About the Poem
This poem is one of my first. It's basically about how I was feeling when me and my boyfriend was going through bad times. It tells how our relationship just isn't the same after what all happened, happened.
I am 15 and in the 10th grade. I got interested in poetry from reading Maya Angelo. I will admit that most of my poems so far is kind of sorry but by reading some of you guys poetry I have learned some things and got some ideas.
(Austine'a may need to learn more poetic technique, but she could teach us all a thing or two about Truth and insight - Ron)
Feelings |
| by Austine'a Burrell |
| The feelings I feel inside I can't explain It's like I still love you but it don't feel the same. The memories we had stays on my mind How can I forget I think about them all the time. I wish we could go back to how we was before But it feels like the love we had before just isn't there anymore. So many thoughts run through my head like what kind of future we have ahead I hope all our problems go away so we can live happier together forever, everyday And if by chance our love do end I hope to God that we can still be friends. |
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68 Visitor Comments
kristen
i really like that poems its nice to have young poets that are in our generation i dont really have those problems yet but if i do maybe i could read this to him and maybe we would be friends if we ever had this problems we have been together for 1 year and 4 mths.
joshua
hey this is a really great poem i enjoyed it very much
Angels of Love
I loved this poem. it related almost exacly to my life. i thought it was amazing and i think that this poet should keep writing poetry!
Timiesha
thats great do you
nancy
thank you for the kind comments, n. versheck
amelia
girl that was so sweet c i wright poems 2 an c im 16 an i fell the sames way about my bf josh ,keep it up girl u make something out of ur self with poems like that! i mean that im gonna send it 2 my bf 2! Ill give u a TEN!
LeAnna
I LOVE THIS POEM MY BIG SIS WROTE ONE JUS LIKE IT AND I THINK THAT SHE JUS COPIED IT IT REALLY COOL I LIKE IT SO MUCH
brenda
I enjoyed the poem, I thinks it;s quite erotic, and fun.
Tina
awwww i like it :]
nancy
HI, omg! it has been ageses since I have revisited this site. I please would like to leave a comment. I am so very touched by the nice compliments I ha recieved, I am seriously disturbed to find that some people have posted them on their sites without asking. I was quite young when I wrote this poem, and it is my favorite. please respect the rights of the authors and contact them. my name N. Versheck you can write to me at the email here. yes I have continued to write, just not post, for now. thank you all. a. k. a as barb ortiz
Niah
Yo ya poems was hot!I can relate all the way. Cause I'm going through the same thing right now. Hope everything turned out alright with your situation.
Ashley
This poem touched me because i didnt no what love was and my friend kept telling me that he loved me and i couldn't say it back because i didn't no ehat love was.
pauline
i really like this poem. we have the same experience. GOOD JOB! tc!
sasha
its awesome and it reminds me of a past relationship
ivory
Thats was very good. that seem like a good break up poem. That was very good I LOVED IT!
Jill
Great poem. Very touching!
Amber
This is a good poem i really enjoyed reading it.
Edellen Jean
I really like your poem. I've broken up with my boyfriend and when my mom meet him, my heart telling me that i should go back to him. But, it's too late, when my x doesn't like it anymore, all he wants is just a friend. That makes me feel really sad! Keep up the good work
Fany
I like your poem it actually made me cry and this is how I feel I really felt happy. I would like to be this good at writting poems just as good as you
mandi
This poem is grat!i inspire this poet to keep writeing poems!
jennifer
i really loved ur poem!i was on this web site cause my english teacher wanted me to find a love poem!i am in 6th year!i showed all my class and half of the school!almost every1 loved it i think u are a really good writer!keep it up!
lisa
THAT DESRCIBES MY REALTIONSHIP WITH MY BOYFRIEND RITE NOW. THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD AND IT MENT ALOT TO ME. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
julie
because it made me had a memory of me and my boy and yeah it touched my heart
kali
this really touched alot of people but its a good poem to start off with. i have to say it relates to me alittle, me and my ex brok up and we are still good friends, but its hard caz he go out with my friend and it hurts.
Jannea
wow that was one of my fav one's i reminds me so much of this on and off relationship i had with someone i loved very much but every time it dont seen the same not as good in some way and i just loved it so so so so much
sadie
this poem is so colllll is reli reminds me of how i fell abat my x like we hate eachoda but i wish we were still as close as we were b4 we were a item
Megan
great job you COMPLETELY captured my felings-your very talented
Stephanie
Your poem is tur to me,I liked it very much I wish I had the chance to write a poem that made tohers feel the same so by this I give your poem a 10
Nickey
hi, i luv your peom. this is the way i fell with my ex.
