUST HER THAT SHE WAS SERIOUS BUT SHE HURT ME TIME AFTER TIME.
great piece! I'm glad someone out there is suffering with me - I know that sounds terrible but it is very comforting.
Yes I was remined!
This is a great poem of feeling that erupts
I was in the very position that person is talking about , I had dated this guy since I was 16. I loved him very much and then as we got older , her would hurt me by telling me he liked other girls and he and I had a understanding that we would sleep together we never had sex till I was 20. But the terms were he told me If we did he would change. I told him no you won't you will still love me . I know he loved me he would tell me sometimes. But He moved to chicago. and now I don't talk to him any more because , He didn't deserve me and I know I was the best thing that ever happened to him. thank you
WOW! The best poem i have read yet. It said everything I've been feeling, i loved it! I would love to see more of your work.
THis is a very sad and very good i really enjoyed reading your poem
hot poem. i can relate.
Well first of all I think your poem is beutifull,it really discribes the way I fell about someone I'm not with no more.
This poem just hits the spot for me. I was looking for something to express what I feel for a confusing situation I am in with a guy at work and this is perfect. It made me realize that I am being a fool and he doesn't deserve my friendship at all. This is the best poem I've read so far.
oh my god. i can TOTALLY relate. this piece is SO moving. keep writing.
Wow! You really nailed what I was feeling with one of my ex's, and although I still love him, I also know that it never will be returned.
Hey, i feel the same way when i try to look back at an x boyfriend. its actually going on right now . ur a great writer if u can have so many ppl feel u ! keep it up
I totally agree with this poem. I have recently ended a relationship and that is exactly how I felt and feel now.
I really liked your poem. I could relate to it. It took me to alot of past relationships and wonder why men are quick to say i love u but all it is to them is a word to them because they don't show it. Keep doing what your doing because i know alot of women think they are the only ones thinking that.
When I read this poem all I could think about was wow this is exactly how I felt.
Ttruely love has the same pain for everyone in a situation such as this one sided love, I am going through it now and the girlfriend has no sympathy for my feelings at all so this proves that love does turn to hate for the poems so expressly and timely reasons. Please keep up the good work it is truely heartfelt and a great piece of art
So simple but yet so powerful
That was a great poem, I was very touched and know exactly how you feel. You should write more poems and share your thoughts with the rest of us, we really do appreciate such wonderful work!
I just got out of a bad two year relationship. I Loved her with everthing I had, and she used me for all of it, when she got tired of meshe moved on, but forgot to tell me. This is a great poem, very insightful.
i luv ur poem i have a crush on this guy n there r some things i like about him n somethings i don't.Great job :)
I loved this poem it reminded me of me and I have been through this thankyou
I know exactly how you feel and i am greatful that you wrote about something so hurtful that happens to every girl or woman that falls in love with someone who doesn't love them back.
MY GOD I LOVE YOUR POEM! IT RELATES TO SOMETHING THAT IS HAPPENING NOW IN MY LIFE AND WHEN I EAD IT I COULD HEAR THE FEELINGS AND WORDS THAT SOMEONE WOULD TELL ME.SAD BUT REAL.LOVE IT.
That was the best poem I ever read. So true..So close to home.
I love your poem,it reminded me of how I felt but the pain I went through was so hurtful your poem was really one of the greatest things I have ever read.You have a great gift from god.
This is the best poems I have read so far. It's like I am in the same situation all of the things I liked about by crush are the things I hate about him now. But mostly because he's a player. P.S KEEP WRITING, YOU ARE TALENTED!
I know how you feel and i'm dealing with it now .You are very gifted!
A passionate, loving and whirlwind love is now waning in my life. I still feel as strongly and as passionately for her as I did when I fell in love after our first kiss. But, she has turned cold and distant and very callus. I would prefer to sever all ties, in order to start to heal, but any contact brings my such joy. Im an idiot. Excellent Poem.
you go girl!
This is a vivid, and exact reminder of what happened to me. Though I am a guy, I still have a heart.
BRAVO, BRAVO! Finally some-one who has shared or experienced the same feelings I have. Well written and well organized. I definitely give it "Thumbs up".
i really liked this poem it is perfect for the situation im goin' through now.
This poem describes me in every way. I loved this guy, lost my virginity with him, and about 2 months later we drifted apart. We didn't even talk. I still love him deep down inside, but i hate him on the outside. He betrayed me and left me here alone. Keep writing these poems I think you may have something going for yourself. GOOD LUCK ALICIA S!
I can relate to this. I like the last part.
What can I say? I read it, and all I could say was "God. wow." I don't know how you did it but you did it; you nailed the feeling. The scenarios, the tones, god, everything. Fabulous.
Although they're pretty much said it all, I can't express how much it saddens me to see all these lonely and desperate words. I only wish I could help them all despite the unability to help myself. Your poem is beautiful and so are you.
