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This poem was the first poem that I wrote for my boyfriend. I was sitting in class one day, thinking about him of course, and I decided to write what I felt about him

You

The first thing I think of
When I think of you,
Is your wonderful smile.
The second would be your adorable laugh.
I could go on and on,
But the list would never end.

When I think of the short time
That we've been together
And of all of the happy memories we've already shared
It amazes me to no end
And I know that we were meant to be together.
I look at you and see overflowing love, hope, and joy
As well as charm, strength, happiness and dignity.
With all of these wonderful qualities
It's no wonder I love you so.

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170 Visitor Comments

celes
Thi spoem is great. Really reminds me of my boyfriend
Sabrina
This poem is so cute it touches me in a way i can't even say i have a new boyfriend and this poem says exactly the way he makes me feel!
Paige
i love this poem it reminds me of my boyfriend. he is the sweetest.
quetta
i like this peom cuz me and my ex boyfriend was together for a minute till this day i still think bout him plus sometimes he calls me you know how that go's but i go through all the time too
ashley
i luv this poem
tawnia
i reallly like this poem because it reminds me so much of me and my baby. now i know someone has experienced something i have. isnt it great?
Azaria
I loved the poem. Its really touchy adn it reminded me of my situation with the person I'm with. You got talent.
autumn
love it
Yolanda
This poem makes me think of the boy I'm with right now.
Kaniqua
that was very sweet and creative. touched alot. keep up the good work.
Shaina
oh my goodness thats just how i feel about me and my boyfriend i love your poem.
Tara
This poem is exacly how it is in my relationship right now. I love it
elizabeth
IT IS SO HEART WARMING AND AN EXPRESSION OF YOUNG LOVE,I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY DEEP AND VERY LOVING
kimberly
Hey girl, ur poem rocks. I really like it and it really touch me.
sharmilaa
thank u for ur poems.
Markeashia
That poem reminds me of my ex that i really love and wnat to be with.
kAYLA
this poem really xpresses how you feel bout someone or something
Almager
Hey that was a realy sweet poem i might just right one for my boyfriend keep it up girl
Chace
I think jthis is one of the best poems I ever read because it reminds me how I feel about my ol lady,and of some of the things I tell her on a daily basis.
lisa
me and my best friend have been friends for a year and a half. but we jsut statred dateing. and that poems reminds me so much of him
Grace
This is such a wicked poem so easy yet powerful. Its my best one yet.
Nou
It's hard to let go, when you think of the loving memories. I thought of him when I was reading through this poem. I'm happy that I found this poem. Made me thought of a lot of things between me and my boyfriend.
kettie
so far i've look at just about three of these poems and all describes my baby, i'm chosing this one cuz i can't tell my baby how i really feel about him and sending him a poem that can from the bottom of my heart, although i didn't write it but still it's truly what i needed. Thank u so very much, and keep writting nice poems like that. Whoever wrote them. ! U"R GOOD! Bye now, and again Thank u
randy
i love this poem it makes me think of my boyfriend and you must be a wonderfull poet.
trineika
this poem really touched me because it remains me of my boy friend and i. how every little thing about him makes me love him more and more each day and reading this poem gave me a reason for telling him i love him so much
Adrienne
OMG I HATE IT WEN PPL RITE IN AL CAPS AND MISPEL THIER WURDS Its a really great poem, I enjoyed it alot. :-)
Sarah
It's beautiful and wonderful, exactly what I feel.
Mary
I love this poem! it reminds me so much of me and my fiance. we've been together for 5 months and we already know we were meant for each other. This poem just really speaks to me.
patricia
good job on this poem it just what i wanted to read
della
cute!
Ashley
great poem!
Holly
What I liked about the poem was it made me realize that I Do Not Take Credit For Everything my boyfriend does for ME!
keveta
Well ashely i loved your poem it kinda reminds me of me and my boyfriend so keep up the good work
Latrice
I love your poem so much. It really touched my heart. I am also a writer and I was really trying to find a way to tell a friend that Im in love with him. When I read your poem, I wanted to cry because what you love about your boyfriend is exactly what I love about my friend. Now I have an idea of what to say. Thank You.
