About the Poem

I have found poetry to be a place for self- expression and emotional release. I wrote this poem on a rainy afternoon, the very day after seeing the love on my life - for the last time.

This poem is about the very meaning of finding love, only to lose it.

A Soul Saved, A Heart Broke

by Morgan Le Fay

this juliet was bleeding
her soul's bright fire dim
in a life of sorrows
it was sink or swim

on the shore she saw him
a romeo, prince of the night
against all odds she reached out
and turned from garish light

then he pulled her from the tide
saved the dying maid
she afraid to love him
and yet by her side he stayed

with blind faith she followed
into his shadow she fell
seduced by black and velvet
drunk of passion's spell

a day spent long in bliss
a moment meant so much
and no more was this juliet
starved from love's sweet touch

then the darkness overcame
in silence he left her there
never saw her tears fall
or heard her heartstrings tear

left alone in pain
once again she did bleed
shackled by other's power
longing to be freed

once again, yet time was short
in twisted fate they met
in shaded seconds spent together
yet no where did they get

again ripped apart by time
and distance seals the fate
now all this juilet feels
is pain, despair, and hate

she cries without a tear shed
she lives without a soul
she curses the one she loves now
for everything he stole

'I love you' she did long to hear
but these were words he never said
and now this juliet lays weeping
and wishes she were dead

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176 Visitor Comments

daniella

i think that this is a very heart felt poem!:)

amanda

oh my god how is this what i feel and breathe each and everyday. its weird and seriously sad cause my heart sinks fast inside.

JEN

awesome. i kno the feeling and unfortunately i think at some point in time we all will. but take it day by day and it'll work out. i promise =)

Courtney

this was an excellent poem this really inspired me for my romeo and juliet homework thanks to this author

Courtney

This poem is truely beautiful i read it once along time ago but it didn't hit me like it did this time you are a beautiful writer and this is what poems should be like thank you for sharing such beautiful work!

sham

This poeam is so touching

sophie

Totally brill i loved every word. differnt from others on the site rele felt your pain. very moving

R.J.

Your Poem Was AMAZING I Loved The Way It Flowed

manny

thats a very said poem i wish it neva happens to me but one cannot tell fate wa it should be one should live life to its fullest and let fate be fate i lvoe my girl and this is a message to me ill never do this to her because my love for her is to strong she will always be my light and i will be her love she is my Juliet and I her Romeo exept we will not die a tragic death the day we die will be the day our love has died

Lauren

I liek this poem a lot. I've been there and actually am there so I know exactly the feeling.

Zion

100% Great, and true goodluck to you.

Kelly

the most amazing poem I ahve ever read . thta is exactly how I felt about this one guy but I know we would never be together again and now he has left for good and I know I will never see him again.

This poem really touched me. It is how I felt when I started to date this one boy that I really liked. And then he broke up with me. Guys can be such jerks sometimes. Kudos Morgan, kudos.

exceptionally beautiful

this poem stole my breath. its a beautiful poem that describes how unlucky many females and yet maels also realte to the harsh reality of pain. i really admire this poem. good work

AMY

OMG THIS POEM WAS HOT IT REALLY TOUCHED ME I DUNNO WHY BUT IT SPOKE OUT TO ME LIKE NO OTHER

Amanda

This poem is so amazing i loved it no lie , you have a special gift and talent I am a poet too and i soon will be publishing a book ionce again amazing job five stars***** and 2 thumbs up!

zaina

the poem has enlighened me to the fact that other peoples hearts are broken too, not only mine, i have not ever being able to say or write out how my heart break feel but the author wrote it so beautifully that i some how now can tell how i feel, i give the poem the vote 10 rating on 10 am touched

brittni

this poem is very touching b/c it shows that guys dont always think and neither do us girls. britt

hannah

beautiful

Cortney

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Alexandra

you are by far the best writer I have yet to read on this website, you have a very honest appeal, and almost a pentameter to your writing. It's very descriptive too! I love it!

Chelsea

omg, that is the best quote ive ever read. i write alot, and i am so touched but the way this poem flows. amazing. ! two thumbs up, 5 stars, A++. good job. peace&hearts.

Kyle

It was really descriptive. I like poetry that tells of true feelings. This is very much like something I recently went through.

chrissy

i loved this poem! it is kind of like me and my guy. i love him, he said he'd never leave. but then he did. and now he's back but theres still that sinking feeling that he will leave again. this poem really touched me! i thought it was awesome!

teresa

that poem really touched my heart. as a poet, dont ever give up on your talent. that was my mistake. always spill your heart out in words, cause you never know, one day someone might not be there to listen!

