About the Poem
I wrote this a long time after I broke up with someone, after the pain had healed and I could look back rationally, when I had realized he was doing what he had to do.
And that deep down he cared about me.
|I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek
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570 Visitor Comments
i love this poem because it expresses how i feel about my ex-boyfriend he move to montania i was so sad i started to write poems
This went right along with what is going wrong in my life! Thank you now i can tell it to my boi.
i like this its the way i feel right now
this is really good im going to through alot and thought i would look at it we ttyl
This is the exact same thingi went through and for all the girls out there who has been through this kind of situation i recommend this poem to you.
This poem touches you to the depth of your heart, it makes you realise that sometimes we look at love in the wrong way. That we make things out of nothing. But it gives you hope that all is not lost.
amazing poet keep going
This was a lovely poem and it really awnsered alot. It was telling the truth and i cant wait to tell my friend about it as i love poetry myself!
I think that this was a wonderful poem i mean it really touched me.
this poem is so sweet i almost cryed
this poem realy touched my heart. it made me remembr f him. i thot il 4get him bt thn i cudnt. n realy a tear rolled down. i thot he'l cum n wipe my tears bt thn thr was no one. i realy miss those days whn he ws wid me. i wont ask him ne reason 4 leaving me coz i knw my luv is true n it'l cum bak again.
Your poem moved me to tears.
I can relate to this very well!
Thats a lovely and incredibly sad poem.
This is beautiful in its sadness. I understand the wish that this were a dream all too well.
WOW!. it make me almost cry:(
I like this poem. It completly describes some moments of my life. Thanks. With love, from Russia.
I LOVE Your Poem. I Think I Have Might Of Lost The One Im Truly InLove With. This Poem Just Made Me Realize A Bunch Of Stuff. It Really Opened Up To Me. Its Like Its Based On My Life. But I Love It. Talk To You Soon!
this is a poem that touched me because it says some of the things iv said in the past. its a beautyful piece of work. my compliments xx dd xx
this is a really beautiful poem that i relates so much to. i wich ican write like this. nice!
I love this. It sounds like something my friend would write. I understand it. Nice work.
it makes me think of the guy that broke up with me last night. I took it extremly hard. I love the poem.
I LOVE IT!
hey thankz for this poem i really like it im going true that same thing right now with my ex boy friend he had hurt me and well i don't know if to go back out with him or just stay as friends what do you think??? well thankz love always crystal
I like this poem
i love this poem. it reminds me of a poem i wrote a few days ago and i reminds me of my love that i miss so much rite now. thanks for sharing it sonia
you are so good at poetry this really touched me.
i think that this a very good poem and i can really feel what it is trying to tell me.
I realy like your pome i will like to support you to be a potret i willgive your pome 1-10 a 10 stars
This is an extremely good poem and made me want to cry. You are a very good poet, keep it up.
This poem shared all the feelings I felt at the time of a recent breakup. I loved it. Thank You for helping me get through my own "Slow Tears".
This is a great poem! I was just dumped, and it me think that somewhere there is a soul that also has tears of pain rolling down there cheeks. Thanks alot and keep up the good work.
this poem has touched me. I got teary eyes.
i love your poem it was very tuching it like you knew what i was thinking and feeling lol i love your poems
I loved that poem it really has to do with what happended with me and my ex boyfriend and now that i read it, a lot of memories where on my mind!
This poem is sooo sad*
AWW THATS WAS SO SAD BUT SO SWEET I ALMOST STARTED TO CRY
Your poem touched my heart as it is a similar situation i find myself in. Very well wrote and felt from the heart. Thank you
this poem reminds me of one of my heart breaking break-ups. he looked soo confused and didn't have the heart to say anything. this is a very good and true kind of sad old love poem I love it
THE POEM IS REALLY NiiCE! SO TRUE! I FEEL WHAT YOU ARE SAYING! I GIVE YOU A 10 OUT OF 10. AWSOME!
This is such a good poems i was in tears
it hurts so much when you lose the guy that you love so much i love this poem it made me cry cause im so in love with this guy but we cant be together cause of the distance it hurts!
This poem is real pretty and it kind of reminds me of someone I know or knew, and I like the fact that it shows feeling and tells hopw some people feel about life with people they love . so to end this vote I would like to say this is a really good poem.
it is cool!
These words describe my last breakup to a tee. I knew it was coming, and he knew I knew. He knew I was hurting before he even began speaking. We love eachother, but not in the way that makes a romance. These words hurt.
Beautiful, broke my heart once again just reading it.
i just love this poem its really nice
i appreciate this poem very much. i can relate to it. all i can say is that. thank you. this poem is reminding me of someone so dear to me.
I like your poem alot, my exboyfriend just broke up with me and i was just wondreing how did you do to try to forget about him?Im really sad about and i cry every night,cuz he left me for another girl. well you did a good job on your poem,and your poem does say the truth
man dis is ta mocst awsome poem i have ever read ot just says says wat am thinkin rite now keep up da good work
I really like this poem
this is REALLY good me like!
I LIKE IT
Beautiful poem, so well written :'] and also, its what happened to me today But. he woulndt dare hold me. Well written Martini! Keep it up xox
I resently lossed a loved one, and this poem has touched me. Helping me remember happy times, this poem is very emotional and should be known world wide. everyone should know it.
that is such a AND TURE POEM MOST PEPOLE DO FEEL THAT WAY WEN SOME ONE LEAVES THEM OR WONDREIN WHY THEY SIAD WAT THEY SAID ANY WAYS I LOVE THAT POEM KEEP ON WRITTIN CUZ UR GREAT SUGAR
Given the same situation, I'll broke down and cry. Such a sweet poem.
that was a really good poem . you wrote , i can relate to that in so many ways ,, it's very true of what you said and it hurts at times . but sometimes it gets better . vicky
i like this one
your poem touched me very deepley. my cousin who was only 14,one year younger than me, passed away 3 days ago. Sometimes i think its all just a dream, a bad dream. He was more than a cousin to me, he was like my brother and best friend at the same time. We grew up together learning about life and grew up to be teenagers. We hoped to make it in the NBA when we grew up. We laughed, played, watched TV. together. But i never realizrd that he was going to leave me forever.
That is really good.
Wow. you seemed to be describing the time i had to leave the one i loved from her perspective, but all so realated to me. Your work shows the emotions so clearly and put a detailed picture in my mind.
oh my gosh. i was crying through the whole poem. you did a great job writing it and keep writing more. you inspire me. Dena - age 12
it's lovely. i love the last 2 lines especially.
i loved that poem
that was so good keep it up
I liked the poem it was different and I personally know how it feels to break up with a guy you loved very much.
oh my gosh that made me cry it was such a great well put poem and it really touched me you are a great writer!
I really like this poem because it brings memories to me. I also had to go through a break-up and it hurt alot. After the pain was gone i understood that he dad to do what he did. Its been a year and i still can say that i love him as if was the first day but i guess that we are not meant to be together. thank you for this great poem!
this poem is really good i can relate to what you are saying
The poem is wonderful expression of the sadness one gets when one's heart is broken.
The pain felt so great,tears that i foug ht for so long burned my eyes. its about 4 months now but im still not over it. he was the first guy that i was every intersted in and im afraid if i cant fall in l again.
