About the Poem
Basically this poem describes how I see "adults" viewing teens. It seems that no matter what it is that a teen does, it is rude, selfish, and wrong. I hate to be seen like that.
Unfeeling Teens |
| by Alesha Faulkner |
| The world doesn't understand What's going wrong in me Neither do they want to know For fear they'll have to see So many things useless in life But all acceptable Except a teen with lofty dreams But balance by the bowl So many times I've wondered why Teens today are used While as a child they sat alone angry and confused Crouching down upon the floor To avoid viscous blows Of words of hate and flying fists And what else? Who knows Creatures from deep inside their minds That hollow dark abyss Scream to them their life is lost They lost it in a kiss Unfeeling teens when will they learn What's prominent and good And damn it, when will they Do as WE think they really should? |
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45 Visitor Comments
Rosy
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michael
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stephanie
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Robert
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sarah
this is a good poem i truely see what you are saying cause i feel the same
Shelia
This poem is beautitful, it's about what what most teens life is all about. Unfourtnately.
Tanaeya
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diana
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cricket
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Mel
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Juliona
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Gina
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tanginique
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annacelia
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melody
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kasey
the poem was really great,more people should read it,especially adults,it will give them an idea of how we(teenagers) feel. I give it a 10!
Quianna
I love this poem! It is really good. It really got me thinking.
Marium
This poem is great . It gose with what teens r and what thay feel about. I really liked it. I vote it a 8and a Have.
Heather
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dana
THIS POEM IS THE BEST POEM I READ. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Jessica
This poem is really good. I just came across it. The subject is quite touchy. But you sad the words many of us have not the guts to say this is the best one ive read so far.
Shirley
I really enjoyed the hearted warming poem!
justine
I really liked the poem i felt as if i could relate to it. i cried when i read it its not everyday you can find someone that understands how u feel.
Annie
WOW this rocks.
Christine
i like your poem. its so true. we have a lot in life that is useless, but hey it happenes, and sometimes we are the only ones dealing with it.
Nataiya
I think that poems describes a teens everyday life
precious
u rock on chika
bob
this was good i liked it alot.
bob
Me gusta, muy mucho. (I like it very much. )
looloo
i think this poem was about a girl that has a lot of things going on in her life and thinks nobody understandes her. i htink a lot of people who read this relates to her.
Christina
Great poem 4****
Joe
I liked the end with all the feeling in it.
Celena
i think this is a really interesting, almost true poem about teens. i give it a 9
Christina
Ilove the poem it expresses the parents point of view of teenagers
leeroy
it descibes all things teens go through at one point or another. i liked it a lot
amber
these are very cool poems
michelle
i loved this poem because it talks freely about how teens feel growing and how adults think we feel this is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read
Karena
I think you have a strong mind . It's good that people like you are out there telling and showing adults how teens today feel . Keep doing what your're doing and you'll go far
Alisa
Very powerful poem. I really like it.
tanni
This is a really good poem and I can really relate to it.Thank you so much for writing the words that I have trouble saying.
Amanda
nice poem well done i like it alot. you write great poems. well done.you get**** (4 stars)
Will
I think this is a good piem, and should be published somewhere else.
Roselyn
i kinda understand how you can feel, i hate it when the adult will try not to notice the kid even when we're right infront of them. so annoying, but then not all adults are like that. and i hope you get this message
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