I really liked the poem you wrote. It's sad but it comes from the heart. keep up the good work!
HI ALICIA, THIS IS ALISHA, WOW GURL, I'M SPEECHLESS, WE HAVE THE SAME NAMES, AND I GUESS WE SHARE THE SAME PAIN,
My wife and I have been married for 9 yrs and together for over 15 she decided to leave without getting a divorce to get some space because she didn't feel she was in love with me anymore she was gone for 2 months and has found someone else. he is married with two kids also. they spent one day with each other and supposingly fell deeply in love so this poem really hit home hard. i feel exactly the same way!
i dont know what to say this puts my emotions into words i can not bring my self to write or say i love u for doing that for me..
This is an awesome poem! It reminds me a lot of the last relationship that I was in!
I`m.well I`m lost. How someone somewhere can take my breaths away..Its killing. Seems someone stole my moments from me and put it on display for everyone. It was supposed to be a private affair. You killed me.
GRR! This poem rocked. I loved how it was all mushy in the begining but then it led into the idea that all you once loved is what you now hate. Rock on.
I THINK THIS POEM IS SADLY THE WAY MANY PEOPLE FEEL AFTER THEYVE BEEN IN A RELATIONSHIP ONLY TO FIND THAT WHAT THEY FELT FOR THAT PERSON WAS NEVER FELT IN RETURN.THIS IS A GREAT POEM!
A poem which is linked to me and I would like to hear more from you.
Heyz.that was amazing! It seems to fit my situation perfectly! It is good to know that ppl know how that feel other than me! Thanks.keep writing!
Beautifully written heart wrenching and brutally honest
i really liked this poem. it is soo true and i am going through that very thing all the reasons i loved my ex-boyfriend are all the reasons i hate him. well there are other reason why i hate him but..that is besides the point. good job.
I really do love this poem. Just a while ago, I found out that my special someone doesn't feel like he showed me. I went in search of a poem to describe my feelings. I found it! It is beautiful in every way.
This was so powerful. It is eactly the way I feel right now. keep up the great work it really touches people thanks.
You hit the nail right on the head. Your poem left me speechless because it seem to put what I was feeling into words right at that exact moment. Thanks!
This poem hit my situation dead on and made me cry
This poem has left me in complete amazement. the words the feeling just everything made so much sence to me. because I know how it feels to be betrayed by someone you once loved and onced trusted. I find it really hard to believe that someone I've never even met could feel the same exact way i did.
i thought this poem was so powerful, i truly felt it, and have certainly been there, it also reminds me of the song "linda" in the movie "the wedding singer" ofcourse thats the funny version of the poem even though there's really nothing funny about it.
Ouch! This is amazing! In the simplist of terms and in it's most honest form. This poem not only relates but it touched me. Thank you for sharing the things I've been trying to say.
I LOVE this poem because I van relate to it. I'm in a situation now where I like this guy and he has most of the qualities that I admire in a guy but yet, the things I like about him are the reasons I also feel that I shouldn't like him at all. So basically, WONDERFUL poem.…
Deliriously enchanting.....I was drawn into the emotion which helped to remind me of my reality. Holding onto dreams can't last forever and this is what the peom dictates to me, due to my current relationship. However, it was astronomical and well written. Thank you for speaking to my heart tonight.
Alicia- your poem was so vivid an awesome that tears started coming to my eyes. I love to write poetry myself and I love when someone can write something that can even bring tears to my eyes.
YOUR POEM REALLY INSPIRED ME
This poem is just like what I would have written if I could write like you. Thanks you for writing this... Its very good...
Fantastic.... I especially relate to your last line..
I love this poem. It completely describes my situation. Great poem!
Love feels like one of lifes most promising feelings until it blows up in our faces. Edna St. Vincent Millay wrote a sonnet she says: ' Love is not all. It is not food, nor meat, nor drink, nor a shelter against the rain.' Thus showing us that the "promising feeling" we call love is merely what it is. a feeling
This poem really related to my current situation. I had a boyfriend that I adored and he broke up with me. Well now I cant even look at him without wanting to fall apart. I loved this poem. Keep up the good writing.
This poem is amazing and its so amazing how much it reletes to the pain i am feeling. But how do we get rid of the hurt. My first true love, who doesnt want me. I cant take it, im glad im not the only one who feels this.
A great poem, with potent words and a vivid picture. Great work!
This was the best poem i have EVER read! it totaly conectesw/the way i feel! awesome poem!
I know exactly what you are talking about in this poem. I'm experiencing it now in this point of my life with a guy I'm totally head over heels with. Good job! And your very talented.
This is so real, it really is, I know what its like for a relationship to be like this, especially when you really love them
You could not be more right
Amazing! to see the thin lines between lust, love, and hate. pure gold Alicia!