This poem hit home quuit a bit for me it was as though someone wrote exactly how i once felt a feeling that even 5 years on i still rember as though it was yesterday although it was a comfort to know someone else has felt the same was it was also a feeling of saddness because i do know how that feels
i think your poem really had alot of meaning. keep writing! -aShLeY-*
This poem thouched me it is like something real not something fake and made up. Peopel really deal with this kind of thing i know i have and everyone will if they have not already.
i am writting a love story and i deals with exactly wat u wrote. im barely in the 3rd chapter but this poem is yet another great inspiration to my book. just remember that true love never dies. thankyou for the inspiration. keep writing!
i really enjoyed this poem as i believe i once felt the same feelings and i know how hard it is to say goodbye. even today 2 years later i stil live with hope that maybe he will come back to me.
similar to what i feel :((
i loved the maening behind your poem. i was beatifully written.
i love this poem it remeinds me of my ex. he is a jurk. but i love him. and i dont understand y he h8ts me.
Thank You, It was beautiful.
really fantastic. no words to say. pls listen all. ,first love urs love,not a lover. it will make the wonders, for both
This sure is great. You deserve more than just a vote.
I don't know what to say. But I love this poem so much. I can relate to it in every way there is about it! I read this poem 6 times and everytime I read it it brings a tear to my eye. Good Job.
I love this poem, I saw my ex for the first time since our break up. we were together a very long time. this describes everything that happened when I saw him again. very well done
this poem is awsome it really made me think about alot of things. sent to a friend he also thought that it was awsome between u and i he got teary eye. Keep up the good an wait to read more of your poems.
i feel so the same i am havin such a hard time ive been cryin over this boi for about 1 yr and 3 months and i really think i love him he hurt me and i forgave him and he did it again and i firgave him i keep makin the same mistake aboaut everything and it kills me to sit there and watch him with other girls who are my close friends i really cant become attaced to people ive become so distint ever since my dad died but he had this strange effect on me and i hate him for it but then i know i love him and i always will ur poem was so good and reminded me of so much . pain is only a feelin right it shouldnt hurt like this . everything is so cunfusing i hate life . people try to judge me but they cant . u cant judge a book by its cover . as it goes . but people arnt books . when people read this they are goin to think i ma mcrazy but oh well . people who are like me will understand if they feel the same i hope .
this poem is very sad to read it make's you think of someone????
i love THAT POEM. u ROCK!
love the emotion and true thought u put into it.
I really like this poem cause it has a lot of potential
this poem was beautiful and it made me cry i was in love to ONCE and he told me that he was coming back but he nvr did and now he is in a better place:(
I love this poem ,i know how it feels to lose someone you care about good luck to everyone else time will hell everything
I loved this poem i am going through the same thing at the moment me and my bf broke up on May 1, 2006. My heart still brakes because i really loved him and even though we had only bated for 7 months i knew he was the one. I can really relate to this poem because when he broke up with me he had a really scared look on his face and was really upset about hurting me. But when i could think about it with out crying i knew he did he for the right reasons because it was a long bistance relationhip. Even though it still hurts i still care about him very beeply and we are still really good friends and it is best that way. But i still need to get my heart to believe that which is the hard part. well this is really so i am going to stop. The person who wrote this should keep on writing they are really talented and have a good thing going on, because this poem touched many people.
I thought it was so adorable and I loved it. I vote that your poem was a 10 of 10.
This poem really touched me cause I am going through something of that kind with my mate. I just really want to know that I like it and keep up with the good work.
I really loved this poem. It almost made me cry. Martini did a really good job at writing this poem.
This poem is a well good one for a relishtion that is not going relly.
I'm glad that u submitted this poem because i have been trying to get over my boyfriend for the past week, and this poem touched me. Just know u have helped me out by doing this poem, so thanks.
your pome toched my heart and it brought back memories of my lost love thank you for sharing it with me and keep on the great pomes
I think this poem is from the heart and soul. It really is great.
i loved this poem who ever did this really gave me some good advice. thanks
nice poem, somehow breaking up is a painful process. but when you had moved on, you can just look back to the pain and can say to yourself. i've learned so much from it.
I really like this poem. It's very realistic. like it really happens. Sad but true. nice one! keep up the good work!
i loved ur poem, my bf just broke up w/ me, and i just read it. *cries*. i'm srry.
This poem brought tears to my eyes. It is beautiful and so touching and exactly how I feel right now I absolutely love it!
was really good i totally understand so gooooooooooooooood. keep up the good job latina
i love this poem because i kno how she feels just got a relationship of 2 years and this poem just made me relieze that the ones you love are always gonna be out their and still thanking about you just as much as you thank about them. Even though i you might thank that they dont care. Believe me they do
I loved this poem so much It made me cry You perfectly described my ex. But i felt as if he would write that to me, I just think you should write more poems about that topic! ***********PLEASE************
When I read this poem, (don't think I'm weird) but I started to cry, because at some point in my life I've felt everything you've said in that poem. It really touched me and I think you've written it just perfectly.
I really liked this poem. I thought it was really great. I also write poetry and this poem really helps inspire me for my next poem.
THIS POEM IS A HEART TOUCHING KIND OF POEM WHICH WILL BRING TEARS TO ARE EYES. IT BRONG TEARS TO ME. I THINK THIS IS THEN BEST ONE.
this poem touched me and is so the same as to what i feel. i felt i could connect with the wrighter.
this was a very good and touching poem. I liked it alot. Its very emotional.
I really love this poem. I mean I'm only 14 but I've been there. It was really awesome.
omg omg lol this poem made me cry its how i feel right now!
that poem was exactly how i felt a couple weeks later wen my bf and i broke up it was great and i bet aloj of people can relate it touched me and it was wonderful
This poem spoke to me. I found my lost love not to long ago. this what i am feeling. not to just have found him but spend my time away from him because he's doing time now.
that as a good poem i write poems myself but people think im syhco b/c of what i write about. i write about how i feel. Is that a bad thing??? -Donna-
I really like this poem i read it at my grandmas finerl because it made me think of her i think it is the most pretty poem i have every read. so keep up hte good work.
hey. great poem. bring back memo's and thoughts. lol. butta nice poem though
VERY LOVELY POEM , LOVED IT VERY MUCH, THANKYOU, KAREN
This poem was amazing. It felt so real and the emotions were completely relateable. It felt as if it were you in the poem and it was an amazing feeling. It was as if the words were taken out of my mouth on how i felt when my heart got broken.
I will put tears into u'r eyes and make you think about your own life.
I GIVE THIS POEM A 10 ITS A REALLY NICE POEM!
that was might have been one of the most touching poems I have ever read. You touched me and my sister.
i love this poem it is so sad but i could relate to it so well. i love your writing and would love to hear some other great poems of yours.
ok i liked it
i loved your poem i can so relate i have had so many problems with my boyfriend it is really sad but i loved i icould read it over and over
this is a good poem keep up the good work.