Allison

this pome was asome i loved it!

Jennie

wow

NANCY

WOW WOW AND WOW!UR A GREAT POEM WRITER,U SAY EVERY THING I WANT TO EXPRESS BUT I CAN'T IN MY OWN WORDS,UR SO TALENTED I HOPE U KEEP WRITING LIKE U DO BECAUSE IT'S SO WORTH IT!GREAT JOB!^_^

Tina

I LOVE THIS POEM LOL

shellie

i like yor poem alot and want to read more so keep up the good work

jalisa

i lovd your poem so much that it made me cry. knowing dat things like dat r true b-cuz im going thru dat wit my baby rite now

Erica

This is such a good poem. it has so much depth and meaning. I envy your ability to write with such quality. you have truly been given a gift. great job! ~Erica~

sabah

i think it unique version of roemo and jueliet different cool nice dont get me wrong not all dat

Ramona

this was a great poem!continue writing them, they are wonderful and can make changes in people's lives one day.

Natasha

I think you poem is very good. I acan understand your feeling and one thing i would like so say some people can get their love not everyone. Any way you are best poet bye

Sakura

Umm. It was prety good M (. )

Jacob

Wonderfull, you capture a moment indubidibly. An excelent triumph!

Baby Boo

Wow! I absolutely loved your poem! It was amazing and truely put into words how I feel

BOB

ENJOYED THIS EVERY MUCH THANKS

jess

I've never been through anything quite like that. but i cannot tell you just how emotional your peom made me feel. I felt every single emotion you put into it. you deserved to have this poem published. it's brilliant!

brittany

i htink ur poem rocks. i have read alot from this site and so far urs is right up there with the best keep it up!

Tirana

i think that your pomes is verey good i like reading it so keep writing ok and good luck bye bye bye bye i give you a 100%

elaine

This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read in my life. It's harsh and unforgiving, like the truth, and that's why i'm stabbed with such great pain as I read. This writer has a great gift of passing her feelings on to the reader and that's what makes a poet great.

Tiana

That was really good, I think it was one of the best love poems I've read so far on this website.

Bree

awsome! the best poem i have ever read so far!

adrienne

AMAZING! (enough said)

Kiki

WOW! that was AWESOME! it was like profesional but i understood and can relate. it is beautifull! keep it up because u have an great talent!

Jenni

Dear Morgan, I loved your poem. It reminds me of when I gave my boyfriend a second chance, and he broke my heart twice! You must have been born with your creative writing skills, based on how good your poem was! I wish you the best of luck! ~Jenni~

rachel

everything this poet describes, i have been through with my first love. i completely understand all the feelings and emotions. it's like this poem were written for me. it's wonderful.

Lyndsay

Hey that wuz an awesome poem! u have got a talent that i wish i had! well keep the gr8 poems commin!

carly

i love this poem it reminds me of me it is a good poem #1 in my book

Jessica

This is a awesome pome. I have felt this way before too. Once again awesome pome.

amy

BRILLIANT! is the only word for this poem i have been searching for something like this far days now and finally i found keep writing the poems hunni!

Emilee

i love this poem because i felt like it was talking to me. i really enjoyed reading it and i think you should continue doing this. i wish i could write like you because it sounds like what you write comes from your heart and i'm not very good at writing or saying how i feel. So you should definetly keep doing this kind of stuff because you are really good at it.

Sammii Lynn

this poem was simply AmAzInG! i'm showing it to everyone i know!

nicolette

This poem caught my attention just by the title at first but then the words really got to me. It was a beauiful poem

tara

this poem is soo sad

DANIKKA

WOW, THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY.

natalie

This poem hit me so hard and made such an impact on me. Thank you so much to the author for sharing such a powerful message and telling such a heartbreaking story. Beautifully written and inspired.

joey

hey girl that was a good poem i loved it i hope nothin hsppend to u or u got hurt in any way juss wanted to let u know your really good at writin poems bye

gina

WOW. this is my first time coming to this site, but i have to say. that your writing has left a shadow of fien in my heart lol. meanin that you left me wanting more. gurl u go on wit ya bad self! that poem was HOTT~! keep up your touching poetry.

Chantel

i used to feel like thz until i met my romeo and he made the sun shine again. he calmed my waters.

