About the Poem

This is a poem that I wrote today (April 15, 1999). this poem is to my boyfriend. he is always telling me that I'm too young to be the woman that he wants me to be. I am always telling him that just because I am young doesn't mean that I can't love him the way he needs to be loved. I believe that I can love him just the way he wants as long as he is the man to me, that I need him to be. I need someone that will take care of me and understand and love me excepting me for all that I am and all that I will become in the future.

The Woman You Want Me To Be

by Sparkles

Yes, baby, I can be the woman you want me to be.
But, the question is, can you be the man that I need.
I can give you everything you're asking for,
But are you really sure.

You question my ability and ponder over my youthfulness,
Baby, the question hasn't been answered yet?
Don't worry, I'll stick around for a while,
Even if it's just to look at your smile.

'Cause I love you, baby, even though I'm young.
The woman you want me to be- - I'll be that one.
You can mold and shape me the way you please.
Just be the man that I need!

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24 Visitor Comments

ashley

love it!

Kayte

I love this poem it's the same situation for me except I told him that I am not gonna change into the perfect girl. He finally excepted it and told me he fell in love with the girl I am. But the poem was great. Keep writing!*!*!*!

Lizzy

Dang this a very good poem! I liked it cuz my boyfriend is 4 Yrs older than me, and it reminds me of us!

Michelle

This a really good poem.

CLAUDIA

THIS POEM IS VERY TOUCHING IT TOUCH MY HEART

Megan

Hey- I really like your poems, theyre cute and so realistic! keep up the good work!

aerielle

oh i love this peom i wish i had wrote it!

Mariya

***I thing you have talent. That's exactly what I was looking for,to send to my hunny. Keep up the good work. ***

angelica

keep doing what you doing gurl. i am young and my man is older and i will give him this poem

LaSonia

I love the poem. I can truly see myself in this poem and how I try to be in any relationship that I have.

Francis

Hey i really liked your poeam alot i'm younger than the guy i'm with but we both love each other and we say that age really dosent matter

Vickie

That Was A Great Poem You Did a Wonderful Job Because most men Dont understand that poem will sure make them in the men two snaps great job!

Kim

Just like me and my boyfriend

Hattie

This poem is honest and true. Most girls would do anything and change anything for their man. But the men never seem to understand.

mirta

THIS POEM,I LOVE IT. I HOPE MORE PEOPLE WILL TAKE A LOOK AT IT.

this peom is well written and everthing but it says dat men can walk all over women and run there lives and control them not this women!

Sam

I liked this poem alot and can understand, I am younger than the guy I want to be with and he feels the same as I do but he is worried that things will be problematic. I will pass this on to him to show him that as long as I am willing to be me for him and vice versa we can make things work fos us.

Marissa

I thought it was a good poem

Sam

I think it is a well written poem, But why would you want to be with this guy if he doesnt like you for who you are?

Monique

WELL I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM BECUASE I HAVE A BOYFRIEND AND HE HAS A BABYS MAMA AND HES ALWAYS TALKING ABOUT HER. YOU SEE I LOVE HIM ALOT AND I WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR HIM THAT MAKES HIM HAPPY. GOOD THINKING

Andy

sometimes, people don't realize what they have until it's gone...Obviously some are smarter then others and can see beyond age. Age shouldn't be the deciding factor on who you want to be with for the rest of your life...Love should

April

I liked this poem very much.It's kind of describing a relationship I'm in at the moment, and I think the words would suit for me.

Jennifer

I really like this poem a lot it tells true feelings!

This poem is basically saying that a man can run all over a woman. Women don't need men to live in this world; all they need is God.

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