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This poem was thought up by me one night when thinking about my possibilities in life. It is based on a true story. It will make you think...

K.S.-14 years old.

Her Unending Faith

by Kat Skye

"God, if you love me, I know it's right,
Please let us make love tonight,"
She asked Him with a pleading voice,
Thinking she had made the right choice.
She put on music that seemed best,
He would get right to the rest.
She didn't exactly know why she felt,
A cold hollow feeling as he undid his belt.
Her parents found them before it got worse,
She kicked and screamed and hit and cursed,
But ceased when she heard their news.
Many girls had been in her shoes,
They didn't stop him, he caused their strife,
And soon AIDS would take away his life.
See, God really loved her and kept her safe,
And now she has complete and total faith.

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46 Visitor Comments

grey girl

i love it. god closes doors, but opens windows. totally.

Rebbecca

Really good work. It touched me alot. I am 16 and at age 12 I was silly enough to be with a man aged 39 who was HIV and Hep C positive. I just found out that at the time we where together unprotected that he was positive for HIV and Hep C and im still waiting for my results. good work.

lola

its a good poemmm

julia

this poem changed my thoughts about life, not that I didn't know about STD's or STI's. I hope I would still live with my mom.

ShaVania

U SEEM TO BE A VERY CREATIVE PERSON WHAT A LIFE STORY.

REBECCA

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. ITS SOOO TRUE,KEEP ON WRITING.

Joy

ooo goodness our father God is awesome. what an amaing blessing thnk you for sharing

Mel

All I can say is WOW and OMG. When I first started to read this poem I was like okay bad joice of words but when i finished reading it I got it. Keep up the good work!

sarah

i is very touchin, something similar happen to me.

Latosha

Many young girls need to read this poem because guys are paaing out diseases right and left. Young girls love to hear the lies boys will tell to get what they want. I too, was once a teenager.

jessica

i realy thougt your poem was touching and its kinda the same thing i went through

Pamela

this is a very good poem. i think the message is one that many arent giving any importance to and welll frankly it is VERY important, keep up the good work!

daniela

hey i really like this poem and it means a lot to me and i know how you feel cause it happened to me and my brothers girlfriend

AJLA

i LOVE IT ITS SO TRUE AND IT HAPPENS ALOT!

This is an awesome poem, i give mad props to the writer! Keep writing girl, you got major talent. A+

Marketa

i thought this poem was wonderful ireally like it ans it take to hearts.

hannah

your poem sends one heck of a strong msg through to people. it really hit and touched my heart when i read it!

Lacey

I really liked it! It was AWESOME!

Melissa

Awesome poem, i really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

chelsea

Very good poem. I realy liked it!

Kaela

This is an awesome poem!

Cyndi

Great Poem Megan, You know i dont believe in "God" but i do believe in a higher power. I love your poem its the best i have read. You need to get another one one here so you have more published poems.

Tears

Great work, its such a beautiful poem, i have read it so many times its just amazing how much you capture ones imagination. keep it up!

Kelsey

WOW that was so great! It's really moving. Thanx for sharing it with us!

Brandee

WOW! VERY GOOD JOB, SOON MY OWN POEMS WILL BE PUBLISHED POEMS WILL BE ON HERE TOO. I HOPE THAT THEY GET THE SAME ATTENTION AND RESPECT YOURS GETS FROM ME.GOOD JOB.

Krystal

this is a really good poem

Nikki

I really liked that and now i am crying because I have been in that predicument b4 and I had a flashback. I prayed to god that we would do it and now I don't regret it but I wish I had someone to stop me! I love that poem. I give it a 10+ and more. You r a good artist.

KaT

Dude, that poem is completely true.I went through a situation recently kinda like that one.only because of God's mercy I am clean. Keep writin!

Megan

Hey, it's me, Kat (that's my old pen name). I just wanted everyone to know that I'm now writing under a different name, so look for more poetry by me under the name Megan Howard. Thanks!

Kara

This poem was the most inspiring poem i have read tonight. It really surprises me that a 14 year old can actually write such powerfull words, that mean so much, and could teach so many. My advice to kat is to keep writting and believing!

ashley

Great poem and it is toatly true

anne

Beautifully sentimental!

Sarah

That poem was great. Things always happen for a reason.

Tricia

God bless you!!! I love that poem it tells the truth. I am a new christian and keep discovering things that prove him real and this one of them.

Sherika

This poem tells the truth. Sometimes what you think you want isn't always best and GOD has a reason for that. Amen.

Renny

It's a very touching work, definately one of the best I've ever seen. Kat's right here, and I think she's a freak, but the poem still rocks. We are in the computer lab at our high school. She brought up this poem and our principal saw it and made her the honorary principal of our school. noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!god help us all!!!!!!!!!!save us!!!!!!! That is just the silly English teacher being silly. Anyhoo, Everyone here loves Kat more than anything and they are so glad she attends the new Kat Skye High School for The "Gifted". Oh yeah, Mary loves Kat too. Well, I have to go and join the rest of the class in our bowing lesson to the all-mighty Kat.

Tina

Very striking and powerful poem...terrific, Kat.

Annie

That was amazing. I wasn't even going to read it when I saw how old Kat is, but I'm glad I did. I wasn't aware that something so awesome could come from someone so youthful.

Marsha

Who would have thought someone so young could write something so powerful, because powerful is waht it is. To me it told a story of what could happen if you're not careful and don't have God on your side. I hope she keeps up the good work.

lauren

wow. that is an amazing poem. words can't describe what i feel after reading that, unless mabey i write a poem . . .

Jen

I know many people who have had to face a decision like this, and this poem really makes a person think.

heather

great poem

Christina

Excellent message!

Will

Hey, this is Kat's brother and I am proud of my little sister for all that she has done to become a published poet!

Beth

v true..can empathise loads with it.! nice to see someone put it in such an honest and real way

sandie

Excellent this should be on the television in place of the adverts it will get through to more people young and old alike.

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