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I wrote this poem when I thought I was in love with two guys, and I didn't know which one to choose. But now both of them are gone, and I still care deeply about them.

What Should I Do?

What should I do,
When I love two?

When I am with one, for the other I long,
I can't find a place for my heart to belong.

You promised that you would always stay,
But now you have gone away.

Your love to me was as clear as a bell,
You promised that I'd always be your Angel.

We used to love each other so very much,
but you were blinded by another girl's touch.

But now I have found someone new,
And he loves me like you used to do.

And now you say I am right for you,
but with only half my heart do I love you.

Now I must choose between both of you,
I am so confused, I don't know what to do.

What should I do,
When I love two?
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112 Visitor Comments

ashley
this poem really explains what im going through right now thanks for the inspiration and letting me know that im not the only one.
Beeankha
I have been in the same situation and it sucks. Its really hard to choose between to people you think you love. I love your because it so true and you showed the feeling in the poem. Beeankha
ashley
i think i like this poem so much cause i used to be in the same situation so i can relate to it.
Ingrid
this poem is cool i really like it cause i do love 2 and i dont know what to do
Melissa
omg. i am going through the exact thing right now. i feel so confused and don't know what to do. don't you?
jaquetta
I vote for this peom cuz i was in a position like that not so long ago but i did for all of us i left both of them alone.
destini
i loved it it was so true for me.
rodeo
I have two guys that I really like and I cant decide what one I want. I liked your poem it really did help alot. keep on writing. ~cowgirl~
GryLotus
amazing. everything I felt wrapped up in one single poem.
kealiela
this poem is AWESOME
Sparkie
This was a very good poem and i love it because i am goin through the same exact thing
Afrika
i like it alot.
charles
Uko Juu! This is swahili literaly meaning you are on top! Was there once, kinda lost both too! I love your poem
tasha
i like this poem it is the truth cause my ex boyfriend left me for this girl this bust down and that had hurt me so much so can u pray for me and him but i love this i have to read it again yeah
kc
well you see that has happened to me. my boyfriend is in the army he has gone away. i am stuck between two right now. one that is here and is super sweet but also the one i have been with for a year. and i am talking about marraige. i have decided tho not to talk to the one here i love my boyfriend. its sooo hard tho. gash i really reallly like this one tho. it explains so much.
Cameria
Hi! I write poems too! Great poem. Can't wait to see what you will write about next.
Tronda
I hear what u sayin I really liked that poem because I can relate myself to that cuz me I'm in love with these two boys and they both treat me right and they just make me feel good inside but I dont know which one to pick one of em I had went with when I was like in the 8th grade after the 8th grade he had left and lived in dallas for a while well while he was living in dallas I fell in love with this other boy and we started going out after about a year the other guy calls me up and says that he's comin down here in waco to stay and that he misses me and wants to be with me he also told me that i was his first love so I fell back in love with him but I didn't love him as much as i love the one that i go with. but i still wanna be with him but I had made up my mind and I had ended up telling the boy that been gone for a while that I dont feel the connection that we used to have cause u been gone away for so long. He was heartbroken at the end but he knew what was up. I really dont like to break boys heart but it's a part of life
jovvonna
this poem really explains me and my ex and my new boy jesus i love him so much but yet i still have feelings for my ex eddy this poem made me sad at first but it made me realize the love i have for my ex will always be there just not like i feel for my boy now
nicollette
hey i likes this poem alot it's a poem that is kinda wut my situation is about rite now. but just keep the work its good!nikki
sanja
i like this because it explains how i am feeling right now i'm in love with 2 and i dont know what to do. Love it good job
Wynema
I loved this poem. I am now in this exact same situation. So it really helped to know I am not alone
stephanie
It happen to me to. AND their still gone and it suck really bad.
brittni
its a great poem it tells whats goin on inside alot of our heads
Tweety
hey ur poem iz totally awesome i write poems but i dont post them. u will definatley b da next Maya Angelo
Carrie
i would just like to say tat this is so true but i really feel there is really only one true love in ur life so ull know who to choose
Ash
this is a really nice poem. it relates to my life a lot. nice work
Lauren
this was the best i have heard or seen u get 100%
Monica
i love this poem ,it explain the exact way how i feel right now. Thanks for writing this!
leola
it is a great poem if its true stay wiv the one your wiv not the first if he treated you rite you wouldnt of gone lookin for someone eles ps keep your eyes open you will find the perfect partner one day
presy
wow i went through the same thing and i lost both of them it really hurts cuz one really cared for me more.
Gabriella
OMG, this poem really hits home! i am going thru the same thing. it sucks, but now i know that im not alone. awesome poem!