Brandy
This poem is amazing! It really touched me, I can relate to it about how I feel about my boyfriend. I have been with him for 10 months now and I think we are meant to be together. I hope we stay like this forever. Thanks. keep up the good work!
Stephanie
This poem is so awesome!
reborn
I'm touched. and on the brink of tears. I can relate to this poem exactly and. it's nice to know that someone else in this world actually knows how I feel. partially, that is.
shawna
I thouhgt it was very sweet,it seems me and u share the same feelings about our bf's so yeah,well i loved it touched me very much!
Judy
I LOVED YOU POEM. YOU CHOSE THE RIGHT SET OF WORDS AND THE RIGHT WAY TO SAY THEM.
danielle
that was a great poem i likes that one can u send me more of your poems
katherine
This is an amazing poem. This make me think of the guy i have been with for nine months it doesent seem that long to me. but it really is. your poem is great. keep writing. much luv
Kathryn
I love this poem! It reminds me of my boyfriend every time I read it. Thank you, Ashley, for writing such a beautiful poem that has touched me and most likely hundreds of others!
vanessa
this poem was wonderful and it to also reminds me of the relationship i have with my boyfriend, keep on writing cause your poem touched me
rachel
it was pretty good for my boy friend me to married him im 15 years old
Stephanie
I was looking for love poems because valentines day was coming up, and I couldn't quite find one just for my criteria. Then I came across this poem and I fell in love with it! It was just what I was looking for!
jessica
this poem touched me because it reminds me of my boyfriend who is everything I've ever looked for and he means the world to me. I love you, andy!
catie
i really liked this poem it captured all of the aspects of another person that you really love.
kassy
i loved it! your right there is may things you can love about then but i'm not sure looks r all add next time about personallity
Gabriella
i love my friend so much but he doesnt hink of me that way and htta touched me how that poem said that but i love him so much cuz he is always there when i need him! well that was a wonderful poem
ramesh
This poem is very unique in its own way. it describes the exact feeling i have for my woman. It would be my pleasure if you could send in some great poems like what you wrote. I wish i could be talented like you
christina
. this is one of the most beautiful poems i´ve ever read : lovely,sweet and that talks about love, a kind of love that only someone who´s in love can feel, and this is what i feel about my boyfriend right now, it describes us so well, that i believe that the same way we are meant to be. this poems was meant for both of us.
stefanie
OMG this poem is the nest it SO relates to me and my boyfreind we have only been together 6 weeks and i love him so much! GREAT POEM on a scale form 1 to 10 10 being the highest i give it a 20 i love it!
yazmine
i really liked the poem it explains me exactly
Andrea
This poem reminds me of my current relationship with my boyfriend. When I read it, it put at smile on my face and made me remember all the good times that we had together and still are. Thank you for letting me read your poem and keep up the good work! -Andrea
laquaya
I think your poetry will touch many people around the world who are really searching for poetry too help mend a broken heart and how to express there love for someone they deeply and trully love,I think your poetry has that effect on people. Keep up the good work!
shell
the poem iz mad coz my awsome boyfriend has those exact qualitys he is soooooooooo amazing and i love him so much!
Katrina
I think it is so sweet, I wish I have the talent to do somethink like that it is soo good keep up the good work. xxxx
Morgan
i love this poem so much and it touched me because it reminds me of me and my boyfriend now!
Sandra
wow i loved that poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend.
Liana
YOU KEEP ON WRITING POEMS LIKE THIS. IT WILL GET YOU SOME WHERE IN LIFE. THIS POEM IS WONDERFUL I LOVE IT. IT TOUCHED MY HEART!
Monica
i LOVE THIS POEM IT MAKES ME THINK OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW MUCH I REALLY LOVE HIM! gOOD JOB!kEEP IT UP!
