About the Poem
Lots of people have found love. But I haven't found mine yet. Although only 14, I am constantly jealous of the happy couples I have seen. Holding hands, kissing, hugging, snuggling. It always makes me wonder" "What would I be doing with my love of life, if I even have one?" Then came my dream that one night...and my poem was sit-in in my head...
Passion's Shadow |
| by Familiar Perplexity |
| The sky darkens, as the moon winks down, flirting with our loving embrace... encasing us in a passion's shadow, with promises of an ethereal existence for us... together... as one... |
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10 Visitor Comments
Maree
wow great poem gurl. so much power with so little words love it. prtty cool how young you are 2 im only 15 but i cant write that good lol keep the greaT work up. MUCH LOVE
Steve
fantabulous, just fantabulous
Britt
I give you a thumbs up! I have been there and done it, it is very exciting, but please dont rush it, it will come when it is time to.
Kendra
I loved It I'm really speechless. WOW. I write poetry to but mines not as good as that. WOW pure WOW.
Clara
i loved this poem, its amazing how you got your point across in so few words, thats all it should take, amazing, keep writing, i would love to see more!
J
that was a touching poem. i give you props for only being fourteen and being able to write like this
jaime-lea
HEY THAT PEICE WAS REALLY GOOD I HAVE NEVER HERD A 14 YEAR OLD USE SUCH EXPRESSIVE WORD EXCEPT FOR MYSELF I RIGHT POEMS TOO
Reinier
Love your poem, written long ago but i feel what you felt right now....
Kate
Wow! All I can say. is WOW!
lacey
Wow! I loved it. I have never been so impressed by anything in my life. You have real talent. I was completly taken by the precise vocabulary and how well it fit in with the romance of love. I would love to hear more of your work!
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