Wow, very powerful meaning
You have a natural beauty and talent for writing and I think you should keep up the good work. I know your pain too.Stay strong.
this poem was sooo moving i just loved it. even though i haven't gone throught this expereince it just made me think about how u would have felt. it really hit me deep in my heart.. what a wonderful poem
Alicia its Kim, and I loved the poem everything in it is true, and it happens to almost everyone once in there life.
it was really well said poem and i completely felt it
OH Alicia, I do so un
I loved it it probably set light on a seemingly imposible problem I'v been haveing Letting go!! Thanks
This the way that we all feel at one point in our lifes. Some more than others if we trust and fall in love to easy...I really liked it...
This poem I'm going to send to my ex-husband. He really hurt me,but now I found someone else who truely loves me for me and just doesn't want me because I know how to cook. Thanks Alicia.
This poem connected with what was going on in my life at the time. Thank you.
I read your poem, and I can't believe how much it is like what i went throough with a guy I am still in love with. We had a very special night together, and after that night we still talked and went out, but after a week it was as if I weren't even alive. I can't tell you how hurt I was. Now I think back on all the reasons I love him and then I have to think of all the reasons why I hate him for doing this. I'm sure you now what I'm going through, and I'm happy that I'm not the only one who has felt like this.
Thanks for putting into words the gamut of emotions I am feeling. Someday I'll get over him.
i never usually read anything but im glad somebody like you could put this in words its exactly how i feel about my x but im not able to word myself as you have done great work and thank you
This was like reading about my own life.
I really liked this poem it seemed to come from the right place, your heart. We have all been there, therefore can realte
touched me! & expressed feelings of my own!
this was very good as i read it this poem reminds me of my life with this one guy that i will always love. great poem
This is like thee coolest poem in the world! it describes my past relationships so well. It's awesome!
I really vibe from this poem because her words symbolize my feelings of confusion.
I must say that this poem speaks of my neighbor.She was in a relationship with my brother and he treated her and her son fantastic until he received a phone call from his ex and decided to move far away. I was around them all the time.I knew of my neighbors background.She had been rescently heartbroken.She just doesn't understand why he told her time and time again he loved her.Alicia,I feel for her because she did all she could for him.
I know this feeling soooo well - this poem hit right at home - Thanks so much.....this poem means alot to me - I sent it to my ex-husband.
I really like this poem alot. I to have been in a similar situation and I know exactly how you felt cause I'm feeling the same way right now. This is a really good poem.
This poem is soooo right. Sorry for your pain.
Alicia, what an amazing, yet true poem. I felt every word you wrote in my soul. It brought back feelings that I have tried to surrendure for a while now... Keep up the good writing!
It made me think; then it made me cry.
You have put into words my experience. It was a revelation.
it was the same way that i got treated it was like i was there for the use of nothing when he meant so much to me and i meant nothing to him. he was a user and a lier. and i do not thank him for it. where we have now become back as friends but it has taken so many years and he was the one that came back and said he was sorry and that it was all his doing none of it was mine and that i was to nice to be the sort of person for that to happen to.
I thought that this was a really good poem. It is exactly the that I am feeling now. My husband and I just seperated two days ago.
I can relate to this right now, and it really moved me.
this is a really good poem
gut wrenching for the person who caused the pain. please forgive me.
This poem totally hit a nerve. Beautiful poem, I think that these are the feelings many of us with broken hearts feel. Keep up the great writing!!!
This poem is great. It explains exactly how I feel right now, and it's glad to know someone else has been thru this too.
my heart sank when i read this as it describes me of the present situation i am now..i must say this is one of the most intriguing and beautiful peoms ive ever read. the words alicia has written has so much of emotions attached to it..hey alicia i understand how u feel though it might not be the same as what im going through now but you go girl!
I was totally relating to what she said in the poem. She was able to sum up in a few verses, what could have been a 30 day or 30 year long relationship that has come undone.
Great poem, well written and besides, it relates to me.
It's a truly wicked thing how simple words can demand such perpetual emotion. This piece of poetry brought me to tears with such ease. To enjoy is sincerely an understatement. Thank you, Alicia.
i loved this poem, i've felt this way before about someone and when i read this poem it just brought tears to my eyes.
This poem perfectly describes my feelings for this guy. I know exactly how the author feels.I couldn't have said it better.
I really like your poem. And I think I know how you feel. I may be in the same situation. I met a guy that I care so much about, and everything that I loved about him are becoming the things I hate. Although I love him, I can't understand him, and because we are going different ways I am confused about his decisions.
I really loved this poem. I have been in such a situation. And I can really relate to it.
amazing poem thankyou!
Absolutly outstanding, I loved it. It feally flows and I love the form, and the power of the words, the simple fact that the exact same thing is happening to me right now is irrelivant.... good work
I really feel this!
Very good work.
This poem really touched me,because I am in a similar situation.It just describes my own feelings perfectly
this poem is very good, i have had the same thing done to me!
IT WAS A NICE POENM I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT
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