Becca
I think that this poem is one of the best i've read. You can relate to the person writing it. You can accutally feel how the person just might feel. I give it a 10
CAMERON
I feel like the pome was wrote just as I would hope to be with my ex- girlfriend. It gives my a hope.
Ashley
i really liked your poem. me and my boyfriend just broke up and he was my best friend. your poem really made me sad.
Sara
its a really good poem it sorda relats 2 my love life!
Anita
Your poem really touched me. It reminds me of how I feel about my ex-fiance of 5 years. We are friends but at the same time whenever I talk to him or see him it brings back memories. And I have to admit I cry. So this poem really touches my heart. Good job!
DANIELLE
I LIKED YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT SHOWS THE TRUE MEANIN OF FRIEND SHIP
Nodnarb
WOW LIKE THAT WAS SO COOL. its really how i feel. my god i hope i can gt back to my lover. ohhhh.
candice
this is a really good poem.
Dawn
It reminds of me when I have the same problems.
YeSi
wow, it is so cool, n really make me so sad. Im always thinkin maybe can be happen in someday
missy
hey i loved your poem me. me and my b/f just brok up and i love him soOoO much i just want him back. and im trying to get the hook up back with him and hopfuly your poem helps me some!
Melis
HEY AUSTINE. LOOK I JUST LOVE YOUR POEM BECAUSE THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I FEEL ABOUT THIS ONE GUY I LOVE SO VERY VERY MUCH (MORE THAN ANYTHING)
amy
dIs isH a tYtE p0eM ! i likEs iT al0t . wElps byE
Amber
This poem really touched my heart because me and my boyfriend are having problems and he means so much to me and i hope we get through this. This poem really made me realize what i have. Nice Job Austine'a Burrell
mandy
your poem is awesome it tells my feeling how i am feeling because me and my boyfriend broke up and i love him so much and he said helost his love for me we are trying to be friends but its not the same
chris
don't worry girl. i write my own poems too about life. my love songs take time but u get the idea. u tell it as it is and i admire that. keep on writing girl cuz u rock.
Jerah
Ilike this poems beacuse felings are true!
Erica
THis poehas touched me and my b/f. It helped him see my piont of veiw. I love your poem.
Kelvin
It's a great poem Simple yet brings out the meanings at those very moments A great piece of work A salute to you from Singapore
Jeremy
this poem really touched my heart cause it was so true about my life i mean u probably think im crazy but its just a great poem for me
mrugesh
hey..this is wht exactly my situtation right now is..frustrated.i think this the best poem i have ever read.keep the good work up..thanks for such a nice poem.all the best
Daniela
I really like this poem when i read it i was so happy because that's how i fell and i just can't believe theres someone out there feel's the same way as i do.
Megan
I liked this poem a lot! Nice job!
Sharonda
I really love this poem!
Veronique
Readind this poem made me realize that those feelings.are the one i got when me and my ex broke up..This is one good poem! It's so good! Good job!
Ashley
This poem really got me thinking about my boyfriends relationship. This is a really good poem!
DeShine
Ireally LOVE YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT IS LIKE A TRUE STORY TO ME
EDLIN
THIS POEM IS SO COOL ITS LIKE AS IF EVERYBODY GOES THROUGH THE SAME THING IN LOVE.
Joanne
Great Poem....Hope to see more soon!
Ashleigh
I really liked this poem alot
Melanie
I love this poem because this is how I feel for my ex boyfriend of 5 and a half years. I still love him but things aren't the same.
Ashley
It really explained how me and my guy have been lately. I loved it. thanks.
Irene
all I can say is about this poem is."WOW!" This poem expresses the feelings I have rite now about my boyfriend. We're experiencing some tough times and I don't really know how to say what I feel, but reading this poem made me realize many things.Thank you for this wonderful poem. You're a great poet and you should keep up the good work!
jessica
this explains how i feel about my b/f and everything
Jay
this is good for a begginer
Neondra
I felt the same way about my ex
Lani
This poem touched my heart because it feels so very ture it is almost unbelievable
jack
very nice
Jessie
This was a great poem! It reminds me of me n my man right now! Thanx.
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