About the Poem
This poem is about a person that thought she had found love, but realized too late in the game that it wasn't all she thought it was. She had given everything she had to this one person, only to have them throw it right back at her! And now she is lost in a world full of sorrows, feeling as though her Love is corrupted and will never be found again.
|A warm sensation fills my body
My heart races with every touch
The softness of your voice soothes
As I lay there hoping the moment
Will never end
Calling out for you
Praying that you'll never let me go
The sensation so strong
I can no longer feel my body
Slowly I fade in and out of reality
In an instant the warm sensation
My heart empty
My soul torn apart
Lying there; wondering where I went
Calling out for you, only to find
there is no answer
My mind invaded with thoughts
So cruel and unrefined
The sensation of fear of what's to come
Slowly the reality over powering
The lust and fantasy
Leaving me empty
Confused on how to think or feel
The loneliness I feel
So wretched and compelled
Betrayal to myself
Revealing the terrors of my love
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181 Visitor Comments
The poem is so nice. I can relate to it. I am still heartbroken and hard at the moment. I feel so empty and hopeless. I feel I could never love again.
This really touched me, and it says how I feel
The things written i nthis poem remind me so much of myself at a time before i finally did find the one that i was looking for all along. this is a really really good poem! i loved it!
very touching it made a tear in my eye
I know only too well where your coming from, because, right not this is where I stand. Lovely poem
this is how i feel. the pain. emptiness. what a great poem. really touch my heart.
its fantastic. i an just crying. i know how it feels. ite superb, mindblowing. i am not having words to express myself. good going. keep it up dear.
I was just browsing aimlessly,feeling down with brokenheart. and I found this Poem. exactly how i am feeling right now. how weird is that. I cant event think how hurtful it is and to express in a way no one even my friends could feel or see. That I am hurting deep inside me. This poem said it all for me. Thank you very much Angelgirl020. Hope our pain soon felt by those who hurts us now or later. God bless. cheers
very heartbreaking but also strong. =/
I was very touched by your poem, it is comforting to know I'm not the only one that is in so much pain. I am crying, because there was a guy the one man that I truly loved, I never had enough nerve to have a full conversation with him, he was so sweet and romantic and adorable, he was everything to me. But he is now getting married to this girl. This girl that I think only wants him for his money, but then I have to wonder, if they really are in love. It kills me everyday, I can never forget him and I do not ever think that I will find someone that is like him ever again. He is all I think about and dream about. I wish he could hold me instead of her. Thank you for writing this poem it truly captures my pain.
this was a really good poem i liked it. it reminded me of my ex boyfriend that broke my heart into.
i can todally relate to this poem. I've been through this.
I love your poem It says alot I am so sorry you had to feel that pain.
it was good
its really touching. i too feel the same. grt
I liked this poem more than you can know, and I understand it more than I ever wanted to.
i really like your poem, i too have felt this way before. keep up the good work
this is a very good poem i really liked it alot it tells about broken hearts which i can relate to
i loved this poem. it definatly makes me stop and think of the relationship im in right now. thank you I love your poem!
i really liked it it touched my heart this is wat i reel right now deep inside
I FEEL SO NICE WHEN I READ THIS ARTICLE AND I ALSO PRINTED IT BECAUSE IT SUPRISE ME REALLY
i like your poem it rings bells in my soul. that poem is very good. i hope to read more of your work.
This is real touching poem. Congratulations! I liked it a lot. I say that you write some more pretty ones because youre really good at it. I liked it becaused one time the same thing had happened to me. I was wondering what I did wrong for him to leave me like nothing after all the things we had went through. You know what I mean. Well, good job.
I really like it. It is exactly how i feel. very nice.