Amanda
i like this vote because i am in love with two and i dont know which to choose. one sees me at school everyday and the other at home, down the road from me.
desiree
this poem is true and spoken as a true teen gurl who is stuck 2 choose like me once!
Shaundra
I really like this poem its kind of the same as me but I only like one.
wendy
i know how you feel because i was in the same situation but now i found someone who really cares about me.
Devil0415
It's really a touching & sweet poem. Talking about my feeling. i really don't know what should i do now! Don't know which one i have to choose.
brittany
you should give the one you havent gave a chance to give a chance to him not the one you already gave a chance to cause he can go to hell.
Jordan
I really liked this poem I know exactly what you are going through I have been through that once and I just followed my heart and I went with the one that I loved so much!This poem could REALLY get to someone when they are stuck in the same situation. I know it hurts sometimes letting go of the one you think is right but you really have to go with the one that knows how to treat a girl.
geraldine
that poem was gooooooooooooooooooooooood I love it
Sarah-jane
WOW! this is exactly how i feel. it makes me feel better to know i'm not the only one who loves 2 people at the one time. Keep writin!
Faith
Wow, What a fantastic Poem. Great Structure and Emotion. 10 out of 10!
Jessica
i think it was good and stuff like i was in that situation before i had to go to compition in Arizona and stuff like that and i think what this person who wrote it should do which is my point of view in what i did is who did u do more with? who can u trust more? who can make you feel more special when ur with them? Like just ask ur self all of the real important questions and stuff and then u'll figure out what u should do.
Nika
i very much understand where you're coming from because i'm in that same situation but im dealing with as much as i can before i finally break down
Kymberli
That was so "tight" that is exactly how it goes 95% of the time.
Latasha
this poem touch me by my heart
heaven
your poem i sso amazing i write poetry to but i dont post it on the internet i think you should keep on writing you will grt noticed by some one someday who will love your work heaven
Niki
I SO RELATE TO THIS POEM ESPECALLY HERE LATELY CHOOSING BETWEEN MY EX AND ANOTHER GUY I REALLY LIKE. BUT WHEN U GOT ON THAT IS ASKING U TO MARRY HIM BUT U KNOW YALL ARE TOO YOUNG ITS HARD TO CHOOSE LOL
Jodi
Wow your poem is amazing it says everything that i am feeling right now
sarah
this was a great poem i love it. it kinda reminds me and my past experiences i might be a teen but i did love somone and still do love them they are very speacial to me and this poem reminded me of him and another guy that i liked at the same time. but my love for one guy overpowered my crush for the other
jessica
I CAN RELATE SO BAD I FELLL THE SAME EXCAT WAY ABOUT THIS ONE GUY BUT ME N MUH BOYFRIEND HAVE BEEN TIGETHER FOR 1 YEAR BUT HE TREATS ME HORROBLE N I FINALLY FOUND SOME1 WHO LUVS ME N WANTS ME SO BAD BUT I AM SO CONFUSED
arabella
it was great i loved it i could feel the amotion through your words and how it hurt u cuz u didn't kno who to pick cuz u were in love with two guys.
erica
I love this poem. But i guess it's really just cause I feel this way.
mandy
this poem fits me perfect
Brittany
I liked this poem it was very touching.
Lisa
i love this poem beacause im going through the same thing expect im going with one and i love another. and i don't know what to do
Stormy
i really really liked this poem i can truly relate and i am going through the same exact thing ! THANX 4 THE INSPIRATION
kali
UMM. THE WORDS THAT ARE SPOKEN ABOUT UR POEM ARE "OH MY GOD". MY WORDS ARE NOT EXPRESSED LIKE THAT. YOU POEM HAS TOUCHED ME AND OTHERS. YOU SHOULD BE PROUND. THE FIRST COOUPLE LINES RELATE TO ME, BUT THE POEM STARTS TO CONFUSED ME, WHEN YOU ARE TALKIN ABOUT THIS LOVE. YOU EXPRESSED URSELF WITH INDIVIDUAL POWER, AND I GIVE YOU 2 THUMBS UP. KALI
stephanie
it poem was AMAZING! I LOVED IT
Cheli
that poem is true life FLAT
silla
i would just llike to say that this poem is so true when it comes down to it you really just dont know what to do. Its hard to decide
Nicole
I think your poem clearly states how most teenage girls feel in the opint and time in their life. You cleverly illustrate how the boy feels two. I would rate this poem a 8 out of 10.
Sheena
the poem is realistic and i am amaze on how the author expresses the "thing".
emily
Greatttttttttttt.
Devona
Girl i am going through the same thing with these two boys and it's hard because i still have feelings for one but i long to be with the other. Good poem! i really enjoyed it!
Melinda
I think your poem is really cute because im going through the same thing right now but not with two guys but with three. Me and my ex bf broke up when he moved to florida for a job over the summer but i love him with all my heart than his best friend witch is my best friend now told me how he felt aboutme and everything else than i broke his heart andstarted dating someone else. Im so confused that all i want to do is sit around and cry because im only 17 years old and dont know what to do, but i enjoyed your poem.
Stuart
This is the same for me i lv this poem soph and zoe im sowi i cant b bth urs
Mashelle
I luvd this poem. I had the same problem b4. U took the words right out of my mouth. AWESOME!
michael
that poem really toch me because bi felt like that once
holly
i like that poem i feel the same way and i need to no what to do mabe u can write antoter one help me out
britani
