About the Poem
Basically this poem describes how I see "adults" viewing teens. It seems that no matter what it is that a teen does, it is rude, selfish, and wrong. I hate to be seen like that.
|by Alesha Faulkner|
|The world doesn't understand
What's going wrong in me
Neither do they want to know
For fear they'll have to see
So many things useless in life
But all acceptable
Except a teen with lofty dreams
But balance by the bowl
So many times I've wondered why
Teens today are used
While as a child they sat alone
angry and confused
Crouching down upon the floor
To avoid viscous blows
Of words of hate and flying fists
And what else? Who knows
Creatures from deep inside their minds
That hollow dark abyss
Scream to them their life is lost
They lost it in a kiss
Unfeeling teens when will they learn
What's prominent and good
And damn it, when will they
Do as WE think they really should?
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45 Visitor Comments
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i think this poem was about a girl that has a lot of things going on in her life and thinks nobody understandes her. i htink a lot of people who read this relates to her.
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I think you have a strong mind . It's good that people like you are out there telling and showing adults how teens today feel . Keep doing what your're doing and you'll go far
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I think this is a good piem, and should be published somewhere else.
i kinda understand how you can feel, i hate it when the adult will try not to notice the kid even when we're right infront of them. so annoying, but then not all adults are like that. and i hope you get this message
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