Thank you for this poem and thank you to the friend who sent this to me. I just went through break-up with a man that I thought I would spend the rest of my life with. I held onto those last moments of passion hoping that he would change his mind, only to be met with rejection that hurt more than anything I have ever experienced. This poem said exactly what I am feeling, thank you.
this poem is very beautiful it is so true about my love and feelings and not most poems reach out to me like this one did
your poem really touched me. i have just broke up with someone whom i really love and now i think that i have made a big mistake. true love is not easy to walk away from but u never really realize it till its over brandy
This is so true for my love life right now, there is a guy who held me in his arms then he told me he hated me and never wanted to see me again and I can't get over him no madder wht I do!
This peom is great it had me on the end of my seat. One time ago i could say that was me. LOVELY . I feel like crying.
this poem is perfect. I know how that feels.
this poem was amazing. it reminded me of a relationship i was in. it truly touched me.
this poem is very great. I believe you have real talent. you should become a poet. Also don't let life get you down there is always hope in a better day ( tomorrow). God bless and keep u
THIS WAS VERY GOOD, WE AS WOMEN ARE VERY SENSITIVE CREATURES AND WE FALL IN LOVE SO QUICKLY. ONLY BECUASE WE HAVE A HUNGER FOR LOVE THAT WILL NEVER BE SATISFIED. GREAT POEM AND SO TRUE
I am sorry that you were fooled by a lust crazed individual who tricked your mind into loving him. it happens. people are selfish and greedy and most men only look for a warm body not a warm soul. sad but true. i hope you recover
I feel the same way. Thanks for publishing this poem. I would like to know how I can enter my poems.
i was really touched by this poem because this recently happened to me, so thanks for writing this.
great poem. it really touched me to my heart. loved how u had the convidenc to express your self after a hard time we all know how that is to go through
i loved it and so did my friends
I have also been unfortunate in feeling this way that you describe. I have felt this hurt. I think that you wrote the poem very well. You will find love and peace.
This Poem has really touched my heart for the Tramatic feelings I'm going through right now.
Hey yeah I really love this it's heart touching
it reminds me of a past relation ship
i loved his poem it is just like my life and whati ent through this is like you wrote this just for me and my situation. may god bless you
This poem really hits home for me. Thank you. I know now I'm not the only one that feels this way.
How many times have we fallen for the wrong guy or girl - then blame something or someone, cause the love is gone. Most of us are to scared to admit that what we felt was tainted love. This poem is a page in the lives of most people. 5 stars 4 u
This is the perfect example of how I feel about the on I love
i know how you feel
I really love this poem it didn't only touch me but it reminded me of a very special someone who i loved dearly and i looked away for one moment and then he was gone and now i wish i could go back and make things right but i i have to say from that is that i loved him so and now he is gone and it wa a mistake that we never got back to were or how we were before!
This poem is very touching and has got a a powerful message that made me to re-read it.
i really likt this poem it touched my heart because i'v been there befor and it helps to know im not the only one who as been thought this keep up the good work
i enjoyed you poem it was very emotional but realistic.
this is sooo true.
This was beautiful. trite comment, I know, yet it's the only word that applies. I am, at the moment, involved with someone who will appreciate the feeling behind these words.
Best lines for moments of swallowing gone love
this was a really good poem it made me feel like someone was reading into my life i vote yes
i was feeling very low about this man i have the most amazing attraction to, i kissed him and it was the most perfect kiss you can ever imagen only to realise i can never have that feeling again as we can not be together. This poem discribes exactly how i felt and feel it is amazing and so perfectly writen i just hope you did not have this pain yourself. brillient poet.
i could kinda relate i loved it
I am having such a hard time dealing with my recent break up I been beating myself to death trying to understand what happened and how, this poem has helped me to understand I'm not alone, it touched every part of me my thoughts as well as how I've been feeling,questions i'v asked myself over and over, it is a releif to know this is normal, that I'm not loseing my mind keep up the good work, you never know how your word can help a person when they need it most. Thanks
this poem really touched my heart!
because i feel the same exact way don feel alone because you aint
I like, I like!
great is all i can say took my breath away
this poem really spoke to me.
This poem explains completely how I feel. Because my spouse and I are having problems, the words in this poem expressed everything I have been feeling in my heart since she has been gone. Angelgirl020, thank you for writing this poem, because my feelings have now been put down on paper.
