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This poem is for those of us who get tired of the traditionally happy Valentines day. Although a sad tone is used here, it is mostly about someone finding the strength to not settle for less than what they deserve.

To My Valentine

Once upon
A time
There was
Truth to the
Myth of what
You
And I
Had found
In a blank paged
Fairy tale.

Snow White
Doesn't sleep
In a casket made of
Glass
Slippers will break
If you wear them.

Walk across this
Written word
With fingers
Gently
Seeking
Loving
You
And me
No more.

He loves
Me
He loves me!
Not
Enough.

To:
My Valentine
Will you
Be mine
No longer . . .
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27 Visitor Comments

jenna
this poem is very good i too get tired of hearing about the traditional happy fairy tale ending and like to read a poem that is for once realistic. good job.
CHRISTINE
THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM.
Francheska
I can really relate to this poem. I had a fairytale romance that was so seamless. It was almost too perfect. The man of my dreams filled to the brim with honesty and loyalty. Too bad I found that out and got too close too late (but it happened so quickly). I believed our mutual friend whom we met through. That was the biggest mistake of my life. I let that friend manipulate me. His intentions were malicious because he had wanted me for himself. He sabotaged the relationship. The only difference between me and this poem is that I want that Valentine. But, if he cannot accept me for being human and making mistakes he is not the Valentine for me. It's sad though.
Jesikah
This is a very beautiful poem it shows poeple what they should look for in a person
lisa
i really like it it was really good i really did like your poem it was so good that i most cryed
Jasmine
I really like that poem i thought that the poem was really valentinish if you know what i mean, but other than that i really like your poem.
Ashley
This is really great and it's also great to get anyone u want right to u guys have more.
Emanuel
BEAUTIFULL!
lovestruckkid
i loved this poem. its REALLY good. i liek the way u put a fairytale theme in it
Cliona
all i can simply say is thank you for writing this poem you have touched my breaking heart. its nice to know that i'm not alone in this suffering thank you again
Ricki
I really thought this poem was cool! It's a great way to put things. I guess
Cope
This poem was really cool I expected it to be a "mushie" poem I really like the out trun of it
ambrish
full of love and desires
Courtney
this is one of the best poems i have ever read, you are so insightful and this brings so much relief to what i am going through. thank you SO much for sharing your beautiful talent with me. this poem is so perfect it makes me weep everytime i read it
Chant
really great!u hit the nail on the head!
Ness
Never looked at it that way. Nice.
JENNY
UNFORTUNATLEY SOME FAIRY TALES ARE JUST THAT. FAIRY TALES. THAT WAS A GREAT POEM
Susan
AWESOME! My ex used to call me his Cinderalla so I can really relate to this.
Danielle
wow! i love the before-and-after effect u used w/the words like casket of glass-to glass slippers..this is really good..
sister
good poem..i liked the part in about the glass shoes..well done
sarah
i like this poem cuz me and my ex has had some thing like thiss hhappen
jean
amazing.this is one i plan to send to the person who cheated on me.thank you for your help with words..
Kiwimackenzi
i really enjoyed reading this. it was very ful of heart.
Michelle
This poem was written with such an incredible taste. Keep up the good work, Saxoness, your work has a high vote on my list.
Joey
this poem is very good...its creativity makes it so unique...good work and keep it up
Kelly
This is a great poem, i love all the subtly word play she uses here. It flows so good too! Says goodbye so poetically, how could someone not vote for this one?
meg
*awsome*

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