About the Poem
This poem is just about a young brother and sister. This never really happened to me, but it made me think of how I'd feel if it DID happen to me and my brother.
Snow Angels |
| by Heth Bo-dog |
| Snow angels dancing in the breeze, Brother and sister fall on their knees. They lay down in the bitter snow, And figures of angels begin to show. The pair giggle and smile at each other, And each prays they will never lose the other. Snow angels playing on the river, Then the ice begins to quiver. He lets out a dreadful scream; She hopes it's just a dream. She reaches out her hand, But he slips away just like sand. Snow angels in the white field, A little heart looking to be healed. She lays down in the bitter snow, And a figure of an angel begins to show. She lets out and sheds a tear, Yet she will always hold her angel near. |
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20 Visitor Comments
Taylor
This is amazing, wonderfull, breath takeing and so much more. I abslutley enjoyed reading this wonderful piece!
Marynelle
I'm very, very touched of what you've wrote! keep up the good work! and i rily, rily, rily love it
Megan
I almost cried when reading this poem. My best friend got killed by a truck, and her younger sister saw the whole thing. It's amazing how well you caught the feelings with out actually experiencing them.
Heidi
I love it!
joe
this is the best poen i have ever read and has inspired me to write some poems myself thank you
Angel
This is a very beautiful poem and keep writing cause it's a talent.
ben
it really makes me think about how much i love my sisters, even when we fight and argue
Shelby
VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM INDEED! PLEASE WRITE MORE STUFF LIKE THIS!
Lauren
THAT WAS VERY WELL!
Kouli
I love this one. its AWESOME! two thumbs up!
A fan
It made me think about how much i love my brother and how much i would miss him if anything happened to him
Erika
This was sucha an inspiring poem! Even though its about a brother and sister i also believe it could be for others too. I lost my father 9 years ago and i still believe he's right by my side & in my heart!
Lia
Thankyou for this wonderful poem, Heth. You have a wonderful way of putting your words on paper. It was a very touching although sad poem.
Maggie
Wow that was a GREAT POEM!
Phillip
Tells a sad but realistic story
Monique
What an absolute wonderful way of puttings words on paper. Since my brother has gone it's been 6 years, your poem made me sad cause I miss him and then again I get the comfort knowing he never really left, he's there, right beside me, wherever I go....thank you for making me believe in heaven.....
Eric
Beautiful poem, quite touching. I've known her for a while and had the chance but never read it before. Very nicely put and hits me a little deeper as I almost lost one of my brothers once.
Jacqueline
I love it!
Kat
I really enjoyed this poem. It was really sad, but it was very good. You have great talent. Keep with it.
BRITTNEY
iT MAKES ME THINK ABOUT HOW MUCH i LOVE MY BROTHERS EVEN THOUGH i GET MAD AT THEM OFTEN.
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