C
The day i first read one or your poems, i knew right then and there you had talent, this is an excellent poem and i can tell by it that you are a very caring and loving person, my best to you in your love life, you deserve it Ash.
Emmy
Yer good at poems Ashley
Veronica
I feel the same way about my boyfriend. we have only been together for 3 months but god knows as much as he does that I lvoe him so much and would never part from him. I would never be able to let him go not even if I wanted to. this poem is very inspiring to me and I think you did a very lovely job on the wording. Great job and keep up the good work. PS: You have my vote.
dede
this is very touching good job sweety
Amber
I like this poem because it says the truth about someones love. It says so much about me and my boyfriend and one day I hope that I can make this poem completely true between us.
kayla
i really enjoyed this poem i think you are very talented and very very good
Jeniece
I loved this poam. The first time i read this poam it made me think about my boyfriend, and i started to cry. Now it is on my binder and in my heart it will always remain!
Mariya
I love this poem Asheley. It's very quit. It touched my heart,because it's somethink that just happened to me,and the guy I ment a month ago,and I will send this poem to my boyfriend. Thanks
zhixian
its a lovely poem. it just realli describes what i feel for the particular some1 but i have no guts to tell her how i feel. so i lov this poem!
Jodi
This poem touched me so much. It made me think of my boyfriend and everything we have been through in the past 6-7 yrs. I give this on a 1-10 scale and 10 a the best I give is an 11!
Mitsumi
Wow, You really touched my heart. Wonderful!
Lena
This is a really ood poem! it is so touching! i love it! keep it up!
monika
I like that this poem uses simple words and it relates to me and my boyfriend.
Joey
that was one of the coolest poems i have ever read. wrighting poems is something i have never been able to do and i wish someone could teach me.
chris
this poem rocks i showed it to my girlfriend and she almost dropped dead
danielle
this was a grat poem it made me think of my baby7
Kelise
Gurl, your poems are so touching keep up the good work and maybe you and I will sitting next to each other as each have published a book
tmelia
ashley you are blessed with a great talent keep up the good work. the poem was beautiful and it relates to me and my boyfriend's relationship that we have. you really opened up my to show me that i need to love my boyfriend more. like i said keep up the good work
raelene
That's the best pome i have read in a long time
james
its a cool poem.
FELICIA
I LOVE TO READ POETRY BUT IM NOT VERY GOOD AT WRITING IT I TRY BUT IT DOESNT REALLY SOUND SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM AND HOW HE HAS CHANGED MY LIFE IN MANY WAYS!
Sandi/Seven
Hey this is a great poem. We can really relate to it. We have been together for over a year but have only actually been together a few times. But we still love eachother and your poem reflects our feelings. Thank you for being a great poet.
Angela
This poem is so good I loved it sooooooooooo much it reminds me of this guy i like but he cant go out wit me till his life is straightend out
Jenn
this poem is so cute it started to almost make me cry,it brang tear to my eye! but if i was to rate this from 1-10, 10 being the hightest i would rate it a *10* for sure!
kristine
i think this poem is great i mean i dnt have a bf but i have a reallie good friend dat makes me feel this way nd i no he lyks me but he afraid to ask me.
Jesikka
I think this poems is very true cause when couples our age get together these are the emotions we feel! Good Goin Girl !
amanda
I love your poem! it fits me and my boyfriend very well, we just started gonig out 2 weeks ago and we rae so in love we have hd so many good memories in the past we hvae been friends for 2 years it sis just the best poem ever
Katt
I really liked your poem. although i dont normally go for such poems. Your poem really portrays the relationship that me and my bf have right now. Its great.
Lity
what a wonderful poem!
Jenni
I think that this poem truley shows what it is ilike to be in love. I don't have the skills to go and write poetry but I do know tanlent and that is just what you have! Keep it up! :-)
Shelley
Great poem. I loved this poem. It moved me and made me think of my bf and I.
sarah
i love your poem, it's touching, i like this guy and he is such a sweet heart but i'm too shy to tell him lolz. :)
Amanda
i loved it, it really reminds me of the love that me and my boyfriend share, how did come up wit that kind of poem, do u have boyfriend? if u do he really has smart and talented girl.
