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I wrote this poem with my ex-girlfriend in mind when I was feeling particularly inspired yet in a bad mood (inspired, hah!).

She is still my very good friend and I still care deeply for her.

Crushed

You tore my heart into two,
My hopes, wilted and shattered,
You said I just won't do,
To you, that's all that mattered.

Didn't you give me a chance,
To prove we're made for each other,
Let me show it you just once,
But in my heart, I know you'll never...

Maybe I've started
writing poems too late,
'Cause my heart's all blistered,
And so full of hate.
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7 Visitor Comments

IZZY
THIS POEM REALLY TOUCH MY HEART COS IT SAYS EXCATLY HOW I FELT WHEN MY LOVE TURNED ME AWAY WITHOUT A SECOND CHANCE.
ashley
This is so true because men have the tenion to hurt us, make us feel as if we are nothing and in the end they feel good while we are down and out.
Sophie
It was very touchin i love some one at the moment who that poem relates to
Laura
Why hello other Laura. I belive you and I share a lot in common. When I look back at this poem I feel just how my ex must have felt. It's crushing. I made a vow to keep our friendship as strong as could be.
tahn
your poem is very well said. i really enjoyed reading it! i know how it feels to want someone and yet not them wanting you back really hurts
Laura
My ex could have written this! I just wish I could go back and do a lot of things differently, myself. made me look at the fiasco from his angle, not just mine (unending regret). Thanks!
Crystal
Ilike it it was touching

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