Maria

this poe is soo good!

crissy

thats how i feel right now. i spent my nights thinking of him and the way he makes me feel when im around him but its not the sme for he has some one else and in our eyes we feel it but in our minds we know it could never be. your poem is great continue writing

Shanna

Hey one word for your poem. WOW! that i think is the best poem to express for what i feel now i cant get over my last boyfriend and your poem truley rocks! I love it! GoOd JoB

red

I thought this poem was great and i understand this alot because this is the way i feel

jade

i thought this poem was highly touching, it tugged at my heart strings that i never knew i had, it has truly inspired me i can now live a happy life knowing others share my pain of love.

Joseph

That was rely beautiful, loved the rhyime scheme, and it realy toched me, cuz i can relate with my ex gf she was like your romeo

matthew

thanks it expresses a great deal of emotion and has helped me thank you -x-

Caleb

I loved this poem and I love this website

kel

this is such a good poem. i love the the use of emotional writing in this one. i'm sorry for ur loss

Apryl*Dawn

I loved every single word. It feels as though i could've written it,because of how much it describes me & past experiences. It touched me, & it was magical. THANX 4 writtin' it,now i'm sendin' this 1 2 tha X!

Ashley

I really like this peom because I can really truly relate to what the poet is saying and feeling

Prescilia

It was just beautiful, and you could relate to the pain of the this juliet. i mean i loved the flow of the poem, i kept reading it out loud. wow you have talent. it's beautiful don't ever stop writing.

Kina

That was so deep. I really liked it, your very talented at writing. It was so beautiful.

Maria

OMG when i read this poem it left something in my heart, im really sorry bout what happened but i really do wish that u and that person would one day be together 4ever

lucia

this poem is awesome,it was so touching. ur so talented. keep writing.

Julie

This pome is really good. I have fealt that way to, but could never put it in to words.

Amanda

I just wanted to say that I thought your poem was awsome! You are a very talented poet! I also wanted to say that your poem touched me deeply for two reasons. your use of romeo and juliet. because that play/book had alot of influence on me. well thats what gave me the inspiration to write poems myself. And the feelings and words you use. the description of the way juliet felt in your poem is excatly the way I felt when my first love left me after 2 years. Now I am very much in love with the man that I am married to and wouldnt trade him for the other guy for anything but your first love will always be there in your past because if it wasnt for him/her you wouldnt know love. even if its only one sided love. Great job once again. and good luck ! amanda*

monique

that was the best poem i have ever read. and i'm not exadurating!that was so beautiful it's unreal. wow . there is not enough things to say about this poem . it is so beautiful. your an amazing writer! keep writing and you will go far. you have an amazing talent and don't waist it. that is all i can come up with at this point in time. i just wanted to let you know that.

nicole

i loved it because it shows alot of things about life while your in love

Pauline

i really liked this poem it went deep gurl you got talent i liked this poem alot

Maria

I love this poem. It says everything that I felt about my exboyfriend. Everytime that I went back to him he broke my heart. I want to thank you for writing this poem it makes me feel not so alone.

Susana

I absolutely love this poem!It brought back memories of when me and my boyfriend broke up and what happened didn't hit me until I turned around and realized he would'nt be there anymore. Thanks for writing such a great poem.

kim

YO,I loved your poem. It was so deep . Thats some soulful writing!

simone

this is a rele touching poem it rele got to me well dne to the writter i wil b sre to tel my frnds n famly bout dis webste well dun guys x x x x x

Casie

This poem is really good. In school I'm the one who submits poetry to the school mag. And, I have to say this one is good. it is the only one in two years that has left me speechless.

Amanda

This poem was great! When I was reading it I felt as if I knew exactly how you felt. Very deep! Post more. Id love to see them.

lynsey

i usually never vote. but i really liked this poem! its deep

April

I love this poem. it touched me deeply. it feel the same way about what me and my ex-bf went through.

helen

wow!,all i can say is ur poem truly touched me,it explained emotions that i cud not find the words to express x

Natalie

I love this poem. it describes me so! Because my love dumped me and left me feelin like she did and then we went back out and he did the same thing!

Kristina

Your poem is awesome!

Amy

That is a seriuosly amazin poem. Ithaught it was very powerfull.

Lizzie

I was reading this poem and really got into it, visualizing Romeo and juliet as i read on. I really like this poem its really touching, and very well written. I give props to the writter. :)

Paige

The poem was alsome I loved it, its like a mature poem and it really makes since i loved it i printed it and made all my frieds read it

amber

i really love this poem it almost brings tears to my eyes good work

Ashley

This is a really wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it. It meant something to me.

ashley

I love your poem it touched me truly

Mandie

I loved the poem. It made me think about my boyfriend and what is going on with us. And it help me think how to tell him that it is over.

