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This poem represents my inner feelings of what a teenager goes through in today times.

Take Me To A Dream

Take me to a dream
That I never dreamed of,
To a place so beautiful
That we can stay for eternity,
A dream that seems to be
More real than real life
A dream of no problems or worries.

Take me to a dream
A place for just the two of us,
Where we can express our inner
most thoughts, feelings, and emotions,
To a beautiful land where nobody
Is there but just the two of us.

Take me to a dream
A dream where I can have fun,
Where I am not being fused or abused at
Controlled or being yelled at,
To a beautiful place that I can lay at
In peace where I can think at,
Where I will have no worries
and do nothing but dream.

Take me to a dream.....
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24 Visitor Comments

Lise
omg. i love this poem im totally feeling it becuz theres this guy that i kno and rreally like, and i wanna go to that dream place with him too! i cud totally relate to this. loving it!
Tina
this poem is so dreamy! luv it! hmmm i wonder if there`s someone, who could actually take their love to that dream place . ?
baby g
i like this one b/c this real to all the peepz that need to go to a place where thers one at thx for makein aa poem like that cuz other will not talk the way u do so thxs
Pam
i like dis poem so much that i just to be taken to a dream.
jay
that poem was really good although im sure you heard that before but it reminds me of my friends life of being abused as a child but she grew up and fought her mom with words instead of violence.
Dee
I love this poem. I feel the same way. I want to go to that dream place with him too.
Joe
wow, this poem takes my breath away. awesome
AMANDA
I LIKE TIS BECUASE ITS WHAT I FEEL PLEASE TAKE ME TO THAT DREAM PLACE TOO
Levie
i have never neva herd a poem like this before it really touched me and i think it came from the bottom of her heart.
Shannon
I love that poem! It says all the things that I was trying to say, but I couldn't find the words to descibe it. Your a natural poet! I love it so much!
molly
i REALLY REALLY liked this poem. it what i feel but could never find the way to put it.
Serena
This is a great poem. I couldn't have put it better.
Ali
I love it! It really tells what shes thinking
xee
this poem is really touchable ato teenagers because of the pressure from parents and other outcomes in life so this could be a poem to release your stress..very good poem
Papi
This poem really describes a teenagers dream!
Micahel
The poem is very beautiful. It speaks of a place that can't be tainted by the anyone else''s opinons or thoughts but the dreams own. A place of no intruptions.
Jessica
This is a beautiful poem, and it explains my feelings for somebody perfectly.
Pilar
very touchable! is like "dreaming is living in your own world".
K.
I thought this poem was well written and from the heart. It touched me because it says how I feel.
Serene
It is nice and romantic! Fantastic!
nikki
i loved your poem it was really good it made my cry and think of my boyfriend good job
Wanda
I think she wrote a very good poem, it relates to a special place where two people can be together and away from the pressures of today. A place where you can just dream of anything you want to and with anybody.
Jaclyn
I think this is a wonderful poem that is simple yet it explains many feelings at the same time. I could totally relate to this poem where sometimes you just want to be somewhere else.. like a dreamland. I think your poem is beautiful!
Mark
AMAZING~!

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