Yvette
i loved ur poem it was the best i read in all i even showed all my friends and sent it to my bf
Nicole
I just wanted to say that your poem was good or really good good job
Britany
I think this poem expressing feelings that more people should show these days. I love it
dorothy
i love this poem
Saddie
I love your poem. It souinds like me and my boyfriend. Thanks
Erika
i Loved your poem i thought it was so cute
Jamie
This poem made me think of my g/f & that makes me really happy, i am glad that i found it
jessica
this poem reminded me of me and my man DeAndre
Diane
that storywas great
Jenna
i'm a poet myself. and your poem was very touching with its words
daniela
IT`S A VERY GOOD POEM AND IF THAT WAS ME I PROBLABLY WOULD HAVE WROTE THE SAME THING IT IS EXELLENT AND I`LL GIVE YOU A 10 THE BEST SCORE
sarah
this poem is great. it fits me and my boyfriend perfectly.
Elizabeth
That poem was the best yet! that really explains me and my boyfriend. i known him for over a year but we just started going out 2. 28. 03 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
jackie
it reminds me of mee and my boyfriend.
Quincy
I think that this poem is very nice and I really like this poem alot because I know this friend named jennfier and she really love this guy I know alot and she talks about him almost every day and they have a good relationship.
jessica
this poems reminds me alot of my boyfriend i have been with him for 3weeks and everything about him is perfect i love him so much! great job!
shawn
i luv this poem it made me feel so good this poem i swear was written fo my boyfriend its so great your a good writer keep up the good work thanks.
Laura
That was an amazing poem! I sent it to my boyfriend cause it's exactly how I feel about him. These were his exact words when he read it: "WOW. man laura you're so kind to me. now i feel like i can ace that math test" So you can see how much it meant! Thanks so much . keep writing, you have a great talent. God Bless!
heather
Ur peom is really good it reminds me of me and boyfriend. soon to be my husand we been datingsince my sophmore year of hight school and be been together for a long time. Keep on writing. you are very good
katie
this poem reminds me of my freind that has fallen in love with me and i am scared to love him back cuz i dont want to hurt him in any way or hurt our freindship
NIza
Hey ur poem is so emotional its strong and deep, this poem will always be in my best love poems list: only love can write these words keep it up.
Lydia
this poem was great!i can definately relate to everything you wrote!i enjoyed it very much!
lil
this poem's sooooooooooo hot
Angel
I can releat 2 this poem couse here u said it all what I would love 2 to say to my boyfriend Why I love so much! Thank u so much!
Lena
It is really cute. I enjoyed it
mandy
This poem truely fits me and my boyfriend 100%! It's very nice! Awesome job Ashley!
trey
very good
Angel
I lvoe this poem so much. It describes exactly how I feel about my boyfriend, even though we haven't been together for very long. He is the world to me, and this poem is perfect to describe that.
steph
this is a great poem. It is so amazing how you wrote what you felt. That poem sounds exactly like me and my boyfriend!
Mandy
i like your poem its great i collect poems but i cant write my own.
Sami
Ashley, your poem is the best thing in the world! Everyday When I am in school and I think of my boyfriend I always think of everything that I love about him and the first thing that I see is he's smile and he's laugh. you're poem made me think of how much I love him and want to spend all my time with him! Thanks Ashley!
Fabi
Your poem is amazing, the way you express y very lovely, this poem really describes the way i feel form my boyfriend. hope you keep on writing like this. good job! and good and deep words!
GINA
ITS A SHORT POEM BUT YET IT TELLS SO MUCH, I THINK ITS BEAUTIFUL
Joe
Your poem touched me in a way that I've never felt before. I love my girlfriend like she's a part of me, but sometimes I find it difficult to compose such words of emotions and love as you do. God has given you a beautiful talent and also the wisdom to use that gift to touch others. Thanks for everything, God bless you(even more!)