I really love this poem
~*~this poem i can relate to very much. cuz of one certain person in my life that did to me the same way this person was done. and didnt even bother to turn back to me to and wipe my tears away that are still coming down slowly at night. ~*~
The part of this point that really touched me was when you said that about looking into his hazel eyes its like you think if he'd just look at you the way he did all the bad would go away, I understand this poem and i like it alot. youve got a spark for poetry
this poem touched me. it was the only poem that made me feel like i was going to cry. literally. it reminds me of how i cant see or talk to mi "significant other" and it shows me that you never miss something til its gone and once it is gone, you are willing to do whatever it takes to get it back
Okay when I read this poem it all most made me cry. Because the love of my life is no longer mine ( Liz). It really touched me
The perfect poem. describes my situation exactly.
o my god i love your poem i had that happen to me before you are so great at writeing poems wow!
I Loved it its the situation iam in right now so it touched me alot
I love this poem. It is so good and i wish i could write poems like that.
i loved that poem! it realy said wat i was thinking!
Really hit me hard; I'm not so rational now so it filled me with a lot of emotion. Just lost the love of my life, and it's so hard because I know he loves me; he just doesn't want to see me hurt anymore. Not sure how to deal with it right now.
I LOVED IT I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT'S IS GOING ON BETWEEN ME AND MY BOYFIEND BUT THIS POEM GIVES ME SUCH A STONG FEELING. IM NOT SURE WHAT THOUGH BUT IT A DEEP FEELING AND THE AUTHOR DID A WONDERFUL JOB.
it was really good because it remided me of me so i really liked it so good job martni
that really touched me sadly its happend to me and to my other friends out of 1 to 10 i give you a 10
Simply awesome Sometimes . you find your thoughts in other's words sometimes . you found your pain in Other's heart and that makes that "other" very special same kind of feelings for you from my side keep it up :)
I LOVE your poem!
I think this poem was good.
this poem is so wonderful it seaks the true on real situations which make, the poem great.
this poem was very true and it reminds me of what happened a long time ago
APPROPRIATE 4 ME
i love it ! a long relationship ended not to long ago & i read this & i said to myself . . . . other people feel the same? im more or less confused about the brake up , i feel no pain i write poems myself but i dont know if im good enough to put it on the internet for others to see
OMG i love this poem. It is so cute I am crying rite now. It reminds me so much of Jack. I love him so much and he doesnt understand that. I love the poem it is very pretty.
lovely,it just made me cry :(
The poem touched my heart, as i am going threw that situation at this very moment, it made me cry it so close to home
you spoke my sole. thank you
This poem was as if she took the words out of my heart and posted them. Very good
hey i just wanted to tell you hw much i loved your poem it hit me down deep and and i can see where you are coming from
this poem made me smile and remember the good days.
It's a good poem. I really liked it.
is good and im sure it came from the heart CONGRATULATIONS!
Hi,I really like this poem. My eyes literly started to water when i read it and suddenly thought about my ex. You took the ideas and my words righy out of my mouth. :-)
It was a nice poem because it expresses the way I actually feel inside.
the poem was great. when i read it i remembered my past love instantly!
i liked it, it reminds me of my not-so-good times and my friend helped get through it.
This poem meant allot and few only know the joy of being hurt
Your poem has touched me deeply. I had started to cry reading it because it reminds me of what i am going through. Good Job!
This is one of the most honest poems that I have ever heard you have really touched me
i love it! it is just what i am feeling! see my x boyfriend said it was over about 3years ago and when i cryed he gave me a hug and wiped my tears away and know i really wish i had never let him walk out the door. well i am glade i read this cuz it helps me understand a little bit more. well hope you write more and are very happy in your life.
Martini, Hi my name is La'Shayla and this poem that you wrote is wonderful. I'm in a relationship with the boy I've been with for a year and a month. He don't trust me he always want to control me and I do so much for him that he can't even say thank you and that's hurt me. So now I have given him the boot now he want to be all over me and everything and he was even trying to have a tear, but it didn't work this time, because of that poem I'm better than ever. Thank You.
I WANTED TO SAY THAT I LIKE THIS POEM AND THAT I NOW HOW U FEEL BECAUSE I HAVE WENT THOUGHT THAT BEFORAND ITS NICE TO NO THAT IM NOT THE ONLY ONE THATS BEEN THERE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
i realy liked your poem it reminded me so much of a how i felt when my relationship ended with a guy that i thought loved me as much as i loved him
THis poem touched me. I relate to it. But it's really good. Keep up the good work.
this poem reminds me of someone im involved in kinda i love it!
it reminds me if my broken heart
i think this poem is awsome because its very clear and very deep also because it sort of deals with what i waz going thru.
i luv this poem its really touching i've been so confused about love lately . , kriston
Lol. I dont know wat to say. this almost ahd me cryin. I guess cuz i can relate to it. i broke up wit a person I had loved for 5 years. when i think bout it it still hurts. but i guess all u can do is move on because holdin on is more painful. n i admire the person who can do dat wit out lookin back because it was like goin through hell for me when the pain was fresh. lol TC
nice work. i can't find anything to say rite now 'cause i'm in love.
THIS POEM WHILE I WAS READING IT MADE ME THINK OF EVERYTHING IN MY LIFE. I TOOK THIS POEM DEEP IN SIDE OF MY HEART.
i love this poem
this poem made me cry, for this person. extremly talented please keep on writing.
That was soo beautiful! That is exactly how I feel right now.
That is so beautiful. It reminds me of when me and baby broke up. It broke my heart. Thank you! You read my mind!
its a great pice of art. i love it
i love this poem
I have the same fellings about this one guy and I have never cryed over a guy but now I have over him that one person who I love.
i really like this poem. it hit me right into my heart. coz, its what exactly i felt during the day we have to part our ways and cried a river after that
This poem is fabulous. : ) Good job babe
this poem reminds me so much of my best male friend, well my ex bf. he's always been there to wipe my tears even though we're not together anymore.
That was a good poem.
hey. its just hearth touching. i know what it feels like :'( i cried as i read the poem and i do just wonder if ill ever feel that way again in all my life i had never felt so happy and perfect i just dont understand he means so much to me! i can travel around the world and nowone will be the rigth one. i know he is he is my one and only.
i love this poem it so sweet!
i love it
THIS POEM MADE ME REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED TO ME. IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE SOME ONE UNDERSTANDS THE WAY I FEEL. AND IT MAKES ME UNDERSTAND THAT IM NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT THIS HAS HAPPENED TO.
Just a lovely lovely peom
I think this poem touches to the feeling of pain and rejection. but they do still care about you.
i feel you on this poem girl do yo thang
I absolutely loved it! I hope u write more in the future.
i loved this poem it really made think of my brake ups
this poem was very touching to me because i am in the same kinda thing my boyfriend that i love so dearly tells another that he loves then and cant stand me
i really liked that poems it touched me in lots of ways. ive been there before i just went through all that like a month ago with my ex b/f it feels like ill never be ok but i think sooner or later i will be okay i think im a strong person. so maybe i will get though tis too
This poem desicribes exactly what I went through two weeks ago with my boyfriend. I couldn't understand what or why it happened or even why it was happening to me, but it did. Thank you for posting this poem on here. Love Always, Misty
I love this poem it really touched me!I just lost da love of my life and this is almost exactly how it was and how we both were feeling! GOOD JOB! AND A NOTE TO ALL DA PEOPLE DAT HAVE HAD THEIR HEART BROKEN MEMBER "PAIN IS PAIN AND LOVE IS PAIN"!