Whitney

I really enjoyed your poem and it touched me. It was a reall eye opener and made me realize what i am going through right now. I finally found the love of my life and just as things started to unfold and work out i am torn away from my happyness. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more of your work

aqueelah

very nice work.

Brittani

This is a rally great poem. It made me think of every mtime my boyfriend walks out the door, how much i wish he could or would stay. So thanks for the little moment that i was in another world away from mine and his parents

Shelley

i love this peom so im voting gor it

Shelley

This is no kiddie poem,its mature and deep and the best one on this website i feel that a lot of people could relate to this if they can truely get what the author's trying to say. This one's the best!

Juliet

this poem was sooo good. it made me want to cry. it has so much emotion to it. Like i've been through it all and bac again.

Erin

I found this poem almost two years ago, in 2001, when a relationship I almost had with a guy I really loved came to an end. And now, after a relationship I almost had with the same guy ended again, I find this poem again. You've excellently captured the way I feel, and I thank you for writing this, because I feel less alone. Excellent work.

rissa

i really liked this poem it sooo reminded me of me when i had broken up with the boy who i thought i did love. excellent poem. keep up the good work

Dusty

I think that this poem is really good. I also think that when it is read it truely convays the feelings of the author.

Amanda

your poem was awesome. It awed me when I read it.

Rocio

Wow! that poem was sooooo good. You expresed exactly what i feel. That is what I wish I can do too, but I have to move on.

Rhian

i loved ur poem. I can really realte 2 u cos it describes exactly how i feel 2. your an awesome writer!

my unrequited crush is in the hospital, i fear he will not be with us much longer. i related to u'r poem tonite. i think it was divinely written just for me. Thank u from the deepest of my heart.

angel

This poem is amazing, probebly one of the best poems i have ever read! it also describes what i feel perfectly. Keep writting u have amazing talent!

Luxie

I thought this poem was fantastic! There are deep feelings displayed when you read this poem and you can see it was written with true emotion. Having gone through similar feelings once it is easy for me to idenify and sympathise with the poet.

Aiden

I love this poem! Its like my favorite, Thanks

just

this is the best poem in this site

daisy

I love this poem. I loved the way you used romeo and juliet. I give you a perfect 10 for this poem.

Tasha

I loved your poem as I read it, it gave me chills just to think that sonething like that happened. But I really liked the poem. Best Wishes

Laudie

Oh my gosh, what a beautiful poem! I was in tears by the end of the poem, it was so touching. It feels like all to often, thoses who experiance TRUE love must also experiance losing it; and this without a doubt is the worst pain a person can be subjected to. Your peom captured the torture of heartbreak so beautifly. Keep writing and thanks for understanding!

Justi

very good you put alot of your thoughts in there how do you do it i wish i had as much talent as you did i give you a 11/10

frogy

wow! out of all that i've read, that one was deep, keep it up.

JAMAR

THIS WAS AN REALLY GOO POEM. YOU NO SOMETIMES PEOPLE SEEM TO TAKE LOVE FOR GRANTED. I SEE WHERE YOU ARE COMINR FROM WITH THIS POEM

tonea

this poem reminds me of my best friend. it is a very touching poem! just keep up the good work Morgan

britt

one word. beautiful. keep on writing

Lysha

I think this poem is great. I was touched really. Keep your head up!

Crystal

That poem was extremely sad but you told thue truth. Keep writing and never give up

Josie

this is such a good poem .. romeo and julite was a velli good idea . my englishy teacher wud love to hear this .. lol ..

Carla

A woderfully written poem expressing millions of peoples feelings. I was touched in a way I never have been before and thank you for sharing this beautful poem.

Holly

I think this poem was Ecxellent. It was very deep and i could really fell how the writer felt very emotinal and deep.

Latoya

i love this poem it have things to do with my love life

wow. u have no idea how awesome this poem is. job well done!

Arin

Morgan Lee Fay, I am very surprised that this poem came from your mouth, it is very touching and heartbreaking, I really hope this guy comes back for you, you really desirve him.

Amber

That was REALLY good!! Seriously, I love it, it explains so much! Keep writing!

jessica

great poem.it made me cry..alot

Kelly

One of the most beautiful poems I have ever heard, very talented writer, the poem touched my heart..I love it.