I think that this is a poem alot of girls can relate to. She thought she was ready for a stronger love and that he was filling what she was but in turned out that it was just for that moment and everything that meant something left with him. Now she is empty and crying out for the love that no longer will answer.
my eyes are already sore frm crying
man u no how to write good poems
i totally vote for this poem it touched me and it is me so i guess that is to me why it is so good
I relate to that cruel cycle of thinking every thing is great and in a second its gone. you said it better than i could. Glade im not alone.
Oh! that was really awesome. I mean it touched my heart so deep that I couldn't even stop the tears from my eyes.
Awesome poem I give you props definently
Yo Gurl. your poem almost made me cry, I Know how it feels when someone plays with your heart, and I totally relate to this poem, In a scale of 1-5 I give this poem a 5.
i love your poem it is so awsome, i can relate to it alot, great work, hope to read more bye you!
Wow this is amazing, and while i love my boyfriend loads and am not in this position i will be one day and its amazing. wow. x-x-x
This poem can relate to anyone who's been ripped apart by a lover. In my case it was my choice to leave out of self-respect,but the actions that took place after the break up,left me so confused on what love really is, that I honestly don't want to love again. It's too scary to anticipate times that can be so good and then taken from you and it's too scary to anticipate times that can be so bad. I liked in the poem when she says,"Slowly the reality over powering the lust and fantasy, leaving me emty. " When a dream is proven to be impossible there is an emptiness that can't be filled. Builing a new dream can be like building a new house after your home burned down.
WOW that was awsome, not that many poems relly grab mt attention as much as that did- I relly felt empathy for you- may all your dreams in life come true.
This poem touched my heart and brought me to tears because I had just broken off my long-term relationship with my steady boyfriend, a man who was there beside me while I had watched my own Daddy die a long-drawn-out, agonizing death at the hospice. My baby love was a part of my now-dead Daddy, so now that it's over between me and him, a part of my Daddy left with him too. To lose a loved one by death is a killer; to lose two loved ones one by death and another by the inevitable "good-bye" is transcendentally painful enough to kill the strongest being alive--from the inside out.
i love your poem so sad and heart felt
your poem has allot of meaning!
This poem was a very touching poem to me. I love it and keep writing them so i can read more of them. Your number 1 fan!
how nice, it made me cry, just like mine love-life till now I had a lovesick.
I really felt wat u were tryin to say in this and i loved it i can tell that u have been hurt just by the truth in this really liked you poem
you a very talented i feel the same way too
Absolutley wonderful poem. it truly touched me and I could relate to what this person is feeling. Thank you! You're brilliant!
Your poem really,really touch me. I guess that the poem is for me. hehehe. Anyways,it's really great and what touch me the most is that,you wrote what I feel. love yah. nice job! :)
I found this poem touching to the heart. It said what many were feeling in their hearts but can't find the words to say them. Everyone has felt what your poem is about so it is a knock-out in the ring. Thanks for your inspiration.
Hi its heather again this poems seems to make me think of my ex fiance. his name was chris i really feel pitty for him in my hole in my heart.
great poem, and that recently happened to me. thank you for putting it into words.
I really like this poem. There are alot of us that have felt that way about people. Keep doing what u do best!
I really like your poem alot. It reminds me of a relationship I just had. It really moved me because I really loved him.
This poem remined how my ex friend and boyfriend hurt me. Yhank u so much and God Bless.
sometimes the reality of what a relationship can be is both, the most beutiful and the most ugliest of all. "Love can make you feel like you're on top of the wolrd or it can make you feel like your lower then dirt. " It always helps, releave the anger, the sadness, the betrayal, and the hurt one feels when we are reminded that we all go through these experiences. "With every silent scream that goes unheard and every tear drop that goes unnoticed, there is blessing hidden in the midst of our confusion. " Your poem descibe word for word what has transpired in my relationship.