This poem really touched me it reminded me about my ex. Now i know that things happen for a reason!
hey i love your poem i am young but i have been thru alot not in a bad way i mena when theres something bad there's always soemthing good happening right after that bad thing that happened and for me thats partly tru!
It is definetly intresting and a tad intoxicating its almost like you can remember when it happened to you
i can relate in this poem. it's so touching
The writer Martini, wrote this poem as the voice of so many peoples Heart who lost their love in this lovely world, as this world is so much lovely but their must so many sadness also to face n this poem indicates that feelings pure feelings of a person, when he became some wat unsucceed in his love .
I love your poem! You are a very talented human being. I look forward to reading more of your work. You can go really far with this and i hope that your dreams come true. God Bless you Babe. Nikki
excellent poem,i cried while reading it,the words were so right.
i love your poem it touched me in a werid way!
you wrote a very lovely poem. it brought a tear to my eye.
tHIS POEM IS GREAT I CAN DEFINATLEY RELATE TO HOW THE WRITER FEELS
I really enjoyed this poem because I can relate to it alot. It was beautiful and it touch my heart. I started to cry when I read it.
Hey. I love the poem. it reminds me of a guy I knew in seventh grade. I fell deeply in love with him. but i guess he didnt feel the same way. I still love him. so much. The love i showed towards him iguess wasnt good enough. This poem showed alot of meaning. I love it
this peom reminds me of me and a special person that i love so much!keep writting i love your poem
i love it the way when you read it you feel it that takes a good writer you know i thought that it was great
I think that this poem expresses the true meaning of a lovers remorce after they have said the wrong thing to the one they love. It is difficult to understand why the person is confused until towards the end when the poet ellaborates on why he is looking confused.
this souds what i went through when my best friend passed away. his brother wiped away the tears and said dont cry baby he's goig to heaven. great job it really touched me. keep on writing
i like it a lot it makes me think of my life andhow it is thank you for that
I love it! It so explains how I am feeling :(
im really lik th poem as tis in 1 or th otr way is related to th events i gone thru in my lif.
this poem spoke strait to my heart and i feel exactly the same way.
This is a very emotional poem and i have gone through this i just wish the person who said all the bad things he said was there to wipe my tears but maybe one day i can be with him again!
THIS POEM WAS A VERY GOOD POEM. I CAN RELATE TO THIS. LIKE ALOT!
its really marvellous
This poem made me cry, but in a good way! This is a really great poem it really touched my heart!
it vey sad i cryed i feel wut u wanna say that happends 2 me i think nd all a sudden i start 2 cry nd i dont no y i love it
firstly i just wanted to say good job to the author, i really liked this poem. when i read towards the end. i felt this knock in my heart. im not sure what it was. it just felt lovingly warm. thanks for sharing your poems
this poem is amazing it reflects perfectly how i feel it is truly moving its inspiring i love my friend so much this reminds me exactly of my life it is beautiful! keep doing this you are very good
I think it sounds awful but it is true because people are always falling out about who they love more
I can relate to this poem to me it makes me remember him saying mean thing but now i see it may have been for agood reason.
I don't really know what to say about this one. Its an emotion felt that no words can ever describe. For an instant I felt the pain, the sorrow, then that caring touch. This one hit home. Its wonderful and I love it.
This is a really cute poem and I can honestly relate!
This a very poem that makes you think about your life.
that was a great poem I really liked it Tiff
hEy i reAlly liked this poem it hiT me and i doNt noE y but it juSt did it remined me aBout my mAn joE i lOve him wiTh all mY heart and he knows tHis and its ''aLways and foRever baBY'' well i really loved loved ur poEm .
that is very touching
i thought this poem was a very nice poem, i was wondering where the author got the idea for this poem?
this was a lovely poem i loved it so much u can really realate to this peom for most people some edvice to people who would like to write peoms make sure other people can realate to them and not just you cuz then u ghet some more fans or people who love to read ur work and to realate to it like how i love thispoem for an example cuz i can realate
I like this poem, this really shows some of the silent feelings we feel. people say things sometimes they don't really mean, but it still hurts. I go through this daily, although it hurts so deep within me, I seem to love this person so much I cant get angry with him. I seem to always forgive him, but the words he says always stick in the back of my mind. I wounder if they are really true, and if I am really the person he says I am.
This has happend to me so many time this poem is beautiful.
this is a very very good poem i liked it alot.
I thought it was a VERY good poem, I have been there so many times. It was the same feeling I had too. good job!
I was amazed by this poem very much, i read it today because i got intoa fight with someone i really love, and we both were like . very sad, so i thought to look for poems, and i found this was the best poem i saw :). Martini thanks for writing sucha beautiful poem. Dingo.
teh poem was wounderful full of emotion
This poem was excellent! I can relate to the poem in different aspects and I felt what was written and I sensed that the writer wrote from the heart!
This poem was uncredible it hit me so bad
THIS POAM WAS REALLY GOOD I THOUGHT LTO OF THING WHEN I WAS READING THIS POAM YOU GET A B+ BECAUSE IS REALLY NICE THANKS FOR POSTING YOU POAM
i love this poem !
awwww. I hella love this poem i can relate to it in all ways the message was thrown out clean and clear i respect that 200%
this poem reminds me of myself and my old bloyfriend
i like that poem alot as i read it i felt how you felt at the time
i loved it. i know how it is to have that happen cuz i just got through that same thing with my boyfriend.
this poem was one of the best i have read so far it has a lot of meaning behind it. the words can fet just about any one who wants to relate to this poem.
i loved your work, it touched me. im going though some thing like this right now and now that i have read it now i know what i can give to him to tell him exactly whats in my heart! thank you very much~!
your poem was sewwt cute and touching i liked it a lot
I think your poem is very real. It touches apart of people that most wont discus and no one likes. The rejected part's. You are brave for sharing yourselfe like that. Thank you.
this poems was the best one that i've ever hard. it touch me so hard that i had cry cuz it was true
this poem reminds me of how i had to leave my favorite school and that i still have the tears to show and that i will never be able to go back
that was very nice and deep. good job
I really liked this poem. I read it about a million times. One reason was because I can relate to it and it helps to know that theres other people out there that can relate to my pain.
Yo poem is cute and i liked it.
this is a very good poem martini ,
this poem is so cute it reminded me of wen me and ma bf broke up :'(
this poem was seriously amazing. im a poet, in a sense. i mainly write lyrics and stuff, but never anything like that. although it was simple, it left an amazing effect on me.
this is a very touching poem and it remindes me of my boy friend because he has hazal eyes and said some stuff to me he shouldn't have! but i forgive hime he wiped the tears off my face and i for gave him!
I think ur poem is awesome! It explains so much to me! It touched me in so many ways! Thank You! Bye
HOLY COW FRICKEN GOOD! I FEEL THE SAME WAY RIGHT NOW! I CAN'T STAND IT!
i really liked it. it had made a hole lot of since.