Krys
Hey I love it! I can totally relate!
kristine
one day an angel fell from the sky and i ran to were he fell and i met a charming male he was sweet he was kind and i"m so glad that he's mine your poem is thee coolest it reminded me of my boyfriend matt it a 10 all the way!
Kaella
Your poem was so great! I loved it! i can relate so much to this poem! Keep on writing, you have much talent, thank you u helped me alot!
Cynthia
Wow! This is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend! it's so nice to know that someone else knows how it feels to be in love!
Shatae
I feel exactly like that and all I can say is that I hope it never ends.
MARTHA
THAT WAS A NICE POEM AND I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL. I JUST GOT WITH THIS GUY AND I FEEL EXACTLY THE SAME. READING YOUR WORK MADE ME SMILE A LOT BECAUSE YOU FEEL JUST AS I DO! GREAT WORK AND GOOD JOB!
Jill
This poem is so lovely. It is exactly the way i feel about my boyfriend. It's great, I'm gonna use this, hehe :-P
Lindsey
hello, I read your poem and I thought it was wonderful. I am only 19, but I am getting married in April, and this poem describes the way I feel about my fiance' perfectly. Your words are beautiful and I hope to hear more. Thank you
Sarah
I love your poem. It reminds me so much of me and my bf. Im so glad I found a poem that can express how much I love him. Thanks Ashley!
Diego
Outstanding job with your poem. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Liz
i really enjoyed reading this poem. its how i feel about my love
Jennifer
I love this poem that you wrote Ashley.I have been with this guy for already a year and I love him so much,even though I have broken up with him thousands of times cause of the things I hear from people.I love him soo much and I cant evn remember how I was inmy life without him.I want to be with him forever till the end of time.
raymond
its a nice poem keep practice up
chelsea
i lov it ann it goes along with me and my boyfriend
Valereine
it is a poem sooo true.it tells of about the time i spent with my guy
Kleo
LOL love the ending! very true honey ;)
nicole
I really do like this poem. I just feel in love with a boy name Michael and I am so happy with him, I truly hope we stay together forever.
Leif
I love your poem, it reminds me of my love. :)
QueenX
I love this poem,because it use to describe the love I had for my ex-boyfriend :)
meghan
hey! this is a sweet poem! so kute! =)
mitch
i like the poem,i could relate on it. I print it and send it to my Honey.
Amanda
I love your Poem it's awsome , the words in the poem are what I want to say to my boyfriend . I really , really liked it .
dee
that is an awesome poem!! I luv it!! Great work!! :)
patricia
I love it
Michelle
it was awesome!!
jesse
i thought your poem was great
Tim
I loved this poem so much! Its like it was ment for me in so much ways!
Krystle
This is good girl! Great job...
cordea
that was a good poem i liked it alot... how do u come up wit poes like that sweet... bye cordea
Tyler's
This peom reminded me of the way I feel about my boyfriend and it touched my heart. I LOVE YOU 4-EVER TYLER!!!!!!
Phillip
Very close to what kind of poem I'm looking for(it's great by the way, I can't write poems at all). I would enjoy reading anything else you've written.
scott
:-)
partisan
The best thing I could say about the peom this that it could touch the very depth of the heart for all people who are in love. Because it did me so I sholud know.
stephen
loved your poem i am going to send it to a girl i like and see what happens
gino
this poem is great and made me think alot about me and my girlfriend (just wanted to say that)
cassandra
i really like this poem. keep up the good wook!
rachael
wow this is a really great poem its sooo sweet its esacly how i feel about my boyfriend
alyssa
I love this poem.it describes my boyfriend so much and how much i really do love him! Thanks for writting it!
Taleah
I just love this poem and your other poem loving you loving me. So many poems are about heartache but what about those of us who are happy in love. I think Ashley has a wonderful way with words and I understand completely how she feels.
Frank
This is a very good poem. I was looking for the perfect poem for my girlfriend and I finally found this one and it was perfect. Thank you very much.
amber
verynice
Javier
I really like this poem and I feel that it would be very helpful for me.

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