I could really feel what was happening in the poem, i don't mean this the wrong way(if you happen to be thinking it) but while and after i was reading it, i got this really strong image of the poem, especially from the beginning. . . I really liked it.
Great Poem !
this poem is so good i can actually feel how you were feeling when you wrote this. i can relate to how u feel as well
I belive that your poems was real nice and that you are a god writer. And keep doing what you are doing
Your poem touched the depth of my soul as though I was reading a mystery novel I couldn't put down.
this poem made me cry and yet i really liked it. if the preson that wrote it reads this, your a very talented poet
I write poetry and songs. This poem really touched me, and let me say, I know exactly how you felt or feel. Even though it dosen't seem now, you will get over him. He was obviously a jerk and if he didn't cherish your love, then he wasen't worth having it. Good luck gurl.
Wow,this poem is all about me and i cant believe how much this relates to my feelings thanks for makin this beautiful poem! Destiny
This was a really good poem. It explains exactly the way I'm feeling now in an unwanted situation that I put myself in . With no intentions to hurt myself. I thought the guy was for real, and now I'm left wondering what I did wrong to get this type of treatment. It's good to know that I am not the only person going through this.
I love the poem it makes me feel as if I'm not the only one that lost someone after 7months of happiness and now only lonliness and sorrow. The poem is very good and is sad at the same time.
This was a truly awesome poem. It really made tears fall into my eyes. Bravo. This poem really hits the soul. Bravo once again.
this one is really grate wonderful as well thanks for the read.
I think it is great to bad you had to deal with it to write it . Peace!
i loved your poem it touched me and it made me think of my exboyfriend i really really liked it muah muah bye take care GOD BLESS!
what more can i say but you go girl you hit the nail on the head!my heart feels the way you have said and i thank you for letting me know that somebody other than me feels the same!
wonderful! Made me cry!
its really a fantastic write.
i liked the poem it described what all of us feel at some time in our lifes
Oh my goodness i love this poem! (really everyone does say this lol) I am going something just like that now and it's really hurting. maybe if i say that poem to him he'll understand. good poem!
If you wrote this from experience. i just want you to know. I know how you feel.
i can really relate to this poem,and i know how it feels but it was a great poem
great poem this relates to me a lot but my girl was tooken away form me by my best friend so ya life suck and i wana die but other than that great poem
I wish I had wrote this, it speaks the words I cannot say and feels the intensity I have from day to day.
Oh my God I love that poem, it is so true and real. We often have false hope about love b/c we won't to find it so bad! I hope you stay strong and never let a man,women,nor love hold you down! GREAT POEM!
i loved you poem that is how i felt when me & my ex boyfriend broke up. u know exactly what to say. great job!
I think your poem was awesome and I really what you said, I share a similar connections.
I liked you're poem. i found it rather good!
hey i loved ur poem. it has so many meanings to it meanings that touched my heart deep inside. keep up all the good work. i loved it
WOW! that was EXCELLENT! I mean you really opened my eyes. I too have fantasies and now I know I am not the only one.
This was a really good poem. I could really relate to it. It happened to me, It's really sad when you find out that the person you love, was only playing with your feelings
Your poem is soo good. You are telling it how it really goes. on and on never ending till he's gone. your good!Don't stop writing!
i juz appreciate tis poems alot. i m not sure of how i m feeling nw. i love my stead alot. but it's juz tat he dun realli shower mi wif love. i dun feel happie 'bout tis relationship. n the poem express 'bout my feeling.
This is a great poem. (i know everyone says this but) i can relate.
You write very good. I understand exactly what your feeling my boyfriend did the same thing and sometimes I feel alone in a closed and empty space,but now I know I,m not alone and I'm not the only one .
I went out with this guy for 2 yrs and I put everything I had into the relationship and he just flipped out on me, your poem described exactly how I felt.
This poem really gets to the point, I went through such pain myself, but I don't know how to put it in a poem. you just did! Thank you million times.