I really liked this poem because I can relate to it.
hey oh my gosh. i love your poem so much. this is actually one i can relate too. i hope all of your man problems get solved. and i hope you keep your writings going steady. you have a real talent so somewhere in life, use it. all my love and God Bless!
i loved this poems it wuz so go0d and the reality of it just hit me like a bullet- just wunted to tell the author that ur rele go0d and should consider doing it at poetry readings in ur towns and poetry contests umight have a shot at winning- go0d job!
this is very touching
i liked this poem alot because i felt like i could relate to it so much so its not just me who feels this way
I really was touched by this poem. It relates to me very well. This poem says the exact thing i felt when my boyfriend broke up with me. But I understood that what he was doing had to be done because he had a kid on the way from a previous relationship. I really liked this poem. ALOT!
the poem was a good poem . i really liked it. i almost felt a slow tear come down.
i loved this poem alot
I think that this poem is very beautilful ! I can really relate to those things whitch is said in the poem. I like poems alot. and defintly this one (one of my favorits) Hope you (who ever you) that has written this poem will write many more ! Love Mie
this was a sad poem it tuchted my heart
this poem is very nice you should be very prowed of yourself for making such a wonderful thing. god job and well gone
I really like your poem it brong some thing to me I just told this guy I liked him and I feel like crying all the time so it sort of I really DOnt know
This poem is the expression of my feelings at the moment. Though I am in a relation, where both of us are very much in love with each other. But somehow our different ways of thinking has made my beloved completely forgetful of our soul-to-soul bond and completely indifferent to my sincere feelings. And. "I think about better days" "I wonder for a moment if this is all a dream. ". Thanks Martini, you said it all for me. God Bless you :)
This poem was great. hit home for sure. Thanks for sharing.
I liked this poem, because the poet sims to be sad but not very mad. Its like she knows why he did what he did.
Oh my goodness this poem is one of the best love poems i've ever read! to be honest it made me cry! Wishing,hopeing,praying for the unpossible to happen but still i hold on! For what reason i guess i'll never know!
it's a really good poem with a lots of feelling.
This poem is great i like this poem it is a littl sad though. my name is renee i was just wanting to let you know what i thought about the poem
it is a good poem
I really liked this poem. It really touched me because I've experienced something very similar. Very Good!
i love this poem. it definitely demonstrates the feelings after a break up
wow. it gets better and better as you go on reading it. and the the bit about the eyes. sooo true. xxx
THIS POEM IS A HEART TOUCHING KIND OF POEM WHICH WILL BRING TEARS TO ARE EYES. I THINK IT'S ONE OF THE BEST.
i really liked this poem it really touched me! i've been there before!
This poem was reallt good i put some oart of it as me screen name
It was sad and got thay expressed themselfs good.
OK, now I'm only 13, but I love this poem alot! I've been trying to find a decent poem to like, represent how I feel, and I just found it! If i post this poem on my profile, I promise to give all the credit to you! You deserve it and I love this poem! Keep it up!
ur poem has touched me deeply for my ex did the same thing but he never returned i never got a second look at him
Hey i liked this poem b,c i kno how she feels. LOL.
hello i read your poems i think is very nice i know it hurts to look back and relize that you dont know why you let him treat you the way he did
This poem depicts the exact day my girlfriend and I, of 4 years, broke up. Less than 3 weeks ago this all happened but this poem really nailed it. Thank you.
Great Job on your poem!
This was an awsome poem! I Loved it So much! I'm going through this right now and it feels so good to know someone else is to! Thanks for writing it!
Beautiful, sad, true.
i love it
This is a very touching poem, because it shows you how a friend could be. They could have said something really nasty about you and everytime you look at them you start to cry and tears are rolling down your face. The next thing you know is that they are the same ones that are wiping the tears away.
I realy like that poem keep you the good work. I read it to my ex and he loved it to thank you .
Iam happy when I read this poem I felt like this a long time ago after i found out that my ex was going out withj my best girl friend. Thank you 4 this poem it had sealled alot of the lod memories once agin thank u
I really liked this poem it is true and it toches you heart
man this is such a good poem it reminds me of how felt when me and my fiance just broke up before it touched me deeply and i thank whoever wrote it for writing it
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
This poem really touched my heart. It explained everything that i needed to say to my girlfriend that i really could say. Thank you so much for that.
This poem is such a touching poem, it is great, i could relate to it so much, pain is love, love is pain
this is a very touchy poem, i can feel after the learing
beautifully said, to another broken hearted soul
I love this poem, it gave me hope as i have just had my heart brocken by my exboyfriend and was feeling a bit low. thank you
it just felt real. i had this overwhelming rush of emotions. it was beautiful. i absolutly loved it.
this poem is touching your heart and it is sad too.
This is a really good poem. I've been thruogh this stuff before and i know exactly where she's coming from.
i love this pome it is one of my favorits out of all the ones i have read you top them all it got good meaning i love your work love always storm
kept on wighting
Excellent poem. Martini put into words exactly where I've been. I couldn't have said it better myself. Thank you. I'm sending it to my adulterous husband!
hi wow this poem is realy good i understand what you went throw ( in going throw it right now )
This deserves 5 stars. I could feel her pain running so deep.
You are incredibly talented. I absolutly love this poem. and im usually not one to like poems that don't rhyme but you captured the feeling and the moment. like i was there or that i was you. keep writing!
I really love this poem! it explains how i really feel about my boyfriend. I enjoyed reading your poem.
THE POEM REALLY DID TOUCH ME IT REMIND ME OF A BOY I LET GO HE HAD HAZEL EYEZ TO WELL, REALLY THEY CHANGED COLORS BUT I HAD TO LET HIM GO I DIDNT REALIZE WHAT I HAD UNTIL HE WAS GONE!
THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I EVER HEARD. IT'S THE SAME WORDS I WOULD'VE USED. THIS IS THE SAME THING THAT HAPPENED TO ME.
It couldn't be Closer to what is happining to me right now, My boyfriend is confused he doesn't know what he wants. See he had a bad experience with love his mom and Dad hate each other, they got divorcedd but not after having $ wonderful boys, Jason is the youngest so it he is getting alot of the,"What If's" He think s the same thing is going to happen to us, i dunno what else to write but I LOVE HIM! So So So Much
An execeptional piece of work. May should start browsing for all the works of Martini.
i just wanted to say that this poem describes my current situation all to well and this poem your words have really helped ease my pain thank you.
i really liked this poem,it hit closer to home than i really thought it would it actually brought tears to my eyes,this poem would rate 100 on my scale.
it reminds me of how i feel right now
I really enjoyed this poem I was very fermilar with the consept and know how evrything in this poem feels. I hope you continue to write your wonderful poetry.
I though your poem was really good it touched me. The way it was put together I could understand the pain in the poem.
*sniff* This poem was so touching. And I could clearly visualize everything ^-^
from time to time those that we love the most are the ones that hurt us but at the same time are the only ones that comfort us. this poem comes from lifes true hurt. it was wonderful.
i really like your peom because it touched me and i have been through some thing like that
your poem touched my heart it made me think of how im feeling about a certain guy
This poem made me cry because it's exactly what happened to me on the night my boyfriend broke up with me. I really liked it.
that was good
yeah dear i really love this poem and i am also akind of broken heart. so thanks allot for fullfilling my sorrows.
I think this is a really touching poem. It describe everything people think after they have lost the love of their life. Thanks for writing this poem. Write more poems!
I thought it was very emotional and it said alot about the love behind the two people who were in the poem. I loved it!
i just got out of 2 yr relationship. im 16 and i tried to kill myself. i was tyold to come to this website and read some of what other people feel and this poem touched me and kept me alive. it touched so deep, deeper then anything before. It's unique and very special! keep up the wonderful work !