Odessa

This poem related 100% to what happened to me.It was great to read and know that someone else feels the same way. Morgan, your use of language is beautiful, and you have an amazing talent to use. Well done.

R.J.

this is a realy great poem.it's really deep,to tell you the truth i can relate.

Kim

I just lost my first love, my husband to suicide. This poem took me way back...THANKS! It was truly very touching.

Amanda

This was a very intense and sad poem. But it is also very good.

Acid

Your poem is marvelous to read. I feel your pain to, because my love ended before it started.

Jennifer

this poem was very good! kepp up the good work and congradulations!

Sofi

i love this poem and it really express my feeling right now. Im just exactly like the Juliet in your poem.

kacie

this poem was very dramatic and touching!it was like a fairytale ending

Amber

this poem was really nice it made my eyes water. you do really great work!

Danielle

this is such a wonderful poem.I cried right after I read it..u r truelly a great poet!

Mary

This poem is unbelievably beautiful. It totally puts into well described words about how I feel about a guy that I just met. You have great talent!

Terri

I think this poem is really awesome you have and amazing talent for writing. whatever motivates you keep doing it unless it is to painful to think about.

April

this poem was great. Morgan le fay, ur a great poet. ur poem really touched me. buhbye

letti

this was a very powerful poem it touched my heart it kinda relates to the way i feel sometimes very good though

MastaJ

no words can truely honor this magnificent piece..it is in a league of its own

Heather

wow, you're a beautiful poet, this brought tears to my eyes, it was as though I was somehow feeling your pain, just remember you'll fnd your Romeo one day

Rachel

Wow, as a poet myself I can tell that really came from the heart.

jessica

Just beautiful! Breath-taking, and VERY well-written.

KAREN

Morgan, I too write poetry and find it a way to express your true inner most feelings. I also know how you felt in this relationship. I have been there many times. I think that you have an awesome talent, and God has truly blessed you with that talent. From one poet to another, never give up on dreams, and never turn from your highest hopes, be all that you can be, and keep your head high! I truly enjoyed this poem, and would love to read more of them

jess

i really likd it its not every day you get stories oout of it.

colleen

I really liked this poem...I liked EVERYTHING about it...you have a talent to write really nice poems...well..that's about all..thanks for sharing it...

BRITTANY

I REALLY LOVE POEMS WITH ALOT OF PASSION AND FEEL AND THIS REALLY IS A GREAR EXAMPLE OF THAT!!

Rachel

I know exactly how that feels. You're very gifted with painting pictures to touch souls. I've recently had some of my work published, and i should hope you would do the same. Remember "Never become someone's slogan because you are poetry."

Brandi

You did a really good job with this poem. I don't know what it was exactally that I like but I thought it was great.

John

Absolutely Beautiful! I'm jealous I didn't write this myself! :) But seriously though, this poem is beautiful - sad but beautiful.

Crystal

This poem drew me in and I felt as though I were Juliet. It has so much emotion and power.

Linda

It touched my heart and I wanted to cry...

paul

wow!!!!that left me in ah and very speechless.that was by far the best poem i've read in a long time.very sad and gave me a whole new meanig of the word love.i like that poem so much that words can not express how i feel.thanks for giving me a moment that i can appreciate.

ARA

I believe that love is precious, unique, and sometimes overwhelming. I can't help but realize that I am extremely fortunate to be in love and recieve the same kind of love in return. Your peom has helped me to realize that.. It's wierd how even if things are so obvious people never see them.. THANK-YOU....

layla

This almost made me cry when i read it. . . it sounds so real. . . the person who wrote this definitely has a pure heart and soul.

Lita

This is a fabulously written poem!

Mel

Very well written poem.

derek

this poem is a really good one and it touched my heart.

Amanda

i am also a poet...this poem touched me in ways unknown. This is a beautiful poem that deservs a world of gratitude!!

emma

i just want to say your poem was straight from the heart.it was so beautiful to read.almost brought tears to my eyes.hope u find love again.u deserve too. luv emma(17)

Angelglitterdust

absolutely incredible-touching-heartbreaking!

Mellissa

A wonderful poem. Very unique. Beautifully written.

Ariel

This poem is really amazing, i identified with it and you are so talented. I love it!

Lisa

This poem was beautifully written and I loved it. I think Shakespeare is great and the poem is kind of like how I feel right now.

Marisa

This poem is very good because it is not juvenile like most of the poems i have read here. It is very well written.

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