this was a very sweet poem, it showed alot of emotin . I can really relate to what she is going through!
Jessica
It's very touching.
kaitlyn
i loved ur poem. it really got me thinking about things. it really realtes 2 the one im in love with. hes confused between two. =/. well just keep up the good work!
tameka
Hey i wounld like to remend you on this poem. I actually feel that poem to the bottom of my heart. This peom has expressed my infuation about one of my mates. I love one and the other one is almost there. Thanks! -Tameka
vivian
omg i think this poem is so gr8. u really have some talent for poetry. i like it a lot. write more
Cathy
I like this poem because it kind of riminds me of myself because i do have that problem
Nicole
I love your poem. I really can relate to your poem because I been through the exact situaton.
Leila
I REALLY THOUGHT THIS POEM MADE SENSE. AND I FEEL LIKE IT HAS A CONNECTION WITH ME. I HAVE FELT LIKE THAT BEFORE. SO IT WAS A TOUGH EXPERIENCE. BUT I MANAGED TO BE FRIENDS WITH THE TWO GUYS. KEEP IT UP
jessie
i read that poem and ii think its great :D very true, take care X x X
Shay
This poem was great. I feel the exact same way in this poem. Maybe you could write another telling how you chose between the two to help me out.
Bethany
I love that poem! It is so me!
megan
Oh my gosh this poem is awesome i am relating to it so much these days and i am so glad to know that i am not the only one going through this GREAT JOB!
Daisy
Oh my God i know just how you feel! Right now my heart is in complete confusion and my mind can't make its self up. The poem spoke the truth about how I felt and now i know for sure I'm not alone.
annya
I'm going to give u adviced for where ur heart goes don't go for the one u really don't love. u have a potential to be a great poem writer.
Tatiana
I think this poem is so good, i mean you said how i was feeling at a time.
MISSY
I LIKE THAT
jessica
I can relate to this poem, I think we have all felt this way before and you expressed it just right!
kortney
you have potential to be a good writer
Catherine
This poem is really good, I feel the way this poem is expressed.
leslie
i feel that way two what should i do thank you for your peom i really like it.
Linda
Great poem! This is kinda like that quote, "Torn between two. who do u choose? the one you love or the one that loves you?" anywayz great poem
jacquiline
you are really great!
Debi
i have the same exact problem. it hurts soo bad, but you get used to it. now i dont feel like im the only one in the world that has problems.
shane
The poem is very lovely, it is so romantic
Misty
This poem was good because i was like that so many times but i finlly found the guy of my dreams!
ronge
yes ur words i words is true, i know that cause i love two
Mary
Fantastic poem! I can really relate b/c i am in a similar situation at this very moment. Keep up the good work.
Leann
That is a very good poem. I was in that situation about a 2 months ago. I found the one i wanted to be with and we have been together for 2 months. but i have lost touch with the other guy so i guess the saying is true love suxs
Jessi
That was a great poem. I remember feeling like that. I wish I would have seen this poem sooner. All that I can tell you is that it will all work out. Everything happens for a reason. You may not understand how or why right now, but you will soon understand. Thank you for sharing this poem, and I hope you figure out this confusing situation.
Vanessa
i think your poem is really good. it is something many girls can relate to.i look foward to reading more of ur poems
Shatae
When I read this poem a i was like oh my God! someone else knows the exact way i used to feel, but now I know which one to truly be with.
Tiffany
I like your poem it sort of explains what im goin through now.I liked you poem!
tabatha
I had the same problem i was so confused on who i wanted that before i knew it they were both gone and i still wish i had them both at times i wish i just had one of them but then i care about both of them .
kat
i mean how could she? she juss made me realize exactly how i felt..and i all i did was read this EYE OPEN'N poem? well i need to read, so thanx!
sheena
I liked it it meant something i've been in that situration and i learn't not to fall in love
carmella
Hey girl that was a awesome poem you wrote I fit the exact situation and I have no clue what to do. but by all meanings I know it will all work out than-x
kimberly
i thirt the poem was very powerful some people dont think teen love is true but ist as true and poweful as any thing in the world!
annette
I like this poem. I remember feeling this confused... and for the same reasons.
nicole
i love your poem its great i tend to feel like that some times. you really capture the aspect of your poem and good on to you its great.
Mylene
Hey i really liked that poem! Did this really happen to you? Well, just wanted to say how cool that poem was! Later
L
Currently being in the same situation myself, I can really relate to this poem. I like the fact that the author used her words in such a way that makes her readers feel where she is coming from. It's not to often that I can find a poem that describes exactly how I feel, but this one hit the nail right on the head. To the author I would say thank you for sharing your work with others, it's good to know that I'm not alone, and I hope that everything works out for you as well.
BECKY
this poem really shocked me because it mirrored the exact same situation that i was in not so long ago.
LISETTE
THAT IS SO TRUE I'VE BEEN THROW REALY I THINK EVERYONE GOSE THROW THE SAME THINK AND I GIVE YOU CRIDIT FOR SPEAKING THE TRUTH ,

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