I've been there and had that so I know how it feels.
two weeks ago i broke up with my girl whom i loved more than my own life. i never knew it would hurt so much. she took my joy and happiness away and it`s like i have no meaning to live anymore.
I feel like i can really relate to this poem. I'm going through it right now. I feel the same way.
This poem is wonderful. Its exactly how one feels after a hard break up, revealing the inner most feelings that we tend to keep locked up from the world. I SIMPLY ADORE IT.
My boyfriend just broke up with me like 3 hours ago. i was searching for some poems to help and i fould this one. it is awesome. the freaky thing is he has hazel eyes too. thanx for helping my heart!
this is how i would have liked it to end
WOW- i loved this poem- i love the little surprise ending- i juss started looking at all these poems on this site and this is def. my fav. so far-great job whoever wrote this!
This poem is so throwed it reminds me of my first boyfriend I wish our love didn't end.
This poem is very good and i wish i could write poems like you. . . i hope to see some more good poems written by you. . . thanks
This was a great poem, I strongley relate to it. This poet really knows how to write what they are feeling and that is very important. I love it.
wow i almost lost it when i read ur poem, i understand what it's like to be that guy and have to let someone u love go not because u want to, because u would only cause more hurt if u didn't. why is life like that? thanks. LOU
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM IT TALKS ABOUT SOMEONE I LOVED
I loved it!
I like this because me and my boyfriend were together for 8 months and then we broke up. I still love him more than I will love anyone in the world. But he does not feel the same. this poem is just how we broke up and it moves me to know some one eles feels the same way.
I love this poem, i have been through some rough times, when relationships have turned bad and this poem reminded me of that. Life goes on and you get better things in the long run. You poem is really good and i believe that it will touch many hearts in the future
Hey this poem was great and keep up the good work hopefully you'll see some of my poems on here some day when ever they let me post them hehe
This poem realy made me realize that God is the only one that knows why we not always have love.
i feel that this is great poem and if the tiltle wasn't listed you could do alot of things with this.
That was an amazing poem. i wish i could write like u. i mean ive felt those feelings but id never be able to write them as well as you did. good luck with your writing
I loved it. I would like some of your advise on love please. I am 15 and this same thing happened when my 3 year boyfriend left for the marines. I love hime so much and I do not know what ot odo! but i loved your poem alot thanks for reading
that was hella good
i loved yuor pome it remindes me of my old relastionship i loved that pome!
Hola Bella! thanks so much for the poem - i related to this so so much for putting into such a good perspective for me. Gracia amigo Luv Jasmin
It made want to cry cause I have a boyfriend who don't give me the time or day and I just wish all my tears he will wipe.
i love it! The author has alot of passion
I have never cried before by reeading anything, but I geuss you can never say never. I felt the pain the author was going through and I felt that I could relate to everything she said. I love this poem so much!
Awww how sweet makes me want someone like that
Your poem really touched me Martini, i can relate because that's how i felt when me and my boyfriend broke up it's like everytime i thought about him it made me cry. and when he was gonna brake up with me he looked at me with the same scared face and so i really liked your poem i related to it alot great job. ~*~ emily~*~
This one made me cry and i read it over and over. it was great. i love it
I can really relate to this poem, and I think that this a good poem. Good job!
It's like this poem knows exactly what I feel at this point, I've been through a horrible expierence with someone I loved and reading this poem reminds me of him.
i like this poem bcoz i feel that the author was speaking for me. the author simply had the right words
i relly injoyed it cuase it reminds me of a time in my life.
I loved this poem because these are the words i couldn't find on my own to say how i feel about the one i love. this poem is intensifying! good work!
The poem was so beautiful, I was with tears In my eyes. God bless you ! thanks a lot!
It is very touchy. I enjoyed reading it
that was a really good poem !
That poem is so beautiful!
I love this poem, it really did touch me because this is how our hearts are broken and how we learn the lessons our parents never warned us about. Thank you.
i love this poem it reminds m all abou my past love i jus miss everysinl bit of my e/x b/f wish he would come back so good job in ur poem if i had to rate i'll rate u a 5/5 good job keep it up
going through a bit of a low phase in life. This poem helped me.
i love the poem it is very deep!
This is a beautiful poem, and I know exactly what you mean. My boyfriends eyes are even hazel.
I really liked this poem it really touched my heart.
This Poem Was Touching More Than Words
the poem just hit me so hard. i can relate to the feelings of the author. am broken hearted too.
I like this poem. its just something about it that hits me.
I like this poem. It reminds me alot of mu poem called My Curse. When I get it sumited in, you should read it. I really like it. Its something that I would have thought of. -On a scale from 1-10 i give ya a 9!
This poem was ausome! I loved it I can relate to this, it's so true, so real. I just wanted to say good job! P. S. keep up the good work!:)
I loved your poem it was very good
I just want to say you deserve 5 stars for this wonderfull poem!
This is such a gret poem. it really touched me. I've been through those times before.
Hey thankx for this poem. I am thinking about giving it to my ex. He will realy enjoy it. ( Hear my sarcasm) Anywayz thankx for this poem. I loved it.
I really loved the poem you wrote, it was so expressional i cried after i read it. I am going through the same thing right now me and my man are taking time apart and it is so painful. I dont think we will end up back together.
I think that the poem was great!
This poem can relate to me in so many possile ways. i'd just like to thankyou for writing that for all the girls that are going through a problem like that!
your soooooooo poetic i really got touched by your poem and the way you express your feelings
I really like this poem. I think it is beautiful.
touch my heart,and God bless you!
I Really do like your poem my boyfriend broke up with me 1 month and 2 days ago and i still dont know how to get over him but I really did like you poem it helps to know that i am not the only one that goes through this!
This is awsome! I think it is really realistic!
This is an awesome poem. I am so thankful for you to write how you feel because I feel the exact same way. It sucks doesn't it!
i think it is cute keep up the good work
this poem it so touching what a rear jerker it really helpt me realized why me and this guy that i love cant be
This was a very good poem. It expressed my feelings toward this guy I've been liking perfectly. Im glad I can go on the internet and fine such talents people who arent afraid to express their opinions about something thats on their mind. Keep writting those poems, you have a talent
omg. this is such an adorable poem. i think that it took a great deal of courage to write about a serious topic. once i read this i started to cry. today i had a friend of mine move away. and he felt so bad. so i gave him this poem so i kno that he will have something to remember me by
it is a reall nice poem i could relate to it
This is a very good peoms its like i can fell what the writers is talking about. who ecer write this no the true mean of good peoms.
I really liked this poem it kinda touched me in alot of ways.
i really like this poem bcoz it's really meaningful. i just broke up with my boyfriend about a week ago, that's why i feel this poem is so true. it's awesome!
This poem is the best poem I hav ered on heard! It reminds me of me and my ex!
this was an awesome poem,Great job writing it
Very very nice. Though my exBF and I broke up over year ago and we both have serious relationshops going on, I still miss him. Very nice talent, very nice poem. Keep it up!
i think this poem was very simple but brillant and straight from the heart, these kind of poems are my fav. keepm up the great writing!
It is amazing and so touching. It is the best poem i've read all day. I relate to it completely, and i was in that exact situation only a few days ago. Thankyou for your poem.