Bittersweet yet beautiful
this poem rocks
this was a great poem i also just broke up with my boyfriend and i feel the same way. much love for all the lovers out there
Ilove this poem so much! its talks about love, life and truth. Thank you for sharing it. I voted for this because it relates to my life.
that poem so goes with tha way i fell for my first lost love. thank you so much for sharing that!
hay, well this poem is great, i really enjoyed reading it. hope u feel better. i have gone through that before but i have learned to be independent and move on to better things in life. dont let any guy make your life miserable, stay strong and always remember that u must always be independent and never let anyone or ANYTHING get you down.
I just discovered my fiance and a girl online have been sending lovemail and talking on the phone for the last 9 mos. This poem is so close to how I feel right now. Thank you .
i can so relate. this is exactly what i feel. my best friend did this to me she went out with the guy i liked & was about to go out with. that hurt! i am glad that there is someone out there that feels the same way.
omg get out of my head! i can say that this poem is the beast i hope you keep up the awesome writting!
This is a great poem I can totally relate to it. It hurts less to know that others share my feelings.
I love that poem its like you writing what Im thinking
I just broke with my boyfriend and this poems discibe eveything i am feeling thank u
nice it was so sad but it was kickbutt
Hey! That's how I feel. good to know that it isn't only me.
Wow! I read poems and try to relate them to myself. Its not very often that I read a poem and have it decribe an exact feeling that I have had in the past. This is an amazing poem
I loved this poem. It expressed everything about feelings and loneliness. Very deep feelings.:)
I understand every part of your "TRUE" poem! keep it up and you'll suceed in life!
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM BECAUSE I'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS MYSELF.
you poem as inspired me.I am one to Feel likesit ad fall so deep in love.
I loved Your Poem thanks for sharing it....
Love is for suckaz, this poem epitomizes this idea. 2 thumbs up!
I love that poem...It is kind of what I have been through in the past, that poem explains it all really good...you are a really good writer, keep on writing!
Before I could even finish the poem I began to cry. I just recently been through the same exact thing. And this poem decribes everything I felt and still feel.
This is a great poem! My boyfriend broke up with me & this explains how i felt exactly!
this is a reaallly great poem. it uses everything in such a way, that you can even picture it all, and feel the same sorrow.
this is a very good poem!
this poem was great and it shows exactly how i feel at times when i think my love has done me wrong and its the same feelings that i feel that are expressed in this poem i give it two thumbs way way up BABY!
This poem is a truly remarkable expression of a beautiful young woman's pain. Bravo says I.Bravo!
Good usage of words, very powerful meaning, I can definitely relate to the situation, it brought back unwanted memories, but showed that I can move on.
Very, very good poem.the pain i know all too well
I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE I BEAN THERE THANKS ALOT IT HELPS
This was really great!
the poem was very good i can relate to it .i felt that way onces the grul then she broke my heart.i would say this is the best poem . ps keep up the good work
'Lost Romance' was so sad and beautiful. I could feel the want and need.
This poem was so touching it broke my heart
I loved it, and just to read one's poem that frees someones emotions and can express them selves in wonderful words like these.
I wnated to go jump off a bridge after reading this. No just kidding, it was very good, i think we can relate to the problem of being dumped, unless your me becdause i am the best
It really expressed exactly what I am going through right now, At least I'm not alone.
Good representation on how i have felt in the past
This poem is very good. the author is very talented. It is very noticable that this author has had boy trouble. I just want to say good job to the author.
all i relly want to good gradulation. keep up the good work
AWESOME USE OF WORDS
A wonderful enchanting trip through the mind of an empty, ever yearning soul. It reminds me of a girl that I've once dreamt about. This poem could only have been thought up by one really hot chick!
This is a very good poem. It explains the loneliness felt when loosing a loved one; not neccisarilly just by death. How fast the happiness can come and go, leaving you dry and lifeless
wow-my thoughts and feelings exactly..
I love this poems.It really does express a lot of emotion.Great work!
WOW. very deep. keep up the good work
I GIVE THIS POEM FROM A 1-10 I GIVE IT A 10
hlllo there, a beautiful poem you've got there. i really liked it.
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