About the Poem
This poem was written about a girl that I asked to go with me to the prom, she always gets the guys that end up hurting her, and I never would. Turns out she lied to me
Maria |
| by Cantera |
| lie to me, never tell me the truth, it hurts to see it this way, kiss me gently, never caress my fears, it is hard to dream it this way, love me so much, forget my past, it is hard to start over in vain, come with me, to my new life, it is stupid to pretend that I am right, wipe your tears, human nature makes pain, love me until the end, Maria, Oh girl, its funny how, when our story ends, it starts over again |
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26 Visitor Comments
Raquel
wow. hope all guyz are like you.
maria
i like this poem because it kind of reflex what me and my boyfriend went through. i also like it because it has my name in it.
Vanessa
the poem was great
maria
it is all true and not just for that person i think that it all starts agian for everybody that loved someone in their life.
marisela
Its a very good love poem! i enjoy to see teenagers in love what past? baby if it was me the one you wrote yhat poem to i'd forgive you and you past over and over again!
Julia
how did she lie to u and i wish guys were like u and my b/f hes the same way like u he cares about me and he don't wont me to get hurt he would do anything to pertact me
kaneica
i like it, its not 2 deep, yet not 2plain its just basic and well written thats why i like it
Maria
I liked this poem because it made me feel as if my ex was writing this for me. As if it were his own words. It caught my attention even more because it had my name.
Meaghan
I've been in a similar situation. Your poem hits close to home.
Maria
I like this poem because my name is maria and it is written as if it was written about me
Maria
wow. i luv ur poem even tho my name is also maria. i like the way u put everything 2gether. It's funny because one of my ex's did something like dis. u have agreat talent!y can't guys be like u or at least similar to u!
red
iam glad i read your poem iam going throw this right now. and u help me get throe this lonley path
maria
that is a great poem
Maria
i really liked this poem i coudl relate to it because to begin with my name is maria and what he said was that this grl maria he likes always ends up liking or gettin the guys that hurt her . and thats somewhat true with me but i really liked the poem =)
person
oh how sweet this is
babydoll
hey your poem was so great. i loved how you wrote it, your technique was very effective. keep writing!
Brittany
I really like this poem i wish i lot of guys was like u.
Stephanie
That is a very wonderful poem, you got talent and keep writing.
sienny
the poem is so sad, it's really touching my heart. i like it so much!
Elliott
hey dude, i asked out a girl named Maria at school, And nearly 10 years later we got together, I love her more each day and because of your poem im gona write 1 for my maria, thanks dude
Mark
Dawg, I loved the poem! I asked a girl named Maria to the winter ball, and she was just like your Maria! STrange huh? We ended up goin out and ended up doin the same thing you have described in your poem. Keep writing!
kayla
WOW THIS POEM WAS REALLY GOOD!HEY IT WILL SOON GET BETTER!IM GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING BUT I KNOW THAT SOME WAY I WILL GET THROUGH IT!
ERica
This was a great poem it was actually about a guy that got his heart broken and I think that is wonderful!
katy
wow..this poem leave me speechless..its great
Candice
i liked the poem! YAY!
Alicia
I luff your poem! it is so sad!
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