This is a very heart touching poem. You did an excellent job in writing this. Keep up the fantastic work. I enjoyed!
That poem is super good! I'm going through a tough time right now right now with my boyfriend. and if I break up with him I wish he could understand it like that. Thanks for the great words!
yeah i feel you and i like this poem it sounds so cool too! i got broked up with my boyfriend he wanted to focus to education but he told me that he don't feel nothing cuz i knew he don't love me that much ! thanks
I love your poem! i feel i really connect with it! it reminds me of what im going through right now. and to be honest. it made me cry a little :-) GREAT WORK KEEP IT UP!
I loved your poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend (now ex) we just broke up on the 26 of sept and i love him very much but when i read this poem to him he said it reminded us about when we broke up and he wiped the tears from my face.
i love this it is great
I liked it alot. I t was cool.
wow I really like that poem. It really is like something I went through
this is all about what happened in the pass and it is the same thing that i went through and it was hard this is a good poem
i love it b/c the way i interprit it is she's seeing a ew side of him and he is so confused but still beside her 100 percent and still there to wipe her tears awsy. y can't i find some1 like that?
thanx for posting that. its well written and brings tears to my eyes, hehe i feel as though you wrote it from my perspective. i'd give a resounding 10 if this were number rated. thank you again for posting it
omgosh this poem is so beutiful.
really good poem ! so sadistic and yet sweet at the end
I really loved the poem. I've been through tough times with a boy that I really love. But the pain that he gave me, made me cry really bad.
I think this poem is very cute I really liked it lot cuz I am going through something like that.
this poems says what my heart feels but i was too scared to say anything.
I have been with my partner for eight years. He gave me a ring three years ago. By mistake I just found out I am pregnet and he decided to leave me. This poem describes the situation to a tee. I love it.
POEM WAS VERY MEANFUL
All i can say is "wow" and I have felt exactly this way with a man who had hazel eyes. Thank you for sharing your feelings and your talent.
This poem say it all, it touches the heart and makes me feel the way she does and that's truly what an insightful poem is all about.
Well what can I say this poem was evrything 2 me I loved ut. I just broked up with my boy 2 days ago and im in pain but I have to move on but I just want him to know Diego ur my 1st Love
He broke up with me 3 months ago and I just don't know how to deal with it. I guess thats why your poem made me cry. Its really beautiful. Thank you.
This poem was great. Me and my b/f broke up it'll be three weeks tomorrow and this wasn't the first time we broke up. The last time it took us almost 7 months to get back together and I cried and cried. This poem reminds me of how i felt both times.
o. m. g. you relly opened up my eyes. i mean dang you can really express yourself. on a scale from one to ten you get a straight up ten you gone wit your bad self. i mean wow. it really brought tears to my eyes at the beggining to the end you really have a way of expressing yourself. EXCELLENT!
this poam really got to me and I would tell my friends about this sad poam and I'm hopping to see more from you soon.
i love this poem love it !good job its was wonderful
this poem is awsome, keep writing u can tell a lot through poetry
I liked this poem because even tho I am over my ex and hav moved on, i still feel something. Your poem told me what it was. Thankyou
Very well done by the author! Many people think and feel this way and you captured all their thoughts in just these few words. Once again, WELL DONE!
I like that one alot. Good one:)
I have had this happen to me before twice with the same guy so i agree with everything in the poem
This Poem is every thing just like mine and my ex's brake up! I did and always will love him! I know how you felt! Good luck with life! Bunches of Love*
I loved it i can really relate to it my boy friend that i have been dating for 2years and2 mounths just broke up with me!
You have a real talent for writing. I could feel your hurt and your pain.
I love this poem so much. It was very touching.
its hard to say for me being a guy but when i read ur poem it touched me deep and hard i lost it and cried it realy hits a spot in me i didnt think i had it reminds me of the dream im having thats reality of me and my wife calling it quits ater 7 years that i wish i could wake up from. ty for the wounderful poem keep it up
Everything that I have to say has pretty much been said but it is worth repeating: This poem was beautiful. It made me reflect on when my boyfriend had broken up with me and how I felt. The commentary you wrote made me realize that I should try to look at it from his view. I cried, I copied it down in my journal (giving you full credit, of course), and I shared it with my ex. Thank you
I like this poem because things just happen to me with my love.
THIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED ME AND I FELT MOVED BECAUSE I HAVE EXPERIENCED SOME OF THE SAME FEELINGS.
I think that your poem was very good it remains me of everything I though I had with my boyfriend and then he just hurts me again and again then I just left him.
As I read this poem I realized that this once has happened to me, I had to tell my g/f I was leaving for the navy and this poem perfectly portrays that day and it touches me deeply, thank you!
I just lost a guy i care about. I cry everynight also. Hoping he comes back. I really liked the poem!
I love this poem, it speaks truly and effortlessly it seems and she's right, it isn't always easy to think rationally when you get out of a serious relationships. A lot of people don't take me seriously because i'm only 17, but I've been through a lot in my life, and it's good to know there are people out there who feel the same things
LOVE YOUR POEM.
what i love about this poem is that it make me feel that same way about my ex bf who i miss so much so keep up the good work
I can so understand what you went through. I am going through exactly the same thing now!
I enjoyed this poem, but I it also made my heart break apart. It rememberd my days with the only love I had, and the one I will ever have in my unfortunate lifetime. It's like someone thought my feelings and words. As I type this comment tears cover both my cheeks and the pain gets worse. A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!:(
Your poem shows that from great pain coursed by love, something Beautiful can come of it .
I think that this poem is wonderful it reminds me of my love when he moved away and i never seen him since.
SOMETIMES WHEN THOSE WE LOVE DEARLY REJECT US,WE FEEL THE HURT AND PAIN. WITH SO MANY QUESTIONS IN MIND, WONDERING WHY MUST IT BE US. SHE HAD LEFT ME FOR A MONTH NOW. I STILL MISS HER A LOT BUT I ALWAYS REMIND MYSELF. TO BE STRONG AND ONE OF THESE DAY I WILL HAVE THE ANSWER.
It's too beautiful.
I love this poem it is so touching and reminds me on how I feel all the time with my last boyfriend
I really liked your poem. It touched a place in my heart that felt a similar pain about 6 months ago when my boyfriend Aaron, of 3 years told me it was over. But over the past 6 months, I have finally realized that had he not told me how he felt he would have been leading me on to stay in the relationship, and I wouldn't have met my soul mate Tj! Keep writing, you have a great talent of expressing your emotions and feelings on life!
This poem really touch my heart and I think you have a real flare for poetry, It reminds me of what i went through a little while ago and i am still going through it, but it helps to know that are peple out there like you who can understand me thanx xxxx
A touching poem. This poem flashed my past in front of my eyes for a moment.
this poem made me cry so much as i continued to read it b/c its just how i am towards the bf that broke up with me and i can't get over him and its been 4 months. :(
Get is good and i like it and it is sad but i still like it
Hie people! I really liked this poem i think is so beautiful i hope that they keep on writting more beautiful poems i though this poem was nice really nice
ahhh the broken heart
OMG!I love ur poem!it descrbes me and my ex-boyfriend. He still loves me b/c I was his 1st love and he was mine. He said that no matter what no one would ever take the place of his #1 girl and he was talking about me!I miss him soo much!I hope to see more of ur poems
I love this poem! It describes me and my x-bf perfectly! He is leaving for the Marines this July, and this just explains our whole situation! I think you write excellent work. Please keep writing! Thank you soo much!
it's soooooo touchy. the feelings expressed touch the cords of my heart,My best wishes to everyone in love,hope u never loose ur love
i love what you had to say it touched a place in my life and this pome made me think and thanks for the good work and keep it up , you are good
I loved you poem! I also lost a love, but the only difference was that he was killed! So till this day I still look back all the moments we went through! I do too have sad poems! and soon I'll post them in this web site!
I Loved this poem. It reminds me so much of the night of my Homecoming Dance.
I can't describe it better then your poem.. It sounds exactly like the day my boyfriend broke up with me.. We were totally in love with each other and for some reason he couldn't deal anymore.. It was a day i will never forget.. for i was so hurt.. your poem is exactly how it was.. keep writing!
I really like your poem. It was right to the point of love. I plan on reading it a few more times.
This poem made me cry. Everything in it was about me.it was amazing. There arent words to describe how well-written that was
This poem is so beautiful , i hope to see more of your work on this web site!
I really think this is the best poem that I have ever read. I don't read alot of poetry but this is the best that I ever have.
I really enjoyed this poem. It reminds me of a story I'm going through, and it is so helpful to know I'm not alone.
I know it's been said before, but this poem is truly special. Though it is worded simply, it cuts right to the reader's heart and touches those who've been there, in ways that are indescribable. I too have just gotten over a guy, and it's taken me 2 and a half years to see that he DID really care and that's why he did what he did! We're best friends now, and I know that this is how it should be. My heart goes out to you for what you had to go through! Your poem is beautiful.
Great poem,It's intresting how love or that feeling make us creat such beutiful things.
I really like this poem. It means a lot to me, becuz this sort of thing just happened to me recently.
I'm sorry about you and your boyfriend, but i really like the poem!
My heart almost stopped after reading such a beautiful poem.I have the same feelings now.
I loved your peom It was great I wish I can write like that but the words won't come to me loved the poem
wow, incredible, my b/f jus broke up with me for another girl, i know he still likes me, but he doesnt act like it. I just have to give it time. i get on his nerves a lot bc i bother him about it. but i cant help it. I just cant stay away. i know they will betogether in the next few days.
This poem is very touching because it is life
i have been through this, and now that i am back with him again i feel as if it was the best thing in life, to have another chance.
Its exactly what is going on between me and my gf..wait ex gf. Great poem
I thought this was really sweet and it totally described a tough break up I went thru cheers
I loved your poem,I come on here to read poems and yours was just one that made me wanna cry, because I understand
This poem really hit close to home. I can relate to it. I really liked it,and I'm glad that you can put your feelings in to something so painfull. I know what you went through.
that poem is so sweet it describes the way alot of people would feel when they go throught that kinda stuff.
i think that this poem is reaally good!
Simply WONDERFUL!very moving.
this was gerat!
i know how this author is feeling my boyfriend and i just broke up because the family was putting to much pressure on him. i love this poem its exactly how i feel..
i think this poem was great i under stand how you feeling about being in love
loved it fell the same
I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS VERY TOUCHING.I AM AN AUTHOR OF POETRY AND CAN RELATE TO MOST OF MARTIN'S THINGS
I think this is a very good poem and everybody should read it. It open my eyes up.
I think this poem reminds me of the whole story with my ex boyfriend! It defantly relates
This poem really got to me. It's weird cause my ex and I had a similiar good-bye. He wiped away my tears and then we said good-bye. This is one of the best poems I've read in awhile.
The poem is awesome! This is just as though it was written from my very own emotions as well. Everyone can relate. 5 stars!
I LOVE TO WRITE AND READ POETERY I THINK I HAVE READ A FEW ON HERE AND TIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ! ITS BEUITFUL!
That poem was how I feel about my ex-girl freind. It is so hard when I think of her my eyes water. Every time I'm on the verge of crying. Love is so hard some times. Anyways I love this poem. Please write more
i felt every word of it!
This poem was really touching and i can really relate to it.
This poem really describes the confusion going on between me and my poem and I like reading poems that describe the situation I am in. I guess it makes me feel as if I am not the only one that goes through these type of things. THANX!
i thought it was very GOOD!!
I really like this poem because I can relate to it. This poem brought tears to my eyes because of the reality of the meaning of the poem!! I really loved this poem I wanna thank you for writing it!!
It realy reminded me of the situation I was in a couple of days ago and am still involved in. It's a beautiful poem
i can relate very well..this one is really nice.
that is such a sad but good poem that makes me stop and think about my life and loved ones what a great poem
i can really relate to that poem. I'm glad that you could look back and see the mistakes that you both made. Sometimes things happen for a reason. As long as you learn from them you'll never have a reason to be sad. I know it's hard to let someone go someone better will always come along. If not right away then the Lord has someone rally special waiting for you who will never make you cry.
This poem describes so much. It's beautiful.
I saw this poem when I was looking for one that could express the way I feel about a certain someone...My eyes really caught this one...It's very touching. I understand the author pretty well!
this poem reminds me about a lost love that i will always love and i know he loves me too i dedicate this poem to the day of october 1st
I went through a love like the one in this poem, how real that is.
This is one of the most powerful poems i have ever read! How do i know? I cried!
This poem was perfect for my cercomstances. Wonderful job!!
You just said, what I tried to say but didn't know how. Thank you very much. Hope, your tears will dry soon and sun will rise for enlighting your life. Werner M.
I really like this poem. It really does say alot about someone. Good job to the one that wrote this! I just wish I had your luck!!!! Later
i thought this was a most beautiful piece of work. I sent it to my friend because I feel she will enjoy it as much as i did.
this poem reminded me of when my boyfriend broke up with me. it was like a total replay of that horrible sad night.
it was good and touching
this poem has opened my eyes to make me realize that crying isn't going to get me anywhere. To understand the hrt and accept it will make things better for me in time. even though he told me that he loved me it didn't mean shit when he told me that he didn't want to be friends. this is one of the best poems I have read since my Breakup. Thank you
i think that the poem has alot of meaning that i can also relir to and i have been through and i just think itz great
One of the BEST I've ever read!!
i really liked your poem, it reminded me of someone who i had to break up with but i hated doing it.
i can really relate 2 this poem.. its great.
I love this, it is so about me and my ex.
great and sad thank you
I like it very much.
after reding this poem i remember about my love who is not with me today,
this poem is outstanding. the sadness i felt when i got to the end made me truly understand a touch of what she felt. the hurt love can cause....
you poem was great im sorry for the way you had been treated. i know how you fell my first love did that to ne when we had together for a long time.
It was really sweet!
i really liked your poem very much.i wanted to write something like this but the words didnt come out right. i have to say poems do make you understand things which sometimes you dont understand, and thats what this poem did to me.thank you and well done
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. LOVE CAN FEEL GOOD OR IT CAN MAKE YOU FEEL LIKE THERE WILL NEVER BE NO OTHER.
Martini, I just would like to tell you that I love your poem.It was so wonderful! It made me cry and realize the past i had with my ex boyfriend,and made me a much stronger person! Thank You! :)
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